How to Write Complex IELTS Sentences

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  • What are complex sentences and why do you need them in your IELTS writing? Alex explains it all in this video! If you're aiming at band 7 or above, this is essential viewing for you.
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  • @khajaarsalaan7111
    @khajaarsalaan7111 Před 5 lety +608

    Thanks to the team of e2 ielts (especially jay)
    I have secured my desire band score because of you guys!
    L-7.5
    R-7
    W-6
    S-6.5
    OVERALL - 7 BAND!
    Thanks to all of you guys to make ielts like a child's play!
    Love and blessings!

    • @chetankumar1163
      @chetankumar1163 Před 5 lety +7

      Bro please tell me about the videos which help you

    • @khajaarsalaan7111
      @khajaarsalaan7111 Před 5 lety +9

      @@chetankumar1163 this e2 ielts channel has everything related to speaking and writing

    • @khajaarsalaan7111
      @khajaarsalaan7111 Před 5 lety +6

      @@chetankumar1163 all of the writing and speaking part refer their videos from their Playlist especially writing as they have all of the type of essays you need to learn and practice!

    • @khajaarsalaan7111
      @khajaarsalaan7111 Před 5 lety +15

      @@chetankumar1163 also check out asad yakub and arshpreet Singh for reading and writing 😊

    • @khajaarsalaan7111
      @khajaarsalaan7111 Před 5 lety +12

      And also practice practice practice specially reading and writing make your own content for writing have some knowledge about everything like advantages and disadvantages like that
      Go for it you can crack ielts ❤️❤️❤️

  • @blessingoluwole2130
    @blessingoluwole2130 Před 3 lety +355

    Thank you so much Alex 🤗. You played a significant role in making me pass IELTS with an overall of 8.0......L 8.5, R 7.5, W 7.0 and S 8.0.... I sincerely give God all the glory 🙌. If I can do it, you can do it too. Trust me....study hard and pray harder 🙏. God will do it for you too. Amen 🙏

  • @sumitis17
    @sumitis17 Před 3 lety +44

    Most of the computer games have positive impact on children, provided that they are informative and teach something new to them. Although these games consume whole lot of time, they can be beneficial by curbing the screen time.

  • @papy_jay
    @papy_jay Před 3 lety +19

    In addition to making complex sentence, starting a sentence with subordinate conjunction also helps to achieve "Passive Sentence." This to me is wide range of sentence structure. Thank you Alex👍

  • @aasthashrestha9995
    @aasthashrestha9995 Před 2 lety +5

    Scored a 7.5 in IELTS Writing.Thanks a bunch!!!

  • @RetaxChennai
    @RetaxChennai Před 4 lety +111

    I got my results today. I scored 9777, 9 in listening. Thank you so much Alex and Jay, I just followed your advise.

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  Před 4 lety +14

      Woohoo!!!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

    • @singhsaab3335
      @singhsaab3335 Před 4 lety +7

      Did you prepare from E2 Ielts only or did you follow something else too? Please share your preparation strategy.

  • @nouuman
    @nouuman Před 4 lety +18

    Perfectly explained in a shortest way,salute to great teachers.

  • @AbhishekTripathidce
    @AbhishekTripathidce Před 3 lety +1

    Thank you very much Alex. You are so fluent and fascinating. Even though I knew complex sentence, I loved to watch your class.

  • @karankukreja6160
    @karankukreja6160 Před 2 lety +1

    Thank you so much for the amazing video. Watched this the day before my exam and got an overall 8! Thanks once again!!!!

  • @sagespeaks3536
    @sagespeaks3536 Před 4 lety +25

    Although I was introduced to E2 IELTS very late, that did not stop me from securing 8 in IELTS writing.

    • @mdnadim9778
      @mdnadim9778 Před 3 lety +1

      Playing computer games have a positive impact on children while have a negative one.

    • @zahraaabdulrahman7
      @zahraaabdulrahman7 Před 3 lety

      me envy you

  • @rahulsinha7192
    @rahulsinha7192 Před 5 lety +30

    I am highly grateful to the whole E2 IELTS team. The videos really helped me a lot. I attempted my IELTS (Academic) on 29th June 2019. Yesterday I got my results. By God's grace, I got an OVERALL BAND SCORE of 7.5/9.0.
    LISTENING: 8.0
    READING: 7.0
    WRITING: 6.5; could have done better here also but messed up with time management
    SPEAKING: 8.0
    Thank you very much. This was my FIRST attempt.

    • @chetankumar1163
      @chetankumar1163 Před 5 lety +2

      Bro please suggest me some videos which help you

    • @pardeepkaur1706
      @pardeepkaur1706 Před 5 lety +1

      Plz tell about your writing task and speaking que card plz

    • @zaidalbdairi2407
      @zaidalbdairi2407 Před 5 lety

      Please can I contact with you please 🙏🙏🙏💚💚

    • @rahulsinha7192
      @rahulsinha7192 Před 5 lety +1

      @@chetankumar1163
      I request you to visit the link below
      drive.google.com/open?id=1OvtrM9nsid6o1C7lR2QVsKQlhklvnXEr

    • @rahulsinha7192
      @rahulsinha7192 Před 5 lety +1

      @@pardeepkaur1706 Writing task 1: LINE GRAPH showing prices of Banana in four different countries
      Writing task 2: advantage/disadvantage + give an opinion on consumer goods
      Speaking Question card: about how the Internet helped me in solving a problem recently.

  • @VENUSDSOUZA
    @VENUSDSOUZA Před 2 lety +2

    I was able to score my desired band in part due to the tips you had shared over the months. Between Jay and you, I was properly prepared. You have my gratitude, Thank you!

  • @Hope_CC
    @Hope_CC Před rokem +1

    It really helps me.THX.

  • @imranhasan9369
    @imranhasan9369 Před 4 lety +50

    I would like to sincerely thank you for your extraordinary materials. I took GT on 7 March, 2020.
    Score: Overall=7.0, L=7.5, R=7.5, S=6.5,W=6.5
    Love and respect from Dhaka, Bangladesh.

    • @happyjatt1542
      @happyjatt1542 Před 4 lety +1

      Congratulations

    • @jayedislamshawon4491
      @jayedislamshawon4491 Před 3 lety

      ওয়াও ব্রো!!!রাইটিং এ তো অসাধারন আপনি।একটু টিপস দিয়ে যান না ভাই,,,

    • @jayedislamshawon4491
      @jayedislamshawon4491 Před 3 lety +1

      ওয়াও ব্রো!!!রাইটিং এ তো অসাধারন আপনি।একটু টিপস দিয়ে যান না ভাই,,,

    • @sukhvirgrewal4112
      @sukhvirgrewal4112 Před 3 lety +1

      seriously man

  • @yasserelgabry
    @yasserelgabry Před 4 lety +4

    Wows ❤️ 👌 😍 🤗, this is the the most precise, informative, easy to understand and remember lecture I have ever had. 🇪🇬

  • @nickrobinson2023
    @nickrobinson2023 Před 3 lety

    A master class. Thanks for giving transparency to the complex world of sentences. :)

  • @curiousmind981
    @curiousmind981 Před rokem

    I just got 7 in IELTS result yesterday this is really helpful thank you so much.

  • @periklisgewrgiou5327
    @periklisgewrgiou5327 Před 4 lety +4

    Thank you so much for your interesting , clear , and useful lesson

  • @prathamkesarkar
    @prathamkesarkar Před 5 lety +32

    Hello Jay, Finally I got my desired score of 7.5 in IELTS exam. L(8.5), R(7.0), S(8.0), W(6.0). Thank you so much, sir. Finally, I can achieve my dreams. I would recommend everyone to take up E2 language subscription. Totally worth it, my score improved from L(6.0), R(6.0), S(6.5), W(5.5). Average band of (6.0)

  • @growwithsunnie
    @growwithsunnie Před 2 lety +2

    Thank you. I will surely study through your videos every day. So useful!

  • @rishh6417
    @rishh6417 Před 3 lety +5

    Thank you Alex and Jay
    Following your tutorials, tips, and techniques for preparation, I was able to score 7.5 in writing from an earlier score of 6
    To whoever reading this, please watch each and every video from the playlist and practice hard.
    Cheers

  • @be.curious101
    @be.curious101 Před 4 lety +12

    Thank you Alex, I was able to score a band 8 on writing because of your help. Thank you so much :)

    • @abrorrustamov245
      @abrorrustamov245 Před 3 lety +1

      Hi man
      Do you use Telegram?
      If yes, Could you give me your username ? I am going to talk with you

    • @harshgarg2774
      @harshgarg2774 Před 3 lety +1

      Hello brother
      I want to give exam on 8th of may so please let me know how to write the task 1 and task 2 to get 8 bands for GT

  • @vikrant2372
    @vikrant2372 Před 3 lety +7

    Followed Alex and Jay for the writing module and their structured teaching methodology and tips, it worked wonders. Got an 8.5 overall. Appreciate your work. Cheers

  • @sumitdesai9679
    @sumitdesai9679 Před 9 měsíci +1

    Very useful and informative. thank you so much, Alex.

  • @aamnahqaiserqadri5897
    @aamnahqaiserqadri5897 Před 4 lety +6

    your this tutorial is really a great lesson, I could not get time to work on it and you cleared my basic concepts in 30 minutes.

  • @DYKSHOW
    @DYKSHOW Před rokem +5

    Since I'm Watching these videos a day before my IELTS, it will help me score a significant band. Thank you E2 team and please wish me good luck. 🙂

  • @deymeypongror5888
    @deymeypongror5888 Před 3 lety

    I am really into your teaching approach, teacher.

  • @nicoleannepalma2472
    @nicoleannepalma2472 Před 2 lety

    Thank you so much for sharing this information. I hope I'll be able to ace the IELTS exam.

  • @ahemadriaz
    @ahemadriaz Před 4 lety +6

    Subordinate clause-
    1 Reason-
    Because, Since, as
    2 Result-
    As a result, results in , leads to
    3 Contrast-
    Although, Though, Even Though, whereas, While, However.
    4 Comparison-
    As.......as , than, as if, as though, like
    5 Conditional-
    If, as long as, provided that, even if, only if, whether , unless, even if, only if
    6 Purpose-
    So that, in order to
    7 Time-
    When, while, after, Before, during, until, as soon as , Once, Since, as long as, as
    8 place-
    where, everywhere, anywhere, whenever
    9 Manner-(How)
    as much as, as many as

  • @shrutipandya2959
    @shrutipandya2959 Před 3 lety +24

    Dear Alex, you're impeccable at teaching!
    I do not have enough words to express how grateful I am to you! Thanks a ton ❤️

  • @yuvrajjag2558
    @yuvrajjag2558 Před 2 lety

    Really nice explanation. Thank you!
    Here is my answer for the exercise at the last
    As the restrictions which were imposed during the pandemic prolonged, many children took to video games to entertain themselves. In order to limit the screen exposure, many parents took to features like Scree Time, which are available in apple products, to put a tab on their children.

  • @samreenahmad7527
    @samreenahmad7527 Před 3 lety

    You are really a great mentor

  • @Chax9_1990
    @Chax9_1990 Před 2 lety +3

    What a great lesson!
    Even though computer games can assist children becoming more mindful, it may affect their social behaviors.

  • @janakaliyanapathirana8881

    I'm not taking about computer games but want to talk about your service for the world. I've been a Cambridge English teacher who educate students to prepare for Cambridge English Assessments for years. I've started to improve my knowledge of IELTS and followed many videos on it. E2 IELTS presents fantastic way to learn IELTS not only for students but also for teachers who have less knowledge of IELTS. I recommend E2 IELTS those who read me without any hesitate. Thank you very much E2 IELTS. Thank you very much Alex and Jay.
    Janaka

  • @digiangallana5679
    @digiangallana5679 Před rokem

    Thank you so much Ma'am❤️
    I passed my IELTS exam.

  • @tomiit6579
    @tomiit6579 Před 3 lety

    Its really great illustration about types of sentences, Thanks a lot.

  • @hel2690
    @hel2690 Před 5 lety +9

    Thanks Alax, I don't have any words for appreciation.🥰

  • @francescoalbanese4150
    @francescoalbanese4150 Před 5 lety +6

    A very neat, and well done English grammar lesson. Thank you.

  • @titilayofaluyi4390
    @titilayofaluyi4390 Před 3 lety

    Thank you for the lecture.
    Games on electronic devices are seen in almost every home where most kids play them during leisure hours. This major development have different effects on children especially wrong ones even though in some cases, playing games have positive imparts.

  • @codingnepal59
    @codingnepal59 Před 2 lety

    thank you it really useful for me

  • @prabhjeetsingh623
    @prabhjeetsingh623 Před rokem +12

    Using Subordinate clauses:
    In order to use computer games in a productive manner, certain measures need to be taken. Kids should be monitored by parents during their usage, rather than leaving them on their own. Parents should also buy age specific games for their children, so that they don’t get indulged in illegal activities like crime and war.

  • @saray6806
    @saray6806 Před 4 lety +12

    Amazing video and explanation, thank you! This is my answer:
    • The answer to this question will depend on parent’s permission in which will affect the child behaviour in a good or bad way in regards to computer games. Nowadays, trying to avoid gaming or technologies is a difficult task to do for parents so that it is better to adapt them with responsibility in order to have a positive impact at the end of the day.

  • @ellahgrace358
    @ellahgrace358 Před 2 lety

    Thanks so much dear.Am preparing for ielts exams in august God willing.Love you from Uganda

  • @sivaforutube
    @sivaforutube Před 3 lety

    Love your work!

  • @osagieosemwota76
    @osagieosemwota76 Před 4 lety +209

    A lot of people believe computer games have a negative impact on children while others think it’s the perfect way to relieve stress.
    Personally I think computer games have a positive impact on children as it keeps them busy and away from trouble. Gaming actually increases a child’s hand eye co-ordination which improves their abilities in sports like basketball, volleyball and baseball. Contrary to popular belief, computer games require a lot of focus and challenges a child’s thinking capacity which may reflect on a his/her academic performance. Although video games can be addictive, parents must create a balance in order to manage gaming time along with order activities.

    • @shahabnah
      @shahabnah Před 4 lety +2

      Excellent!
      I found two typos though. may reflect on (without a) his/her...
      along with other activities

    • @hamedakhlaqi6804
      @hamedakhlaqi6804 Před 4 lety

      Pors and cons

    • @vatsalshah7606
      @vatsalshah7606 Před 4 lety +3

      really good work but ...use some people not a lot of ...i think so

    • @jabbajed926
      @jabbajed926 Před 4 lety

      Dude this is too long. Hahaha.

  • @taimurzahid7877
    @taimurzahid7877 Před 3 lety +11

    Someone, please review this introduction paragraph :)
    E-Sports have taken the world by storm, and what was previously a fun activity to do over the weekends has now evolved into a highly competitive field. People spend hours daily to master their skills to better control the characters as well as unlock new features and moves. While some may agree that it is an essential skill for children to acquire to improve their cognitive abilities and reflexes, others feel that this affects their moods and their relationships. This essay will discuss both views.

  •  Před 3 lety

    Thank you very much!

  • @hamidulislamraju
    @hamidulislamraju Před rokem

    It's my favourite channel for ielts while I'm coming in CZcams than i followed Alex's all vedio . Because i prepared for ielts at high band score 9. This is my aim in my life become a successful Students..

  • @shubhangisharma6870
    @shubhangisharma6870 Před 2 lety +6

    Thank you for this video, I particularly struggled in the writing section and in my first attempt I was pleasantly surprised to score an overall band 8. L - 8.5, R - 8.5, S - 7.5, W -7.5. Thank you for the content and keep up the good work!

    • @sarwansingh1467
      @sarwansingh1467 Před 2 lety

      Mam writting da dsdo kuj 🙏

    • @kuchevlogs
      @kuchevlogs Před 2 lety

      Need help in writing

    • @jajapeacetonye2015
      @jajapeacetonye2015 Před rokem

      Even though computer games can impact on children's lives positively, there are still some negative aspects of it that should not be ignored.

  • @InderjeetSingh-xp5re
    @InderjeetSingh-xp5re Před 5 lety +3

    Wow mindblowing way and pace, which left me astonished and motivated so as to listen nobody else but you.

  • @kudakwashechirinho
    @kudakwashechirinho Před rokem

    Thanks Alex, i hope i will pass through this content

  • @oshadadeshan5254
    @oshadadeshan5254 Před rokem

    thank you my good teacher.verry verry clear...

  • @melissafelipecadillo5085
    @melissafelipecadillo5085 Před 2 lety +20

    Thanks a ton for this lesson!
    Although some computer games could have an educational purpose, most of them negatively influence children’s behaviour.
    Parents often believe that computer games have a negative impact on their offspring, while psychologists suggest that they could help children develop skills such as creativity and teamwork.

    • @jatinbharth5921
      @jatinbharth5921 Před rokem

      Hey Melissa I also wanna write a essay like this could you pls give me some tips about grammer or complex once

    • @melissafelipecadillo5085
      @melissafelipecadillo5085 Před rokem +1

      @@jatinbharth5921 hi! I’d recommend you to write as many sentences as you can using the structures shown in the video. Also, you can see your mistakes by using Grammarly (free version).
      Best of luck!

  • @vuongangkhoa9671
    @vuongangkhoa9671 Před 2 lety +21

    What makes E2's videos more interesting than others' is that the team gives learners the opportunity to interact with them while watching by doing small tasks along the fly instead of just listening passively. I really appreciate what you guys have been doing. Officially become a huge fan of this channel hehehe

  • @azharanowar6065
    @azharanowar6065 Před rokem +1

    It was just fabulous. Your teaching ability is just awesome.

    • @Drutagami
      @Drutagami Před rokem

      Provided that was just fabulous, your teaching abilities are awesome.

  • @ibrohiminoyatulloyev2589

    Thank you a lot for helpful lesson, You are a diamond🙂

  • @amoghtayade481
    @amoghtayade481 Před 3 lety +11

    Hey all, I wanted to share a very important experience with you all so that it can alert and help everyone! I recently gave the IELTS test and received L9 R7.5 W6.5 S8.5, thanks to E2 youtube videos. The whole and sole reason for not getting a better band in Writing was that I missed a part of the question that asked to write experiences for each point in the essay. Due to less time, I didn't read the last line of the Writing Part 2 which said, 'Write 250 words and write experiences for your opinions'. Had I done that, I would have scored a lot better! So please, pretty please, READ THE ENTIRE QUESTION!

    • @amoghtayade481
      @amoghtayade481 Před 3 lety +3

      Update: I gave IELTS again and scored L8.5 R8.0 W7.0 S8.5 this time! Thanks, E2!

    • @samat1728
      @samat1728 Před rokem

      @@amoghtayade481 great job man

  • @manalisharma2704
    @manalisharma2704 Před 5 lety +5

    Hyy Alex thanks 4 info... Can u plzz make a video on punctuation lyk where to put comma and where not

    • @manalisharma2704
      @manalisharma2704 Před 5 lety

      @@ronakpiplava2624 u can follow grammar book.. That will guide u appropriately dear

  • @lahirusampath5426
    @lahirusampath5426 Před 8 měsíci

    thank you very much madam, i learned so much by this video.......

  • @md.abdullahalmamun8380
    @md.abdullahalmamun8380 Před 10 měsíci

    I really enjoyed the class

  • @Marcofialhoteacher
    @Marcofialhoteacher Před 5 lety +3

    Congrats on the video!
    Review the Irregular Verbs before your test.
    Irregular Verbs. The Ultimate Guide/ Amazon.
    A book simple in form but rich in content!

  • @lahirusampath5426
    @lahirusampath5426 Před 8 měsíci

    thank you so much mam,i learned so much...

  • @navbrar274
    @navbrar274 Před rokem +1

    Thanku mam clear the complex sentence

  • @Deepak4201
    @Deepak4201 Před 4 lety +141

    Although some think that computer games have a negative effect on children, others argue that with proper guidance they can be very useful.

    • @shahriarsojol8112
      @shahriarsojol8112 Před 3 lety +3

      Yet some think that computer games have negative effect on children, it's more lenient on present covid pandemic

    • @anitathuo8112
      @anitathuo8112 Před 3 lety

      Teach me please i have ielts exams soon and am a beginner

    • @kalyugon
      @kalyugon Před 3 lety +3

      @@anitathuo8112 practice, it will help you rather than asking for help

    • @rahulnath1784
      @rahulnath1784 Před 2 lety +2

      Although some thinks that computer games have a negative effect on children, others oppose to this view.

    • @OktayTurgay
      @OktayTurgay Před rokem

      Sorry, Is it "effect" or "affect" ?

  • @lisanservantofallah785

    Thanks a lot because the video was beneficial for me.

  • @mahedyhasan436
    @mahedyhasan436 Před 9 měsíci +1

    Thanks, Alex.

  • @manijutt1630
    @manijutt1630 Před 3 lety +5

    In order to get a good band in IELTS, Not only he has a need to strive but also proper planning.

    • @danquixote6072
      @danquixote6072 Před 3 lety

      In order to get a good band in IELTS, not only does he need to put a lot of effort in , he needs to plan his exam preparation properly too.

  • @vaibhavmishra1362
    @vaibhavmishra1362 Před 4 lety +38

    Although computer games are good indoor entertainment for children, they can be addictive as a potential side effect.

  • @jinilrajah
    @jinilrajah Před 2 lety

    Thanks for the content

  • @jinilrajah
    @jinilrajah Před 2 lety

    Excellent explanation..
    Thanks alot

  • @nayaramedeiros93
    @nayaramedeiros93 Před 3 lety +18

    Although there are some who argue that computer games have a positive impact on children lifes, there are some drawbacks to be taken into consideration.

  • @moamaralhoushan3219
    @moamaralhoushan3219 Před 4 lety +9

    Even though this is the first time watching you video, I am so impressed by the way you handle it.
    Because of the advancement in computer gaming, our children are going to lose a lot of their mind capabilities.
    Even though many recent researches show negative impacts of the gaming technology, people are still do not want to listen to these facts.
    Governments should take proper actions in regard to using devices at elementary schools so that students can focus on their studies at this important stage of their life.
    While computer games are so engaging, I have never tried them.
    Many people are fond of mobile games but not computer ones.

  • @imatheist7917
    @imatheist7917 Před 3 lety +1

    You people are doing great job. Best wishes ❤from India 🇮🇳

  • @rajatvaghasiya3336
    @rajatvaghasiya3336 Před 2 lety

    Thanks you so much alex mam, i really learn lots of from your vidio, thanks a lot,......

  • @amritpal262
    @amritpal262 Před 4 lety +3

    impacts of computer games are largely positive although it has some negatives associated with it

  • @036_priyankapatel5
    @036_priyankapatel5 Před 4 lety +9

    Since we are living in technological era computer games are the one that helps children to remain activists towards technology. Although they are designed as a stress buster , they causes harmful effects on children eyes in a long run. Parents need to have an eye on the time that their children are offering to computer games in order to have the balance between its positive impact and negative impact.

  • @nlognab
    @nlognab Před rokem

    thank you very much, I watched it like a 100 times, every time learn something new from it :D

  • @aruln4608
    @aruln4608 Před 2 lety

    Awesome topic, thanks

  • @Abu-Aley
    @Abu-Aley Před 4 lety +3

    Thank a lot Alex for such useful lesson.
    I've two comments if u please.
    1. The compound-complex sentence is pretty important to boost the IELTS band score; nevertheless, u didn't shed light over it.
    For example: Because he forgot his home key, he couldn't enter, but eventually he managed to get in through one of the home windows.
    2. In the compound sentences a comma "," MUST be put at the end of the first independent sentence and before any of the FANBOYS words.
    For example: Ahmad wants to be an English teacher, but his brother wants to be an engineer. (note the comma before BUT)
    Cheers,
    Ahmad,

  • @faizisaac9462
    @faizisaac9462 Před 4 lety +4

    I want to write an essay so I want to know what's the kind of question is this advantages, disadvantages ?????

  • @appusundar235
    @appusundar235 Před 3 lety

    Thank you so much mam,, I extremely satisfied

  • @khayotillotorakulov54
    @khayotillotorakulov54 Před 4 měsíci +1

    I found it reall useful, thanks team!

  • @demo2207
    @demo2207 Před 5 lety +8

    Gaming technology has advanced rapidly in the last decade, as it is almost irresistible to young minds
    Competitive sports should be encouraged among children in order to improve health, fitness and foster cooperation.
    Some children spend up to 7 hours a day unsupervised, although parents often deny this.
    Computer games can have positive impact provide that they must age appropriate.

  • @mayowaoladapo5227
    @mayowaoladapo5227 Před 4 lety +5

    While computer games have positive impact on younger ones, there are also some negative effects too.

  • @sidhuxkuljot5226
    @sidhuxkuljot5226 Před rokem

    What excellent teaching 💥

  • @mayteflores7583
    @mayteflores7583 Před rokem

    Excellent class!

  •  Před 4 lety +8

    The effects of computer games on children are undeniable. Although some argue that all of them tend to impact children negatively, others believe that computer games have a variety of positive impacts, as well.

    • @yayaalisafi5122
      @yayaalisafi5122 Před 3 lety

      she said we can not start new sentece with subordinating conjunction , irem

    • @yayaalisafi5122
      @yayaalisafi5122 Před 3 lety

      The effects of computer games on children are undeniable although some argue that all of them tend to impact children negatively, others believe that computer games have a variety of positive impacts, as well.

  • @milkybook7875
    @milkybook7875 Před 3 lety +16

    Altough it is stated that computer games help children to enhance their creativity, they have some unfavourable effects on children such as deterioration of eyesight or addiction. In addition to that, negative effects of computer games could be seen by children who can not distinguish the real World and the virtual world.

  • @GursimranSingh-md4ep
    @GursimranSingh-md4ep Před 2 lety

    Thank Mam for wonderfull teaching

  • @sarbjeetgill4077
    @sarbjeetgill4077 Před 2 lety

    Hats off for ur valuable content
    Pls keep up.

  • @charusmitabadgujar8164
    @charusmitabadgujar8164 Před měsícem +4

    Now a days children are more exposed to screen time. Because exposure to computer games can have serious hazards on health, their usage should be limited. Long hours of screen time causes stress on the eyes which can further damage the retina which is important for vision. As long hours of sitting at one place also increases the risk of obesity, parents should engage their child in outdoor games.

  • @lubas2801
    @lubas2801 Před 5 lety +18

    In today's modern era where science and technology are vastly advancing, electronic gaming is also showing tremendous innovations. The argument whether or not it is causing advantageous or detrimental effects to a child is still debatable, however, in regard to the proposition, I believe that games being run by a computer or machine causes harm to a child's perception only if the content is violent as oppose to a few educational games that provide knowledge to children.

    • @jj-qe2wg
      @jj-qe2wg Před 5 lety

      It's too wordy, a deliberate attempt to show off vocabulary. Not quite academic

    • @lubas2801
      @lubas2801 Před 5 lety

      @@jj-qe2wg are you a legit ielts examiner?

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  Před 5 lety +4

      Good effort! 2 grammar corrections: having... effects on (these words collocate) and games... cause (subject-verb agreement error. 👍

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  • @hindimusicnew1417
    @hindimusicnew1417 Před 2 lety

    thank you mem, this video is really very helpfull

  • @user-ct6uy8qv5i
    @user-ct6uy8qv5i Před 9 měsíci +1

    thanks huge dear, I download your videos and watch offline. they are very useful.

  • @jkyu2701
    @jkyu2701 Před rokem +5

    Using complex sentences
    While many parents believe computer games do harm to their children, some others see their positive side on brain development. Boarding games, for instance, are one of those helping children learn logics and tactics, which are of great help to their advances in subjects like maths and physics.😊

  • @shambulingesh619
    @shambulingesh619 Před 5 lety +25

    "Even though I am not writing IELTS, I came here just to learn how to write complex sentences." is this correct?

    • @R.G.TAALKS
      @R.G.TAALKS Před 4 lety +1

      Your sentence is totally wrong because

    • @fahadsoftware3508
      @fahadsoftware3508 Před 4 lety +2

      @@R.G.TAALKSi haven't IELTS exam, even though I wached this video, to just know how to write complex sentences.
      I'm no sure is that right nor wrong, but always remember partics makes parfict.

    • @MA-rp5pu
      @MA-rp5pu Před 4 lety +7

      Although I do not have IELTS exam, I am watching this video just to learn how to write complex sentences.

    • @shahabnah
      @shahabnah Před 4 lety

      @@MA-rp5pu I do not have an IELTS exam

    • @mariecarpangan4009
      @mariecarpangan4009 Před 4 lety +2

      Or you may write it this way:
      Even though I will not take the IELTS exam, I came here to learn about writing complex sentences.

  • @johirhussain4296
    @johirhussain4296 Před 3 lety

    U are the best teacher

  • @mhmdahmd1671
    @mhmdahmd1671 Před 3 lety

    Thank you so much for your classic advic

  • @benedettabassi6521
    @benedettabassi6521 Před 3 lety +12

    Although computer games are popular and alluring among children, they broadly have a negative impact on them because of the consequences of misuse. While youngsters in the past did recreational activities outdoor, nowadays children are hunched at home playing videogames. What do you think about this sentence? thank you all

    • @doctornazam8726
      @doctornazam8726 Před rokem +2

      very good

    • @Drutagami
      @Drutagami Před rokem +2

      Provided that computer games are popular as well as alluring among children, one of the negative impact could be the misuses of it.While youngsters preferred recreational activities outdoor, nowadays, children are hunched at home playing videogames.

  • @dhairyashah6554
    @dhairyashah6554 Před 3 lety +6

    In order to protect your child from game addiction, parent's need to make sure they are also indulged in outdor games.