The Black Ship - Chapter 13 | HFY | A short Sci-Fi Story
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- čas přidán 26. 01. 2024
- The Black ship continues...
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This is the continuation of the story "The Black Ship" from Reddit. The original story ended abruptly, and no other chapters could be found. I hope you enjoy these new chapters.
Author: u/EkhidnaWritez
Link to chapter 2: / the_black_ship_chapter_2
I'd love to know what you think of the story in the comments.
The original Story details:
author: u/[deleted]
original story link: / oc_the_black_ship
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Was looking forward to the next chapter from this series and here it is...
I've been waiting to
Great story! So Wyatt is now the "Captain" of a black and deadly ship. I wonder if he'll fly the "jolly roger"? LOL!!!
I raise a tankard of Captian Morgan in his honor! 07
Guess Wyatt needs to fly that rust bucket. I hope he gets the opportunity to fly it more often :)
No I am all caught up, and impatiently curious as to what Nornavio will be revealed to mean. Such a tease.
Noirnavio literally means Black Ship XD
@@ekhidna4
Thank you.
I tried googling it, but came up with nothing.
There was a conversation on the RDDT about scales of ship sizes. For those interested, and Im not sure how much of it will legitimately cross over into this universe, BUT..
Ship classes tend to go as follows, from largest to smallest. Carrier, Fleet Carrier, Dreadnaught, Battleship, Battle Cruiser, Heavy Cruiser, Light Cruiser, Destroyer, Frigate, Corvette, Gunship, Shuttle, Fighter, Skiff / Life Boat.
That being said.. Holy Hell, I am hooked, and cant wait for the next installment.
Glad you are enjoying the story!
Forgot about tug boats. 👍
@a.mathis9454 tuggs would fall into the shuttle category wouldn't they?
@@ekhidna4 when is the next chapter dropping?
@@USMC0311CplJackson Posted Chapter 14 on Reddit so it should be here tomorrow, mate.
Wyatt is such a great character xD
All the others too, but, i really like the humor that Wyatt has and his steadfast nature ^^
Even after reading straight up, it’s always nice to kick back and listen to you narrate it. you actually add some emotion to the characters compared to most other channels. Keep it up 👍
you know the narrator is an AI
@@woswasdenni1914 uhhh yes? There’s emotion and more clarity carefully added that other channels do not pay attention to. If it was just a ‘lazy ai’ channel there wouldn’t be any of that meaning the channel owner is putting in work. So it’s good to encourage AND recognize that.
This IS an A.I. narrated channel . However , it is a Very High Standard A.I. The only " Live Reader " I know of is Net Narrator .
@@johncunningham4820 did you even read the response I made to the previous guy that said the exact same thing? Idk the point of your reply, I already answered.
@@jblockminermc5401 .
What is YOUR problem ?
I didn't disagree with you , just expanded on what you said .
the wait, the wait is killing me. when is the next installment, even 7 days or is it 10 days. I don't know, I check every day for a new Black ship episode, but yet it had not came. why? This is one of the best audio books out there right now, give me more.
I do like about half of the chapter with Wyatt talking with the prisoners he took responsibility for sparing their lives for now. I do like the debate between Wyatt and Galt it was very interesting between a commoner and lessar noble from a large family.
I do like how Galt is thankful for Wyatt temper his handling that prisoner noble getting recklessly trash talking him.
I do like how when Wyatt and Cynthia going to the captains quarters for the info they need have a heart to heart talk about the prisoners, Clara and himself . I do like when asked what he would punish the prisoners, that he would have them go through the judicial system.
I do like how this chapter reveals that the sleath ships were made by another nation but unfortunately for team Wyatt no evidence of eho exactly is it from.
Glad you liked it!
@@ekhidna4 I do LOVED it! ☺ I do like how Wyatt shows his respect to Gaul by kneeing down so he can look at them at eye level while talking. I do love how Cynthia reaction to Wyatt's actions with the prisoners in this chapter with him being unorthodox but sensible at the same time and being paradoxical LOL! I do love how Wyatt's reaction to hearing for how long Cynthia and the RM had been trying to break into the computers of the Samuel's Honer.
I do like how Wyatt feels better when he is totally honest with Cynthia due the true friendship they have developed in the short time they have known each other.
Its interesting how powerful SH is compared to most of the sleath ships which act like submarines in modern times but instead is a proper worship with the same stealth systems. I do like the consequence of the hot drop they did caused the shuttle to be wrecked and them having to either pilot the SH or use another ship/shuttle to leave the station. It would be smart to use the scavenged remains of the stealth ship frigate as parts for SH, especially the stealth systems.
Interesting way to end the chapter with Clara giving Wyatt the honor to rename the SH and Cynthia's reaction to Noirvio. No clue what it means but probably will be explained in the next chapter which you/SciFi Stories was just posted earlier today. I am guessing the whole part of ship scanning Wyatts bare hand for hand print and probably DNA, to give him top level security access for that ship considering he is one of the most valuable and trusted person that Clara has but also is the greatest expert on their side in fighting these stealth ships.
With further thought and analysis it with the ship only disengaging docking claps and starting to leave the station after Wyatt gives it new name. It makes me think that Wyatt was made the owner of the ship without him realizing what it was. It would explain why Cynthia reacted the way she did when having her private communications with Clara at the end of this chapter.
Loving this series!
I thought for sure that Clara would be part of the name.
To be fair, 'Clara's Purity' was a candidate but I quickly discarded it. Wouldn't fit the story in the long run.
OMG. Its here!
Nicely written. As far as I'm concerned you know you have a good writer when the reader is looking forward to the next installment. Keep up the good work.
You flatter me!
Awesome..............this would be a great movie or mini series.
This my favorite story so far these short snips are kill meeee
Awww, thank you! Sadly, the next chapter is on the shorter end of the spectrum.
thank you never disappointed 😁
Glad to hear it!
This is reality getting good. Your doing a good job. Keep up the good work 😊
Thank you! I'll try my best to deliver a good, enjoyable story!
thank you for a great chapter 😊
Thank you for reading/listening!
This is so good, but it takes so long to get a new one. I can't wait till the next one!
Rocking space opera Ekhidna, I really enjoy it.
Thank you!
Big Episode today . Really great story this .
CZcams went full ham with the commercials during this video. 5 sets in all. 2 were 30-minute skippable mini marathon productions.
great story!!
Thanks!
Now waiting for Chapters 14 - 56+ :)
"Black Navy" :D So awesome...
Black Ship, but close enough!
As much as i like listen to the stories i do wish they where on YT music uses less battery then just YT. Wont lie i started listening to this one 3 time and the the 4th time im glad i did solid story.
Wait 'till Wyatt finds out he's the captain.
Amazing chapter, and this man has his own ship now amazing, but i am afraid im not smart enough to understand the name he gave it
Noir/noire is the French word for black. Navio looks like maybe Roman Latin. I'd guess it will translate to navigate, boat or ship..... So, Black Ship....
@@maxjjackson ah ok, makes total sense, thank you
Noirnavio I don't know what that means , but I think it means black ship maybe . I thought it would be the princes Clara's revenge .
First here crew let's go
what? not gonna tell us what the new name means in this episode?
ah well. interesting none the less
Black Ship
@@danwhiteman2529 well can understand cynthia's comment then. thanks
@@danwhiteman2529 Precisely
Wait so are the people in this story humans with this being a story about imperialistic feudal space humans or are they imperialistic feudal space aliens and the humans have just yet to appear yet?
They are humans, yes. There are a few aliens so far mentioned but they'll come into play soon.
Tried looking it up, what does the name mean?
So i guess the significance of that name will be explained later on?
It means Black Ship.
@@danwhiteman2529 Oh. Oh man. That's good.
I'm laughing right now because i called my own dog, when we got him, "Inu". So this makes sense to me.
@@smokinggnu6584 Shiba or Akita?
@@danwhiteman2529 pittbull and border collie mix. He's passed away by now.
@@danwhiteman2529 This
Really, Wyatt?
Yes!
I’m confused. How did Wyatt save them again after knocking out the noble woman?
Because such disrespect coming from captured prisoners could've gotten them all killed.
@@ekhidna4 Thanks for cleaning that up 👍🏽
Please not over a week for a next episode.
😅
Is more to this story?
There are 15 chapters (in the playlist) with more being written as we speak.