Rate my pool skills (October 2023 update)

I'm a Tor Lowry patreon. Each quarter they let me submit a video of me playing, and they provide feedback on my strengths and weaknesses. This is the current level I hold as of October 2023. I've done small changes to my stance and stroke, and I'm still making improvements. I'm playing on a diamond table with 3.9 inch pockets.

[@jaymatrona2604]

I am doing a two day session with Tor next month.....can't wait.....like going to visit Yoda! :) I don't play nearly as well as you but I am hoping that during this time Tor can get me in the right direction to make some significant improvements.

[@PoolProblems]

Seriously, you're actually meeting Tor? He's awesome. Best pool tutor around. Would you mind keeping me updated?

[@ivanblomqvist]

Great workout! Your stance is solid but your stroke is a bit jabby at times. Always use the same pause on the backswing. I have been working on the same thing for years and it really helped my game, hope it can do the same for you! 👊 Keep up the good work 💪🏻

[@PoolProblems]

Thanks bud. Good hearing from you! I'll keep improving my stroke - been working a lot on my fundamentals lately (after recording this particular video).

[@lqhuy]

you're playing really well

[@ThePoolTryHard]

Solid!

[@PoolProblems]

Thanks buddy!

[@oliviainglese6868]

Noice!

[@PoolProblems]

😅

[@jaymatrona2604]

What were Tor's comments to this submission?

[@PoolProblems]

Here is feedback based on the video you submitted:
1:23 - 5:09 plant back foot
6:21 Send cue ball forward a few inches (bypassing rail - attachment)
9:10 slightly more angle with more left spin widens angle off side rail sending cue ball to end rail and toward right side rail
10: 30 Skip going to left side rail - stun cue ball over for angle on 4 ball. Looks like deceleration on 4 ball or not enough left spin
12:39 This shot needs a touch more right spin which creates a tighter angle around the 5 ball missing the 6 ball. Or a soft shot on the 4 ball with left spin playing the 5 ball in the side pocket. Due to improper angle on the 5 ball you ended up with improper angle on the 6 ball which creates more work to get on the 9 ball.
Overall, fundamentals look good. I would work on creating proper distance from the table and planting the back foot before stepping into the shot

[@PoolProblems]

I have a progress video here, if you want to see. New channel:
czcams.com/video/2yMiU-RYN-k/video.htmlsi=NZXi-Vp2rOmBtMx6

[@andrewhawkinson3410]

here's my rating: better than me. lolololololol