An excellent story and well told. But as I see below, others have noticed how much BETTER it could have been with both a decent EDITOR and having the individual who read the story, read aloud over and over and over again until he learns to PRONOUCE the words correctly. The use of the wrong words in the captions, the misspellings of words, lack of commas, lack of periods and sentence structure throughout the entire story made me spend most of my attention on editing instead of what seems to be an excellent story!
Just got the best timed ad ever. "A testiment to their harmonious way of life. However, a dire threat looms over the Illyrians. (Ad starts) I'm Donald Trump, and I support this message." 😂
This comes off sounding like a news report from a small youtube journo. Three names with no characters...the entire storyline is a bunch of generalities.
Getting so sick of "Testament to this...", and "human Innovation...that". Good grief! How utterly monotonous. Hundreds of these stories, just RIFE with this tripe. 😒
these are all AI generated stories, and no regard to putting out anything actually worth reading. they're just looking for "clicks".. i down vote all of them automatically.. i take it as an insult to my intellect and unworthy of anything but a quick down vote and then bouncing out.
Fleet Captain? What kind of rank is that? Is that a naval rank? Or an army? What unit/s is its command responsibilities? A naval captain can be in charge of a vessel or a group of vessels. How does it compare with an Admiral?
@@walterdove8727 As Fleet Admiral's chief of staff Captain Steel to lead the mission? That's so arbitrary. What is the basic function of a chief of staff, military or civilian? Are you not depriving the Fleet Admiral his coordinator?
Is this one battle or various battles over a period of time. It’s a miss mash of ideas giving no representation of time. Such as forming committees to exchange ideas in the middle of a battle? The AI needs better programming or an actual editor to streamline the story.
An excellent story and well told. But as I see below, others have noticed how much BETTER it could have been with both a decent EDITOR and having the individual who read the story, read aloud over and over and over again until he learns to PRONOUCE the words correctly. The use of the wrong words in the captions, the misspellings of words, lack of commas, lack of periods and sentence structure throughout the entire story made me spend most of my attention on editing instead of what seems to be an excellent story!
It's probably a damn AI program
"This is all you sent?"
"These were our greenest troops."
A better editor is greatly needed as well as help with pronunciation issues.
Just got the best timed ad ever. "A testiment to their harmonious way of life. However, a dire threat looms over the Illyrians. (Ad starts) I'm Donald Trump, and I support this message." 😂
faints = losing consciousness, should be feints = deceptive/distracting movements
This comes off sounding like a news report from a small youtube journo. Three names with no characters...the entire storyline is a bunch of generalities.
Getting so sick of "Testament to this...", and "human Innovation...that". Good grief! How utterly monotonous. Hundreds of these stories, just RIFE with this tripe. 😒
Then stop listening to "HFY" stories.
these are all AI generated stories, and no regard to putting out anything actually worth reading. they're just looking for "clicks".. i down vote all of them automatically.. i take it as an insult to my intellect and unworthy of anything but a quick down vote and then bouncing out.
Interesting , Thank you
Lets send inexperienced penal legions instead. Is HFY or 40k?
Fleet Captain? What kind of rank is that? Is that a naval rank? Or an army? What unit/s is its command responsibilities? A naval captain can be in charge of a vessel or a group of vessels. How does it compare with an Admiral?
@@walterdove8727 As Fleet Admiral's chief of staff Captain Steel to lead the mission? That's so arbitrary. What is the basic function of a chief of staff, military or civilian? Are you not depriving the Fleet Admiral his coordinator?
Is this one battle or various battles over a period of time. It’s a miss mash of ideas giving no representation of time. Such as forming committees to exchange ideas in the middle of a battle? The AI needs better programming or an actual editor to streamline the story.
How do you choose someone for an unrecognised talent
This is why humans are isolated.. even with future tech they will still glorify war
Meh... I see the work with AI on this stiry, but its not good one... You just repete "cloaking devices" and "AI", without any context...
Badly written, very boring... desperately seeking a block channel button😢
as long as the video is shown in your landing page or on the side bar, you can click "..." and choose "don't recommend channel"
@@TheyCalledMeT Diten know that, thank you for the information❤
All AI
Sound like they worship Gork or perhaps Mork
WWWAAAAGGGHHHHH