I think this set had the opportunity to be delivered from the perspective of someone who is naive/dumb. My advice is to whenever you can whilst joke writing find/write a character whom would deliver the jokes. It helps to give shape to a theme and a style of delivery that can serve as a backbone for when you need to improv or are stumbling. I wouldn't worry about the quality of the character too much for now, but keep in mind generally this works best in comedy for when that character is "true to yourself", with some hyperbolism for example. And most importantly, whatever you go with stick with it! Don't second guess or excuse yourself with 'saves'. Just bomb like fuck and take it in stride.
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I think this set had the opportunity to be delivered from the perspective of someone who is naive/dumb. My advice is to whenever you can whilst joke writing find/write a character whom would deliver the jokes. It helps to give shape to a theme and a style of delivery that can serve as a backbone for when you need to improv or are stumbling. I wouldn't worry about the quality of the character too much for now, but keep in mind generally this works best in comedy for when that character is "true to yourself", with some hyperbolism for example. And most importantly, whatever you go with stick with it! Don't second guess or excuse yourself with 'saves'. Just bomb like fuck and take it in stride.