Okay this story was very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line behind I also like the character development I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make a part 2 and keep up the good work
Ok I'm a pretty harsh critic. And you should know I've actually paused this to leave a comment. I find myself really engaged and think this is wholesome.... I am pleased. 😊 Thank you❤❤❤
Okay this story was very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line behind I also like the character development I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make a part 2 and keep up the good work
Ok I'm a pretty harsh critic. And you should know I've actually paused this to leave a comment. I find myself really engaged and think this is wholesome.... I am pleased. 😊 Thank you❤❤❤
part 2 pls pls pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Plz part 2 w w w w w w
The Iron Fox
By: Alky Uchiha93