"I Was A Law Enforcer In A Small Area, Weird Things Happened" Creepypasta
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Cecil - doesn't know what knives are
Cecil - says things like "most importantly"
Describes Sharpman''s appearance and tendencies in extreme detail
You mean the shart man
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Haha. VERY funny, @@dorklork4336
NO parent hears a scream and thinks it's a TV
No good parent***
alright, this is basically S.C.P but only specific areas in the world are affected by abnormalities and they all seem to work together instead of each being their own anomaly
it it is area based then dont be near me if you cant handld anomalies
@@raaston9761 this shit is fake
Its just Scp
- Reality warping deer god
-“Foundation”
-“Overseer”
-“anomaly”
-lotsa other stuff
HMMMMMMMM
SOUNDS KINDA FAMILIAR
SCP?
What?
There’s no deer god in SCP
Dank Memes SCP-2845, more commonly referred to as the Saturn Deer, was created by Djoric in 2014
Wingo's Meme Abyss Thanks for the info.
Dead?
“People die here?”
.....
“Anyway, that cloud over there looks like a donut, doesn’t it?”
Honestly sounds like a conversation that would be in devilman.
Dude seems drastically unbothered by his daughter dying twice 😂😂
Cats?
5 year old with a boys name has no idea what a knife is...
So are all the stories here prior to that attack?
My daughter is dead
BUT MORE IMPORTANTLY MY KNIFES
If she stole the knifes she made a fatal mistake... el padre dont like theivs
Watching this two years later.. and all I can hear is “The Shart Man” 😬😂
An actual mention of The Foundation!
Brogus Jeri holy fuck wherw
The SCP foundation?
@@jaygreen7415 Yeah
If this is supposed to be the scp foundation they butchered the codewords
@@KummFart Maybe a civilian division or maybe something the like GOC
New drinking game! Take a shot every time he says "sure enough"
Umm I would love a 200 part story! Come on!
Brogus Jeri I was thinking the same thing! Haha. Like a monster of the week type deal. So many cool things could be done here. Although, about three quarters in it started to lose me, not interest, still loved it, but was getting pretty confused. But the foundation and the director are still out there and so is that road. Then I’d wanna see more of or and to that gray figure he kept spotting. I just finished listening to the entirety and though, damn that hour and four went by too fast. So. I was thinking what you’re thinking then saw your comment.
Whatever, you heard and know as well. Just saying so much to work with. Give us our 200! Haha
dude for real! lol
Brogus Jeri YES
ikr
Same
Kinda feels like he got over his dead daughter pretty quickly. I mean, one moment “ my daughters a pincushion” and less than a minute later, “ anyway here are some stories”.
Like wut?
Wouldn't you 😏
FUCK THEM KIDS
It's called shit writing lol. Inconsistent, poorly paced , characters lack any believable emotion or personality . No signs of human intelligence present in the logic and actions of the protagonist. I feel like this author just started typing out a fever dream one night while still at 104°F , and after a few hours , without proof reading , sent er off to the internet to unfortunately be recorded by Mr creep and heard by all of us,. The victims in this situation.
Amnestics !
Does the so called “foundation” mean the organization called SCP foundation?
Aldo Guloy Inuniverse it is only known as the foundation
We think
Idk
The background looks like 610
:O *hugs you* fluffy :3
Fun fact. Goat mans bridge (mentioned in the story) is a real place! And I live a couple miles from it
Diablo got any stories?
Logan Stark not any ghost stories in the normal sense. But that place is EERIE like you feel nervous being there. The forest is also just quiet in general. Like the only noises you hear are from the river and people if you’re close by the bridge itself. Also i think about a year ago now they found a missing highschooler whos car crashed into the river. Sadly he didn’t make it.
The SCP Foundation is usually referred to as the Foundation, which means this could be referencing the SCP Foundation
All I can hear is SHART MAN
LOL he sharted!
I was getting worried no one would say anything. Lol
I read this comment right as he said that and laughed way too hard at that
I heard "Shark" or "Shart" man, so yeah
Chapi_Boi I totally heard that too ! Thought I was alone ! 😂
Has second chance to save his daughter, totally Fucked that up!
When your whinny brat won't stop wasting the phone bill
She would have never left my arms until the time had passed by several hours.
He didn't even really seem to care
Law enforcement and military creepypasta's are my favorite
Same
I just stumbled upon creepy pasta, def my favorites as well. Sorta hooked
Because of the glottal stop I kept hearing "shart-man"
Same
THE INSTANT I HEARD "ANOMALY" I UNDERSTOOD
WOO i like caps lock
It’s Fun :)
This story really suffered from consistency issues, but overall solid I guess.
Ikr..the first part just doesn't makes sense at all
@@scarletrose2272 I think the author didn't intend for a time skip nor did they plan from the start where everything was going to go. Perhaps it was intended as a one off that got popular, it happens.
I try to make sure mine are planned out, but I've yet to undertake a multiparter.
The first story is listed as if it was a one shot so I agree with @kevin. What’s in the video is split into 3-4 posts on Reddit.
Ah ok, that makes sense
My impression was of a (very) rough outline for a series
SCP INTENSIFIES
I really enjoyed this long story. Thanks Mr. Creeps.
"Vaccine against the great disease"
049 intensifies
iliah granovsky the aliens were warning us about the current virus
@@loganstark6097 well this aged like milk
@Skunk Ape i have accurate prediction skills
@Skunk Ape being a helghast grants abilities some consider unnatural
@Skunk Ape interesting ways indeed friend
waiting for a military or cop story they always have a killer story line
Facts they are always the best!
Boy, do I have stories for both! 👮♀️🌟
I love the military stories
I love how ur profuil is 2 spyderco knives
Fahed Awwad 0473 hey thanks your the first too either recognize that or say something.. well might as well tell you what they are a Spyderco paramilitary 2 with m 390 Steel and a Spyderco Domino with CTS 204p Steel both of them are a Bento Box exclusive.
I'm a writer and member of the SCP foundation and this is well described and presented, good job.
Edit: The real SCP foundation is a fictional creative-writing forum for anyone asking. The foundation just seems very realistic as the writers dedicate their time into bringing their stories to life by examining every detail and making sure that it makes sense verbally... but not logically.
So his daughter was stabbed, "her organs were pouring out, her bones were visible, not an inch of flash remainig, skin was tore clean off". So only a skeleton remained? And then the organs were pouring out from between the bones or?
Sorry I just had a hard time imagining this :p
Yeah, I did too. It seemed the author was trying to be as gruesome as possible and got carried away, ruining the visual.
Her skin had been removed but other tissue remained. So I’m assuming muscle and fat.
That’s not even the least clear part not only dose she (the wife) know about horrible paranormal activity but her husband probably told her about the “sharp man” or maybe the daughter did but then she’s killed in a un human gruesome way and she blames the dad like “nope musta been him can’t be the demon things”
@Gallow Black >do you have a toddler's understanding of anatomy?
Oh the irony!
@@katze6525 >Oh the irony!
Oh the irony!
id legit stay here for a 24 hour special
OH I UNDERSTAND THIS IS ABOUT THE THE SPC FOUNDATION
Edit: Damn 162 likes? Gg thanks bros
Looks like someone missed their amnestics administration. Would you mind meeting with one of our agents in an hour?
@@mahwiiiife408 You will never get me alive (or dead)
Eric Scott
YOU WILL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE !!!
FRĒĒDOM !!!!!!!
Spc foundation, Scuttling Poodle Candy.
BallPythonsTV Roblox and more do you mean *scp*?
I wonder if he arrested 6ix9ine
You 14
No u
No u
Banana
the dude arrested himself, wanna be gangsta moron
Phase 1: collect knives
Phase 2: ?
Phase 3: profit
Phase 2: stop time
Phase 4:murder
Phase 1.5: Warn Police Officer to leave Harmony Way
Phase 2: stabby stabby
man if someone took my knives I would be quite pissed I have a lot of money tied up in them
osmosis 01 spider co knives fucking suck. Fuck you
Mix Zombo lol triggered!!!
Well maybe try not to tie your money to your knives that way you don’t lose both so easily
@@synysterdax1593 he's talking about pocket knives...
@@RAAAAAAAAHHHHH1111 let me guess, cold steel lover? Benchmade maybe?
Any hour long creepypasta has me sold, anyone else agree?
the story is kinda a mess. I love stories where weird shit happens, but this one has no rules and makes no sense. The receptionist randomly falls in love with him, the beginning of the story where he loses his kid to the knife man could just be completely removed. The deer is capable of literally anything without any restrictions and randomly grows wings at one point? It just combines three great kind of stories (mysterious organization dealing in the paranormal, spooky road where weird shit happens, and the "I need to hunt down a monster that killed my family") but poorly. It's unnecessary to try to combine so many things into one, it just makes the whole thing too complicated without even bothering to explain how any of this fits together
It's separate stories but very loosely tied together. There are so many stories that there are holes everywhere but it's still great.
No u
I absolutely 💯 couldn’t agree MORE! It had potential but was just a hot mess!
Loved it! Love your voice on how you narrate the story! Bring us some more content.
So, He's in a Perpetual Inner-Dimensional Time Loop Where Him and His Wife Sheila's Child Dies, Even When They Adopted. He's Either Framed, They are Killed By A Creature, Or In A Rare Sad Case, Alzheimers.
Edit: Great Story Mr.Creeps. I'm a New Visitor to Your Channel and Love Your Readings. Thank you for Uploading this! ❤
Foundation:Scp stuff
Overseer: O5
H-class: D-class(Prisoner of the foundation)
Anomaly:Scp-001,002,003 etc
I love how you used a rendition of the God Emperor from "God-Emperor of Dune" for the background on this video, my favorite book! Idk if you are a fan of the series or if it was just a good pic for the video, but regardless I am liking this and subscribing!
OMG this is fantastic! I don’t want it to end!!
These are story’s about S.C.P foundation btw if you didn’t know
What's the pic from looks really badass looks like the flesh that hates
It's actually an illustration of the God-Emperor from the book "God-Emperor of Dune." It's a really good book, the fourth book of the "Dune" series by Frank Herbert. I won't reveal that creature's real name name in case you want to check out the series.
@@midnightsign294 I knew it looked familiar! Haven't read those books in a long time.
@@kari7403 I just finished rereading one of them. Definitely worth a second read or a listen on the audio book!
@@midnightsign294 Most definitely. Those are some of the very few books I can read more than once. So very glad to have read this comment. Now I'm going to have to go dig mine out and give it a read also! :-)
@@kari7403 I'm glad I could help :)
I love how the thumbnail is flesh clothing, flesh people, flesh giant, flesh guns, and a flesh city. All normal stuff
It took a long time, but, after finishing this story, I HAVE FINALLY HEAR ALL OF YOUR STORIES TO DATE! I hope you continue to put out amazing content and cannot wait to hear the next one tomorrow! I'm really looking forward to see the notification on my phone for tomorrow night's story!
Andrew has a crazy arsonal. Grappling hooks. Ha ha ha
Wow! I love love love this story er stories!! I think , to date, I love this one the best! Hope there's a part 2 so we can discover the director or so semblance of a power behind Harmony Way and it's odd occurrences. Would love to see what happens to him,or even if he gets a chance to time jump back...again! Thank you Mr Creeps! Love you!
I don’t usually feel this way, but this was one of the stories I wish was a full book series, it’s so good! One of my absolute favourites!
Wow what an amazing story, excellent job narrating it dude.
That place remind me of the cartoon gravity falls
That's my son's favorite cartoon
Like the episode where Mabel got 100 knives stabbed into her flesh.
I'm scrolling through his channel videos to find another to watch, I've seen the majority already but somehow I missed this jam, so good man and an hour long
Does this channel have a podcast so I don't have to keep my screen on for CZcams?
The writing on this one could be better. It's really hard to pay attention to because it's just not well written
ZarineBashire if you look at it as the perspective of the cop it kinda makes sense after this “cop” wasn’t an English professor or anything like that it that way it makes sense but yes I understand what you mean
yeah it needed an editor to fix consistancy.
Yo is it me, or is his thumb nail be looking fire every time??🔥🔥
RIP Chris
I like to think of these stories as being in their own universe and having nothing to do with the SCP foundation since it makes the stories a lot more interesting. Almost as if all of these stories are in their own parallel universe separate from one where the foundation exists. Yes I understand it says “the foundation” but I’m sure there are many other shadowy groups, organizations, entities that are referred to as the foundation. Kinda like how people reference 3 letter organizations.
Foundations in alternate universes are still SCP cannon
William White True, but I also feel like that of the infinite universes. There’s got to be at least one in which the notion of SCP being an organization or an entity in any form is non existent. But that’s just my take. Good way to separate a small creative work from a much larger work with a large following and presence in mainstream culture.
Did anyone bust out laughing when he stated talking about that deer
*sees bird with face*
"lol that cloud looks like a donut"
Truly awesome narration...I love the long stories so much! 😊✌👍👀
Thanks for the long story dude 💜
It was very enjoyable :>
I live four hours away from Harmony Way, Texas 😂
Good luck
Got any stories?
You think I'd be opposed to a dull day of these things? Bro, I drive more than 10 hours a day, 5-6 days a week. I'll listen to this shit all the time if possible.
Great story got a splash of Lovecraft😈 definitely need to do more stories on this
Where or how is any of it Lovecraft like? I don't see anything close to his style or creatures, world, etc. Maybe you picked up on something I didn't.
Keep the long stories coming!!
Man i first started listening to scary storys from you and now you set the bar! haha i love your stories
Whenever I heard the foundation I immediately thought of the SCP foundation then I realized everyone else commented about it too lol
Mr creeps I love your narrations man there so badass I actually fall asleep to them lol keep making them
So gun fired doesn't work but a molotov cocktail works. So get a flame thrower. :)
Wait this dude just Screw with Foundation and Live!? What a MADLAD
Daughter: dies
Title of the video: weird things happened
"What is a knife? Also my friend is covered in knives." 😂😂
I didn’t know what to think of this one at first, but after listening, it was awesome :)
So speaker and his wife both went through all the anomaly and foundation stuff, but she left him when their daughter died because she didn't believe his story about the Sharp Man. Logic.
This cracks me up😆
Nothing funnier than creepycomedypasta.
Why do I play animal crossing while listening to this? The scariest thing in this game is how much debt i have.
I could listen to 200 stories of this
If a five year old didn’t know what knifes where I would be seriously concerned
So much common sense from these guys, i love it
This is so good I want more
"Damn Harmony Way, you scary" HA
I KNEW IT I FREAKING KNEW IT the foundation is the SCP foundation
Thats just my friend Bob, he just escaped the gulag.
This is a good one!!
This was an epic story. Sad but epic.
Fantastic stories and reading 😃
So far this is the best one I cried when Chris died coz he kinda reminds me of my brother that I haven’t seen us 2 years u would like to see this become a movie
Spoiler alert
Alexander Schoen 😂
I love when Mr creeps makes long videos
Ok. Hands down the best narrator of them all. Is there some way to tell which one is Wich in the description of something. Lol.
I love your videos man keep it up
Doesn't know what knives are, but knows that the "Sharp Man" is covered with them.
Good point!! Lol
That HR Geiger-esque image is creepy and awesome.
Now, You know. I think. Now hear me out, maybe, well. Now, this was badly written as hell.
I saw it through to the end thinking it might get better. It didn't.
Same- and I’m shocked by how many people on here were raving about it... I thought it was a good premise and the concept was there but the execution was really not well done. It was jarbled, confusing, contradicting itself at points, and the dialogue was very basic and characters had no development. I guess this guy had two timelines, as I’m reading in some comments, but I’d missed that, it was buried In all the nonsense and further complicated by the non linear timeline... I wanted to like it though l really did.
Thanks bro awesome as always but I really enjoyed this one and I like the longer ones like this anyway thanks again bro
Now this is the type of story I love
"People die here!?"
*Quickly distract him*
"DOUGHNUT CLOUD!"
One of the best stories I herd in a while 👍🏼👍🏼
I've never been so attached to creepypasta characters before.
first one I've ever listened to, one of my favs
Hold up how did she not know what a knife was but knew the sharp man was covered in knives?
Why would a five year old not know what a knife was. And also why is this dude so convinced his young daughter had them. I'm immediately taken out of the story
I want them 200 extra parts to this story
for once a mention of the foundation
Great story!