And if you watch carefully you can tell that they weren't planning on killing him. They just took one look at Dale when he walked in and decided...yeah, we...we can't have this guy randomly roaming the streets of Chicago anymore.
SPOILERS! Nobody read before viewing. VERY unexpected twist, and great misdirection leading up to it. You spend just the right time giving us a clue with the rag soaking, too. I just had time to think, "Hey, is that..." and BAM, there it was. Nice work, and kudos to all involved. One minor point, and it's not a criticism, but a constructive observation. The women's voices when hauling him away were hard to hear over the dragging sounds and seemingly lower volume, maybe due to further distance from the mike? But that doesn't take a single point away from the enjoyment at this tasty little pre-Halloween spooker.
Well that escalated rather quickly. This was awesome, nice work all!
And if you watch carefully you can tell that they weren't planning on killing him. They just took one look at Dale when he walked in and decided...yeah, we...we can't have this guy randomly roaming the streets of Chicago anymore.
@@analogkid01 eating criminals before they happen, like a super sinister minority report
Cool short film! Great job! 👍
Friggin sweet.
SPOILERS! Nobody read before viewing.
VERY unexpected twist, and great misdirection leading up to it. You spend just the right time giving us a clue with the rag soaking, too. I just had time to think, "Hey, is that..." and BAM, there it was. Nice work, and kudos to all involved.
One minor point, and it's not a criticism, but a constructive observation. The women's voices when hauling him away were hard to hear over the dragging sounds and seemingly lower volume, maybe due to further distance from the mike? But that doesn't take a single point away from the enjoyment at this tasty little pre-Halloween spooker.
loved acting in this!
Called it!
Got ‘em!
Wow
heh