Take this comment as the observations of a remote piano teacher, not criticism: This performance is technically excellent, you need next to work on your dynamics and expression (even your pedal application). The ritardando at the end is excellent, and conveys considerable emotion, try introducing that emotion throughout the piece. It all comes with practice; my own father used to say that success comes from three words: Practice, practice, practice. Bravo.
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Take this comment as the observations of a remote piano teacher, not criticism: This performance is technically excellent, you need next to work on your dynamics and expression (even your pedal application). The ritardando at the end is excellent, and conveys considerable emotion, try introducing that emotion throughout the piece. It all comes with practice; my own father used to say that success comes from three words: Practice, practice, practice. Bravo.