THIS IS WHAT A HEARTBREAK FEELS LIKE ASHFUR au MAP CALL(Open 20/24)Thumbnail READ DISC and comments!
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- čas přidán 7. 12. 2023
- Hello everyone!!! This is my second map call and I'm really excited about it because it suits Ashfur so well! If you want a part,pls apply in the comments! RULES:No copying,No Lyrics,Collabs are allowed,you can look up the designs or do your own. 2 Parts per person is the limit,your part or parts are due in a month and 2 days after you get them(If you need time feel free to ask!:) You can apply to be a backup too!
Script:lntro1Show scenes of a forest,wildfire,a pathway into the woods,and a lake with dead Ashfur on the shore.
Intro2Ashfur’s dead body is on the shore of the lake,suddenly ashfur's body starts to float as he comes back to life.
Part1Ashfur is alive and hunts a sparrow that he catches.
Part2Ashfur brings the sparrow to Squirrelflight and blushes when he gives the sparrow to her,then squirrelflight bushes back at him and walks away.
Part3Ashfur comes out of a bush and sees Sees Squirrelflight with Brambleclaw and Lip syncs "guess my lover was a snake" He is mad at Squirrelflight and there’s tears in his eyes and a reflection of blue fire.
Part4Ashfur runs away from the place and sees Hawkfrost on his territory and attacks him.Hawkfrost smiles at him and Ashfur slowly gets off of him .Hawkfrost talks to Ashfur and Ashfur tells him he saw his love cheating on him
Part5Then Ashfur tells him he wants squirrelflight to suffer for what she did,Hawkfrost suggests the fox trap.Then ashfur jumps in and tells Hawkfrost to trap firestar in it.He agrees and Ashfur and walks away and goes to sleep
Part6Ashfur sees Squirrelflight and lip syncs "Girl you're such a fake" when he wakes up and looks at his paws.Then he walks to the highrock and sees Firestar glaring at him.
Part7Ashfur imagines Squirrelflight by his side and smiles at her. He snaps into reality as he is called to go on a patrol by Brambleclaw.Ashfur frowns and mumbles "guess my lover was a snake"
Part8 After the patrol Ashfur goes to the prey pile sets a bird on it. He starts to cough on the "feels like I'm choking" it feels like he is being bit on his throat
Part9Ashfur stops coughing and goes back to the warriors den and sees everyone in the clan with a mate laughing and chating.He almost starts crying but then he sees Squirrelflight smiling as she goes over to brambleclaw.
Part10Ashfur is in warriors den and starts crying on his nest.Outside the Seasons change from spring, to summer, fall ,and winter.His rage becomes greater.
Part11Ashfur is shivering and yells at everyone around him, then he trips over a log and falls face first into the snow.Everyone in the clan starts laughing except squirrelflight,firestar,and Leafpool.
Part12The season changes to spring and the clan is looking for Firestar.Then brambleclaw runs to the lake and sees firestar in a fox trap and hawkfrost behind him. Then Hawkfrost attacks Brambleclaw.
Part13(Dusk lake scene)Hawkfrost and brambleclaw are fighting and Ashfur is hiding behind a bush watching them.Brambleclaw grabs the nail from the fox trap as he stabs Hawkfrost's throat with it, hawkfrost spits out blood and falls to the ground dead.
Part14(Lake)Ashur sees Hawkfrost's death,blue fire apears in his eyes.He sees Brambleclaw in shock,then frees firestar from the trap.
part15Some months later hollykit jaykit and lionkit are playing with brambleclaw
part16Hollykit,jaykit and Lionkit become apprentices and Ashfur becomes Lionpaw's mentor.He trains Lionpaw and pressures him.
Part17Months later,a thunderstorm starts and lightning hits a tree.It starts on fire and Hollyleaf,Lionblaze,and Jayfeather get trapped by the flames.
Part18Squirrelflight sees her kits trapped in the flames and tries to help them.She calls over to ashfur to help her push a log for her kits to cross on.They make it fall and squirrelflight tells her kits to cross.
Part19(Ashfur jumps on the log, he faces squirrelflight and cries at her for not choosing him.He tells her he felt so much pain and that he planed the fox trap idea with Hawkfrost to make her feel what he did.
Part20 Ashfur tells her the only way for her to suffer is to let her kits burn.Ashur and squirrelflight argue,hollyleaf lionblaze, jayfeather are shocked
part21:Ashfur walks away from the fire, squirrelflight saves her kits.Then hollyleaf glares at Ashfur.
Part22Ashfur walks to the lake and looks at his reflection in the lake.Hollyleaf is hiding in a bush watching him.She creeps closer and closer to him
Part23Hollyeaf attacks Ashfur,he tries to fight back but fails.He gets bit in the throat and blood poors on the rocks and water
Part24Hollyleaf looks at him suffering and slams his head to the ground.Tears come from Ashfur's eyes,then he dies.Hollyleaf walks away from the lake
Parts:
Intro1
lntro 2
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2Nyan
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6Wonderofyears
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10Aurora the Hybird
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19Tuffy105aj
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24 - Krátké a kreslené filmy
could i apply for part 6!! also congrats on 57 subs!!
Of course!!! And thank you!!! Just make sure you check the Disc pls!(:
How's the map part going?
Hey, I just want to make sure the natural map is also being finished! (Usually map hosts don't host multiple at a time unless one is delayed or cancelled)
Yes it still is going to be finished.would you like another part?
@@tuffy10568 Cool! And no thanks!
@@doodleproductionsyt Alright!(:
Are there any parts open? This would be my first map on this specific channel (i had an old channel i did alot on).
Do you need an art example?
Yes! All parts are almost open! Just parts 10 and 6 are taken.(: And It would be nice if you did an art example but you don't have to!(:
@@tuffy10568 I have an animation in the works, I'll tell you when it's posted and then ask for a part if that's cool
@@TillyEditz12Ok thanks!(:
this might be too late, but if part 2 is open can I apply for it?
Yes you may!! The part is yours.(:
@@tuffy10568 thank you :D
btw is there a set date I have to get it done by? I’ll get it finished as soon as I can, but just checking.
@@Burujj1 You have a month and 2 days until it's due.But if you need more time, let me know!!(:
@@tuffy10568 ok thanks!
@@Burujj1 no prb!(:
Is the script continued anywhere? I would love to join :))
Yeah I am going to finish it soon
what part would you like?
@@tuffy10568 If I could get part 10, that would be awesome
@@AuroraTheHybrid Of course!!(:
@@tuffy10568 :DD