7 Mistakes Inexperienced Writers Make

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  • čas přidán 7. 09. 2024
  • Your stories are valuable, but poor-quality writing can cause your readers to lose interest and set your book aside. In this episode, Dale E. Lehman, a writer, publisher, and educator, shares seven common writing mistakes made by inexperienced authors that can make or break your success as a published author. Dale provides detailed examples of the issues and then outlines ways to fix the problems. Dale Lehman's writing advice is helpful for anyone wanting to improve their writing.
    #writingtips
    #independentauthor
    #writingskills

Komentáře • 24

  • @TriumphTalks
    @TriumphTalks  Před měsícem +1

    Discover Dale E. Lehman's books at his Author Page on Amazon: www.amazon.com/stores/Dale-E.-Lehman/author/B00JGBZJDC?ref=ap_rdr&isDramIntegrated=true&shoppingPortalEnabled=true
    Visit his website: www.DaleELehman.com.
    You can also find his books here: books.DaleELehman.com.

  • @trinleywangmo
    @trinleywangmo Před 19 dny +1

    This is perfect timing for me, and a very concise instruction on common beginners' mistakes.
    Timestamps:
    0:16 Introduction to Dale E. Lehman
    4:00 What are the common mistakes inexperienced writers make:
    4:22 1) Mediocere (sic) Mechanics
    9:35 2) Sluggish Start
    14:52 3) Weak Ending
    16:44 4) Loose Writing - Tight Writing
    27:35 5) Poor Organization
    35:22 6) Lazy Research
    38:28 7) Rushing to Publish
    Good luck everyone!

    • @TriumphTalks
      @TriumphTalks  Před 19 dny

      Thank you so much for watching the show and sharing what you learned!

  • @baddfaith
    @baddfaith Před měsícem +4

    I took a break from CZcams to write. Upon return, this was in my feed. Neat.🙂

    • @TriumphTalks
      @TriumphTalks  Před měsícem +1

      I'm extremely happy you found this episode. Dale's mentorship is top-notch! What are you writing? How's it going?

    • @baddfaith
      @baddfaith Před měsícem +1

      @@TriumphTalks I suppose it's a memoir. It'll need to be fiction. To protect the guilty. 😁 Thanks so much.

    • @baddfaith
      @baddfaith Před měsícem +1

      @@TriumphTalks perhaps soon I can send you my first page. 🤞 Thanks for inspiring me 💯

    • @TriumphTalks
      @TriumphTalks  Před měsícem +1

      @@baddfaith absolutely, send it! And that’s so funny… Fiction to protect the guilty 😂
      TriumphPresspublishing@gmail.com

    • @baddfaith
      @baddfaith Před měsícem

      @@TriumphTalks 😁

  • @andreasboe4509
    @andreasboe4509 Před 16 dny +1

    Wow. What a great interview. Works perfectly as audio only in the background while working.

    • @TriumphTalks
      @TriumphTalks  Před 16 dny +1

      Thank you for watching.... or, listening! I'm glad you benefited from Dale's knowledge. I will have more like this coming soon ;))

  • @fieryvespucci3421
    @fieryvespucci3421 Před měsícem +4

    Very helpful and insightful video! Thank you.

    • @TriumphTalks
      @TriumphTalks  Před měsícem

      Thank you for watching! Dale is a great teacher. He is truly an expert in writing and shows while he's telling :) I'm so grateful he came on the show!

    • @dalee.lehman1923
      @dalee.lehman1923 Před měsícem

      Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and found it helpful.

  • @jsam-bv6jb
    @jsam-bv6jb Před 21 dnem +1

    That's funny. I have yelled at it out loud saying "no, you're wrong, i'm right, stop telling me I'm wrong."

  • @Vic-Meow
    @Vic-Meow Před 26 dny +1

    Are you punking us with the misspelling of "mediocre" at 4:24 ? If anyone needs an editor, please reach out.

    • @TriumphTalks
      @TriumphTalks  Před 26 dny +2

      @@Vic-Meow too many hats, too many hours, just learning video editing and just one person trying to help others, no pay…. Things slip through. Facepalm. I’ll get better! Thanks for helping.

  • @karinelaxa959
    @karinelaxa959 Před 28 dny

    Even the suitcase is smiling.

    • @TriumphTalks
      @TriumphTalks  Před 19 dny

      That's such a great visual! It would be an intriguing first line.

  • @jaceydurland9098
    @jaceydurland9098 Před měsícem +1

    Show what is interesting--tell the rest.

    • @TriumphTalks
      @TriumphTalks  Před 29 dny

      I love that comment.... a simple and accurate way to address the "show/tell" concept that people so often struggle to define. Great contribution!

  • @BoneSpears-and-StarShips

    The constant video transitions is freaking annoying.

    • @TriumphTalks
      @TriumphTalks  Před 17 dny

      Hi thanks for your comment! I completely understand. People who jump in and out (near-far-near-far) in quick edits, have redundant music going in the background throughout a long video or sound effects with every movement drive me crazy! It's much easier not to edit with so much transitions (it's super time consuming), so I will take your comment and use it to guide how I film/edit in the future. I do like to have the guests full screen, so there will be transitions, but I can back off on how many. I'm in the learning process and there's been a lot of push towards "retention editing" but now I think it's going the other way, which is fine with me! :))