When He Saved His Ex-Gf in a Burning Building INSTEAD of You • Jungkook ONESHOT | 김Torong 9507
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Hi shahahah im sorry if I disappointed u guys,If my ff is worst.Im sorry,I promise I'll clarify everything on my next ff,I really didn't mean to make jungkook bad here.Im sorry,maybe I'll just delete it after some weeks,my bad.Sorry,I'll do better next time:(
Unnie don't delete it. just make a happy ending by a plot twist . I mean make a bonus part
Please don't delete itttt
@@Tina_777 B-but JK already ended up with Y/n
@@Tina_777 see my comment
@@Tina_777 here is an explanation by me Ok so who ever is having problem understanding this ff .... listen here so the story line is really simple so jungkook saved his ex and y/n saw it so she thought he still loved his ex ....after that she was sad with jungkook so she went to her cousin's house to clear her mind after 2 weeks she understood that jungkook just saved a person who is dying and it isn't his fault to save a dying person...so when she met jungkook there she forgave him but she didn't loved him I mean she only loved him as a friend after 7 years passed jungkook married to Taylor his ex because her parents forced him to marry her. .....after marrying Taylor jungkook thought he have some feelings for her still so after 2 years he moved on from yn and yn did the same she met a guy called joongki and fell in love with me after that she married him and thats why when jungkook met y/n he didn't felt sad seeing y/n married.....I hope u understood something from this lol
I am confused.... She forgave him for saving his ex rather than her and stayed with him.. Right??? But he seriously accepted the marriage with his ex anyway and had a kid with Taylor???? He is a coward
Yeah im confused also.....i though they're going to end up together....because when jk's mom said that he will get married to Taylor he didn't accept i because he has a girlfriend which is YN.....but in the end they didn't end up together wtf im confused
hii, kindly read the pinned comment for clarification^ ^
@@Torong-bv1ux where is the pinned comment???
edit: ohh ok ok i saw
Right
@@Torong-bv1ux does that mean you will make another story of this storyline but with jungkook and y/n together
Am I the only one who thinks Taylor started the fire and planned everything? AND am I the only one who is pissed at the ending ?????! 😠AND THEN ended up with the bish 🙄 AND THENNN HAD A DAMN KID😤😤😤😤😤😤😤 BOIIIIIIIIIIIIIII when I say I'm pissed I'm literally laying in my bed about to explode 👀
I also think like what you think😭
I agree and it’s making me mad because the people in the comments keep saying how can you love someone who left you in a burning building just to save his ex like come on now do y’all read he wasn’t finna go to Taylor he was going straight to Y/N but he couldn’t and when she make a part two and Jungkook and Y/N not together then that will be total bullish!t but I love your ff
Ikr she probably did. It aint a HUGE COINCIDENCE that she was in the fire he saved her and then got an arranged marriage all of a sudden? She probably did to make y/n hate him but what's sad is how they gave up so easily 😭
Whatever we should respect the author's imagination😁
@@nirupamaniru2487 I'm just saying what I think and I didn't say anything bad about the story
honestly about the issue of her (Y/N) being left in the building, Jk didn't do anything wrong in my opinion. After all he hadn't seen Y/N and as a normal human being why would he be so heartless to leave her (Taylor) there?, just because Taylor has the title of being his ex? I think even if there was random girl there asking for help that time, Jk would have done the same thing, take her out quickly and come to look for Y/n. So Y/N should definitely forgive him for that. Thank you author for the story, its really interesting!
You didn't get it....hmmmm You have boyfriend...and There's a building burning but your in there and his ex he save his ex while your just there what can you feel of course You feel betrayed... Seeing your boyfriend saving his ex and your just near his ex...
I agree with that.
I'm not agree with this because when jk come back to y/n I'm pretty sure she'll be dead or buried so badly. I think he should wanna protect y/n first
Because she is his girlfriend
And she will never forgive him because he saved his ex expect her
yes I agree because JK didn't see her yes he could have left Taylor but she was dying too and moreover someone can't be that heartless to literally leave their ex behind in a burning fire and for y/n and some ppl who think y/n did the correct thing y'all need to start watching the ff with both sides (both of y/n and the other "boyfriend" side)...
@@yukanourii46 y/n saw him it means he haven't search about her properly.
How can you love someone that basically left you in a burning building saving Is ex instead of you the present girlfriend?
Lol yeah right
he saw his ex first that was also begging for help & he couldn’t find y/n still at that very moment.
@@muvannalove4042 still if I was in his place I wouldn’t even spare a glance at the ex and would have went to search for y/n
@@ParkJoon if she was begging for your help? but as you say.
@@muvannalove4042 she’s my ex so she must have done something bad for our relationship to break down and ignoring my girlfriend who I knew was still needing help wouldn’t help my ex in that case.
So in last he married Taylor !!! 🤧
He is really a aaaaaaaaa 😈
How could he marry Taylor if he loved y/n AND even he apologized to her and told her to stay together for forever!!
Make part 2 to clarify and I guess taehyung would be a better fit as her husband
Yes even I m thinking the same
Yes I'm totally agree with you 💜
Me too
No🥺 Jungkook deserve a second chance
I agree
I love yn end up with someone else. Wait where is tylor? Jk have a kid? Tylor n jk all ready married? Why Jk with jaemin?
I am confused too...
It said that Joongki was YNs dad and at the end it said her husband..
@@Inopbgop23 yes!!!
Ikr hella confused like were they to weak to fight?
I thought jungkook was y/n's husband's dad-💀
😳
@@ooo-fd6ko 🌚
@i Am rEecH i hAve cHaiN 👁🐽👁
So she would be married to her son............. I-ok....
@@winter-qr1lj °•°
it can be a basical kdrama with 16 episodes you just need a producer , actors , and 100 000 000 wons lol(i'm not kidding , exept in the money part)😂
Dont tell me jk's mom forced him to marry taylor and because of this the end is like this 😭😭....
But the end was sad and cute too
Wait so y'all expected jk to leave her in the burning building like that just cuz she was his ex are y'all serious- 💀
It was natural for him to help the Taylor girl first he didn't see yn first and even was going to go back for her
But I don't understand did he get married with his ex in the end ??
You are making sense lol, i dont even understand whats wrong with the guys supporting JK to go look for Y/N first.
@@dramaenthusiast8818 ikr it's sooo cringey everyone is just trying to find reasons to blame his ex 💀 I'm so done with these people
I was lmao after seeing tae taking yn to Starbucks after he doesn't like coffees 🤭🤭 nice ff unnie i purple you 💜🇰🇷😀
1. How will you save your ex form the building INSTEAD OF YOUR DAMN GIRLFRIEND
2. after apologies to each other and hug you know,.. HOW THE HELL DO YOU ACCEPT A MARRIAGE!?
3. IF I MET AFTER 7 YEARS I WOULD SLAP HIME AND WALK AWAY.
I like 3 one😂😂😂 my mind was same
ME TOO
Unnie this is Masterpiece but plss...make part 2..let jungkook suffer🥺🥺
He didn't do anything wrong by saving his ex right... Like was he supposed to be a heartless to leave a girl there whos needs help?...
No because I don't see anything wrong with what Jungkook did during the fire. like you see a person about to die if front of you, the ofc you're gonna save them. just because she was his ex, it was a big issue? it's humanity to save other people. but I didn't understand the ending there was no proper explaination to what happened to Y/n
this reminds of that scene from THE DARK KNIGHT movie
where Batman saved Harvey but couldn't save Rachel
The crying emoji is funny don't add it in emotional part
Me : 😢😢🙂🙂
Guys BTS lost Grammy 2022😩😭 But don't worry they won our hearts 💜#Btsarmyforever 💜
Jungkook didn't do anything wrong if it wasn't his ex gf as someone else and asked for his help he would do the same! N was again going into the building to find y/n! So he isn't at fault in my opinion
This 7 years made me confused....Joongki was y/n's father then he became her husband and they have kids also jk....what the heck happen in that time......😞 we need explanation. ......
Uhm Ms.Yena,,Y/n met joongki as Joongki became y/n's husband and they had kids.You can check the pinned comment so you wont be confused anymore 🥰
I’m done with fan fictions first of all I loved it so much but the fact that sunghoon and dahyun ar e my children… fenomenal but the fact that JUNGKOOK FREAKING MARRIED HIS EX INSTEAD OF ME MADE ME CRY ACTUAL TEARS IM SO OVER JUNGKOOK
14:31 i read it with olivia's voice lmao
I have a some questions one being how did Tea end up there when he doesn’t even live there? Second question how did she even see kook when she was like passing out and came out when his ex was already rescued? Third and last question am I the only one who thinks that her reaction is a bit toxic? I mean I get it I would be hurt too but if you see a person who need help ofc you help that person it doesn’t matter if it is your ex or a stranger. You can’t just let a person die like that it would hunt me.
Unnie, will there be a part 2 to clarify all the confusions?
True
@@diahnadiah3316 look at the pinned comment....you can understand it😊
I don't know about others but I recognised almost every song of which's instrumental was being played in the background.... And I was singing them too. Btw, loved the story though I haven't completed it yet but I was just too exited to write this 😅
Well, 7 years have passed. A lot could've happened between them- they fell out of love, one committed something. Thus, the sad yet happy ending.
But, I have to say, JK you should have told Taylor to wait for a while, the rush to check on Y/N first. Then, go back to Taylor with Y/N with him.
I gotta say u got a nice collection of music in the background 😊
Ok so who ever is having problem understanding this ff .... listen here so the story line is really simple so jungkook saved his ex and y/n saw it so she thought he still loved his ex ....after that she was sad with jungkook so she went to her cousin's house to clear her mind after 2 weeks she understood that jungkook just saved a person who is dying and it isn't his fault to save a dying person...so when she met jungkook there she forgave him but she didn't loved him I mean she only loved him as a friend after 7 years passed jungkook married to Taylor his ex because her parents forced him to marry her. .....after marrying Taylor jungkook thought he have some feelings for her still so after 2 years he moved on from yn and yn did the same she met a guy called joongki and fell in love with me after that she married him and thats why when jungkook met y/n he didn't felt sad seeing y/n married.....I hope u understoof something from this lol
Anyways this ff was great and please don't delete it author nim 🥺
Btw new subscriber here 💜
This was really great 😊 and thanks for clearing it 😊 lots of love to you 💕☺️
Plz make part 2 bcoz this is so confusing . It's been 2 months now
Kookie - Has to leave y/n
Taehyung - Pinky ponkie she is my property
The music and yn said 'you betrayed me' exactlyyy
Pls make next part that how yn got to know that jk saved his ex first instead of herself 🥺💜
Huh??? I didnt even understand the last part..... Can u make part 2 to clear things out??? Btw jk and yn said i love u and all then why they didnt end up together in the ending?????.... So plzzz make bonus part and plzz make jk and yn together plzzzz i dont want jk with tylor...😭😭😭😭 plzzz make it like a different story with plot twist plzzz like jk saved raylor becoz taylor was preg.... With a child thats y he saved taylor.... And when taylor married jk she said that she already loves someone else and that 'someone' is yn's hubby and yn's kids are jk's kids and now they are planning to get divorce soon and happy ending..
Plzzzz do this unnie dont make taylor with jk.. Becoz i want at least this story to be different😭😭😭😭
I like your idea
OMG U LITERALLY HAVE THE GREATEST IDEA EVER 🤯🤯🤯🤯 YOU LITERALLY CRASHED MY BRAIN CELLS THIS STORY LINE IS AMAZING 👏
@@lisamartinez7561 😎😎😎😏😏😏😂😂😂
@@corinademetriou7360 thank u😎😎😎
I thought jungkook is his husband lol
wait can u really explain what happened why did they two broke up like what made them them separate
Jungkook leaves y/n for any purpose and Teahyung pops into the story like 'Mine now'
( I have not watched the entire video yet )
What's is this ?
I can't even understand 😕
@@areebamanzoor9650meeee toooo
Is there prt 2 bcoz I m confused there should be prt 2 right pwease 🥺...
Actually if a/n would've explained it a Lil bit it would've cleared all of our misconceptions, doubts and whatever it is! But still it's good I didn't expected it to end like this(in a good way ofc) u did a great job author nim
Noooo, I wanted y/n and Jungkook to be together 😭
saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeee😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
So they didn't end up together then? I thought they married each other since they said love you to each other. Lol. Its quite confusing
POV: your name is Taylor but your playing y/n
Can u please make jk and y/n together 😭💜
yessss😭💜
ik this is so random but as a kpop multi-stan this just went off in my head, iykyk
at 4:56 'I...I cannot B-breathe'
Chan and Hyunjin: I CANNOT BREATHE WITHOUT YOU BEING RGHT BY MY SIDE
When real life of y/n sucks and fan fiction life of y/n sucks more TwT
Y/n is awarded the Guinness for the suckiest life.
Y/n: you like me! you reallllyy like me~~~ strong power thank u~~
I dont get the ending but I hope yn and jk don't end up togather.. he didn't even explain himself properly and he behaved stupidly just ignoring no proper explanation
So Jungkook caved in & married Taylor huh? Figures!!
First yn and jk said I Love you to each other but didn't end up
Second it said that yn's father then at the end yn's husband ehhh I'm confuse as fuck
check the pinned comment,im sorry for making u confused
@@Torong-bv1ux where is the pinned comment?
What happened at the ending? Did they go different paths?
Plot twist:
All the three kids are y/n s and jks and Tylor is into girls,! so one is with jk to show everybody and other two with y/n And that y/n s hubby is their bodyguard 😩
Lol sry
I'm confused. How did the story get to the point where they are now like this?I need more clearance
my friend rhea recommended me....🤣 it was hilarious....
if you are a south Indian you would know...🤣🤣
👉🏻👈🏻 ummm can we get a Taehyung ending please ?
Its confusing. 🙄😒😶
Whatttttttt no no this can’t be the ending please authornim make a bonus part and end it with
Y/N and jungkook together i mean I didn’t even get what happened why did they ended up being apart please please please make a plot twist maybe something like it was just a nightmare but please I want tgem together it’s not gguks fault afterall he was just helping her being a good human and he was going for y/n too😭😭😭😭 please do something
not me checking the comment section while covering my one eye,so tired and scared of hate comments💀💀💀
Heyy... I think this is a dreamn jk is seeing in that two weeks yn ignored him.... Plz make a bonus...
can we have bonus please
Please make a part 2 and clarify everything
Like wtf just hppened 😂😂😂 joongki from plAYFUL KISS ?
She should have married Taehyung, he would have been perfect, not someone who we don't know
First of all Thnkxxx unnieee for making this..Maybe i'm wrong but according to me
NO LOVE NO PROMISE LASTS TILL DEATH UNTILL IT'S FROM YOUR PARENTS....
Really 😭 I cried although!
This video should get millions of watches not lakhs!
Loved it! Keep going author ❤️
🤔🤔 seriously I thought 10 lakh is equal to 1 million so you say it should get million views but still in the end it's lakhs only after you convert it in indian numbering system 😔😒🤐 please don't take me wrong I just wanted to correct your mistake I know maybe you just cared of emotions and nothing else it's ok ......We all make mistakes
@@bhakti2569 well Ik my mistake!
I tried to delete that comment but it wasn't deleting so I just shrugged it off😂
@@yume4os it's ok, your so wise, that you just accepted your mistake without any argument ...........So sweet of you
Please don't be offended by my comment ........🤗by the way who is your bias in bts.
@@bhakti2569 hehe!💕
There's is nothing in it it was my mistake so I just accepted!✨
Well I am an OT7 but V is the one I love the most!💜
My only comment even if she is his ex atleast she's an human so he saved her . But why in relationship u all take it serious 😑😑 (don't wry I'm single)
Actually jk doesnt deserve y/n...he deserves someone better...y/n didnt even try to understand the situation
I am going to read this masterpiece🔥❤ 🥺
Pls next part ??? It is so amazing I come here everyday from the past one month.......... to see if you have posted or not pls pls ............This suspense is killing me pls pls
This ff is confused as hell
I'm confused about after solving misunderstanding did he accept that proposal given by his mother and yn how did she forgive him and still talk to like nothing happened
Where is another part of it.
Bruh i was not expecting the end tho - I thought jk and y/n had kids together but it seems different. Anyways story was too different snd interesting i loved it!!!❤
Author when will u clarify everything here in this ff??? It's already 2 months I see
Nahh the story line doesn't match up at all..jk never intended to leave y/n to die or save his ex it was just a human nature. Jk didn't knew that y/n saw him or y/n was there. It would have been so heartless of him to leave Taylor to die without knowing y/n's whereabouts.
Exactly, everybody saying it’s Jungkook fault bc he saved his ex are just weird.
RAIN OF CURSE U KNOW WHOULD HAVE FALLEN ON HIM AND DIRECT BRAKE UP (MY DAMNN HEAD IS BRUNING AFTER READING THE END) THE HELL IS THIS FF
This is confusing and why the heck are they like that . Let's stay together forever like this what in the world happen . For the first time I'm disappointed with u author ik u can do better plz do a part 2 where yn and teahung or yn and jungkook stay together
Me while reading the tittle OoOoOoOo I need this I need spice in my life!
Please upload part 2 and clear the confusion and pleas make them together please please 🥺🥺🥺
The starting was really nice but ending I didn't understand 🤧😭😭 It's good but ...
It's actually cool though because example...Your in the building but the building is burning and your inside with Your bf ex And see him saving his ex while your just near him too of course you feel hurt and betrayed 🤔 that's my opinion
Um is her son JK’s?
uhm no
Very confused...whose kids are those? Who is she married to?
Y/n met joongki and became lovers,Y/n already moved on to jk after years,Check the pinned comment so u won't be confused anymore
I thought that they will end up together 😶
Btw Its so good 😁👍🏻✨💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
@Kookie'sbananamilk 👍🏻😊
Unnie it's been 8 months when will you make 2nd part plz upload quick
How DARE YOU😭😭😭 *cries*
I am still still subscribed tho 😚😘
I don't understand..they were together until 7 years after came ...that was ambiguous
At last y/n ended up with JK or Tae or someone else what is it am too confused Can anyone explain me?
yeah Guys what are you all saying Jk is not at fault he didn't saved his ex but he saved a human life for the sake of humanity its not like that his ex is his on right side and y/n is on left and he have to choose he sees his ex first infact he see a human first who needed help so he did that after saving her he was going to save y/n but she was already save by Tae before time leaf of 7 years I am with Jk but what happened after 7 years????🤔
Hi, when will the next part be coming?
I like it y /n with someone else good not need 2part
Maybe it was confusing but still it was actually heart warming. But still i can't believe that taylor and he have a kid. I will also suggest you to make part 2 like a happy ending and also no need to delete the video
Watching this ff I only have two questions ringing in my head
"Is sunghoon from enhypen? " "Is sunghoon Jk and Y/n's child? "
I know I'm so weird having these questions.
isn't it like quite realistic to save someone who is in more danger first and then go looking for another?
like i don't think he did anything wrong here by saving taylor. he saw her first and the building was burning so he saved her.
i just don't think there was any need to be upset over this😅😅
U made nice a little confusion but I think it would be cleared in next part. Thanku so much for this 🤗😊💜
Please make a bonus part please I like your ff's please ☺☺☺☺
It's not that bad , it tells us that every ending should be ended with male and female leads together it also can be happy in other ways
true tho..
Part two plzzz "taehyung"❤️
What's with the end....I'm confused 😕
If my mother, my father, my sister or bestfriend is burning inside a house i will ran straight to them, the world can burn in the side. That's how much they matters to me, my inside will guide me to do that.
But here Jungkook heart didn't think for Yn.
Im happy with the ending.
But just wanted to know who Jungkook married, Taylor?
ok i don't know why everyone is bashing jk cuz he saved his ex out of humanity...imagine if he would have seen his ex suffering in fire and would have saved y/n and his ex was dead cuz of fire then he would have blamed himself that he saw her dying and was not able to save her excluding the fact that she is his ex...so think logically guys 🙂also i m not saying that he should have left y/n....instead of doing that he should have taken someone with him so that one can carry y/n and other can carry his ex so that both would habe been saved
Can you make video of when you want suicide because your boyfriend cheat on you badly but your enemy save you. Junkook ff. Please please and you pinned me . ☹️😣😣😣🥺🥺🥺 and your stories are wonderful. First viewers. It is my request
yeah and jk is the enemy who saved yn🥰