How I Got Into Berkeley | Reading my UC application essays

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    Hi guys!
    In today's video, I will be reading my UC application essays. I hope this is helpful if you're thinking of applying to some UC schools :) Thank you to College Find Me, again, for partnering with me on this video!
    Xoxo,
    Mich
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    Camera: Canon Rebel EOS T3i
    Music: "5:23" by The Deli, "i'm tired of feeling this way" by elijah who, and "U Love" by tomppabeats.
    Edited with: iMovie 10

Komentáře • 35

  • @piyam5733
    @piyam5733 Před 4 lety +154

    The last story hurts my heart ): Well done and congrats in your accomplishments!
    Sincerely
    -a stressed senior trying to get into Cal

  • @kaitlineblen4724
    @kaitlineblen4724 Před 4 lety +37

    I'm so sorry for your loss. Your mother sounds like an amazing and strong woman. Your story really resonated with me because I'm in the middle of answering the same prompt and am writing about my grandma's recent passing due to cancer.

    • @MichelleYuan
      @MichelleYuan  Před 4 lety +3

      hi kaitlin, i’m very sorry to hear about your grandmother. i know she would be so so proud of you. thank you for watching and i wish you the absolute best of luck with applications ❤️

  • @pppppppieeeeeee
    @pppppppieeeeeee Před 3 lety +7

    My Mom passed away when I was 13, I really get everything you said. It's so hard to get through everything without her here. It's something that really strains my mental health. And I can connect with you on how you had to look up answers to things because you didn't have thag person to talk to. Just wanted to say, you're strong

  • @hebayasmeen4613
    @hebayasmeen4613 Před 4 lety +31

    she's literally so pretty??? I-

  • @siennaslife7212
    @siennaslife7212 Před 3 lety +7

    you’re so strong and inspiring. congratulations on everything you’ve overcome. thank you for this. 💙💛

  • @swastikan.7352
    @swastikan.7352 Před 4 lety +4

    Hey, I just want to say that this is very helpful and I appreciate it so much. Keep up the goodwork. keep loving and serving others!

  • @rachelramos8291
    @rachelramos8291 Před 3 lety +3

    wow i love these essays! The love, thought and effort put into these heartwarming essays is amazing. Super helpful and I appreciate it a lot. 💖💖

  • @user-dj7ov4pm5f
    @user-dj7ov4pm5f Před 3 lety +3

    These essays are really good!
    The last story really hit home with me too.

  • @hotpink1902
    @hotpink1902 Před 4 lety +8

    i’ve really been enjoying your content here on yt michelle! we love positive energy & good vIBES 🧚‍♀️ applications really are right around the corner, so thank you for taking the time to share your insight! best of luck this semester homegirl ;)

  • @mikea1ike
    @mikea1ike Před 4 lety +24

    you’re legit so natural in front of the camera michelleeeeeeeeeeee! 😂 keep the videos coming I’m you’re biggest fan lmao

  • @carolynobdianela
    @carolynobdianela Před 4 lety +13

    Hi Michelle, you did a really great job with your PIQ's (Personal insight questions). I felt that last essay really tied everything together. I love how you wrote about your mom and also how authentic your writing is. Currently I am thinking of ideas of what to write for my essays because I will be transferring hopefully next fall to a UC. 😊

  • @alil3231
    @alil3231 Před 2 lety

    This really helped me ease my mind. Tysm 😊

  • @aribahhoque5844
    @aribahhoque5844 Před 4 lety +7

    she's so happy and positive its so beautiful. Like how she talked about her mom- there was zero negativity radiating from it. Contrary to how i wrote about my mom but now I have an idea on how to fix it

    • @MichelleYuan
      @MichelleYuan  Před 4 lety

      Aribah Hoque your comment is so kind, thank you so much for watching and i’m so glad i was able to help!!

  • @coffeetae
    @coffeetae Před 4 lety +10

    you really have such a beautiful personality 🥺

  • @CrazyAsianKidz
    @CrazyAsianKidz Před 4 lety

    amazing!

  • @erikaleigh6777
    @erikaleigh6777 Před 3 lety +9

    Awww these essays were so smooth and sweet. Your last essay made me tear up; you’re a great writer :) I went to CAL too! I graduated in 2018. Curious where you got your shirt from? It’s soo cute!!

    • @MichelleYuan
      @MichelleYuan  Před 3 lety

      hi erika, so sorry for the late response but i got my shirt from a store on bancroft!

  • @pppppppieeeeeee
    @pppppppieeeeeee Před 3 lety

    Thank You!

  • @farimehr4103
    @farimehr4103 Před 3 lety +3

    I cried

  • @danielislasjimenez7831

    se la saco pa. felicidades

  • @alinahuang1707
    @alinahuang1707 Před 3 lety +2

    This video was so helpful and inspiring. I was wondering what’s your major? :)

  • @alil3231
    @alil3231 Před 2 lety

    Were these all the essays you had to complete for ur application to UC Berkeley?

  • @tommytuesday1503
    @tommytuesday1503 Před 4 lety +7

    Do you have any advice for FRESHMAN at Cal ????????????????

    • @MichelleYuan
      @MichelleYuan  Před 4 lety +1

      Wet Water i’ll make a video after i finish my freshman year!

  • @felixstephens4471
    @felixstephens4471 Před 3 lety

    force a toi fréro

  • @yangyili3252
    @yangyili3252 Před 3 lety +3

    I’m scared and unsecured of my essay 😢