So where was the human super carrier? What happened to obliviously missing parts of the story. What about the last big battle. It went from planning to celebrating. And lastly, way to wordy. This is sci-fi, not a love drama.
i think the gist of the story got lost in the authors propensity to utilize 3,4, and 5 dollars words to describe the same theme of rallying to the cause 26 different ways, and then running out of allowable space to move the story forward such redundancy replaced the projected theme of the tale injecting space dust into the vacuum of space obscuring clarity of the readers observations of said story or maybe not.....
Awesome story.
So where was the human super carrier? What happened to obliviously missing parts of the story. What about the last big battle. It went from planning to celebrating. And lastly, way to wordy. This is sci-fi, not a love drama.
Still waiting for the insane ship unless it was that reck from that Death Ray.
Alien Walord Shocked "This Human Supercarrier is INSANE..." Referring to your Title...When within this story does your Heading reside?
Lets make more insane ship 😊
Is the development of these defenses occuring during the battle?
What does HFY from the title mean?
What happened to the supercarrier
i think the gist of the story got lost in the authors propensity to utilize 3,4, and 5 dollars words to describe the same theme of rallying to the cause 26 different ways, and then running out of allowable space to move the story forward such redundancy replaced the projected theme of the tale injecting space dust into the vacuum of space obscuring clarity of the readers observations of said story or maybe not.....
Okay so what happened to the 24-hour decision that humans had to make at the very beginning of the story
Yup. Did he activate the device or WHAT????
I think it referred to a revolution around the sun
Gone with the ego and hope
Seriously, I lost interest all ready ,
erratic story spacing.
BS! 👎❗️