"DUST ANGEL" Award Winning Sci-Fi Action Adventure SHORT FILM 4K

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  • čas přidán 14. 12. 2021
  • During the Earth/Mars conflict, a lone soldier explores a mysterious planet in the Andromeda galaxy. As the human searches for resources, he discovers that he is not alone.
    This film is the product of collaboration by a collective of my local artist friends on the Redwood Coast. We have worked very hard to create this film,
    we hope you will enjoy it.
    Sci-Fi # Dust Angel
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Komentáře • 65

  • @patriciacvener1968
    @patriciacvener1968 Před měsícem

    Excellent music choices!

  • @paulkazimierzdanisz5152
    @paulkazimierzdanisz5152 Před 2 lety +3

    Guardian paving the way back to restore peace,, of course it had to be proved by the Martians striking first against inferior defence,, Guardian reassuring the way forward,, . Perfect,, no need to change anything here ,,
    We already trying for a long time to be peaceful,, however all the while greed is churning its own path,, never knowing when to stop,, untill the day only sand and dust inhabit the planet..
    The wind is constantly sculpturing the landscape and people's faces,,, ,🐲🍀❤️

    • @dornravlin
      @dornravlin  Před 2 lety +2

      Thank you so mutch I’m glade you understood what I was going for take care

  • @julianlewis-bs7rw
    @julianlewis-bs7rw Před 5 měsíci

    Really good film loved it.

  • @dancrash3875
    @dancrash3875 Před 2 lety +1

    I am speachless....

  • @Frofr3ak
    @Frofr3ak Před 2 lety +1

    Star wars type aiming goin up in here

  • @deborahannehart6788
    @deborahannehart6788 Před 2 lety +2

    Words are gonna fail me here, but I'll try. Weird, creepy, spectacular, awesome, trippy, strange, marvelous!!!

    • @dornravlin
      @dornravlin  Před 2 lety +1

      Well that's what we were going for thank you so much

  • @premanando127
    @premanando127 Před 2 lety

    Good 1!!

  • @wp5355
    @wp5355 Před 2 lety +1

    A very well done presentation!!

  • @lostcat9lives322
    @lostcat9lives322 Před 2 lety

    In the future, everyone will wander the desert while wearing a duster.

  • @delilapipoly
    @delilapipoly Před 2 lety +1

    😍☺☺☺👌🏻

  • @karenholland4732
    @karenholland4732 Před 2 lety +1

    Well done. Hope you create many more. Thanks for a great movie.

  • @charleswestbrook118
    @charleswestbrook118 Před 2 lety +9

    You have talent, but here are some hopefully constructive observations. Pull back on the use of animated effects a bit, as they tend to override the storyline (IMHO). The lead character seems to have completely unlearned his lesson towards the end...perhaps a show of reluctance to resort to fighting so quickly would have been more in character. The swearing at the end seems contrived and largely unnecessary...dial it back a notch. A bit more context regarding the lead antagonist's background would serve to enlighten the audience and give weight to the storyline. That is all, hope this helps. 🙂

    • @dornravlin
      @dornravlin  Před 2 lety +2

      This is good feedback we hope to do a special edition were we work on character depth. Could you go in depth on what was not clear about the antagonist background. I thought I made it clear the Dust Angel was the souls of the fallen civilians and was created through there War Gods. I would say there is no Antagonist as its not a story of good vs evil but a story of three sides that think there right. My thinking with the protagonist fighting back is pacifism is mute in clear danger. Id also like to point out that he is human and humans fight when you think about it we had the Vietnam war and still are in conflict with the Middle East. We In real life have not learned from the past have we. That was my thinking I like your thoughts do I know you in real life?

    • @carlosoliveira-rc2xt
      @carlosoliveira-rc2xt Před 2 lety

      Total agreement on too many effects diluting storyline.

    • @dornravlin
      @dornravlin  Před 2 lety +1

      @@carlosoliveira-rc2xt Well I see what you mean we had fun with the space battles. And to me we made the effects part of the story. Like the Dust Angel saw that the dude had a family and resurrected him. And we showed how Dust Angel was born

  • @docwilson5384
    @docwilson5384 Před 2 lety +1

    Amazing job...Peace

    • @dornravlin
      @dornravlin  Před 2 lety

      Thank you..... Peace and love thank you for commenting

  • @frederickhillman7065
    @frederickhillman7065 Před rokem +1

    I really appreciated this thanks

  • @mesmerd3018
    @mesmerd3018 Před 2 lety

    Beautiful work - hi from NZ

  • @evergreen61
    @evergreen61 Před 2 lety +4

    Peter, this is amazing! I was pulled in and invested. The fight scene was really great. I love action scenes that are realistic and not rushed to the point of confusion. Great job, guys!

    • @dornravlin
      @dornravlin  Před 2 lety +1

      Thank you for commenting take care part of the reason we made this movie .Was because we wanted to shoot some cool action scenes . I’m a big fan of samurai cinema ,Hong Fu films,Heroic Blood Shed films. And my frustration with modern action films is they just get people that don’t know how to fight. I wanted people who new how to fight

  • @Jose-el4lz
    @Jose-el4lz Před 2 lety

    la mejor pilicula de todo el universo

  • @ddiii1140
    @ddiii1140 Před 2 lety +4

    Impressive film, Peter. I'm about to look to see if you have others.

  • @ToddHofer
    @ToddHofer Před 2 lety +2

    Nice plot. I especially enjoyed all the Star Trek kit bashes for he ships. It was kind of fun identifying which ship was from what kit.

    • @dornravlin
      @dornravlin  Před 2 lety +1

      Oh dark I we tried to hide them as best we could thank you for watching. One thing I like about the TNG epipods was how they used miniatures I always liked the old school look of them.

  • @terrencevaughn3614
    @terrencevaughn3614 Před 2 lety +8

    Incredible use of animation. You really captured a coherent vision here that flows well and tells a story.

    • @dornravlin
      @dornravlin  Před 2 lety +1

      Yes Terry we did put a lot of work into our VFX

  • @trevorsowder
    @trevorsowder Před 2 lety +6

    Omg Peter!!! This turned out absolutely fantastic! Well done friend!

  • @julimoreno173
    @julimoreno173 Před 2 lety +3

    Absolutely enjoyable short story.I've been watching sci-fi films from very very young so I do not content easily. Keep it up Peter!

    • @dornravlin
      @dornravlin  Před 2 lety +1

      Thank you so much that means a lot

  • @JamezDahlMusic
    @JamezDahlMusic Před 2 lety +6

    Awesome work! I love the use of models for the ships! Great aesthetics throughout! Let me know if you need music for your next project.

    • @dornravlin
      @dornravlin  Před 2 lety +2

      Oh my god I’m humbled that you took the time to see it thank you so much. I can’t tell you how humbled I am

    • @JamezDahlMusic
      @JamezDahlMusic Před 2 lety +1

      Dude Ofcourse, I airplayed it to my big screen! Looked great! Keep up the hard work

  • @damusbine9775
    @damusbine9775 Před 2 lety +2

    Let's go peter!!!!!...cool editing too✌️

  • @BiG_SorD
    @BiG_SorD Před 2 lety +2

    Dope story man, really liked the fire fight! Don’t mess with martians 💪🏾

    • @dornravlin
      @dornravlin  Před 2 lety

      Thanks for watching and your right don’t mess with Martians

  • @greenlover247
    @greenlover247 Před 2 lety

    Enjoyed it very much, what is the music ??
    🙂

  • @dreaprissyreality9978
    @dreaprissyreality9978 Před 2 lety +1

    This is soooooooo cool Peter you are sooooo freaking talented!!!

    • @dornravlin
      @dornravlin  Před 2 lety

      It’s not just me I do what I got to do and it’s my crew

  • @Quelper
    @Quelper Před 2 lety

    I would play that game.

  • @reeblesnarfle4519
    @reeblesnarfle4519 Před 2 lety +1

    Really admire the Love not War delima confrontation. Too bad America, and the world, has not learned its' lesson. Money mongrels and powerfull people apparently will not learn their lesson until The Supreme Being, Jesus Christ, comes again to reclaim His people, and His creation of Earth.
    Great lesson here. I don't think current advosaries will be as forgiving as the Martians.
    God help us all.
    You should restream this one frequently to help people consider their positions in all this.
    Life is a gift. That's why they call it The Present. 🙏😎

  • @lobomorado4742
    @lobomorado4742 Před 2 lety

    Si humano conoce busca estrellas localizado animales visto pero diferentes color otros

  • @MobileFilmmaking
    @MobileFilmmaking Před 2 lety +1

    Pretty cool. I came across your post on in a Facebook group. I just subbed you

    • @dornravlin
      @dornravlin  Před 2 lety +1

      Thank you

    • @MobileFilmmaking
      @MobileFilmmaking Před 2 lety

      @@dornravlin keep 'em coming. I love the. Inspiration.

    • @dornravlin
      @dornravlin  Před 2 lety +1

      @@MobileFilmmaking Ill be having another short come out in the next month or so

    • @MobileFilmmaking
      @MobileFilmmaking Před 2 lety

      @@dornravlin awesome. Can't wait to see it. I'm working on something as well