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Komentáře • 157

  • @randomsimpson
    @randomsimpson Před 2 lety +12

    "What the hell is a Necronomicon?"
    Me: "Aww, shit, bitch. You're gonna regret that question."

  • @GmodPlusWoW
    @GmodPlusWoW Před 2 lety +9

    We remember that venerable house, opulent and imperial... Rifling through its owner's grave cannot yield any good. It'll drag ye into a realm of death and madness.

  • @CoriMultipass
    @CoriMultipass Před 2 lety +25

    This is awesome I love when I hear it's another Vandraven story!! Always a great narration!

  • @epicmelonman
    @epicmelonman Před 2 lety +5

    When I heard "necronomicon" I literally shouted YESSSS

  • @PandoraSaysSo
    @PandoraSaysSo Před 2 lety +8

    I am very much enjoying this series! The span of time elevates the story line from Ghost Story to Ghost Epic. Terrific writing, and as always, your narration really sets the perfect tone. Thank you again, Mr. C!

  • @daledrakewriter4912
    @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +167

    I hope you guys like Vikings because now I have finished The Family series, I have just started a new one, Raven Scar. Vikings Vs the supernatural.

    • @pilotk5752
      @pilotk5752 Před 2 lety +9

      are you planning on doing anymore of the Hellbound series? love the work

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +15

      @@pilotk5752 Yes I am doing the next Broken Messiah for next month then Hellbound.

    • @carolduvall111
      @carolduvall111 Před 2 lety +6

      I really enjoy your writing

    • @kristinlemaster9491
      @kristinlemaster9491 Před 2 lety +5

      Really amazing work!!! Love all your stories, never listened to one I didn't like.

    • @wadewatson929
      @wadewatson929 Před 2 lety +3

      Are you going to do more of the marston chronicles?

  • @MFO86
    @MFO86 Před 2 lety +19

    I remember in the first Vandraven story, I thought "You know, that dark god worshipped by Elizabeth and Matilda sounds an awful lot like Cthulhu..." Then, in this story, the Necronomicon and its author get namedropped...

  • @shelbssfx6301
    @shelbssfx6301 Před 2 lety

    Why does Johnny talk like Rick yelling at Morty about the Szechuan sauce? Lmao

  • @af6923
    @af6923 Před 2 lety +1

    29:30ish I made the mistake eating while listening and threw up lmao- so good job with your descriptions

  • @Nameless00Soul
    @Nameless00Soul Před 2 lety +3

    This universe is so intriguing

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +1

      Took me many a night shrouded walk to think them up.Think I scared myself, more than once lol.

  • @maestromike91971
    @maestromike91971 Před 2 lety +1

    I just got the notification for the one for today. I will watch that next.

  • @williamjones9036
    @williamjones9036 Před 9 měsíci

    Every time I hear the word "Necronomicon" I hear a little voice in my head say "Groovy"

  • @skorn8112
    @skorn8112 Před 2 lety +4

    Awesome story

  • @mattchaney306
    @mattchaney306 Před 2 lety +4

    Hey buddy. Thank you for the signed poster from kamicon today. Great story. Keep it up brother.

  • @jabbarmuhammad8804
    @jabbarmuhammad8804 Před 2 lety +2

    Evil buried treasure should never be touched

    • @anona8749
      @anona8749 Před 2 lety

      wow, thanks muhammad for that original take

  • @thebluerose7648
    @thebluerose7648 Před rokem

    I love how the VanDraven saga is sewn into this!!

  • @MatthewSereysothea-hf1js
    @MatthewSereysothea-hf1js Před 5 měsíci

    One of My favourite stories!!!
    Thank You so Very Much!
    Cheers!

  • @daledrakewriter4912
    @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +12

    One more Vandraven story to go.

    • @jacobshular2743
      @jacobshular2743 Před 2 lety +1

      Better get to workin on some prequels Sir Drake. Lol

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety

      @@jacobshular2743 Just started my new Viking Horror series.

    • @megagundamva2694
      @megagundamva2694 Před 2 lety

      Say me drake ever thought if Gundam or Mecha hot for iv been waiting forever for that

  • @titangirl161
    @titangirl161 Před 2 lety +6

    I have to say, I love how the story about the family changes a little every time...just like real folklore and urban legends, just little minnute changes to the story as time passes, until the original story (which we all know/remember) is lost and legend is what remains.

  • @joeybowen2347
    @joeybowen2347 Před 2 lety +5

    Great upload my friend!!

  • @lucasshaw6934
    @lucasshaw6934 Před 2 lety +2

    Outstanding!!! As always love it

  • @seif9923
    @seif9923 Před 2 lety +16

    Can you please narrate the story ''My city has been cut off from the world and overrun with monsters. I have a set of rules to stay alive''
    afaik no one had narrated and its really good, one of the best stories I read.

    • @YourFriendCaspian
      @YourFriendCaspian Před 2 lety +2

      Just from the title I'm already into it!

    • @SnaKe23599
      @SnaKe23599 Před 2 lety +1

      Let's hope he does.

    • @josephsorrendino9645
      @josephsorrendino9645 Před 2 lety +2

      Hate the "rules" story lines. They lack imagination.

    • @jendubay3782
      @jendubay3782 Před 2 lety

      @@josephsorrendino9645 I usually don't like them either. If it was something where the rules made more sense I would be more into them.
      But if it's something like "at 3:00 if somebody knocks five times stand on your head but if somebody knocks four times open all the cabinet doors"
      Just why!??
      Someone could give me some canonical justification for it it would be better.

  • @kaspersaldell
    @kaspersaldell Před 2 lety +2

    Wow wtf I was not expecting another Vandraven story hahaha

  • @stevie9361
    @stevie9361 Před rokem

    I can almost name your patrons myself. Wish you'd just say "thank you all that been here for years"

  • @nigel_saxon
    @nigel_saxon Před 2 lety +1

    "Poor dumb Harry."
    - SF Debris

  • @paulross225
    @paulross225 Před 2 lety +2

    To the master story teller and the author! 🍻🍾🥂

  • @ashleyalexandra9982
    @ashleyalexandra9982 Před 2 lety +1

    Lots of people with the last name Clutterbuck recently!

  • @Gagirl-82
    @Gagirl-82 Před 2 lety +17

    Yes I already liked it before I even listen to it bc MCP never seems to fail. Can’t wait to listen

  • @virginiavarble7818
    @virginiavarble7818 Před 2 lety +1

    This should be a series. Starting with the beginning of how Vandraven obtained the book and how he ended up in the crypt!

    • @marcussilva9510
      @marcussilva9510 Před 2 lety +1

      Well Virginia do I got good news for you!!! Just Google or CZcams VanDraven House and you'll find a whole series!

  • @ghwheels_02
    @ghwheels_02 Před 2 lety +13

    I love the Vandraven stories, I never know when I’m going to listen to one since I’m not keeping up with it and they don’t mention their name until a fair bit into the story

    • @greglong7170
      @greglong7170 Před 2 lety +1

      How many are there?

    • @ghwheels_02
      @ghwheels_02 Před 2 lety +2

      @@greglong7170 not sure, I’ve listened to about 2-3 if I recall thou

  • @carmenl1668
    @carmenl1668 Před 2 lety +4

    I would love to listen to these again all in order. Can someone tell me all the Vandraven stories in order?

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +2

      Vandraven, The Dressmakers Dummy, A call from the Darkness and this.There is still one to go

    • @ferisera
      @ferisera Před 2 lety

      @@daledrakewriter4912 Is Joe's Tale part of the series? It mentions the Vandraven mansion and the township.

  • @jamesbartle9617
    @jamesbartle9617 Před 2 lety +2

    Mr creepy pasta, I really like the work you do

  • @bsgenius22
    @bsgenius22 Před 2 lety +5

    Wow I absolutely loved this one! Keep up the great work MCP!❤

  • @davidturney2975
    @davidturney2975 Před 2 lety +2

    I love this series of stories

    • @pcunningham9708
      @pcunningham9708 Před 2 lety +1

      Is this a sequel?

    • @davidturney2975
      @davidturney2975 Před 2 lety +2

      @P Cunningham yeah there's 2 or 3 others in the VanDraven story line. Vandraven, the dress makers doll, and I think call from the darkness is the 3rd one. Definitely listen to vandraven, it's very cthulu based

  • @Bluesit32
    @Bluesit32 Před 2 lety +1

    Well, that sucks. Lucas ended up serving it after all.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety

      Yes he tried so hard to stop it but even in death, he couldn't escape.

  • @maestromike91971
    @maestromike91971 Před 2 lety +2

    I have been binge watching your videos, MCP. It’s. Funny, I sometimes want to leave a comment on a six year old video. Lol.

    • @BagerGman
      @BagerGman Před 2 lety

      It happens even if you have been listening for 10 years.
      I still want to talk after the millionth time i have listened to the friend in the alternate reality story. I swear, we had construction in my building and I just left it on loop a white noise more than I could count for sleep.
      I want more and want to thank him.

  • @michaelrae2497
    @michaelrae2497 Před 2 lety +2

    MCP brings the best stories, with tip-top narration. What more could you want.

  • @LordCommanderSpaceAlligator

    -cups
    -plates
    -necronomicon
    -doilies

  • @PrimateProductions
    @PrimateProductions Před 2 lety +1

    Is this happening to others too? I watch CZcams on my mobile phone and lately, for example, it will tell me that Mr Creepypasta has uploaded two new videos (for example on this video) and when you click on it appears like a list of two videos but it is the same new video, twice. It just lists the same new video twice.

  • @ReqLeBeax
    @ReqLeBeax Před rokem

    The shear number of times Harry’s name was told to his face leaves me to think Johnny is wearing a wire.

  • @kevinwilcox2689
    @kevinwilcox2689 Před 2 lety +1

    Awesome

  • @carolduvall111
    @carolduvall111 Před 2 lety

    Thank you mrcreepypasta

  • @bobbobbington7308
    @bobbobbington7308 Před 2 lety +1

    the wet bandits really get around

  • @lilrbigjohn1301
    @lilrbigjohn1301 Před 2 lety

    Love it

  • @MsMtheory
    @MsMtheory Před 11 měsíci

    Not how you pronounce Abduls name 😅😂 great story!

  • @bynryan757
    @bynryan757 Před 2 lety

    I just finished the vandraven right before this one and I’m soo happy I did because I had the biggest oh my god!!’ When I heard the name

  • @baddgurl01
    @baddgurl01 Před 2 lety +1

    You are the best.

  • @af6923
    @af6923 Před 2 lety

    If they call flashlights “torches”- what do they call the torch wood with fire on the end?

  • @idontknowwhatimdoingsims3075

    Hi Mr creepypasta would you mind making a van draven playlist? Because I would love to listen to these all in a row

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety

      I think he is going to put them all together into one long recording after the last story drop's.

    • @idontknowwhatimdoingsims3075
      @idontknowwhatimdoingsims3075 Před 2 lety +1

      @@daledrakewriter4912 thank you very much for telling me Mr.Drake and i know you probably hear this a lot but i love your work i hope to write as well as you do one day.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety

      @@idontknowwhatimdoingsims3075 read a lot and write a lot and it will come to you.

  • @popevimtoripkeefhappysackXXX

    Nothing worse than people up from That London.
    Splitters.

  • @captiveshadow8955
    @captiveshadow8955 Před 2 lety +1

    Can you a playlist with all your stories?

    • @janea4777
      @janea4777 Před 2 lety +1

      MrCreepyPasta has a playlist of Drakes stories.

    • @captiveshadow8955
      @captiveshadow8955 Před 2 lety

      Thanks but what I mean is a playlist of all the stories he's ever made! I know it's a little too much to ask.

  • @angiel5744
    @angiel5744 Před 2 lety

    How did Lucas Vandraven go from "I don't think my wife's heathen maid celebrates the holy day of Christmas" to "I'm going to put the Necronomicon in my coat of arms." Did I miss an installment?

  • @leekendall7155
    @leekendall7155 Před 2 lety +2

    Woohoo, this is a new experience, not bad at all. Cheers MrC I absolutely love the tie in to the Broken Messiah universe. I have to ask Mr Drake , do they all tie in ? This is very exciting and potentially epic on a level Creepypasta's have never seen before . Bloody awesome story in its own right though. Cheers All Lee.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +1

      Have you heard the other Vandraven stories Lee?

    • @Strokejackofferson
      @Strokejackofferson Před 2 lety

      @@daledrakewriter4912 I have! Lol… man these stories are really good. I love MPC’s narration of course (it’s his un punctuated pauses ..I luv em) but the writing is really solid mate. I hope you write enough to maybe publish into a good sized collection or something. But making Lucas stuck in an immortal hell having to constantly satisfy his sons leech-like hunger gave me chills. I almost wrecked my truck haha… cheers!

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety

      @@Strokejackofferson damn don't do that and keep on trucking.

  • @nevasoba5953
    @nevasoba5953 Před 2 lety +2

    I love the stories of this universe

  • @authorauthority7193
    @authorauthority7193 Před 2 lety +1

    hahaha xD I knew from the moment he said "necronomicon"
    RIP Abdul Al Hazad, Hazad was cool, his son was cooler.

  • @Sarah-Lou91
    @Sarah-Lou91 Před 2 lety +1

    ❤️

  • @jaredrobinson7071
    @jaredrobinson7071 Před 2 lety

    This could have been a creepy story but your narration made it a drama.

  • @squidlipssupreme168
    @squidlipssupreme168 Před rokem

    Why would anyone have a summer house in the Barbados?

  • @iconichakutv3580
    @iconichakutv3580 Před 2 lety

    What order should I listen to the vandraven stories?!?!

  • @darkball31
    @darkball31 Před 2 lety +1

    *500 pounds* not bad *2 pounds a month* well this will take *100 years*

  • @devlynandlink
    @devlynandlink Před 2 lety +1

    Do we need ash Williams?

  • @anona8749
    @anona8749 Před 2 lety

    sneed's feed and seed

  • @XxsmileygaigexX
    @XxsmileygaigexX Před rokem

    Am I the only one who is reminded of bloodborne by this story

  • @rhettpark1501
    @rhettpark1501 Před 2 lety

    More pretext into the book and it’s powers are needed also what is the son?

  • @lesliewolfe7643
    @lesliewolfe7643 Před 2 lety

    Idk if anyone else noticed this but there are a few times where Johnny is referred to as Harry and it gets a little confusing.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety

      To be fair that was probably me getting things back to front lol.

  • @kattiearmand6007
    @kattiearmand6007 Před 2 lety +2

    😁😍🖤

  • @dreadedninja7058
    @dreadedninja7058 Před 2 lety +1

    Hey if anyone could help me find this creepypasta about miners who wake up a wendigo that'd be swell 🤟🏿😉

  • @stripe801
    @stripe801 Před 2 lety

    ANY RECOMMENDATIONS!? the styLe of story of a victim dying i can’t seem to find many that NARRATED! somebody Let me know. heLL i can’t find many good ones where the narrator is the “bad guy” to be honest. dear abby is a good exampLe i guess for the Latter. heLp me out horror fans

  • @bevkenny1843
    @bevkenny1843 Před 2 lety +3

    1 minute in and know this was probably written by a British person 😆 Because im British and thats how we talk! 👊💪👌💀

  • @jaredrobinson7071
    @jaredrobinson7071 Před 2 lety

    Dude you need to figure out your cadence. you are quiet when action is going on and loud when it should be quiet.

    • @janea4777
      @janea4777 Před 2 lety

      Critiquing the writer …or the narrator? One is a writer the other is a voice actor… like ….one of us is a fan of both and one of us is trolling the writer over the voice actors performance. Doh!

  • @MirrenTheDragonKnight
    @MirrenTheDragonKnight Před 2 lety

    OK, to address the start of this story:
    1. Stealing from people is wrong, regardless of them being rich, middle class or poor. Yes, even if they are, apparently, a prick.
    2. Stealing a phone is a VERY big deal. Not only are you stealing something that cost them money, you are stealing their means of communication, their contacts, any money, accounts, etc that are active on it.

    • @MFO86
      @MFO86 Před 2 lety +2

      To be fair, the narration was most likely more reflective of Harry's morality, rather than the author's. The theft bit, combined with his derailing Johnny's life by getting him into drugs and alcohol, was probably intended to prevent the reader/listener from being overly sympathetic toward Harry. I could be wrong, of course, but that's my take on it.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +1

      Well yeah . The guy in the story is a douche. That's the point

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +1

      @@MFO86 Correct. Personally I don't go round stealing mobile phones lol

    • @MirrenTheDragonKnight
      @MirrenTheDragonKnight Před 2 lety +1

      @@MFO86 Oh, I know. I was addressing it as a character thing, so I hope the author does not think that way.
      Still, I like your analysis.

  • @melissagordon5818
    @melissagordon5818 Před rokem

    I cannot stand it when the story has to use the words G-Damn in it. Why? What's the point? It will totally make me turn off the story and not listen anymore.

  • @RobertCampsall
    @RobertCampsall Před rokem

    You forgot to post the link to the original story. Sorry, that's a thumbs down from me.

  • @benjaminsimpson7110
    @benjaminsimpson7110 Před rokem

    This was a great story but the Americanisms really pull you out of the story that’s supposed to be set in an English village. I’d recommend having a British friend proof read your story to replace those words (flash light, pissant, welfare cheque and the swearing) or if you don’t have a British friend just ask chat GTP to check it for you 😅

  • @WALKUREX
    @WALKUREX Před 2 lety

    CCP approves

  • @-JA-
    @-JA- Před 2 lety