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  • čas přidán 20. 01. 2024
  • An alien empire seeking easy spoils invades a remote human colony world, only to be brutally decimated by an unseen enemy that hunts their veteran troops with ruthless, untraceable precision.
    All my stories are original.
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Komentáře • 103

  • @jamiepatterson1214
    @jamiepatterson1214 Před 5 měsíci +28

    Just because fancy tech couldn't detect humans, doesn't mean they aren't there. Just because they think they are fierce warriors, doesn't mean there aren't others who are fiecer warriors.
    In short, leave the humans alone. They know war like a brother.

  • @a.m.v.6938
    @a.m.v.6938 Před 5 měsíci +66

    What’s up with the voice cutting out before finishing the sentence. Instead of trying to fix the robot reading program it’s just getting worse. Love the stories but you need to fix this.

    • @sam2x13
      @sam2x13 Před 5 měsíci +11

      I'm glad you said something. I rewound it twice thinking it was me.

    • @larrytate6884
      @larrytate6884 Před 5 měsíci +16

      No, it's the AI I think. It sure takes away from the story.

    • @VentOutEyes-Channel
      @VentOutEyes-Channel Před 5 měsíci +1

      Go do your own videos.. más triste i swear #ComptonCaliLove sheeeeeesh n a bunch

    • @Ektalon
      @Ektalon Před 5 měsíci +4

      Sloppy work, I reckon. Bad editing, stilted delivery, bizarre and inconsistent pronunciation. Zerk, Zark? It doesn’t matter to them.
      Bonus! I just came to the abrupt, mid-sentence ending. A new feature, I guess . . .

    • @willreaver2294
      @willreaver2294 Před 5 měsíci +6

      They don’t care, these types of channels are popping up daily, it’s been covered by tech companies, science media and regular media. AI auto generated channels sole purpose is to produce quantity and not quality content. Pump out as much content with as little effort as possible, its purpose is to maximize engagement to generate more ad revenue , they are actually making a lot of money now. They don’t need quality work, because they know people are going to click on it anyway, and maybe if some get tired of low effort junk, there are always more that are still going to click on it, that’s all they need, it’s a numbers game.

  • @railtonfeagus8539
    @railtonfeagus8539 Před 5 měsíci +19

    It's a shame about the skipping of whole words and poor production quality as I've been enjoying this channel recently.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci +6

      Sorry I am trying to get better at the audio and a hang of it but I can't afford the unlimited regenerations rite now hopefully soon I'll have better quality.

  • @DylonBridson
    @DylonBridson Před 5 měsíci +33

    “Your army is so vast, our land is so small. Where will we find space to bury you all?”

  • @jamesha175
    @jamesha175 Před 5 měsíci +10

    LOL the scary alien in the illustration has beautiful dentures like actor George Hamilton

    • @jackmandu
      @jackmandu Před 5 měsíci

      Plus it has five fingers on the left hand, it only four fingers on the right.

  • @ccp4415
    @ccp4415 Před 4 měsíci +1

    Well, there's 13 minutes I'll never get back again.

  • @trevormillar1576
    @trevormillar1576 Před 5 měsíci +1

    The aliens look like the oned in "The Tommyknockers".

  • @TairnKA
    @TairnKA Před 5 měsíci +6

    I must be missing something, there seems to be a continuity error; the humans allowed a shuttle to land and pick up its dead, but then informed the alien, his ship wouldn't make it to orbit?
    Maybe the alien ship that landed wasn't a shuttle, but an armed craft?

    • @uwillnevahno6837
      @uwillnevahno6837 Před 5 měsíci +5

      Well while the two sides came to terms the alien broke the ceasefire by firing.

    • @Ektalon
      @Ektalon Před 5 měsíci +1

      I don’t think you’re missing anything. The author just forgot the previous invitation, or maybe the humans are all psychopaths. I’ve been getting the impression lately that these stories are being AI written as well as voiced.

  • @jamesphillipturpin1452
    @jamesphillipturpin1452 Před 4 měsíci +1

    Audio cuts out words as if it editted incorrectly, missing words. It also lacks even optional captions, so we can't read the missing words.

  • @LoriFoster
    @LoriFoster Před 4 měsíci

    I liked this story very much!

  • @lennym1636
    @lennym1636 Před 5 měsíci +3

    NO no no no, you can't end it like that...

  • @davidstrickler6570
    @davidstrickler6570 Před 5 měsíci +5

    It keeps skipping like an old 45 record. Missing a significant amount of the story this way.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci

      No it is not missing any of the story.

    • @davidstrickler6570
      @davidstrickler6570 Před 5 měsíci

      @ALLSciFi88. Please try listening to the story. It skips and / or breaks up. Just for clarification, I'm using a brand new tablet and this has been the only video I've seen/listened to that has presented this issue. No trolling intended. It's just an attempt to make it better so more people can enjoy your work. Stay warm and enjoy the rest of your weekend.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci

      @davidstrickler6570 thank you rite now I can not afford unlimited regeneration but next month I will be able to do hopefully that will not be a thing soon.

  • @DaytonaRoadster
    @DaytonaRoadster Před 5 měsíci

    "WE WILL NEVER BE SLAVES...but we will be...Conquers"

  • @terryjenkins252
    @terryjenkins252 Před 5 měsíci +2

    So then the humans surrendered their honor. They gave safe passage and then killed the the the person sent down.

  • @grogvaughan5649
    @grogvaughan5649 Před 5 měsíci +1

    An entire planet of SF guys let off the leash.. hot damn.

  • @warboss1117
    @warboss1117 Před 5 měsíci +2

    Am I the only one that noticed the right hand has four fingers and the left has five

    • @beverlycrusher9713
      @beverlycrusher9713 Před 5 měsíci +1

      nope, i noticed it too, i was guessing that he had lost one in battle or something like that.

  • @lerchdag
    @lerchdag Před 5 měsíci +8

    Is it just me or does the alien in the graphic have a five fingered left hand and a four fingered right hand?

    • @kdrapertrucker
      @kdrapertrucker Před 5 měsíci +5

      Nothing unusual, I know a guy who has 5 fingers on one hand, and 4 on the other. On an unrelated note: be careful with firecrackers kids.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci +1

      🤣🤣🤣

    • @jdau2b
      @jdau2b Před 5 měsíci

      Good eye!!

    • @vividdawn913
      @vividdawn913 Před 5 měsíci +2

      its an AI generated image... AI has a hard time with hands! I saw a pic of Indiana Jones that had 7 fingers on one hand (not including the thumb!)

    • @Ektalon
      @Ektalon Před 5 měsíci +1

      Typical AI art errors; they have problems with hands(and written words, I’m told).

  • @GrumpyJerk
    @GrumpyJerk Před 5 měsíci

    Good short story. Thanks for postin'. Cheers from H-Town! :)

  • @HFYStories
    @HFYStories Před 5 měsíci

    Very nice video . Good story and voice. I Subcribed for you 😍😍

  • @markvangorkum8091
    @markvangorkum8091 Před 5 měsíci +3

    The ai narrator has been used so much its slowly losing its voice.

  • @norneaernourn8240
    @norneaernourn8240 Před 4 měsíci

    So space ninjas?

  • @Iamkcs2c
    @Iamkcs2c Před 5 měsíci +1

    It only seems polite to link to the original story.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci +1

      All of my stories are original.

    • @Iamkcs2c
      @Iamkcs2c Před 5 měsíci +1

      ​@@ALLSciFi88That's awesome! You should put *that* in the description

  • @GoCoyote
    @GoCoyote Před 4 měsíci

    Audio seems to be glitching occasionally.

  • @vividdawn913
    @vividdawn913 Před 5 měsíci +2

    I subscribed, and won't skip ads, if that helps you earn more income for the new voice generator. Yeah, it's kind of annoying, but the story itself is still fun! :)

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci

      Thank you you don't know what that means to me.

    • @vividdawn913
      @vividdawn913 Před 5 měsíci +1

      @@ALLSciFi88 This one seems to be the worst one. I'm listening to others, and they're not so bad. One from 2 weeks ago doesn't seem to have any trouble at all with disjointed narration.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci

      @juliadespain4892 which one is good maybe I can figure how I got that decent.

  • @Sarah-gw3ng
    @Sarah-gw3ng Před 5 měsíci

    Zark...Zirk...interesting name. 1:45

  • @MurderPierrot
    @MurderPierrot Před 4 měsíci

    Caption rhymes lol

  • @careydodson2804
    @careydodson2804 Před 5 měsíci +2

    Cool story but what is up with the sound? It seems like it's cutting off the end of the sentence and then starting in the middle of the next sentence. This seems to happen quite often. Totally cut off the end of the story. Better get control of this before putting out more stories.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci +2

      Yes I'm sorry it is not cut off the program I use im trying to figure it out to get the best sound it is just expensive I can't regenerate specific text sometimes it sounds like it is about to say something else or you missed something but you did not next month I'll be able to get the unlimited.

  • @DK-pb7tr
    @DK-pb7tr Před 5 měsíci +1

    I gave up on the story, too many adverts interrupting the story

  • @cindaschuster6725
    @cindaschuster6725 Před 5 měsíci

    💙👍🏼

  • @lewis7315
    @lewis7315 Před 5 měsíci +4

    In reality, the invaders would glass the planet before leaving.

    • @lennym1636
      @lennym1636 Před 5 měsíci +2

      In reality the humans would not stop and let them gather their dead, and when the captain drew his weapon at the human he and all his ships would have been vaporized...

    • @gilbertsandoval1888
      @gilbertsandoval1888 Před 5 měsíci +1

      You have obviously not had military experience/training. Read SunTsu's "The Art of War",2000 years old and studied at the Army War College and tthe other services to this day. Think Kill or be killed!

    • @lewis7315
      @lewis7315 Před 5 měsíci

      Ships vaporized with what??? I have read the history of warfare, and served as well. All the aliens had to do was send several large rocks a mile across onto the colony areas. no one on the planet would have been left alive. @@gilbertsandoval1888

  • @CaptainShield
    @CaptainShield Před 5 měsíci +1

    AgroSquirrel is better than a robo-voice. The stories need inflection and correct pronunciation.

  • @tommcl8548
    @tommcl8548 Před 5 měsíci

    👊👍

  • @theunknowngamer5477
    @theunknowngamer5477 Před 5 měsíci

    After one minute, the insult of waiting to find out if another word will be removed....
    while an entire ton of offensive language is allowed...
    So, I'm counting five of these very cool clips of vocal theater.
    This one is obscene Uncanny Valley antics, wondering if the others to be found will have the same disappointment.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci +1

      I created this there were no bad words the voice wasn't that good in this one but what offensive language are you talking about?

    • @theunknowngamer5477
      @theunknowngamer5477 Před 4 měsíci

      @@ALLSciFi88
      I apologize for being hyper critical about the format of your channel.
      I will remove the post, at the requesting.
      I am subscribing, the game of friendly parasite does not promote content.
      The deformation of reality is a handicap I do not care to tolerate. The structure
      of AI/Uncanny Valley trick used seems to not distract other people, with the
      channel content. My perception of how/what/why SPECIFIC words seem to
      be removed, with this video, is an insult to me, or is the word, offensive, in a
      different definition for you...intergalactic genocide and similar descriptions of
      destruction must be a math formula less than one word...removal of reality
      sure looks like a new game and distracts from the outlines I try using to be
      lost in a pretend place of fictional entertainment.

  • @stanislawwasilewski7498
    @stanislawwasilewski7498 Před 5 měsíci

    Where’s the beginning of this nice story’s ?

  • @jorymeyers4853
    @jorymeyers4853 Před 5 měsíci

    Confusing sentence cut offs, no Bueno

  • @proudamerican183
    @proudamerican183 Před 5 měsíci

    0:25 What is with the audio here?

  • @user-xw4gr9kn8n
    @user-xw4gr9kn8n Před 4 měsíci

    The ai reading this script is horrible.

  • @faheemahmad51
    @faheemahmad51 Před 5 měsíci +1

    So odd as lot of people are having issues with skipping of narration, I listened to it 3 times over three days and never had any issues

    • @Ektalon
      @Ektalon Před 5 měsíci

      That is interesting. I wonder what’s happening? How did the story end for you?

  • @waynes9275
    @waynes9275 Před 5 měsíci

    COMPUTER VOICED STORIES are so so, real human voice is better.

  • @billhinkle5344
    @billhinkle5344 Před 5 měsíci

    Would have liked to hear the story but too much skipping. Bowed out at the 1:54 mark.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci

      I am sorry about this one didn't have great audio it is not always like this I post daily in store you will find one you like.

  • @tensay86
    @tensay86 Před 5 měsíci

    At first it didn't bother me when the sound skipped but after so many videos its really annoying....you need help whit the editing or rerecord were you had problems in the middle of the sentence...

  • @Questor-ky2fv
    @Questor-ky2fv Před 5 měsíci

    Who undoes your hair?

  • @HawkGTboy
    @HawkGTboy Před 5 měsíci

    What’s with the skipping audio? Are you bleeping out words that the almighty algorithm might have a problem with?

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci +2

      LOL no nothing is skipped or missing the program i cant get unlimited generation so what i get is what i get next month i will get the better version with unlimited regeneration.

  • @elusiveeskimo3013
    @elusiveeskimo3013 Před 5 měsíci

    This is an audio book story. The words are important cause there is no video image reference to fill in for the missing words. But if there were images, would most likely have been blurred or cut out by CZcams Censors also. This CZcams Censorship is out of control. Sorry I did not Like and Subscribe but truth is I did not even make it to the 3 minute mark. Got fed up with the Censorship and quit. I will totally stop using CZcams if this Insane SHIT continues.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci

      No the audio did not come out great in this video not all of them are like this one nothing is missing it it is just what I use sometimes it sounds like a word was supposed to be said or missing words but it isn't

  • @heironeous0530
    @heironeous0530 Před 5 měsíci

    Nothing for the author? Not a mention or a link? Seems like a stolen story to me

  • @leadingauctions8440
    @leadingauctions8440 Před 5 měsíci +1

    So humanity has no honor?

    • @leothenomad4855
      @leothenomad4855 Před 5 měsíci +3

      Honor doesn't win battles.

    • @stellaluuk2713
      @stellaluuk2713 Před 5 měsíci +2

      Honor is a human concept, who knows how an alien would think? Besides, a threat is a threat and best eliminated. These aliens were aggressive.

    • @carldooley9344
      @carldooley9344 Před 5 měsíci

      He was granted safe passage to the surface, not away. Then also he attacked on the surface... Granting the overlord a chance to send a message was a mercy.

    • @leadingauctions8440
      @leadingauctions8440 Před 5 měsíci

      @@carldooley9344
      True on attacking when on the surface.
      As for the prior, he did say they could take the dead home.

  • @Music-lx1tf
    @Music-lx1tf Před 5 měsíci

    I'd like to story and I would have given you an upvote. But you've cut it off just before the end so it's very unsatisfying. I give you a thumbs down because of that.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci

      Thank you and sorry for that but no nothing is cut off that is how I ended it I have been trying not to get it to sound like it is skipping when it isn't.

  • @talyn3932
    @talyn3932 Před 5 měsíci

    Oof. Bad ai voice. Cobstantly cutting off. Cant get past a couple mins.

  • @OriginalMergatroid
    @OriginalMergatroid Před 5 měsíci

    The story was interesting but the reading was horrid. Stopped listening.

  • @stevenfranklin7060
    @stevenfranklin7060 Před 5 měsíci +1

    boring

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci

      sorry you feel that way i post daily I am sure there will be a few you will like.

  • @nikod9530
    @nikod9530 Před 5 měsíci +1

    Boring voice over ...

  • @Im_Not_From_Around_Here
    @Im_Not_From_Around_Here Před 5 měsíci +1

    You need a better AI this one is so bad. Was hard to follow with its broken sentences and incoherent pronunciations.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  Před 5 měsíci

      Yea I know in sorry this did not have great audio they usually are not this bad I post daily subscribe you will always have something to put on.

  • @martyschrader
    @martyschrader Před 5 měsíci +1

    Very crappy AI rendering. Get a real person to read this stuff or just publish it as text. This choppy, poorly-accented "reading" does the work no favors.