Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line I also like the character development I do like how this deviated from the normal story I like how you put a little bit more detail in it I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back pick a part two and keep up the good work
@@rinokumera5907 I've been tempted to on a few occasions, but finding the motivation to has been difficult, and being unsure people would come back, it's been 4 and a half years since I published Chapter 17.
Please make part 2
I would love to see part 2❤❤❤❤🥰😍
Fun intro. Defenetly in character for Naruto to protect ppl he never met before
Yay the Uzumaki is learning fuinjutsu
Why do you never link the fanfics? Or continue the series you start?
Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line I also like the character development I do like how this deviated from the normal story I like how you put a little bit more detail in it I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back pick a part two and keep up the good work
Second
Dusk & Dawn by TC9078 17 chaps
Thank you
Yu da man
I still have the half I wrote of Chapter 18 around somewhere. This story was an unfortunate casualty of the pandemic.
@@TCsPage ah i see, based on what you said you don’t intend to continue it?
@@rinokumera5907 I've been tempted to on a few occasions, but finding the motivation to has been difficult, and being unsure people would come back, it's been 4 and a half years since I published Chapter 17.
What's the name of this fanfic?