how *NOT* to report every single piece of data in an ielts task 1 bar graph
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Do you tend to report all the data in a chart in Writing Task 1? In this video, I will use the bar graph in Cambridge IELTS 15 Test 1 to show you a magic method that allows you NOT to report every single piece of data in a graph.
The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 Intro
0:36 Identify important data
02:34 Make broad comments
05:06 Overview paragraph
06:00 Last 4 weeks
07:25 Paraphrase chart description
09:18 Whole essay
09:24 Key takeaways
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Please reply (exam in 3 days) Can we say the number of residents opting for a Cafe were the highest
And, can we say outpaced instead of outraced??outpaced???
In this graph you've not compared each other. So, it's OK not to compare????
Please reply please
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Mam Thankyou very much actually I suffed from same kind like I describe all the figure in detail but when I watch this video regarding my mistake Now I feel really good again thank you Mam for giving good solution.
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@@LilieIELTSmam just I have one doubt about introduction like in introduction line" in five cities in Australia" is it correct line OR" in five cities of Australia" is correct line I am so confuse please let me know about this enquiry
Do we use present simple if the chart doesn t mention year or time?😢
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Subtitles covering the matter,wat ur showing.... overall ur excellent
I do really love your content as it helps me a lot. But Do you have any books or blogs that have some sources of vocabulary for presenting the ideas in writing?? because i dont have much high-level academic structure
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First of all, thank you so much for such informative videos, they are just excellent. What i am struggling to find is standard sample. Can you kindly suggest me a book where i can find all the samples (let's say for bar chart at least 5) for all types of criteria's of writing task 1?
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Hi Lilie, i have a question, can i replace result(s) with outcome? And of course, THANK YOU for your helpful videos!!!
Yes, 'outcomes' works.
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Mam how we can use connectors and synonymous in writing
I'll try to explain a little bit the use of connectors in the next video.
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Hiii. Id have a question. Should we also spell out the number in percentage under 10? Thank you.
No, we don't need to.
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My basics English is not so good its my humble request please provide general structures for every type of chart in easy words
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can we use (less likely than )in task 1 ?or is it less than more appropriate?? ---------fresh coffee section...
"Less likely than" is a type of language used in statistics, so it's actually very good for task 1.
Could I know we can use only past tense for describing?
Yes, that's exactly what I did.
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In the overview, can we say the two main features are 1)having tea or coffee in a cafe is the most popular + 2)buying fresh coffee is a less significant habit in all cities? May i know if the second observation is ok?
But I can argue that buying instance coffee is a less common habit, can't I? I think it's more accurate to say that buying fresh coffee is the least common habit in all five cities.
@@LilieIELTS yep, your latter sentence is what I wanna say--- 'least common' :) thanks for your reply 🙏
Can we use the word fluctuated between ... to.... for this bar graph?
Eg: the coffee intake for three cities (Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobo) fluctuated between 20% and 40%.
I'm freaking out. PLEASE Reply
Hi, I don't think you can. To fluctuate means to change continually. However, those percentages don't change. They're just different from each other.
Please reply (exam in 3 days) Can we say the number of residents opting for a Cafe were the highest
And, can we say outpaced instead of outraced??outpaced???
In this graph you've not compared each other. So, it's OK not to compare????
Please reply please
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Amazing lecture but the minimum word limit is 150 words and this is short by 20-30 words. Anyways quality is excellent.🔥
Hi, it's 167 words. You can read the essay here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee-buying-habits/
Should we use connecting word more often . Is it necessary ???
using linking words is not the only way to create flow.
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I know that you've mentioned the difference between Adelaide and the other five cities in the overall but shouldn't I mention it again in the detail paragraph 1?and can I say that "in Adelaide both going to a cafe and buying instant coffee leveled off at nearly 50%? Can I say that the percentages of people who bought instant coffee fluctuated
I was busy with the challenge. The first sentence in the third paragraph compares Adelaide to the other four cities: www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee-buying-habits/
No, you shouldn't use 'level off' and 'fluctuate' for a chart that doesn't show trends.
dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/level-off
@@LilieIELTSi just saw your reply thanks a lot and waiting for the next challenge since it was impossible for me to participate in the first one
Can we use reserach instead survey?
No.
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@@LilieIELTS okay... Then could you do me a favour, or evaluate my writing or discuss graphs with me? I am a good learner and would not take much of your tym.. If you could do a friendly favour or a favour for sake of humanity? 😔
Sorry, I don't proofread essays. But if you have any *specific* questions about writing, you can leave a comment on CZcams or on my blog. I'll do my best to answer. 😊
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What about instant coffee you did not mention
I believe I mentioned it.
Mam but it's still less than 150 words how to write more than that
Hi, the essay is 167 words long. You can read it here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee-buying-habits/
Band 9
how much band for this report essay ?
Hi, this essay was improved by native speakers. I think it deserves at least an 8. Do you agree?😊
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how many words is this report ?
167...you can read it here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee-buying-habits/
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Please reply (exam in 3 days) Can we say the number of residents opting for a Cafe were the highest
And, can we say outpaced instead of outraced??outpaced???
In this graph you've not compared each other. So, it's OK not to compare????
Please reply please reply
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Dear Madam,
"with those in Brisbane and Adelaide, both at nearly 35%, less likely than those in the other three cities to do so." I have not understood properly. Could please write those sentences in actual form. That means that you have written it in short form by reducing the large one. I would like to see it actual sentence get better, please. Thank you.
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Great work but too fast
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Tomorrow Is my exam😆
Notes :
📌When answering bar graph like the sample in the video , make broad comments & report important data .
📌Numbers under 10 , needs to be spelled out in the essay
📌You don’t need to repeat the ‘last 4 weeks’ in every paragraph when u have already established the context in the introduction.
📌Paragraph section : intro, paragraph 1,2,3 & overview
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Good luck! I hope you’ll get your desired score!
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5:02...shouldn't we add comma before respectively?
Hi, the comma before "respectively" is optional.
@@LilieIELTS thanks...tomorrow is my exam...i hope i'll get atleast 7 but i haven't practiced much rather i used to read your essays on ur website
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