its a but too fast-paced and some stuff are kinda a bit meaningless on certain stuff, like also some stuff barely has an explanation and is a bit too accepting but its nice in concept it just need to be refined
@user-pj1ef7qz4y thanks for saying it cause no one else has I’ve been trying to make them longer cause I did like three arcs alone in this part ima try make them longer and if I do a redo way better I always like the help
@@lilninjawhatifs9227 i see well im glad that i commented about it, i can see the potential of your story and i hope to see it in a much longer context. 😁
Can't wait for part 2
25:10
This was fun and interesting until Vilgax was brought in to cause unneeded trouble "for his legacy"
But it can become good
Make part 3
Part 2 plzzz
Can you do a play list
Got you
its a but too fast-paced and some stuff are kinda a bit meaningless on certain stuff, like also some stuff barely has an explanation and is a bit too accepting but its nice in concept it just need to be refined
@user-pj1ef7qz4y thanks for saying it cause no one else has I’ve been trying to make them longer cause I did like three arcs alone in this part ima try make them longer and if I do a redo way better I always like the help
@@lilninjawhatifs9227 i see well im glad that i commented about it, i can see the potential of your story and i hope to see it in a much longer context. 😁
14:29