''This Is How I Became a Missing Person and Why No One Will Ever Find Me'' | CREEPYPASTA
Vložit
- čas přidán 21. 08. 2024
- ''I am a missing person, and no one’s ever going to find me...''
Today’s phenomenal instant classic is '' This is how I became a missing person and why no one will ever find me'', an original work by Eliott Dresher, kindly shared directly with me for the express purpose of having me exclusively narrate it here for you all.
www.r-ddit.com...
Background music by me (freely available for use by other Creepypasta / No Sleep narrators):
/ dr-creepen
/ dr-creepen-vol-2
Other music used is credited to the wonderful The Dark Somnium (intro) and the fantastic Tanner Stokes (end credits). The music is used here with their express permission.
Video footage was made by me with whatever Go Pro Camera it is that I own... I hope you found it to be a relaxing backdrop for today’s story!
Thumbnail image created using Adobe Spark, under the conditions of the Creative Commons CC0 license:
spark.adobe.com
Essential Dr. Creepen links…
Did you know I have a second CZcams channel: / @drcreepensdungeon
If you’re a fan of the channel, there’s some of the fantastic merchandise available: teespring.com/...
You can also show me some love over on Patreon: / drcreepen
I’m on Twitter… If you want to chat with me in an informal way, you can best do it there: / f1morgancole
I’m also on Facebook… come say hi if you want: / drcreepenvanpasta
Perhaps you’ve written a story and you’d like me to narrate it?!?! The good news is, I have a place for you to send your stories: www.r-ddit.com...
Now on to how you can find the best of my vids, or just find the type of stories that you like best…
The Doc’s Campfire Tales: • Campfire Horror Storie...
The newest Creepypasta and Nosleep stories all in one place: • Fresh pasta | Creepypa...
Listener submissions… Stories shared directly with me: • Dr. Creepen's Vault: R...
My collaborations with other channels: • Dr. Creepen's Story Co... - Zábava
You're never too old for Scooby Doo!
Have you ever watched the BADASS edgy version of Scooby Doo series??! The 1 called Scooby Doo Mystery Incorporated??
Have you ever watched or heard of the Comicstorian CZcams Scooby Doo Apocalypse???
Scooby poo
just wanted to add this other comment I am legally blind pretty badly legally blind than I use speech to text and it off and screws up as probably my first comment would elude to anyway thank you again for a really really really great story again this time this one had it had me glued to my phone
@AdoIf HitIer 卐 hah, glad he can't see your profile name
I feel sad for people who go missing and families who can’t even get closure when their loved ones disappear. Having your whole life change because of some decisions is horrifying.
I love it when a story I hadn’t much cared to listen to, surprises the hell out of me, and halfway thru it’s already a favorite
Great writing is rare in Creepy Pasta it seems. This is great writing, great narration and I already know the ending will be satisfying just by the pace and tone of the story…outstanding all around.
Me: excited it's 2 hours long
Also me: sad because I know I'll never finish it due to always falling asleep 20 minutes in ಥ_ಥ
U HAVE TO FINISH THIS STORY! this is one of the best stories he's ever done no kidding!
@@glass4breakfast Just because you commented so enthusiastically, I promise I'll finish it. Even if it takes me a month watching 15 minutes every night before I inevitably fall asleep (which is why I listen to these). Unfortunately, I woke up towards the end and think I remember a few spoilers, but- I could have been dreaming
@@MistressHorrors for sure I'm not kidding it's the best I've heard in a long time. I fall asleep to them all the time n they influence my dreams all the time occasionally causing nightmares. Really interesting ones.
@@glass4breakfast Same, same. I've had some really horrible dreams from this, but that's the trade off. Insomnia < bad dreams sometimes. Only thing that sucks is I can't listen to Chilling Tales For Dark Nights on my sleep playlist anymore because their intro is too loud and gives me a heat attack in the middle of my sleep :/
Try listening during the day with coffee it's well worth it I got tired of missing out on his stories yes his voice is so soothing but the stories are amazing best of luck hun.♥️
You KNOW it's good when even after almost 2 hours, you still want more. Amazing read, Dr. C. Stay well.
Im about to sit back with my favorite drink and enjoy this story
Me to
Thank you Dr. 2 hours of intense soothing treatment..I absolutely love how you add the color filters to your videos..it is beautiful. ♥️
Loved that Borrasca reference :')
Perfect long format for this Monday
"How I became a missing person and why no one will ever find me"
So he turned into John Cena?
Yes
Daaaaamn, that’s true & funny
Buh buh buh buhhhh buh buh buh buhhhhhh
HOOOOLY. SHITTT ...DID I REALLY LISTENED THIS STORY FROM1.40/till3.52??am ,at night!!/but AMAZING, as always!!/thanxx ,to you and writer
I am a truck driver and totally enjoy these long stories driving through the night!
I just need to say this:
I looked into the Darkness.......
The Darkness looked into me........
And ran away screaming in terror like a little wussy boy!!!!
Much love to you Dr. !
Margaret Hamilton, AKA "The Wicked Witch of the West", would be quite proud of your intro. While she did not receive any awards for her performance, she will be remembered forever. "Don't let her get that water!"(Am I the only one who got it? Like "The Wizard of Oz.")
Cool intro.
Cheers
Glad someone recognized it!
@@DrCreepen .
I did as well, I always check the comments section before I leave my comment.(that way I'm not repeating anyone else)
"What a world, what a world"
The only thing that throws me with this story is if that ghost/witch woman controls Jenny itself, like a possession or if Jenny has full control but is somehow manipulated by the ghost/witch. Confused me a bit, by how some of the actions and thoughts Jenny makes are by the time she confronts the old man.
Harkeill
Author here. You make a valid point. I wanted to show a mix of control, if that makes sense. In the story possession is a two way street. Jenny had a fraction of control in the end and she used it to become a monster on the inside to complete the transformation
@@kevintierney5711 and i wasn't confused at all. I got that n i love it! Where did u come up with the idea n inspiration for this?! Have u written anything else? I like your style, it's very strong, i know Dr. Creepen deserves some major credit for bringing it to life but i swear it was real to me! U conjured up smells n feelings n dream like sensations. I'm starting to think u sold yer soul to the devil for this story. It could be a movie or at least a book.
This could really should be a novel. Whether u made this story longer or did 3 parts like this 1 the origin n an ending with anther character in a new body or maybe this girl could be the last but u could fill in the 3rd part with one of the other girls. N there's so much room for lore n occult! I fucking love it! This is by far the best "creepypasta" I've heard in a long time. Literally my new favorite.
Also i write too n i can recognize n appreciate the talent here. If u ever wanna discuss ideas or talk about writing or this story just reply.
Either way, thank u for sharing this!
@@glass4breakfast Cheers mate :) Dr. Creepen actually deserves a bit more credit for my style to writing than you'd imagine. I had to rewrite this story and resubmit it to the good doctor because the first version was sloppy to put it mildly (Doc is good with quality control). Inspiration came from all over the place, but the largest one was probably Dr. Jekyll and Mr Hyde (the actual story is underrated in my opinion). And no, there's no more to this one. The friendly gullible girl Jenny used to be is well and truly "missing" and no one will ever find her...not even her. That was the ending I wanted to stick with
@@kevintierney5711 oh i agree! I just think there's more to tell besides her. N if u wanted to for a book or film it could be fleshed out even more.
@@glass4breakfast It's always possible, that's for sure. Thanks again for the support, it means a great deal. I do have one other story on Dr. Creepen's channel. I wrote the Penny story in Doc's Halloween anthology video last October. That's the only other thing out there from me right now. Once again, cheers :)
This title should be Mud Witch💖 just absolutely betrayal and slow possesion in one vicious bite! OH! Thank you Dr. Creepen.🎵☕
That is a great idea for a title for this one indeed!!
@@insekta1701 Thank you 😊
A good name for a band too
This was one of the Best stories I've heard in a long time..
Wow nearly 2 hours with you dearest Dr. What a way to start the week. Is a dose of the good Dr daily a good thing? No it's a fantastic thing! See you soon dearest Dr
Thank you so much dear Dr. Your smooth, silky voice is a drug and I'm addicted to it. Wonderfully spooky story and as always, expertly narrated. 😘 Until next time.
That, was f-cking awesome.
Uuu
Doc I didn’t know you were named Jenny.
That was a personal best doc.. Ty.. I loved it..
A good one, Thank you Doc. Always a pleasure.
Oh yeah, I'm ready
Wooow. 2 hours 😂💜 you are da best!!!
Fantabulous !
Missing Persons? Destination Unknown. 🎶
I thought I was the only person who still listened to Missing Persons. But I still listen to Donna Summer and John Denver too. Great music.
Racer X nobody walks in LA , Mental hopscotch, good group 👍
@@deborahchesser7375 Til Tuesday's billboard hit "Voices Carry" and Berlin's, "Sex. I am a man", all from the 80's. Great music from that era.
I💘that Album I still have it on Vinal 🤟🤟🤟Racer X ;) much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️ 💋
Oh...that made me think of the Rancid song Ruby Soho
The Doc is in!
Why i became a missing person
tax evasion
Wesley Snipes?
Taxation IS THEFT!!!! Join & help fight government tyranny and theft!!!.... of your hard earned money and freedoms!!! Wake up and join the CAUSE!!!!
Well I'm 5th how bout that! I was actually listening to one of your old stories and my earbuds beeped so here I am!!
Doc, the long stories are so good, please do lots of those, thanks for another great job 😎👍🇺🇸
Oh. Right. We’re looking for you, Doc… next commercial, we’re right on it. 😮
Cary Jacobs what a sad bunch we would be if the good Dr disappeared. I personally would sink into depression
I really enjoyed your reading of this story. Thank you, Doctor. 💀
This story is a very good story and it's been suspenseful from the start. It will give me a lot to think about, even more so after recently being betrayed. It's helpful as well, so i deeply appreciate it's existence.
I love these longer stories & I save them for a “rainy day “.
I, too, had to have heart surgery for Wolff-Parkinson White Syndrome. My heart rate would go over 200 beats per minute during my attacks. I was diagnosed with panic attacks from a very young age & throughout my time in the Military. It wasn’t caught until a physical for a law enforcement academy.
I’ve had two more heart surgeries since for 2 other defects. My sister passed away after receiving her pacemaker, as a clot formed & went to her brain. I refuse to get one.
Anyway ~ I found it fascinating to hear about WPW in a horror story.
Excellent Story & Narration, Dear Doctor. 🖤🥀
Same. I was told the "panic attacks" were just me being silly until I ended up in an ER as an adult with a whole lot of upset people around me. 24 hours later was in heart surgery And dr's asking why I had never had it treated. I had 2 extra nodes.. one strong as the normal nodes. And yes WPW is common but you never hear about it so hearing it in a story made me double take
That was amazing! Thank you and the author so much!
The first 42:24 minutes are excellent and a masterpiece and perfection, you just have to give it patience but it be good, after that the story isn't as good UNTIL 1:24:22 minutes or timestamp and you realize that in-between time was just a cool down to let everyone relax and to also give people a break and build up lore. And you realize that it's genius and that it's good and original. HOWEVER you have to give it more patience then before for the story to get good but once it gets good... IT GETS REALLY GOOD. To put it to words. The ball starts to get rolling really fast. AND I DO mean really fast really quickly. Lore and WOLRDBUILDIMG DONE GREAT AND RIGHT. The ending of this story is brilliant and satisfying or satisfactory but I can't help but feel a little conflicted about the ending. Let me explain , first and foremost let's talk about the one who survived or people who survive. You see that made me think there might've eventually been a sequel but then we get the epilogue that gives information in a way of telling us there won't be a sequel which is fine and bam some potential information which may lead to a potential sequel which I don't have a problem with it ... in fact I'm excited probably or possibly who knows but to give the point of my problem. IT COMES FROM THE BROTHER OR big brother to exact. I'll explain why in a bit. It both brings the ending to a close in an excellent and entertaining way that I enjoyed but it still leaves me conflicted. Which brings me to my next point. Second point... Here's what I find the big problem here. Give me a bit to explain. Ok here it goes. Here goes nothing. Ok so the problem or potentially the big problem here is the snap. You know the one I'm talking about. It's the equivalent of Thanos snapping his fingers in infinity war or endgame idk but to be a bit more specific and clear about it. I'm talking about the one in the car or inside the car. That's how important this scene was. It showed timelines . Lives, love, death and loss and humanity and yet to me at least it completely contradicts the ENDING OF THE STORY. You see the ending and the snap are the 2 most scenes of the story in 2nd or 3rd act and yet they completely contradict each other. I still enjoyed it the whole story I mean but come on I mean it come on. Unless you are secretly a genius showing that she is the embodiment of an amalgamation between humanity and the thing also known as THE WITCH. Which would be brilliant and a genius and clever move however I only came to this conclusion just now through my review and not the ending of the story so yeah that maybe proves my point probably idk. You might enjoy the movie nightbooks on Netflix who knows just give it a lot more patience then this story trust me. This story and nightbooks are still really good if you give it the patience. You'll enjoy both a lot.
Another fantastic story!! Made it into my 'Best Creepy Stories' list. Thank you Dr Creepen! ❤️
Rainy Dark day here in ATX perfect weather for the Doctor Always A pleasure 🤘
Hook 'em Horns!
Hail Rain Hail Satan!
How ..wait ...lets first hear story!!
This story is phenomenal! I reek, really enjoyed this one, Doc and you did an amazing job with it!
As always, Good Sir, I am sending you so much love, respect and many, many blessings. 💞💞💞💞💞
About time a good one was released
Very nice!
Definitely worth it, Doc!💗
Thanks so much for all your hard work😊👍
Oh wow almost 2 glorious hours of our dear Doctor Creepen's heavenly angelic musical voice today. I guess this calls for an extra special favorite drink to celebrate the occasion.👌😍😇😘👍
tiffany benefield what is it, I’ll make one too, cheers 🍻
Your voice in the intro sounded extra crisp and clear.
Love this 1 man
Love your voice and the story. Thank you for keeping me entertained.
Hello from NJ. Love the long stories
Lol I’m envious of people born in October, but I think I might be insane cause I think being possessed, depending on by whom, would be badass! It’d almost be like a constant protector with you. Good story!
“And I involuntarily swallowed, because of how big it looked up close.”
Holy Cow! Two hours! Thanks, Doc. You rock!
Hi there 👋 my Sweetlicious Friend:) much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️ 💋
Sexy Grandma Darkness hey K! Hope you are having a wonderful day!
@@MadameRaven1
Thank you 💋 my Sweetlicious Friend:) I am doing well 🙃 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️ 💋
Excellent story and narration!! Bravo!! 👏👏👏
WoW!! Loved it, Thank you
This is an absolute epic one. Gosh. I really really enjoyed this one. Thanks for such a great video. Really appreciate the time and effort you put up into this vedio kind sir. You're the best.
Damn.
Well, that was awesome. Great job by all involved. Thanks again good sir (Doffs hat)
...as. btw. Indeed. ..that could had cost you a whole day to record ..woow!👏👏👏👏👏😵
An ablation goes through the vein, not artery. I know, I’ve had one. However, it isn’t done under general anesthesia, they need you awake for parts of it. I was fortunate to have a fancy doc, who had access to cool new electronics. I got to see the inside of my heart.
This was totally WORTH IT. Loved it so much!
It would make the stories more realistic if they didn't include the myth of the 24-hour rule. You can report them as soon as you notice they are missing
Is it crazy to say that I only sleep good after listening to the Dr..?
Johnathan Bowen nope, till 2 or 3 every night pretty much, can’t do without it
borrasca by ck walker .... one of my favorite stories was referenced here
David Bollinger seriously? I must have not caught it. Do you mind if I ask how was it refrenced?
@@yumekojabami7408 she references ck Walker and then the little poem they had to say before they went into the tree house if I go or if I stay my fates the same either way if I remember from the story correctly it was after the old man talked to her in the hospital
David Bollinger oh shit, that’s cool
Ikr It adds a nice touch to the story
Plus it reminds me of my 1 of my favorite Clash songs! "Should i stay or should i go?!"
Spooky boo
You are the best Doc. Can't wait to listen to this story.
Yesss, long story. Like my snake
"nobody owns more than one or two slaves" like that makes it any better LOL
Seriously; when I heard that I muttered out loud "Oh, well that makes it okay then" (sarcastically, of course)
Yeah when I heard that I cringed a bit, like it shouldn’t even be written in today’s world. Idk but it definitely bothered me.
Yes! Thank-you good doctor 😘
Hello 🙂 Cady D how are you doing? Me I be Good:) much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️ 💋
This story was freaking awesome!
I really hate the titles for these things like hey please just go ahead and say what happens why don't ya xD
....haah!, or your sense.of humour , gets overloaded!
It's called "hyperosmia", which is a heightened sense of smell (like detergents, flowers etc that one person notices more than another.). I'm not too sure about it actually a lot being a cause that can make you pass out, but given that it's a stimuli to your environment, means it can have other negative affects on your body, such as migraines, which, if strong enough, do make suffers pass out because of the pain.
Love this story
THIS NEEDS TO BE MADE INTO A MOVE!
my humble opinion.
Cheers Angela. I wrote this one and I appreciate the thought
Holy shit it would be so scary if it could be done right! This was so well written! N read our course!
If it ever did get made into a film then Dr. Creepen should be in it out his voice at least.
This sounds EERILY similar to the movie "Scary stories to tell in the dark"
@@glass4breakfast Appreciate you!
I gree and you spelled movie wrong
Hmm...ok I get it. Interesting.
What kind of microphone do you use I'm about to start a channel and just wanted some advice if that's okay
A blue yeti... not so cheap but worth it!
@@DrCreepen thanks for letting me know man appreciate it
@@DrCreepen I bought the same one for Black Friday ha!
Will you really pass out if your sense of smell gets overloaded??
Your stories are amazing man, your voice pulls me INTO each tale so I appreciate you so much. Thanks Dr. Creepen, you voice is phenomenal!!!
Another great story. Thank you Dr. You are toooo good to us. You never disappoint! 👍 We love you here in Michigan.
Hiya doc its jenny and the cats and all 7 of my cats are tucked up in bed with out favorite drinks. We are all ready to listen. 😸😸😸😸😸😸😸
@Hannibal Hyde i keep my house spotless I have to as I do have 7 cats. I suppose it could be bad if i wasnt so on top of my cats litter boxes
Why come y'all don't have your favorite drinks?
@@cutenose38 Haha I also have 7 cats, no exaggeration!! We have 3 litterboxes and scoop em out like 4 times a day, and we're always cleaning.
7 cats? 3 cats and a dog is enough for me! Hope you enjoyed the story though! 😺🐶
@@BotsHateMe i only have 5 now i had 2 die of old age which made me very sad but we all love the story
That was unexpected...cool.
Wow I loved this ❤️ the ending was fantastic
Cheers Alexandria. Author here, your words mean a lot
This story brings new meaning to “girls just wanna have fun”. Absolutely smashing. Thank you, Doctor Creepen, for your effort on this story. ;-D
Not gonna lie, hearing Dr Creepen say, "Hail Satan, MOFOs." gave me a laugh. Great story!
Brilliant...
fantastic voice great story enjoyed immensely
That was super good...
Maybe the best I’ve listened to. Top 3 at least….that was awesome 👏
Love it!!!!!💕💗💞💗
Dang it Dr. Creepen your fake yawning made me *really* yawn 😂 great story and excellent narration!
No Denzel Washington in this story? .... "Time is on my side.... yes it isss"... well Azazel is in the story at least..
I LOVE that movie!!
Oh wow! Very nice story from beginning to end!
Nobody is too old for Scooby Doo.
For an obviously inexperienced author the story and creativity was absolutely perfect. This would make such an excellent series either novels or TV and I want more of this character.
@@kevintierney5711 Oh hello buddy, glad you enjoyed my comment. I really enjoyed your story! Aside from some shallowness in certain aspects of the story like character background, dialogue and explanations and pacing issues in a couple portions I think you did a very good job. The possession mechanic in particular is very fascinating to me, how the victim retains the majority of their personality is something I've never come across before and it is such a great vehicle for continuing the story if you're ever so inclined. And really don't take my critiques hard at all because I mean them in the least way possible, like 85%-92% out of 100% if that makes sense. You did a seriously great job with this piece and I know those issues could be alleviated totally if it was more than a short story. You made a character that is applicable in any setting past present or future and able to change major personality aspects at a whim, that's quite the accomplishment in my opinion. I have a lot more to say but I don't wanna pollute your creativity with suggestions and what not, I just want to tell you thanks for bringing me a day of joy and intrigue through your story, it was so good and man I just love this character.
@@thinkinyblinko6666 85%? Heck yeah, B’s get degrees. Inspiration hits me wildly every three years or so, but when it does it’s a doozy. Probably the best place to go next would be the character searching for other similar characters and coming across one being worshipped in a creepy secret society. I always had it in my head that if there were others like Gertrude, they’d probably want to eat each other and that’s probably what Gertrude had been doing for a long time since there didn’t seem to be any others around. Otherworldly power they have world be limited and only available in a zero-sum
That birthday hit me. Only a few months younger than me.
As per usual brilliantly narrated. Funny how your voice & theatrics makes even a mundane story far more interesting & keeps the listener spell bound right to the end.
Main character: i am a missing person and no ones ever gonna find me
My optimistic self: well not with that attitude 🤣🤣🤣
This is by far my favorite of the vault so far. Thank you for all the hard work.
Thanks doc
aye shout out Lithuania gotta represent, loved this story
😎Dr. Creepen, you’re like one of the best narrators I’ve heard on CZcams , the spook stories you tell are off the charts, thankyou!
Great story and excellent narration. I had started it at night but paused it when I became sleepy. I started with my morning coffee and it was great. Thank you.