hey everyone i have written a few lines please share your feedback in the comments. THANKS! karta tha tujhe mai humesha respect kabhi treat kiya ni tujhe like an object i thought we both were together perfect but tune toh kiya humesha yeh sab kuch neglect asal mai the truth is tere hisab se we failed to connect i always thougth that we were made for each other but tune toh kardi meri ginti in others ban na paye hum lovers and you have more to discover showed your true colours
Good bro But.... lines ki length dekho. gane mein fit karoge to acha nai lagega. number of words aas paas ke hone chahiye. "asal mein the truth is ...." wale line mein bilkul match nai tha. at last para the lines were too short as compared to the 1st one. flow switch karo to itta bada change mat karo. Baki sab theek .
Improve syllabic rhyming and add more syllables Add wordplays and references too Make line be almost of same length Short krego ya fir long to then Off beat hojayoge Jo me hota Hun without these problems 😭
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hey everyone i have written a few lines please share your feedback in the comments. THANKS!
karta tha tujhe mai humesha respect
kabhi treat kiya ni tujhe like an object
i thought we both were together perfect
but tune toh kiya humesha yeh sab kuch neglect
asal mai the truth is tere hisab se we failed to connect
i always thougth that we were made for each other
but tune toh kardi meri ginti in others
ban na paye hum lovers
and you have more to discover
showed your true colours
Good bro
But.... lines ki length dekho. gane mein fit karoge to acha nai lagega. number of words aas paas ke hone chahiye. "asal mein the truth is ...." wale line mein bilkul match nai tha. at last para the lines were too short as compared to the 1st one. flow switch karo to itta bada change mat karo.
Baki sab theek .
Improve syllabic rhyming and add more syllables
Add wordplays and references too
Make line be almost of same length
Short krego ya fir long to then
Off beat hojayoge
Jo me hota Hun without these problems 😭
And I actually noticed rhymes are good 🔥
@@ishankashyap5407thanks for your feedback bro will work on these things
@@Eb_Edits.2thanks bro I will work on these things for sure
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