"Borrasca - IV" by C.K. Walker | CreepyPasta Storytime
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It just occurred to me that Kimber's mom hated Kyle because she knew they were brother and sister! all of the cops kids had "K" names and Prescott's had "P" names which means that Kyle's brother, Parker, is a Prescott kid. Mind=Blown!
What's even more disturbing is...**Spoiler**
Is that Sam and his father's last name is Walker. Its mentioned that same and his father look the same in build and in the face. When Sam tried to rescue his sister she didn't want anything to do with him, and Prescott said she was giving birth to deformed babies. Sam's father tells Sam that he loves his daughter (Sam's sister) more than he knows. All of the children are named with the first initial of the father's last name. Sam's sister gave birth to a. child named William...
Oh dang!!! I didn't even notice that! You're right!
+Leroy Sinclair omg that is fucking twisted
+Leroy Sinclair omg that is fucking twisted
+Leroy Sinclair Ugh, I wanna puke
Damn u C.K. Walker for writing this terribly heartwrenching, devastating all too true story.And damn u MCP for narrating it so perfectly, so fluidly, that it's truly going to haunt me for a while. Damn u both.
+Cassandra Wright
+MyMrCookies Yeah. I remember a story about a house where unwed mothers were sent and their babies were sold. More times than not the mothers would end up dead.
+Anonymous One Yeah, sadly this shit happens in real life. It's truly horrendous.
+MrCreepyPasta I got to say I'm sad now I was so scared for Kim till ............. Cristy entered in the picture . why MCP why would u do this to us.. ur loyal pasta's why
+MrCreepyPasta and Whitney why did u even do this to us
If people took 1/3 of these fantastic stories and made them a cinema, the horror movie industry would be great again
Make horror great again
Amen to that!
so this comment is 6 years old but I just wanted to chime in because it aged very well. The writer of this story is responsible for the netflix series "Haunting of hill house" you should check it out its great :D
Things like this happen. Making big money of it and similar in the past is the closest thing to convince me that religion is real..and we are in hell...and we created it
Great story, the ending was just tragic. It really opens your eyes to just how sick humans can be.
you know I give it satire
+ernest moreno That's two words hombre.
+Sakata Gintoki I don't think have any humanity left in them.
+Sakata Gintoki I mean, a fictional story cant really tell you anything about how real people work
+Papa Bad Dad expect this is base off of real experiences that are happening now.
C.K. Walker, proving that no horrific monster or demon can compare to the unforgivable weight of human cruelty.
God help the poor bastards who are hearing this story for the first time.
😖😖😖
Whyyyyy
+Major Mexico love the comment xD
whoa..now thats what i call climax man..f*ck me O.O
+Major Mexico It was a good story but.....*curls into a ball*
+Soulless Pinkamena (aka P.D.P the real pinkamena diane pie) that is the most appropriate word. I don't think there is another so fitting
This needs to be a film.
YES
I will pay my life's savings to watch it (if it was) if I have to
+LoZt Music (Joe Tedrick) do you really think they would show raped teenagers in a movie theater
Scott Schultz ...... That completely skipped my mind. Now thinking about it, it's much better as a story than a movie
Scott Schultz Well maybe they finagle with that part to make it less seeable.
I wanted to get spooked, not to feel dead inside.
I agree. I wanted to be creeped out, instead, I left feeling filthy and dirty.
SAMs father said "I love ur sister more than u can imagine." That's the dirtiest fucking line ever.
There's always a town, there's always a girl...and there's always the fucking Prescotts...
Spoiler below:
What I don't get is, why doesn't Sam contact the FBI or Interpol about the rape camp? The local and possibly state police is in on it but why not go above them?
And I just had a moment of fridge horror. K names mean the same father...Kyle and Kimber were half, or possibly full siblings.
+Jeanette Wittstein Don't forget the baby named William at the end. Who has a W last name? Sam's dad!
+Snowflake Productions holy shit I'm glad you picked up on this, I would've never have figured
Even if I couldn't get cops involved, I'd still tell anyone who'd listen. I'd tell urban explorer types about this mine in the mountains and uh, they need to arm themselves because of bears and mountain lions. Oh, and bring cameras too.
Kyle and kimber did things together. Things.
+Syndicate O_O My mind hurts.
Good story. Wanted there to be a monster...and there was, but not the kind I had initially imagined. Very well done.
Batman wouldn't have let this happen
Boi
This.
Did anyone else feel depressed and pissed after borrasca? Dammit c.k. walker 😐😢
yeah i nearly punched my wall
yeah, I wanted him to go back and go all scarface, and liberate or expose the thing, dying in the process, but instead he just wussed out.
Gritted my teeth through the ending the whole time lol
Konform2zoidberg He was scared shitless, I don't blame him for running away. Sam was just a kid,and was FAR too young to handle any of the shit he had looming over his head. He wasn't a hero, and that's alot more realistic than a heroic break through.
Well, this story left my blood boiling at the end. Seathing anger is not the emotion I expected after to feel after a horror story.
same here
I'm just gonna hope against hope that the letter left behind means Kimber was able to escape the town and live her life in relative peace. That is the *only* silver lining I can find in this ending.
I mean....
I just......
FUUUUUUUUUCCCKKKK!!!!!.....
*God damn you Walker*!! I don't recall reading any of your stories before, but you're *too* good a character writer to screw everyone over like that. You can't make me attach to these characters, actually *care* about their well being, only to tear them from me painfully and stomp on their faces (literally). Kyle's comatose. Kimber is missing (again, hoping that's the "good" type of missing). Whitney wasn't dead all those years, but she suffered by being raped repeatedly (with horrific implications, given the baby's name William) until she dies in the most gruesome way. And Sam is just a broken person drowning his sorrows in alcohol and drugs. This is the type of ending George R.R. Martin would be proud to read.
And to you, Mr. Creepypasta. Thank you for doing this reading for Halloween. Granted, it was more of a feelspasta with an infuriatingly brutal realism behind it, but great nonetheless. I don't think I would have had the fortitude and time to read this monster of a story myself, so thanks for doing that for me. Although, my emotions would be in a better state if you didn't.
Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go lay on my bed and contemplate this ending, as well as my significance in reality, as I do after every good reading. But, I can tell this depression is going to last a while.
*For fuck's sake, please let Kimber be ok*!! Just give me *that*!
Ok. That was the last out burst. Good night.
+pjsmith97 Yes. Kimber escaped, as the envelope was in her handwriting and it was postmarked California with no return address. Why she sent the letter back though is a good question, but it's a handy plot device/explanation.
Snowflake Productions Just went on C.K Walker's FaceBook where he states "Kimber is ok." Consider me satisfied.
Am I a bad person because I really didn't care about Kyle? I felt he was a weak character and him dating kimber was the only way to keep him relevant in the story.
Corey Kimbrough I like him better than Sam. He's more brave and skeptical of the corruption around him, but he acts out irrationally and is annoyingly romantic to balance him out. Sam's just curious, optimistic, and a bit cowardly.
***** Did I read that right? You've been in simular situations? I'd like to hear *your* life story...
MAINE?! Shit, this is turning into a Stephen King story, isn't it?!
😂 Too true man
+Lab Matt i live in Maine and in all seriousness some of the small towns and gas stations in the middle of nowhere look like a focal point of a horror story.
+Zader Rilune Hah found you
Nah but I know you on steam and recognized your icon
***** Your on my friends list on steam
Never has a story had me so invested or made me so sad
Guy's this isn't a shit ending, the story ties in perfectly. The more you think the more you realize the bitter conclusions about the story you didn't get just listening to it. Yes he could've called the FBI but even if, why would they believe a teenage kid about something like that especially the fact that he had a shitty criminal record from being accused of beating his friend to a vegetable. All the puzzles fit into place and it shouldn't be down talked by people who didn't get all the conclusions.
+Ignum Not liking the ending=/=not getting it. Please don't be so condescending to people who have a different opinion than you. Also note that this isn't the movies, and real life law enforcement don't instantly disbelieve leads on a criminal case just because the informant happens to be a teenager.
+Ignum CK Walker also mentions that "I never said he didn't contact the FBI, just remember Sam was heavily addicted to drugs"
Corrector1 I see what you mean. It wasn't my original intent to disagree with someone's opinion. My only disagreement was people who didn't fully understand the ending calling it "crap" or "shit". I totally respect if someone understood all of the conclusions and was genuinely unhappy with the ending.
Ignum Well, that's more than I'd get from a lot of other people. So thanks.
I thought Sam and Kyle would roll in with guns, but this is MCP's channel where there is no hope.
"I sighed, I cried, and I died a little inside. This is one of the greatest creepy pastas ever." - Me listening to CreepsMcPasta narrate "Penpal" a few months ago :P
I liked the twist where the town was in on it but I hate how all the main characters got screwed over and the town will continue being messed up
+Soarel the Hobbit I think penpal was more effective at making me feel for the characters cuz I cried like a little girl when they found out what happened to josh. hell, I even cried during boxes. this story just kinda made me sick. penpal is much more realistic which to me makes it hit harder. this one was a little abrupt and a lil too overblown at the "reveal". going to see Borrasca for the first time and they stumble onto 2 warehouses full of tied up drugged up pregnant women and they immediately found Kimber and whitney :/
like most I hated how the protagonist and Kimber just kinda gave up and the kyle thing was way too quick.
this was still an amazing story, don't get me wrong but if we had to compare the 2 which i think is unfair to the material, I would have to side with penpal.
I loved Penpal, and I also love Borrasca. I don't know which I like more though
+Synister Shreds I found Penpal to be a better story. This story is well written, but I think it drags a bit. Penpal is also a bit different because each chapter has its own story that relates to the larger one, and I found them to be very creative, such as the woman who has a killer living in her house, but thinks he's her son because she has alzheimers. Also, while I feel Penpal could've have had a more detailed ending, it felt more natural than this story's.
+Soarel the Hobbit Both are excellently written. This story was 10x more gut wrenching though
As soon as he said he heard the sound of sex I already figured out what was happening
Edgar Garcia All of it? That's pretty impressive.
Yea me too but didnt expect the town to be envolved
The acoustic song at the end was a nice touch. Really has an impact.
What's the song
Idk
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@@poeticriffraff cant find it
This is what a creepypasta is meant to be: gut wrenching, disturbing, and tragic from beginning to end. Stories like this, Penpal, and Psychosis are what creepypastas should be judged by for years and years to come. You've created a masterpiece, C.K. Walker. Few creepypasta authors have the balls to end their stories with dark, twisted endings such as this. You've truly outdone yourself, and I'm looking forward for any other stories you've got up your sleeve. Cannot wait for MCP to narrate anpther one of your stories. You two really brought this story to life in the most intense way possible.
Wow, so unexpected. I wish he'd done more and helped those girls. He was in another town, if it was me, I'd get my shit together, buy a machine gun and storm that place and shoot them tf up! and i'd save the women, get a big van or some shit! I'd do something, the ending was disappointing. even though it's a scary story, lol! This one should have had a good ending.
I'm all for there being bad endings but with this story definitely not. like it could've still ended dark and tragic but at least left off with a good note like Sam finding kimber and getting together and vow never to return to that town or something like that
+jefferson steelflex I agree, the ending with Sam being cast out and homeless was just too messed up in my opinion.
Electrickery I hate endings that just screw everyone over. I'm totally fine with the whole town being bad and he has to leave but at least make his story end on a somewhat decent note, imo with kimber
I would've also saved them but he was weak and almost knocked out and even if he had a fucking machine gun to kill them you have to remember it's an industry, it's like having problems with a mafia
GM7 Crome Yeah, if he killed Jimmy he would've had to deal with everyone he was selling to... So guess it was a lose/lose situation anyway.
God this ending was fucking stupid.After all that build up we get a downer ending do to the protagonist stupidity. If the police are in on it why doesn't he drive to the next town over? Why not go to the FBI?This is the mass effect 3 of creepypastas.
this
Because in real horror stories they never do the most logical thing
+voidplasm The author never said he didn't go to the FBI "I never said he didn't go to the FBI, but remember, Kyle was addicted to drugs." -C.K. Walker
He knows were borrasca is located.He can literally just go take pictures/video of the place or drive hand guide someone to the place.He could probably find it on google maps. I Are Techticus
+voidplasm If you experienced the same shit he went through those mines. Would you go back?
Thank you MrCreepyPasta for giving us these stories during this Halloween/October it's been a fun ride, I hope you are aware of how much we appreciate what you do, and how well you are able to voice characters so well. Again thank you. Hope you have a fantastic existence.
these are the creepypastas I love, the ones that can actually happen to some extent, the ones you are able to project yourself into...love this story and love this channel
Real articulated human skeletons go for around $5,000, and they're ending up with powder. A flaw in the business plan. Tsk.
+Dr. Gun Yeah, but then they'd have to have all the equipment to strip the flesh from bone and still hide all the evidence. The stench of decay from the bodies could bring attention to the already foul baby mill.
Snowflake Productions
You are likely right. Although many ore facilities use acid baths in the treatment of ore, the mine had been disused fore some time. When I reread the text version, it appeared that the "Gentleman" may have been recently acquired equipment, as its description differs from ordinary rock crushers. Thanks for pointing that out. The powder is part of the author's story line too, helping to add mystery to what is going on in the town.
+Dr. Gun Dna from the bones?
MoneyBags McRich
Good question. I wondered if the bleaching process might negate that?
+Snowflake Productions Actualy they use insects to strip to strip the flesh from bone . But that still would leave the skeleton as a evidence.
i literally got goosebumps and started sobbing when he read the letter
I really admire this for focusing on character development and realistic dialogue. it was very refreshing to see a creepypasta focus on a concept with a bit of realism and without an extremely ludicrous story. this was very well put together with the narrative being so in depth with the lead character and all the events in this story.
the ending song really put the emotion on this, nice.
wowsa
Wait...did any one else just realize that Kimber and Kyle both have K names...I think my stomach just dropped again...
this story was amazing and the narrative literally left me shaking.....
Thanks MCP, for the amazing narration and all your hard work. This story has had in tears and feeling the pain of the characters like they are best friends I never had. keep up the good work!
You have me hooked on this story! Your voice animations for each character is great! Looking forward to the next chapter. ☺
borrasca was one of the best stories I've ever heard and this ending made me cry.
I love this series. It's so tragic and easy to get emotionally invested in. It's an amazing work of storytelling. Such a good plot and it all fits together perfectly. It's so sad as well. I didn't think it could get sadder than 3 but I was wrong. Part of what makes it so good is the way it forces you to become emotionally invested in the characters and story. I just love the tragedy of it all. You really feel for the characters. C.K Walker, you sir can write 😉
Wow, what a powerful story. I have never listened to a multi-part creepypasta and I am really glad that this series was my introduction to long creepypastas. The story is rich and the way it was told is very vivid. I almost wish this story was made into a movie, but at the same time I am against this idea because I wouldn't want this series of videos to go unnoticed. Thanks for the high quality content Mr. Creepypasta!
one of the best CreepyPastas i have ever heard. Actually was left trembling and with that feeling you get when a great show ends. Also, really good work MCP your growth as a voice actor amazes me. Love what you do
this needs to be a movie or something, or part of the english curriculum, please this story is flawless
Dear God, this ending haunts me. This is going to be how I would've done it.
1. Get tape recorders
2. Get all your friends together
3. Storm the mine
4. Do everything else the same
5. Record Prescott's confession
6. Go to the FBI
7. If they won't do anything, shoot up the place, save the girls
8. Then go to the FBI
YES!
That would have made it happier. But it's supposed to be horror.
The horror of realizing the town's secret. The horror of being confronted with their own helplessness. The horror of realizing that everyone they trusted is in on it. The horror of realizing that dad, the protector, is a liar, a fraud, a kinslayer, and a human trafficer.
Your ending would have made it not a horror, but a really dark action movie.
This story was truly spectacular. The writing and the narration combined made for an awe-inspiring, captivating experience. As tragic and sickening this story is, it is magical how mesmerizing this was.
Probably the best story/narration I've ever heard.
Ending song w/ guitar? Also..this story is 10/10 and the feels hit hard..
Loke L. I have been also waiting and searching for 2 years to know the song but .... no luck
Still nothing
I can't find the song...... 😥
The most he said was that it was by chris craft and I haven't found anything related to that artist that resembles the music in the vid
I love how the story makes the listener/reader and the characters feel helpless
Holy shit... This is up in the top 3 most disturbing creepypasta's I have ever heard. Wonderfully written. Bring more like this our way
Oh my god. This story is so sad! This was such a thrill! I am so glad that you narrated this.
Can someone please tell me what's the final song? It's the perfect tune to end the story and I searched everywhere in the description.
Oh my god im scarred this was the most depressing thing ever
my favorite of all of your storries great job keep up the good work
as always, excellent work... nice and clean.
Jesus.....this story is so.....gut punching....and angering....... seriously fucked me over
Great Story, it was well worth the wait~ (already expected a tragic ending for this one)
Just goes to show that humans can become more terrible than the monsters that they fear and imagine.
Oh my god. Im crying.. this is insane. Your acting skills are superb btw! keep it up :)
Amazing. I LOVE C.K. Walker's stories!
I've always wondered what the end music is called. Love it so much +MrCreepyPasta
I DIDNT EXPECT THIS OMG IM GOING TO CRY
MrCreepyPasta
From the bottom of my heart, Thank you for introducing me to this story.
Holy Crap! This is incredible! I enjoy long creepypasta with great character development and a excellent plot and conclusion. This story has risen up to my second favorite creepypasta! Thank you MCP for narrating this story, and I hope to hear more from you in the future!
I feel so bad for people who haven't read the story before the MCP reading. I was starstruck finding out the ending. So fucking starstruck that it ruined the whole story, granted that's what makes it incredible. You'd think it would be a paranormal or monster story but no. The real monsters are people, parents, officials. Just like real life. Great story, I hope somewhere Sam has some clarity and Kyle will be okay.
not really
***** news report chickens cause school shooting
***** Prescott's guide to the have baby's
***** pats fnaf fans in the end
Kyle is not okay; you can't recover from being vegetative, in fact he's probably fucking suffering right now due to leaving Kimber behind and not being able to say anything about the incident.
The final portion didn't horrify me. It absolutely enraged me. Made me wish for bloody, savage, borderline cannibalistic vengeance on Sam's part.
He should have grabbed that fucking gun when he had the chance.
This story is so beautifully written. This is the kind of stories I dream of making. I just love it so much. And now that it's over, I am going to curl up into a ball a cry.
This wrecked me. Thanks for that. But really, thats what makes it so great. I really cared about these characters and it HURT when the shit came down. That is something thats way too rare in creepy pastas and horror fiction in general. Props to the author and to you for such an amazing performance.
What. The actual. Fuck. This is hands down the most fucked up story I have ever heard in my entire life. This is worse than any monster or alien story I have heard thus far. Just wow. I have to go lay down and think about all of this. I'm gonna be reeling over this for a while. (o.o)
RJTheHero You okay now?
RJTheHero that's because it can be real
can anyone please recommend some good creepypastas like this (or creepypasta series). by that i mean longer ones where it focuses more on the characters and the plot? because i really love this one and i want more like it. :)
Penpal - MCP has videos of it :)
xA14xNova yeah i've seen the video and i love it :)
The Showers, Godzilla NES Creepypasta, Case File Creepypasta series, and the Penpal Creepypasta series. Those are as good as this and suck you in.
+Splitting Personality Case File the series needs to be fixed up on here and I think I might just have to go through and have a reboot of the series. A lot of music licenses changed in the time I was working on that one and some of the episodes have gone wayside. The showers definitely, The Puppet Master's Regime. The Horror from the Vault, P.O.W, Hidden Lore, Wanderer of the Dogscape, NoEnd House are all lengthy with a good deal of development in character.
also these are fan favorites that are added by viewers
czcams.com/play/PL3vq3HFjqkVmUeng_rvrdtieUsZKDH1ND.html
+MrCreepyPasta Oh that's right, the part "My dream last night" gotten taken down. I look forward to the updates, cheers!
Ik its been a few years since this has been out but is the hest story ive heard on this channel, the most haunting, saddest story on this channel and i have to say how good this story was and how sad and angery and scared it made me feel.
This story.... wow. just wow. what an emotional roller coaster. Amazing job MCP on the incredible narration.
Will the song that plays at the end ever have a public release?
I'm glad Kimber was ok, but .. I would have done things differently
+LivingCorpseX stolen my dad's gun
+Jake Elochai go super sayan
This was and remains to be one of the most heartbreaking and haunting stories I've ever listened to.
This was very intense. Well performed too! Had me on the edge of my seat the whole time!
I don't think a story has ever made me so fucking angry.
5:10 "I pulled out my phone and searched up "Borrasca", we came up with a very long and interesting creepypasta, Kyle didn't listen, but I did. I got creeped out because the main character had the same name, and friends as me, and lived in the same town, but the worst part was when the narrator said:"I pulled out my phone and searched up "Borrasca", we came up with a very long and interesting creepypasta, Kyle didn't listen, but I did. I got creeped out because the main character had the same name, and friends as me, and lived in the same town, but the worst part was when the narrator said:"I pulled out my phone and searched up "Borrasca", we came up with a very long and interesting creepypasta, Kyle didn't listen, but I did. I got creeped out because the main character had the same name, and friends as me, and lived in the same town, but the worst part was when the narrator said:"I pulled out my phone and searched up "Borrasca", we came up with a very long and interesting creepypasta, Kyle didn't listen, but I did. I got creeped out because the main character had the same name, and friends as me, and lived in the same town, but the worst part was when the narrator said:"I pulled out my phone and searched up "Borrasca", we came up with a very long and interesting creepypasta, Kyle didn't listen, but I did. I got creeped out because the main character had the same name, and friends as me, and lived in the same town, but the worst part was when the narrator said:"I pulled out my phone and searched up "Borrasca", we came up with a very long and interesting creepypasta, Kyle didn't listen, but I did. I got creeped out because the main character had the same name, and friends as me, and lived in the same town, but the worst part was when the narrator said......"
Alternate ending.
what a story! one of the best ive heard on this channel in a while!
This story had a sick turn which I will remember for a long time. Seriously didn't expect it.
Wow, was not expecting that ending.
wish I knew the song at 37:00
IM STILL LOOKING
@@rainy9693 if you find it, please tell me....
4 years later, I couldn't find it
I learned it on my guitar and tried to write the words and make sense of it all
Paul Memnook I think it was one of Mrcreepypasta’s friends who MIGHT be dead so I think the trail is dead rn
@@rainy9693 its killing my brain not knowing it
one of my favorite series. thanks for that
Happy Halloween MrCreepyPasta!
It’s been almost 3 years and I’d still like to point out how nobody identified the small tune playing at 37:00 . Seriously can someone get a reddit team here ?
Did u ever find this song?
I still hoping someone has found it
SAME, LIKE IM STILL WAITING
Me too man it's been 5 years. I've tried removing the narration and it didn't turn out great but just enough for the chords and lyrics. So I had to remade the song entirely lol
Pain
**curls into ball and cries profusely** **prays for sequel where Sam and Kimber or who have you team up and somehow take down borrasca once and for all** **cries harder because that probs won't happen** **looks up funny videos to sooth self**
this is the best story I have ever heard
the characters are so real that I invested so much of my time actually investigating the plot and the logic
needless to say that the narration was beyond mesmerizing
this come a from someone who have listened to almost 15 different people calling themselves "voice actors"
you are by far the best in the field
bless you
Holy shit....Dammit this was so good. My hat is off to you MCP and C.K. Walker. Not sure which I enjoyed more, your narration or the story. I've got to say, this damn story is so haunting and heartbreaking and really stays with you, doesn't it? Goodness.
WTF THATS THE ENDING
Yeeep here come all the people who waited all that time to hear the most over the top, mind-numbingly stupid ending to, what was up to that point, a fairly well written story.
+Handsome Matt Sadly, this isn't the first time a creepypasta has gone that route. Casefile:Stitch had a pretty anti climactic ending. And while Penpal was excellent, I feel the finale revelation could've had more detail.
+Corrector1 i felt the same way with penpal
+Corrector1 Pen pal just ended a little too abruptly, and I agree it kind of skimmed through the details, however, it is still leagues ahead of this nonsense imho
***** The problem I had with Penpal is that I felt we should've gotten to know more about the stalker. He haunted the main character for so much of his life, so I thought it was disappointing that we never really get a look into his motivation and mindset. Sure, he's crazy, but even crazy people have some kind of internal logic, and I thought it would've been nice to see some of the reasoning behind his actions. I recall there were also a couple of minor plot details that I felt were never completely explained, but it's been awhile since I listened to that story, so I can't remember exactly what they were.
+Corrector1 I agree with your opinion on the lack of information on the stalker. I thought the way it ended was fairly anticlimactic. This, on the other hand, is just so utterly preposterous it ruins the whole story.
Thank you. I love this
+MrCreepyPasta Damn... I thought your narrating was awesome in your earlier videos, but you've gotten AMAZING! This was FANTASTIC! This story is gonna haunt me for a long, long time. Keep up the awesome work, man!
Man hew! That shit was heavy! When's the next part?
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
whats the name of the song at 37:00? i kinda need it TwT
Or the one at 34:14 !
That was the most well-written, depressing, fucking story I've ever heard in my life. Never has a creepypasta left me clapping and in tears! Well done, C.K. Walker. You are a literary genius!
This story was so good. Thank you so much for taking me to that amazing world , I felt like I was right there reaching the end . This is now my second favorite CP, first one being "My dear abbiegale"
This isn't the end, there's more
This is the SADDEST cp I've ever listened to......if I were Sam I would of beat the shit out of Prescott I wouldn't care if he shot me I wouldn't of been a coward....this cp is disgusting.
My thoughts exactly, sam was just a fucking idiot in this story tbh, I would have brought weapons and a phone if I were him.
+BANG KOK I do remember him saying they tried getting Sam's dads gun idk what the hell happened to that
+BANG KOK Sam's narrating
prescott smacked sam around pretty easy. What he should have done is played along gotten some guns and evidence, then gone all rambo. Or brought a gun from the beginning
and water, dehydration is a thing that could have gotten them.
If the town water ore caused infertility why were drisking girls taken, when the girls drank the ore water
Damn this is the best story I've listened to. Thank you for the great narration! I was hanging on your every word.
"Someone's gonna die here tonight, and I'll be damned if it's gonna be me!"
I have no idea why that suddenly popped into my head...
What is that song in the end? I've been dying to know.
Idk, I think it's one of those people that passed away songs... so I thinks it's a dead end.
if I ever hear the word spoopy ever again, I'll drown a hipster in the main stream.
Holy shit, what a story! Kept me om the edge of my seat until the very last second. Amazingly narrated MCP!
Your voice brings so much life to the story ! I love it :)