I’d just like to say thank you for not copping out and using AI of your voice to mass produce videos. So many creepy pasta channels now are just bad AI, there’s no cadence or emotion in AI voices. You’ll never be replaceable 💜
@@jblask2 honestly there’s so many. But it’s pretty easy to tell because it reads poorly. Awkward stopping points and always calling a person he and she because ai doesn’t know the difference.
I thlnk I felt the same sadness you did! Great narration as always. I liked the story because it was realistic. I think too many happy endings set too many of us for unrealistic expectations.
That's what my boss did after my father died from cancer in 2010. He told me getting back to work would make me feel better. No bereavement pay, either.
Aw man, this one hurt! As a father myself, losing your kid once hits like nothing else. Losing him three times however proved that it can always be worse. You and Corpsechild managed to take me through all emotions yet again.
Sadly this story was beyond absurd. Normally you’re right about Creepen but man was this one silly. I assume it was written by a 10 year old with zero real life experience
@@alemtorsaulaMost of these stories are amazing and I know I couldn’t write a better story but this particular one, I am positive I could. The main characters shouldn’t be so dumb that it’s distracting and the situations should at least be anchored to some type of common sense reality. Some guy walking into a police standoff, having some long drawn out situation with a kid holding a knife & no other suspects are detained? The final scene was laughable. None of that would have ever happened like that. Just because I’m honest in my criticism doesn’t mean I think I’m some great writer
Corps child is really good getting good at giving me the chills and the stories are getting better and better. Of course I don't think they would be so good if it wasn't for the best narrating done by the best in the business. Love to you and yours 💓
Heard the good Doc narrate a few stories from Corpsechild now and I’m starting to really enjoy the author’s stories. The good Dr. can make anyone’s stories great though,honestly!
This one actually got me dear Dr. I started listening after waking up from a nightmare involving my son. True horror. How do you do that? Greetings from Netherland
A delightful Corpse Child story, narrated by the only Dr im happy to see, the Creepen kind. Keep this kind of wickedly, amazing work up, dont know what id do without my dose of Dr Creepen. Lol
Well it’s been a while since I’ve heard this one and fortunately enough it was long enough ago that I didn’t remember what happened so in effect it was a new story. And as CC always does, it brought with it it’s own special kind of drama and that very hard to find unique quality as so many CreepyPastas today are just slight variations of another one. So you end up with a big bowl of just slightly more spice in each one but vaguely enough to even “taste” the difference. When the great authors such as the Corpse Child comes along it’s best to pay attention and give them the praise they deserve so it will motivate them to continue to bring us more of the same quality of stories that we all know and love. And as long as we keep the great Dr Creepen delivering them, well there’s just nothing left to ask for! With the one exception of your favorite drink 🍺. So thanks to you good Dr, and much Praise to CC for another gripping tale of brutal killing rascals amongst the neighborhood. You just can’t ever be safe enough! Excellent performance!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍🫡🫡🫡
Who waits 10 actual minutes after knocking on someone's door? That is actually pretty creepy, especially if nobody answers and tells you to "hold on, I'm coming"
there's a lot of details in the story that don't make sense. Asking your neighbor you aren't particularly close to about their recently deceased daughter, a cop showing a random civilian crime scene photos and getting him to play investigator.....
I’m mad the dad didn’t find creepy the children in a circle near nighttime with a girl in the middle and KY saying I’m going to get mom back… when dad went with the detective he couldn’t tell him Maybe 🤔 1 reaosm right away the last time he saw he son and the weird stuff happening. Apparently none of that rang a bell immediately. Like the detective had to give him clues about a cult maybe… it’s was getting me mad actually lol
Snuggled in at 10:30pm and ready to listen. The title sounds very familiar. Have you done this one before? Either way, I'm going to listen and 👍! Thanks Doc! Hope you and anyone reading this has a fantastic weekend!🤗💜🕷
Yeah, I'm not gonna bullshit Im a grown man and I cried when his kid died in his arms. That was heavy. My only critique would be that the interrogation scene was written in a way that you put it all together way before it's revealed. I figured it out about a minute into the interrogation, but the scene lasted like 10 minutes. it should have been either trimmed down a bit, or written so that the reader puts it together at the same time as the protagonist. I get that he was in denial, but it takes away most of the impact of the reveal when you've already long since figured it out by the time it's acknowledged in the story. Because at that point, the characters are just acknowledging something you've already processed and it feels drawn out. But know that I only give critical feedback to writers whose work I admire.
Narrator: "am I the best creepy pasta narrator on CZcams hahahahah might be! lol jk" Also narrator: **litterally murmurs** "'Kai!' I screamed at the top of my lungs" Hmmmhm
Another great narration and story ! Corpse child is one of my favourite writers. You always do the stories justice with the wonderful smooth voice of yours.
Honestly, extremely obvious what was going to happen as soon a the kid said he wanted mom back. Dead girl. Kid says he wants mom back. Ah, yeah, he did a sacrifice.
Corpse-Child and The Doc .. the most amazing superlative duo in the business!!! Oh yes, I am ready for another fantastical tale spun by Corpse and narrated in a superb manner by the Doc 😊😊😊😊
Let me express. As soon as I hear “by corpse child”. I lose Mind just a little bit. Because between corpse child and crim that’s how my life rotates. Talk about two amazing authors am I right?!
Hello good Dr., I think you’ve made a good choice in abandoning the practice of a long poem to precede every story. Now Sure, an occasional poem for just the right story, might fit nicely and enhance it. But you know better than most that not all styles and patterns are one size fits all and having a pre-narration poem for every story doesn’t quite work and isn’t a win for each one. So once again, I applaud your choice:)
I normally love any story by CC but I didn't care for this one. There were too many things that didnt make sense. Little things really but enough to distract me and take me out of it a bit. Dr C can make any story enjoyable though so still worth the listen!
Dr Creepen, you should consider upgrading your microphone and/or audio processing. Your voice is sort of muddled, and the t's, s's, and ch's are overwhelming the overall clarity. ❤
Such a sad ending, man. The other people around MC/OP are also sus. Like, all these horrible things are happening and there’s no ounce of urgency or concern. Makes me think there’s a bigger conspiracy surrounding everything.
Well done. It's really a pleasure listening to a real human voice instead of the narrator taking the easy way out and switching to an AI "voice" with the occasional weird pronunciation, which is aggravating and distracting from the story line. Thank you for "keeping it real", and I am enjoying your accent.
At the end of the story im thinking those kids if anything will try to start a cult from prison im assuming children get sent to maximum security prison. Prisoners fall prey to religion just like anyone else.
I’d just like to say thank you for not copping out and using AI of your voice to mass produce videos. So many creepy pasta channels now are just bad AI, there’s no cadence or emotion in AI voices. You’ll never be replaceable 💜
Which ones do you know of that actually are using ai? I would like to avoid them
@@jblask2 honestly there’s so many. But it’s pretty easy to tell because it reads poorly. Awkward stopping points and always calling a person he and she because ai doesn’t know the difference.
@@peppei666Calling who he and she? Wouldnt they just read the story as typed/input?
@@RaenbowBlight no. Sometimes the ai will get confused with he and she and it will always go back and forth on it. It’s small but it happens a lot.
Sitting back relaxed ✔️
Favorite drink ✔️
Ready to listen ✔️
Bring it
Always a banger combo when Corpsechild and the Dr bring us a tale.
Cheers to everyone!
I thlnk I felt the same sadness you did! Great narration as always. I liked the story because it was realistic. I think too many happy endings set too many of us for unrealistic expectations.
Your kid is murdered, and your boss gives you one week off and then is like ‘get back ere soldier’! Brutal.
America. 😅
Reality
That's what my boss did after my father died from cancer in 2010. He told me getting back to work would make me feel better. No bereavement pay, either.
When my son passed away extra hard because I found him . My boss called the next day to remind me that I only had the 3 days 😢
Aw man, this one hurt!
As a father myself, losing your kid once hits like nothing else. Losing him three times however proved that it can always be worse.
You and Corpsechild managed to take me through all emotions yet again.
That was a real tear jerker.
Great story C.C!
Great narration as always Doc.
🤷♀️♥️♥️♥️✌️
I can't believe it was over an hour, I could've sworn it was about 25-30 minutes.. time flies, eh?
This story was terrifying.
Imagine a society where your only child is missing and you're still expected to work that week.
Super freaky and heart wrenching.
A Corpschild is always gonna be a good story.
You got that right!
Yep
Sadly this story was beyond absurd. Normally you’re right about Creepen but man was this one silly. I assume it was written by a 10 year old with zero real life experience
Every time
Hey @RealAnime…, FYI - the author writes under the name ‘Corpse Child’…
WOW..that was a really good story....Couldn't even take a bathroom break!! lol. Cr. Creepen, you're the best!!!!
Creepen is awesome but this story was the dumbest on his channel (possibly the internet). The author can’t be over 12 years old
@@AParallelRealitythey could possibly be 12, but where's your creepypasta?
@@alemtorsaulaMost of these stories are amazing and I know I couldn’t write a better story but this particular one, I am positive I could. The main characters shouldn’t be so dumb that it’s distracting and the situations should at least be anchored to some type of common sense reality. Some guy walking into a police standoff, having some long drawn out situation with a kid holding a knife & no other suspects are detained? The final scene was laughable. None of that would have ever happened like that. Just because I’m honest in my criticism doesn’t mean I think I’m some great writer
Corps child is really good getting good at giving me the chills and the stories are getting better and better. Of course I don't think they would be so good if it wasn't for the best narrating done by the best in the business. Love to you and yours 💓
I liked his other stories but this one really missed the mark.
Thanks Doc..appreciate the upload as usual.....folks don't forget to hit the hitch hiker button, least we can do, cheers guys.
Thank you Dr Creepen for the awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration as always and props to the author on this one. It was really good.🖤🖤🖤🖤
That was a great story. I enjoyed every minute of it. Love you 💜
Man, you and CC are a legendary combination.
I know this is going to be a great one. Not only narrated by The Doc but written by Corpse Child. ❤❤❤❤HELL YEAH!!!!!!
🖤🖤🔥👍great as always
Thanks Doc!
Oh wow. This was amazing. Just as I expected. Thank you doctor for bringing us another excellent narration 😊❤
Nice I could listen to my doctor while I cook 😊❤
Love how relaxing but scary you narrate. Thanks for the story Doc, look forward to the next one.
As ALWAYS BRAVO !❤❤❤
LOVE YOUR VOICE AND EXCITEMENT OF HOW YOU READ THE STORIES.
Another great one Doc. This would literally make one hell of a movie. A one of a kind storyline.
I’ve gotten to calling you Scaremy Irons; absolutely love your voice and narration.
Awesome!!
I just got a chance to listen to this amazing story. It was well written and very excellently narrated. Thank you ❤😊🌟
Thankyou Dr Creepen for Corpsechild's story for us! ❤❤❤
Got excited then realized it's a repeat, still a great story to hear again
Damn that's creepy! The scary part is i wouldn't be surprised if it happens or happened.
Another great story, thanks Doc & CorpseChild.
OK, I'm ready. Doc, take me away 😊
Heard the good Doc narrate a few stories from Corpsechild now and I’m starting to really enjoy the author’s stories. The good Dr. can make anyone’s stories great though,honestly!
Amazing, as usual. ❤
Brilliant story. Thanks ❤❤❤❤
Anytime I hear Corpse Child wrote the story, I'm in. That dude is one hell of a writer.
❤ thank you Dr! One of the many excellent stories you’ve told! Thanks 😊
This one actually got me dear Dr. I started listening after waking up from a nightmare involving my son. True horror. How do you do that?
Greetings from Netherland
This creepypasta broke my heart man. 😭
I see Dr. Creepen and Corpse Child...🎉❤😮🤔😘
A delightful Corpse Child story, narrated by the only Dr im happy to see, the Creepen kind. Keep this kind of wickedly, amazing work up, dont know what id do without my dose of Dr Creepen. Lol
Always love a Corpse Child / Dr Creepen story!!🎉❤ This will be good!!
Great story. Thank you
Well it’s been a while since I’ve heard this one and fortunately enough it was long enough ago that I didn’t remember what happened so in effect it was a new story. And as CC always does, it brought with it it’s own special kind of drama and that very hard to find unique quality as so many CreepyPastas today are just slight variations of another one. So you end up with a big bowl of just slightly more spice in each one but vaguely enough to even “taste” the difference. When the great authors such as the Corpse Child comes along it’s best to pay attention and give them the praise they deserve so it will motivate them to continue to bring us more of the same quality of stories that we all know and love. And as long as we keep the great Dr Creepen delivering them, well there’s just nothing left to ask for! With the one exception of your favorite drink 🍺. So thanks to you good Dr, and much Praise to CC for another gripping tale of brutal killing rascals amongst the neighborhood. You just can’t ever be safe enough! Excellent performance!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍🫡🫡🫡
Who waits 10 actual minutes after knocking on someone's door? That is actually pretty creepy, especially if nobody answers and tells you to "hold on, I'm coming"
there's a lot of details in the story that don't make sense. Asking your neighbor you aren't particularly close to about their recently deceased daughter, a cop showing a random civilian crime scene photos and getting him to play investigator.....
I’m mad the dad didn’t find creepy the children in a circle near nighttime with a girl in the middle and KY saying I’m going to get mom back… when dad went with the detective he couldn’t tell him Maybe 🤔 1 reaosm right away the last time he saw he son and the weird stuff happening. Apparently none of that rang a bell immediately. Like the detective had to give him clues about a cult maybe… it’s was getting me mad actually lol
Snuggled in at 10:30pm and ready to listen. The title sounds very familiar. Have you done this one before? Either way, I'm going to listen and 👍! Thanks Doc! Hope you and anyone reading this has a fantastic weekend!🤗💜🕷
Thank you, Dr Creepen!!❤
I hope everyone has an amazing weekend! Stay safe out there ❤
Let’s gooooo love Corpsechild and the doc combo wooooo
Great narration. Thanks
Yes let’s go!!!
Yeah, I'm not gonna bullshit Im a grown man and I cried when his kid died in his arms. That was heavy.
My only critique would be that the interrogation scene was written in a way that you put it all together way before it's revealed. I figured it out about a minute into the interrogation, but the scene lasted like 10 minutes. it should have been either trimmed down a bit, or written so that the reader puts it together at the same time as the protagonist. I get that he was in denial, but it takes away most of the impact of the reveal when you've already long since figured it out by the time it's acknowledged in the story. Because at that point, the characters are just acknowledging something you've already processed and it feels drawn out.
But know that I only give critical feedback to writers whose work I admire.
I really enjoyed this story. TYVM!
Great story, great narration. 👍
Narrator: "am I the best creepy pasta narrator on CZcams hahahahah might be! lol jk"
Also narrator: **litterally murmurs** "'Kai!' I screamed at the top of my lungs"
Hmmmhm
Great read Doc
Oh nice, CorpseChild story, eh? This oughta be good, he just doesn't miss.
Another great narration and story ! Corpse child is one of my favourite writers.
You always do the stories justice with the wonderful smooth voice of yours.
Honestly, extremely obvious what was going to happen as soon a the kid said he wanted mom back. Dead girl. Kid says he wants mom back. Ah, yeah, he did a sacrifice.
Fantastic.
I just love your voice and what a story! I have been listening to you for a while now and enjoy all your stories! ❤
New subscriber and well and truly hooked ❤
Corpsechild is such a good writer! I'm a bit upset Kai didn't make it tho 😭😭😭😭
Me:Who could’ve been so mad to do that to her? Also Me: Bad asz kids with a score to settle 😮
....why did no one give the father an inhaler? he sounds like he's always on the verge of an asthma attack
He'll yeah made it in time came as soon as I got the notification Let's gooo
Ky has the most oblivious grandmother ever there. She should have known something was going on and yet asked nothing?
and was leaving before he even got home with him,not bothering to wait to find out/help search!
@@felicityjohnston9276 yeah that struck me as odd too
@@RockStar_Love ❤️
This bothered me a lot. Why would she not just wait until he got back
Another great story
This was really good. I thought it would be supernatural!!!🎉
❤
Quite sad at the end,but great story….love your voice 😊
This is a great author.
Corpse-Child and The Doc .. the most amazing superlative duo in the business!!! Oh yes, I am ready for another fantastical tale spun by Corpse and narrated in a superb manner by the Doc 😊😊😊😊
Your voice is so creepy that it makes ghost stories fun to listen to and to keep you in thriller suspense 😂😂😂😊😊😊
Wow, that was a great story but the ending was so hard to take. 😢
Hmmm 🤔. Thanks for sharing this with us.
As if kids regular kids aren't frightening enough...
Let me express. As soon as I hear “by corpse child”. I lose
Mind just a little bit. Because between corpse child and crim that’s how my life rotates. Talk about two amazing authors am I right?!
One of my favorite tubers and a story while I play Ark Scortched earth? Sign me tf up.
As always your awesome keep on being awesome ❤
Hello good Dr., I think you’ve made a good choice in abandoning the practice of a long poem to precede every story. Now Sure, an occasional poem for just the right story, might fit nicely and enhance it. But you know better than most that not all styles and patterns are one size fits all and having a pre-narration poem for every story doesn’t quite work and isn’t a win for each one. So once again, I applaud your choice:)
You sound like Mufasa, I love it.
This story had me so edgy. This one was so good!!!
Love the story. The only real question im left with is why the cop didnt do anything to save the boy in the end.
Stumbling on this after just seeing Season 2 of From and then the movie The Offering. After midnight. Good times lol
Ooo, a Corpse Child story! Thank You Doctor! 🖤
❤ good story
I normally love any story by CC but I didn't care for this one. There were too many things that didnt make sense. Little things really but enough to distract me and take me out of it a bit. Dr C can make any story enjoyable though so still worth the listen!
Reminded me of Bradburys Zero Hour.
CC read by the Dr, you know it's good... hit the damn buttons y'all...
Poor Kai 😢
Top 3 comments! Excited to hear this one!!!
Dr Creepen, you should consider upgrading your microphone and/or audio processing. Your voice is sort of muddled, and the t's, s's, and ch's are overwhelming the overall clarity. ❤
Such a sad ending, man. The other people around MC/OP are also sus. Like, all these horrible things are happening and there’s no ounce of urgency or concern. Makes me think there’s a bigger conspiracy surrounding everything.
Well done. It's really a pleasure listening to a real human voice instead of the narrator taking the easy way out and switching to an AI "voice" with the occasional weird pronunciation, which is aggravating and distracting from the story line. Thank you for "keeping it real", and I am enjoying your accent.
At the end of the story im thinking those kids if anything will try to start a cult from prison im assuming children get sent to maximum security prison.
Prisoners fall prey to religion just like anyone else.
Well.. Kai did get to see his mom in the end I suppose… 😭😭
20:55 sheesh mom, what the hell? You didn’t hear about to neighbors daughter who was dismembered not even 24 hours ago?
😎👍
❤😊
Hey doc❤❤