Okay this story is very good I did enjoy it I like to plot line behind it I also like the character development and I tell you deviated from the normal story I do wish you was a lot longer I hope you come back make it part 2 and keep up the good work
This story is well written. And I can tell the author put a lot of thought behind it, but to me, it's kinda flat because you've eliminated half of naruarto's struggle by keeping it a secret that he had the non tails in him. It just kind of like takes all the emphasis out of the. Original cannon, and I'm all for changing cannon. But it kind of killed this one. It just kind of ended up like it. The flow of the story's messed up because he doesn't have to struggle as much. That's just my opinion, I'm not trying to trash on it. It's just the story just didn't work as well for me.
Okay this story is very good I did enjoy it I like to plot line behind it I also like the character development and I tell you deviated from the normal story I do wish you was a lot longer I hope you come back make it part 2 and keep up the good work
This has huge potential pls need part 2
omg pls pls pls make part 2-90 pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Part 2 please asap.
Next part asap please
Next parts ASAP please
Part 2 plsssss
Part 2 please
Got the doughnut treatment😂😂😂
Pt2 plzzzz
mas please😊
Namikaze
By: Fhane
You sir are my savior
Please where is the link to the fanfic or the authors name and story
Part2 please 🙏 thank
Part2
Fanfic name pls
Name of the fanfic ?
What’s name of fanfic
Fanfic????
This story is well written. And I can tell the author put a lot of thought behind it, but to me, it's kinda flat because you've eliminated half of naruarto's struggle by keeping it a secret that he had the non tails in him. It just kind of like takes all the emphasis out of the. Original cannon, and I'm all for changing cannon. But it kind of killed this one. It just kind of ended up like it. The flow of the story's messed up because he doesn't have to struggle as much. That's just my opinion, I'm not trying to trash on it. It's just the story just didn't work as well for me.
Part 2 please