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- čas přidán 27. 08. 2024
- This performance will show you about Stork - a magical creature of nature and one of the represent for The East Asia culture. Throughout 10 minutes, you will experience many levels of emotion, with 6 pieces of music from comteporary to electrical.
Overall very nice show But i felt like it was very clustered at times where your effects overlapped and drown eachother out Your parabolics do need some more work there were times when the patterns where not very well executed including several areas where the pattern almost seemed unfinished and lacked a follow through overall ill give this show a solid 6.9 out of 10 you have great potential and i think if you took a little more time to really smooth things out this could be a wonderful show. Best of luck,
Crazy Steve Pyrotechnics.
"Putting the Crazy in Pyro"
Tks so much for your feedback. Acutally this is just a raw version of my sumbission form, i am changing some sence and is doesn't finish yet. Otherwise, some sence look unfinished because i do it on purpose to highlight the sence after lol.
This is my first time to enter a competition like this so i dont have much experience to do it best. Anw tks for your support
@@BaoLeon Of course I am Fellow competitor looking forward to seeing your finished show!