National Poetry Slam 2014 - Finals - "Elementary" G. Yamazawa

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  • čas přidán 12. 10. 2014
  • Poem written and performed by G. Yamazawa of Beltway Poetry Slam

Komentáře • 45

  • @nesmahamoda
    @nesmahamoda Před 9 lety +61

    "I became a bully because we all want to feel like America sometimes"
    a powerful political statement but the humanitarian message beyond it is even more powerful. I too do "hope our tongues is the only way we have left to conquer"

  • @jasontheworldisyours
    @jasontheworldisyours Před 9 lety +37

    "We all crack under peer pressure
    But once you see that there are earthquakes coming from your faults you realize how deep trembles are felt"
    @ColoredSpaces

  • @kaseywright8881
    @kaseywright8881 Před 8 lety +23

    His hair line is sharper than the pieces of my heart that broke while listening to this...

  • @nobiggie68
    @nobiggie68 Před 9 lety +58

    Once you start focusing on his breath between each line you cant stop

  • @conradlippert8475
    @conradlippert8475 Před 4 lety +2

    Not what the world needs to hear, but what we need to listen to. Preach.

  • @1986rcg
    @1986rcg Před 9 lety +8

    This was absolutely amazing and gave me chills!

  • @Tomahawk16Romeo
    @Tomahawk16Romeo Před rokem +1

    I felt like I just lost a battle that I didn’t even know I was in.

  • @kellyczarnecki-rivera313
    @kellyczarnecki-rivera313 Před 5 lety +1

    I can't tell you how many times I've watched this. This poem is one of the best I've listened to! Very powerful!

  • @Mare0125
    @Mare0125 Před 9 lety +3

    I'm in tears. Like this was just amazing and inspiring on so many levels

  • @clarityhenderson
    @clarityhenderson Před 9 lety +1

    Wow, beautifully spoken. Thank you for the reminder.

  • @alanbourne6182
    @alanbourne6182 Před 9 lety +2

    Powerful stuff. Thank you.

  • @minimoni247
    @minimoni247 Před 8 lety

    this brought tears to my eyes

  • @kyawthu9283
    @kyawthu9283 Před 7 lety

    I love this

  • @missmex7876
    @missmex7876 Před 8 lety

    What just happened??!!
    greatness.

  • @Averageguy5
    @Averageguy5 Před 7 lety

    One word - POWERFUL

  • @sarahsohlberg732
    @sarahsohlberg732 Před 8 lety +1

    aaaamaazing!!

  • @lalag8747
    @lalag8747 Před 8 lety

    Goosebumps 👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾

  • @mzinimitable1
    @mzinimitable1 Před 9 lety

    No words just: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

  • @loxdixon
    @loxdixon Před 9 lety +1

    It's about what you have to say when your poem's done

  • @ziad491
    @ziad491 Před 9 lety

    This poem is just strength

  • @nabilahaidarable
    @nabilahaidarable Před 9 lety +1

    oh mama that was good!!!

  • @-soul-2514
    @-soul-2514 Před 8 lety

    i can realy relate to this and thx you have made my day better
    keep doing what you do

  • @stephaniemaris4878
    @stephaniemaris4878 Před 8 lety +1

    Well, the Buddha/Buddhist references were a bit foreign to me, being a Christian, myself, but it was a very powerful and inspiring piece. Absolutely beautiful. :)

    • @mariocastro1540
      @mariocastro1540 Před 7 lety +2

      The beautiful thing is that Buddhism isn't a religion, more so than a philosophy. You can be both a Christian and a Buddhist. I highly recommend you look into it more because if you like the message he sends with this piece, then Buddhism will speak to you.

    • @Econnocon
      @Econnocon Před 2 lety

      @eyesofheaven its true in buddhism we don't whorship a god so you can follow te teachings of buddha and still be a christain.

  • @nickschlager9182
    @nickschlager9182 Před 8 lety +1

    that was some good shit my man

  • @graynegrundel927
    @graynegrundel927 Před 9 lety +1

    So, I'm doing a poetry slam pretty soon and I didn't realize we were supposed to tell stories! To think I was going to read some poetry.

  • @saintpaxman4403
    @saintpaxman4403 Před 3 lety

    Great poetic devices and delivery!

  • @Flamingoz111
    @Flamingoz111 Před 8 lety +1

    can somebody please tell me this guy's name

  • @erinjiang2100
    @erinjiang2100 Před 3 lety +1

    my english teacher showed me this

  • @AnneonaMouse
    @AnneonaMouse Před 9 lety +1

    I wonder. If G.Yamazawa were offered the opportunity to move ANYWHERE else in the world on the condition he could never return to America . . . would he take it? Where would he go, I wonder? Why did all those people cheer every. time. he bashed America?

  • @mysteryswordstudios
    @mysteryswordstudios Před 8 lety

    I'm kind of confused as to why calling her gay was...offensive to his dad I guess? Was it cause she was actually gay and he was being homophobic? Or was he calling her a jerk? Kind of undermines the rest of his poem.

    • @lotismade
      @lotismade Před 8 lety

      +Mystery Sword Studios It's all in there. He says everyone picked on said girl and later also that he became a bully. He talks about peer pressure, personal faults. It can't be anything but simply picking on her.

    • @mysteryswordstudios
      @mysteryswordstudios Před 8 lety

      I think his metaphor confused me with the picking of an orchard also meaning picking on someone while also complimenting her. It came across to me she was liked by everyone for some reason.

  • @stalcat7546
    @stalcat7546 Před 8 lety

    That haircut though. hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

  • @emilyfontinha9180
    @emilyfontinha9180 Před 9 lety +7

    This is absolutely amazing. His metaphors and analogies are so deep and complex. I just really couldnt get past his constant bashing of America, very rude for him to disrespect the nation that gives him the freedom to say what he wants without consequence. He's still amazing though!

    • @OleTimHerr
      @OleTimHerr Před 8 lety

      maybe hes just making a comparison of america to a bully. one who bullies other countries that are inferior to it.

    • @bouyaharumichi6016
      @bouyaharumichi6016 Před 6 lety

      And that's the reason he said what he said.

  • @Austin6403
    @Austin6403 Před 9 lety +1

    "pledge of allegiance molested the lips" oh cmon that ruined the whole thing.