How to write a first class essay & dissertation WITH EXAMPLES

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  • You only need ONE skill to write a first class mark essay and dissertation. In this video I’ll explain what this skill is with EXAMPLES! I WISH this video existed when I was studying…it would’ve saved me a lot of time, trial & error and research.
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Komentáře • 155

  • @curby2351
    @curby2351 Před rokem +350

    For someone so young you're a brilliant life coach

  • @MurdaMeg
    @MurdaMeg Před 2 měsíci +122

    I have a research paper due in 9 hours that I’ve just started working on (any other procrastinators here?!?!?) and this video is SO HELPFUL!!! Thank you queen 🙏🏻

    • @traps-wg3gt
      @traps-wg3gt Před 2 měsíci +2

      I’ve finished uni but I remember I started working on my dissertation past the due date and my initial high mark was reduced. I’m so happy you are trying tho

    • @Meg_andmogg
      @Meg_andmogg Před 2 měsíci +1

      😂 here!!

    • @keelymac8651
      @keelymac8651 Před měsícem +1

      Girl me too due in 2 days

    • @Ka112eb
      @Ka112eb Před měsícem +7

      Procrastinators should investigate having ADHD

    • @collegesweetness
      @collegesweetness Před měsícem

      9 hours! Just check my bio, lol. This applies to anyone else that's struggling.

  • @aneesaidrees2532
    @aneesaidrees2532 Před 3 měsíci +58

    ‘This is a gold mine’. That’s the thought in my head as come back to this video for the 3rd time.

  • @tobinaldridge6323
    @tobinaldridge6323 Před 2 měsíci +13

    Damn. I spent a year getting tutoring for essay writing, I still failed school, and not one person explained how to write an actual paragraph or even get close to explaining anything as practically as you did. Thank you.

  • @aiishataal
    @aiishataal Před měsícem +7

    literature review reading:
    - have excel spread sheet. look at all existing info out there. have author, date written, title of paper, arguments made in it)
    - make sure to write author's intention too, and also identify any biases in gaps and limitations section
    - limitations such as if it is outdated or has bias from being from a certain medium or peer-reviewed

  • @Baeomran
    @Baeomran Před rokem +52

    Hello and many thanks. I do not understand why lecturers and tutors on workshop do not teach us precisely what you taught us on this video. When i asked them, they always say i cant tell you or help. But thanks a lot of for your help. I have two essays each 3000 words in 10 days time. I appreciate it so much. I wish you Happy new year.

    • @tamkaur
      @tamkaur  Před rokem +1

      Hi I’m so glad you found this helpful! Thanks for watching and happy near year!

  • @JC-ol9kx
    @JC-ol9kx Před rokem +110

    This was so helpful! Straight to the point and very logical. It would be helpful to see a short example using the paragraph structure :D. Thank you so much Tam.

  • @samihakhondoker2456
    @samihakhondoker2456 Před 9 měsíci +22

    this is golden your literally saving everyones lives here

  • @katiemp670
    @katiemp670 Před rokem +149

    this is more useful than any essay workshop i've attended lmao, thanks so much! this will save me while writing my final essay/diss

    • @tamkaur
      @tamkaur  Před rokem +10

      Glad it was helpful!🥰🥰

    • @Hacked983
      @Hacked983 Před 6 měsíci

      I can't agree more

  • @bethdonnan6059
    @bethdonnan6059 Před 2 měsíci +4

    Thank you SO much for this, as a dyslexic student who feels like they're constantly drowning with essays this has made the whole process seem so much less daunting! :)

  • @ananyasharma2834
    @ananyasharma2834 Před 8 měsíci +9

    imagine if tam had this youtube channel throughout uni and we got to see all the vlogs!!! and all the guides

  • @kendrick10601
    @kendrick10601 Před 5 měsíci +8

    THANK YOU! I have an essay due to next week, with very few guidelines and this will helpe me tremendously. It's very hard to go back in school after a long hiatus and working full time.

  • @lauraviana9178
    @lauraviana9178 Před 6 měsíci +9

    Your video is amazing, super detailed and at the same time straight to the point. Thank you!!

  • @queenideas
    @queenideas Před 7 měsíci +24

    I must say this is the shortest yet most resourceful piece I have found since I started searching for resources that would help me write my dissertation which is like since the beginning of this year, 2023.
    Thank you so much for putting this together out here,Tam. I would definitely include your video url in my references.
    You are incredibly brilliant and beautiful.

  • @ericac6787
    @ericac6787 Před 6 měsíci +12

    I’ve unknowingly did that in my essays and it always works!

  • @geovannaschultz4281
    @geovannaschultz4281 Před rokem +12

    Thanks sooo much for the content and value information. I'm in law course, in witch we have to do so many essays and university works. This excel ideia is brilliant!!! ✨💛

  • @kiapowellvlogs727
    @kiapowellvlogs727 Před 6 měsíci +15

    I actually love you this just saved my degree 😭 why do they not teach us this at uni

  • @user-jr5mh8cc5g
    @user-jr5mh8cc5g Před 7 měsíci +2

    You changed my life! Thank you, this was very helpful.

  • @katrinpierce6877
    @katrinpierce6877 Před 4 měsíci +1

    i can't express in words how helpful this video is!!! thank you so much

  • @kaylanaomi12
    @kaylanaomi12 Před 6 měsíci +2

    This is brilliant 🎉 straight to the point and every tip is useful ❤

  • @yomajoseph2285
    @yomajoseph2285 Před 7 měsíci

    Thank you soo much omg!!!! You're a blessing honestly

  • @shraddha.777
    @shraddha.777 Před 11 měsíci +1

    This is such a saviour istg! thanks TAM .💗

  • @soundbodylab
    @soundbodylab Před 4 měsíci +1

    This is so clear and easy to follow. Thank you!!!!

  • @haleemahsaida9772
    @haleemahsaida9772 Před 4 měsíci +1

    Excellent, honestly as mature student I just wish I had found you at the start of my degree.

  • @megasare9609
    @megasare9609 Před 2 měsíci +1

    You're brilliant! Bless you!

  • @emoefeubiebi5334
    @emoefeubiebi5334 Před 2 měsíci +2

    I have 3000 words essies to write and also a dissertation waiting. Thank you so so much for these tips. I'm so putting them into practise.

  • @monikakania333
    @monikakania333 Před 3 měsíci

    I really needed to know how to structure my paragraphs for my first essay, so thank you for this💗💗💗

  • @ayaaaa______
    @ayaaaa______ Před 6 měsíci

    I can not even begin to describe how helpful this was thank you so muchh ❤

  • @abbeytube
    @abbeytube Před 6 měsíci

    Thank you so much, made it easier God Bless you!

  • @ryancutler4775
    @ryancutler4775 Před 4 měsíci

    Thank you, SO much. You explained this so well and this is really helpful!

  • @alexandrastein8983
    @alexandrastein8983 Před 3 měsíci

    You’re brilliant!!! Thank you!!!

  • @dorotadabrowska3799
    @dorotadabrowska3799 Před 3 měsíci +1

    this is fantastic! gives me hope

  • @mahekuppal1296
    @mahekuppal1296 Před 8 měsíci +6

    This was honestly so helpful and informative, we need more uni related videos TAM!

  • @user-qo1mi8is7i
    @user-qo1mi8is7i Před měsícem +1

    I'm about to just my Master of Science in Computer Science and International Business at Robert Kennedy College / University of Cumbria and I am nervous as hell. I haven't been in school for more than a decade and I've forgotten how to write a critical analysis paper. These tips really helped. Thank you!

  • @jacquikv5560
    @jacquikv5560 Před 5 měsíci +2

    Thank you so much for sharing your knowledge with us. The information you provided in this video was explained in a way that I could understand and implement easily. I have not written my essay yet, but when I do I will try to remember to update this comment to share my experience and outcome.

  • @aaannnooo
    @aaannnooo Před měsícem

    I wish i saw this earlier. The single most important video on youtube. The only video i felt i needed to comment on. Thank youx

  • @Naobonilla
    @Naobonilla Před rokem +4

    You inspire me 💕🙌🏻

  • @fejirotalks
    @fejirotalks Před 4 měsíci

    Needed this thank you!

  • @lucianapeck1152
    @lucianapeck1152 Před 6 měsíci

    This was so helpful , thanks so much! Xx

  • @samuelmattu7519
    @samuelmattu7519 Před rokem +6

    This video was the best thing I could have watched and Ik this is asking for a lot but do you have an example paragraph ❤❤❤thank you very much

  • @bintsiyad8831
    @bintsiyad8831 Před 10 měsíci

    New subscriber here thank for this the most helpful thing over seen and I've sent it to all of my friends at uni

  • @_.numoon._
    @_.numoon._ Před rokem +1

    Thank you for this ❤️❤️❤️

  • @bluntpathway
    @bluntpathway Před 3 měsíci +1

    You are amazing! Great video, this is useful

  • @MbaliHope-zc2mx
    @MbaliHope-zc2mx Před měsícem

    Omg this was so helpful! Thank you ❤

  • @Broken_Junta
    @Broken_Junta Před 10 měsíci +4

    I have watched this video like twice if not thrice
    It's a 10/10 eloquently...

  • @girlfromnextdoor_
    @girlfromnextdoor_ Před 5 měsíci

    you saved my life thank you so much

  • @astier234angel9
    @astier234angel9 Před rokem +9

    I did this for the first time and it does work! Thank you

  • @shekinah4651
    @shekinah4651 Před 3 měsíci +2

    This advice is brilliant! I wish I found this 6 months ago 😭 Would you be able to go into a little bit more detail about what sections you had in your excel sheet? I’m wondering what sections would be advantageous to have

  • @somtounigwe8160
    @somtounigwe8160 Před 5 měsíci

    I cannot thank you enough, your advice is actually practical and has saved my behind for realll. I'll update when I get the results of my dissertation 🙏🏾🙏🏾

    • @sonitclef8675
      @sonitclef8675 Před 5 měsíci

      I'm glad I found this in my second year and not my third 😅

  • @LeahEyasu
    @LeahEyasu Před 3 měsíci

    thanks for your fantastic explanation mate , you are awesome,

  • @samsamhareri1932
    @samsamhareri1932 Před 4 měsíci

    Thank you this is so helpful ❤

  • @LilTinyBunny
    @LilTinyBunny Před měsícem

    Lifesaver!! I also study at Leicester and I will try this for my next essay. Thanks so much! I will update my comment!

  • @queensheba1711
    @queensheba1711 Před měsícem

    Thank you so much for your helpful information .You are really helpful ❤

  • @maryachiverton7481
    @maryachiverton7481 Před 7 měsíci

    wow
    how amazing this is
    God bless you

  • @40.tathuthuy8
    @40.tathuthuy8 Před měsícem

    so helpful, thank you so muchh!

  • @huishaa
    @huishaa Před 10 měsíci

    Thanks queen❤️

  • @mehrozjamil
    @mehrozjamil Před 6 měsíci

    Thank you for this

  • @RimiBaidya-ux6jb
    @RimiBaidya-ux6jb Před 7 dny

    Beautiful!!!!! ❤

  • @melodybales2038
    @melodybales2038 Před 3 měsíci +4

    I am a writing consultant and you are saying some banger tips in this video! Good writing is all about being clear and demonstrating that you have exercised critical thinking on the topic and can explain it logically. Saved this for myself to remember later. The US has a different system for schooling, but it's still super valuable, and who knows maybe I'll end up across the pond for my graduate level education. 😊

  • @suzanadsuza4819
    @suzanadsuza4819 Před 6 dny

    Thank You !

  • @cesmed
    @cesmed Před 6 měsíci

    Thanks, you got a new subscriber

  • @scintillatingddl
    @scintillatingddl Před 6 měsíci

    Brilliant!

  • @Ritxxxh
    @Ritxxxh Před měsícem

    You should be teaching these skills at university, soooo helpful. Thank you ❤

  • @sabbbzx
    @sabbbzx Před 5 měsíci

    your amazing thank you

  • @Jess-qx3zk
    @Jess-qx3zk Před rokem +1

    amazing video! so are you saying that you're supposed to highlight the gaps/limitations of the sources raised to support your point when raising counterarguments?

  • @Cookandtell.
    @Cookandtell. Před 26 dny

    Thanks you so much

  • @duruchinwendu753
    @duruchinwendu753 Před 2 měsíci

    Thank you

  • @omeral-jumaili8154
    @omeral-jumaili8154 Před 9 měsíci +1

    so beautiful and smart

  • @UKbadde
    @UKbadde Před 5 měsíci

    Most useful video on writing a good paper ❤

    • @tamkaur
      @tamkaur  Před 5 měsíci

      Thanks a lot 😊

  • @aiishataal
    @aiishataal Před měsícem +1

    point (topic sentence and what you'll argue, highlight this in first sentence)
    evidence (1 or 2 quotes from 2 authors, synthesis sources from wide range of academic sources, author A and B argues 'quote,' however (synthesis) author X and Y argued from recent research that X and y)
    explain 1 (detail and depth, and include relevant course theories)
    critical analysis (bringing in evidence that contradicts/contrasts first piece of evidence included in this paragraph with other authors and other sources that argue against the first paragraph. allows you tot talk about the limitations and gaps in existing knowledge. then talk about how the evidence contrasts or supports each other. use academic phrase banks to help. be analytical more than descriptive, explain why the evidence why it's significant, how it occurred, why did this happen, why is the author making the argument and why it is relevant)
    explain 2 (showing nuanced and critical understanding of the field as a whole, tying all the info from beginning of para, made ur point and contrasted arguments and critical analysis with various viewpoints so in this final explanation you're going to show ur aware of everything already out there and tying it to your main point
    link back (linking it back to the question and making sure it applies to your essay)

  • @spicynoooooodles
    @spicynoooooodles Před rokem

    tysm, fr saving my ass rn 😅😂have always struggled with essays my entire uni life and now have ur bible to follow 😄

  • @Timmar
    @Timmar Před 4 měsíci

    Hi!! I really LOVE youre content❤️ Can you make a vid abt youre investing journey.. im thinking about starting myself, but im not confident enough for that right now haha😊

  • @user-qe8zi6ex2j
    @user-qe8zi6ex2j Před 8 měsíci +7

    She did not stutter even once.

  • @PrudenceNkomo
    @PrudenceNkomo Před měsícem

    Ur such a intelligent and beautiful lady❤❤❤. Lots of love from South Africa❤❤. Keep doing what u do best❤❤

  • @Susie.wemove
    @Susie.wemove Před měsícem

    I know this is a bit off topic- your make up is stunning!!

  • @ericgt79
    @ericgt79 Před 4 měsíci

    This is great for undergrads... For grad students, especially PhD students, not so much.

  • @EDA_OFFICIAL_1
    @EDA_OFFICIAL_1 Před 3 měsíci +1

    I wish this was around when I did my dissertation 😭

  • @FittoBySyd
    @FittoBySyd Před 4 měsíci

    Omg I am studying Marketing at The University of the West Indies. I have been looking for CZcamsrs that studied Marketing. New subscriber here.

  • @bentinabire8052
    @bentinabire8052 Před měsícem

    Thank you! I love you ❤

    • @NathanacAdemicConsultant
      @NathanacAdemicConsultant Před měsícem

      Hey there, I am an Academic Consultant, I help out students with assignments essays and Thesis/dissertation. I would love to help you out with your dissertation. Can we connect?

    • @bentinabire8052
      @bentinabire8052 Před měsícem

      ​@@NathanacAdemicConsultant Hi, sure.

    • @NathanacAdemicConsultant
      @NathanacAdemicConsultant Před měsícem

      @@bentinabire8052 Can you share a contact info or any social handle where we can communicate?

  • @anirudhkaushik3643
    @anirudhkaushik3643 Před měsícem

    Well explained. My dissertation is due in 2 weeks. I am 90% on the same pathway and good point on synthesising evidence. Well done on your degree

    • @NathanacAdemicConsultant
      @NathanacAdemicConsultant Před měsícem

      Hey there, I am an Academic Consultant, I help out students with assignments essays and Thesis/dissertation. I would love to help you out with your dissertation. Can we connect?

    • @anirudhkaushik3643
      @anirudhkaushik3643 Před měsícem

      @@NathanacAdemicConsultant no thanks Nathan

    • @NathanacAdemicConsultant
      @NathanacAdemicConsultant Před měsícem

      @@anirudhkaushik3643 Ok if you need any help with an academic task, or maybe consultancy about higher education I would love to help you out, can I have your contact info where I can reach you out?

  • @samuelmattu7519
    @samuelmattu7519 Před rokem +3

    How many words would each of your paragraphs be and and would each of your paragraphs be a completely different point or could you use the same point just with different evidence

  • @Numbll
    @Numbll Před 6 měsíci

    Can you do a tutorial on the research part? i don't really get the template..

  • @beth30591
    @beth30591 Před měsícem

    oh goshhh your accent is amazing 😭😭💟

    • @NathanacAdemicConsultant
      @NathanacAdemicConsultant Před měsícem

      Hey there, I am an Academic Consultant, I help out students with assignments essays and Thesis/dissertation. I would love to help you out with your dissertation. Can we connect?

  • @preciousferrie
    @preciousferrie Před 10 dny

    Do you continue to the point paragraph , after your introduction? Please let me know as I am confused ? I start uni in September 😮

  • @pou1313
    @pou1313 Před 7 měsíci

    i love you girl :(

  • @catsntears
    @catsntears Před 4 měsíci +1

    Can i use this as an high school student? (11th grade)

  • @maggie7960
    @maggie7960 Před 3 měsíci +1

    if you use phrases from the academic phrasebank does it show up on turnitin :)

  • @sotarts05
    @sotarts05 Před 5 měsíci

    For the academic phrase bank can you send the link?

  • @voxresist2211
    @voxresist2211 Před 6 měsíci

    How do you translate Uni and Markscheme to American university requirements? What does the phrase mean and how is it comparable?

  • @ip3931
    @ip3931 Před 7 měsíci +4

    One more question at this ungodly hour. I'm a mature student with disabilities living unsupported in a university halls accommodation where even right now I'm being harassed by extremely noisy, younger, male students living directly above. I'm also being tormented by the students within my flat but they're not as bad as the ones in the flat above. I've complained to the manager, the one member staff on site and at my university but nobody is helping me. In fact if anything after my complaints it's only getting worse. I cannot cope. I am 28 years old. These kids are like 18 years or around that age. I deserve better. I have tried with all my might. And no I am not willing to live because I've endured years of moving including estrangement, living in temporary accomodations, horrific social housing and now this. If anybody should be moving it's them. So please if you or anyone reading has any helpful advice to effectively stop this violation of my rights as a paying, isolated, mature and disabled female student residing in these halls, tell me. Thank you, I

  • @Andrea2605dea
    @Andrea2605dea Před 5 měsíci

    My Uni doesn't have examiner comments and previous dissertations available. Could you provide some links or profiles I could look up any dissertations with examiner's notes?

  • @SarahHussain-dg7cd
    @SarahHussain-dg7cd Před 6 měsíci

    Hey hun we’re you getting 2:2 at beginning of second year ??

  • @alsukhidirova11
    @alsukhidirova11 Před rokem

    😍😍😍😍

  • @zeeva9377
    @zeeva9377 Před 6 měsíci

    Can you please mention the books that you read? 12:40

  • @sezin7843
    @sezin7843 Před 3 měsíci +1

    I dont really get the critical analysis part? Are we the one who analyses? Or we find other academic sources that contradicts or shows the weaknesses? How is that not a literature review if we do so? Someone help please :)

  • @samuelmattu7519
    @samuelmattu7519 Před rokem

    How do you find contrasting evidence

  • @gaurisuralkar3668
    @gaurisuralkar3668 Před 6 měsíci

    Is this about the admission essays?

  • @rohitha3508
    @rohitha3508 Před 8 měsíci +1

    Sadly my uni didn’t give any mark scheme for dissertation 😢

  • @osh_hoq6217
    @osh_hoq6217 Před měsícem +1

    PLEASE HELP ME!
    HOW DO I FIND THE PREVIOUS DISSERTATIONS ON THE UNIVERSITY OF LEICHESTER SITE?

  • @oliviabarnett-king
    @oliviabarnett-king Před měsícem

    Does anyone know if a similar tool the uo Manchester provides exists for scientific reports?