Good Omens Inspired Fan Song - "We Could" - [PLEASE READ DESCRIPTION]
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[re-uploaded due to an audio issue]
[[Edit: UM..... THANK YOU?!?!?! SO MUCH?!?!?!?! WTF?!?!?!?! All the love and feedback on this has been absolutely incredible and I can't put into words how much I appreciate it! To address a couple of comments I got since I'm starting to loose track of what all I've responded to:
1. I likely won't be uploading this anywhere else for a small number of reasons.
2. I don't mind if you share it on the subreddit, I'm honored actually! I don't have a reddit account, so I likely won't see the conversations over there, but I appreciate it regardless!
3. Until effectively the end of April, I'm going to be incredibly busy with my last year of college. I have absolutely no way of knowing what kind of content I'll be able to make or when I'll be able to upload it. I am an illustration student, so all of my last batch of classes involve heavy studio work and time on my part.
4. Thank you so so so much to everyone who has liked, commented, subscribed, and shared this video, it means the world to me! I hope you're all healing from episode six and steadily growing as excited and hopeful as I am for a Season 3!!
Until next time!]]
Twice in my life now I've been moved to make a fan song about something, and I'm really glad that season 2 of this show was able to pull another out of me. It was incredible and clever and absolutely heartbreaking, I can't recommend this show to people enough.
Neil, Michael, David, and everyone involved, you all did a phenomenal job, and I so hope that we get to see more.
I hope you all enjoyed this and are having a good cry over it like I did writing it lol. Till next time everyone, and I hope you're all having wonderful days.
Due to injuries an hand-pain, I can't really play guitar effectively anymore, so the music for this is from this link:
apcmusic.beatstars.com/beat/h...
Produced by APC
Lyrics
[v1]
Take a bite
Take the dive
Wrong from right
We follow
Through the night
Losing sight
Of what we might be
Tomorrow
It’s changing
We’re trying
I’m lying
You’re hiding
I’m tired
Of fighting
Just dance with me
In our garden
[Chorus 1]
I feel the words crash against my lips
I know we’re running out of time
Why are we so scared to change this
I can see it in your eyes
Through the fire
Through the flood
I have knelt
Where you stood
Nothing lasts forever
But I know we could
[v2]
Turn away
Close the door
They don’t need to know
What we do
Just breathe
Angel, please
Can’t you see
I can’t lose you
I’m falling
You’re fighting
I’m crawling
You’re flying
I’m tired
Of fighting
It's just me left
In our garden
[Chorus 2]
Finally the words fall from my lips
Pretend there’s still just enough time
Please tell me it cannot end like this
But I can see it in your eyes
Through the fire
Through the flood
I have knelt
Where you stood
Nothing lasts forever
But I think we could
[bridge]
Prove them wrong
Make things right
Take this chance
And hold tight
Could we have been
Enough
Could we have been
Us
Through it all
Rise and fall
When you'd call
I’d follow
Blind from the light
We held too tight
Now your voice
Rings hollow
[Chorus 3]
Let the words fall from your lips
I know you see it in my eyes
How could we let it end like this
I thought we were on the same side
Through the fire
Through the flood
Now I’m left
Where you stood
Nothing lasts forever
But I’d hoped we could - Zábava
"Nothing lasts forever"??? HOW DARE YOU???? WHY DID YOU THINK THIS VIOLENCE WAS NECESSARY???? THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND SO PAINFUL I'M CRYING 😭😭
Because its fun xD we’re all gonna suffer together lmao, thank you!!
It took me a few listens/views to realize it, but in the final chorus, she matched up her singing the lyric "nothing lasts forever" with Aziraphale saying it to Crowley. 😭😭😭💔
"But I hoped we could" gets me every time 😭😭😭
“But I know we could” 😭
No ones talking about "Now its just me in our garden"? Cause that's the line that broke me.
All the lines broke me 🥲 That one in particular tho was so fun to sing every single time
I’m not crying my eyes are just cosplaying as a waterfall
Yo mood 🤣
FROM "i know we could" TO "i think we could" TO "i hoped we could" AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA STOP 😭😭😭😭😭 THIS WAS SO GOOD I LISTENED TO LIKE LIKE 4 TIMES
Thank you thank you thank you!!! I love having subtle lil changes like that in my lyrics, im so glad you liked it!!!
"could we have been us?"
and from "know" to "think" to "HOPED"? This is so painful and beautiful at the same time...
I want to comment on every line, they're so perfect for them and their history
And your voice is incredible!! It conveys Crowley's sorrow so well
Thank you so much for uploading this :,))
Thank you so much!! Im so glad you enjoyed it!!
this made me sob holyyyy. this is so beautiful. „could we have been us“… omg
I think the best compliment I could give you is that I just started crying only a few lyrics in. This wrecked me all over again. But thank you, because this is amazing beyond words. I hope Neil, David and Michael hear your song someday.
Oh my god Id be absolutely honored if they did. Thank you so much, im glad you liked it!!!!
I was crying just reading the lyrics on the subreddit. actually hearing it tears me apart. it's beautiful.
Through the fire
Through the flood
I have knelt
Where you stood
Nothing lasts forever
But I thought we could
OMG how is this so perfect? Playing this on repeat and reliving the moment Crowley's heart was broken before his own eyes... 💔😭
Thank you thank you for pulling this piece of your soul out for us! 🙏 This song should be known by all fans and be in the S3 soundtrack! 💖
Ahh!!! Thank you so much!! Im so glad you enjoyed it!!!
Me too it's been on a loop for 3 days off and on, mstly on!
This is seriously a fabulous song. Not just a fan song- take this further, it’s amazing. And your voice is original- reminds me a little of Tracy Chapman’s Fast Car.
Would love to see the lyrics. 💕👍👍👍👍brava!
Lyrics are posted in the description, if you’re interested, and thank you so so so much!!!
This song is a miracle of its own. I hope that Neil and the others get a glimpse of it. Thank you so much!
Id be honored if they did, thank you!!!
😭Super new Good Omens fan here. I've watched both seasons twice now. For some reason, I have yet to cry at the season 2 ending. Probably because all I feel is shock.
But this song had the water works going immediately. My favorite part is "Through the fire, Through the flood, I have knelt, Where you stood, Nothing lasts forever, But I know we could" ❤
Fantastic job!!! What a sweet masterpiece you've put together! 👏
Thats the very first line I wrote actually lol, thats the one that gets me too, im so glad you enjoyed it!!
Came across this just a few days ago and I'm already at the point where I find myself humming/singing it while going about my day. Beautiful voice & lyrics.
AH THANK YOU!
This is NOT what I thought I needed but damn did i cry 😭 those lyrics and your voice and those two ineffable idiots is absolute perfection and this is botj amazingly well put together, beautiful and heart wrenching lyrics, and tied into a powerful and amazing voice.
"Nothing lasts forever" How bloody dare you ahahdhsh
"I thought/knew we could" bro so did i 😭
"I'm tired of fighting" both of them been fighting way too hard too long and my HEART
"Angel, please, I can't lose you" *dies in Good Omens angst*
"It cannot end like this" oh but it fucking did
And there are just so many lyrics that I could go on and on and on but im going to go off now and cry again over these two 😭
AHHHHHHH thank you so much!!!!!!!!! This honestly turned out to be one of my favorite songs I've ever written and I'm so glad yall are enjoying it so much!!
@@kayoticLightning I LOVED it! Its an amazing set of lyrics and if I could sing like you I would be singing more lol dont know how much that ending still affects you but I would definitely love to see a piece from Aziraphale's perspective (because i need more angst i guess?? XD)
Fantastic job! This series has changed my life I adore it and im happy to see the fandom contributions and everyone's love for it!
This song is perfect in every way: a beautiful melody, interesting chord progression, gorgeous and heartbreaking lyrics with clever metaphors that seamlessly fall into the neat structure of the song.
And all those represent the characters so incredibly well! One of the best fan songs I’ve listened to yet (and not just from Good Omens).
Oh my goodness, thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!
@@kayoticLightning my friend who showed me that video said the same thing, “one of the best fan songs” and “sophisticated and evocative writing”. We’ve seen so many mediocre character songs but yours here is really good, so kudos to you! Would love to hear more from you.
@@flusel4949 Well thank you to your friend as well then! I'm so glad you both enjoyed it!!!
This is incredible! I wish it was on Spotify so I could queue it nonstop.
The lyrics wreck me I don’t even know what to say
Im so glad you like it, thank you!!!
I would like to say that this song healed me but i am afraid that is not possible and it ripped my heart a bit more open but i think in that context it is definitely a good thing. From this moment on this song is my lifesaving ship from all that endless pain out there even though it makes my wounds bleed when I am on it.
Reading this made my heart do the minecraft getting shot with an arrow sound, good job 👍
@@kayoticLightning watching this made my eyes imitate a waterfall
Omg...I don’t know if I can properly articulate the words to describe how much this song hit me in the FEELS. It's amazingly beautiful and you should be proud to have sang and written something so gorgeous. Just joined the GO fandom a month ago and I'm still not okay! Hope Neil, Michael, and David maybe see this one day. Now excuse me while I go listen to this on repeat.
Ahhhhhhhh thank you!!!
okay, first of all: how dare you. how dare you make me cry. how dare you make me cry 10 times throughout the TWO GODDAMN TIMES that i have watched this. how. dare. you.
second of all: this is unbelievable. unbelievably awesome. its awesomness is ineffable. it is truly beautiful, the melody, the singing, the editing. bloody brilliant. i cannot express how much i love this. truly a masterpiece that should have millions of views.
last fo all: how dare you. the lyrics are so heartbreaking it would hurt less if somebody did an open heart surgery on me without anesthetics. as if my heart wasnt already broken. jesus christ. lord. satan. somebody. give me strength.
I dare gladly lmao, but im so glad you enjoyed it!!!!!
I love Good Omens and I absolutely love this song. You absolutely nailed the Season 2 sentiment.
Thank you!!!
This is pure pain directly in my veins and I love it
Thank you!!!
Just found this and it's so good. The angel please gets me everytime.
Thank you!!!
The show broke me. Verse 2 made water leak from my eyes.
it be like that lmao
I just finished watching this show the other night, it's me and my best friends favorite and istg ive never cried so much over a show. Watching this made me cry even more but I love it, it's a really fitting song for them and you did so well ;-;
AH THANK YOU SO MUCH!!
OH MY GODD! This is so beautiful but so painful but amazing all at once! I’m literally crying rn. Somehow this needs to find its way to Neil Gaiman. He needs to hear the masterpiece of music you created inspired by his ideas. And David and Michael. They would also love this! This is so so beautiful and you are amazingly talented ❤️❤️❤️😇😈
Oh my god thank you so much!!!!!!!!
Just wondering what the cords/ notes are on this? I’m trying to learn guitar and I wondered if it could be played on the guitar
Thanks :)
It would be lovely to fit at least SOME of this into the new series
Incredible song and wonderful lyrics…”nothing lasts forever but I think we could” gives me goosebumps, thanks for this artwork 💔
I’m also very glad to see so talanted people in our fandom
thank you so much!
Ok this absolutely broke me. I'm sitting with my mouth open and I'm crying.
WOW
This is SO BEAUTIFUL!!!! The music is amazing, your vocals are heavenly, the lyrics!!???!?!?! Are you kidding me? Perfection.
This deserves way more views than it has.Thank you so much for this song!
Ahhh thank you!!!!
I keep thinking if I watch it on loop enough times, I'll become immune and stop crying over it. After an hour, I can finally report:
It doesn't work.
None of us are immune, I still cry too lol 😂
Through the fire
Through the flood
I have knelt
Where you stood
this slaps
god, i love this
Ahhh thank you!!
How are you even REAL??!! The edit is beautiful!! The song is everything!!! Thank you ever so much for sharing your art with fandom! Many many kudos!!💓💓💖
Thank you so much!!!!!
This is really wonderful. I’m also writing a song to process my pain at the end of season 2!! I love your lyrics and melody, and the piano fits perfectly.
Ah thank you! Id love to hear your song when it’s finished!
@@kayoticLightning I would love to share when it’s done. It might take a while yet, I don’t have a lot of free time. I’ve been mapping out in my head which video clips will go where. But I have to record the song first…. And then figure out how to do video editing (haha)!
@@kayoticLightning I finished!! czcams.com/video/d3d1rMVvcaU/video.html
We making it out of Heaven with this one boys🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
lmao XD
Screaming, Crying, Heartbroken. I'm BLOWN AWAY. this was so stunning, and so heartbreaking.
Thank you so much!!!!!
OMG this song is absolutely beautiful and so well done as well. If my heart didn’t hurt enough because of these two it definitely does now, so sweet and heartbreaking at the same time. Absolutely well done.
AHH!! Thank you so much!!!
This song made me cry! You have a wonderful voice and this is my new favourite song ❤
Please continue to make more songs!
Thank you so much!!!
This is really amazing, I can't stop listening to it! Thank you so much for this gift!
AHH thank you!!!
oh, this is stunning. the lyrics are gut punch after gut punch, and your voice is gorgeous--so emotional and with such riveting emphasis in certain parts. i feel like i've been hollowed out with an ice cream scooper, and i mean that as a very high compliment. phenomenal work. is there anywhere i could toss some money at you for this song? you deserve it, and i'd love to have it in my ineffable husbands playlist.
Ah!! Thank you so much!!! I don’t have anything set up for money as of right now, but wow I appreciate the thought!! I am planning on making a patreon when I start uploading my webcomic but I dont have a timeline for that just yet.
Honestly you should know I listen to this daily. Often multiple times. I love it so much.
This is amazing and you are incredibly talented! Thank you for sharing this with us. I love fan created songs, and it doesn't happen enough IMHO so I was so happy to find this!
Im so glad you like it, thank you so much!!
This song is gouging my heart out...
Seriously, just going to listen to this on repeat until my face stops leaking.
Thank you!!
Would you mind if I shared this on the Good Omens subreddit?
@@mariecurious9085 I'm listening it on repeat too...
@@mariecurious9085 I would be honored! Go right on ahead, thank you!
Omg this was so beautiful!! I can’t believe someone made a song about them aaaa ❤☺️
Thank you!!!!!
This song just got passed around a Discord server after a Good Omens rewatch and... my goodness, it really is heartbreaking and so, so beautiful. Gorgeously done!
This made me cry. Thank you so much for this beautiful song. I felt it in my heart. 💔
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
OHHH. This is incredible. Immediately after watching I had to replay the song on its own.
I've been reading metas, writing metas, and gorging on fan art for weeks... This is the first time I've cried. 😖😖
Ah thank you!! I am happy to have supplied for you fan content needs lol
This is both beautiful and epic. I can that you really enjoy the show and put your all into this song. Thanks for sharing your brilliance. ❤
Aw thank you so much!!!!!
THIS IS DEVASTATINGLY BEAUTIFUL. HOLY HELL
AH THANK YOU!
Are you serious?
Why does everyone in this fandom wants to hurt me?
Its So beautyfull it made me wanna lough, cry and scream at the same time!
Its So wonderfull!!
Ahhhh thank you!! I’m glad you enjoyed it!!
this is a masterpiece
Thank you! I kinned Crowley too hard to not write it from his POV lol, I'm glad you liked it!
3 months on and this still makes me cry. Achingly beautiful, such perfect lyrics.... ngkk grrrnk 💔💔💔💔
thank you!!!
THIS IS SO GOOD AND YOU ARE SO SO SOOO UNDERRATED!!! KEEP IT UP MATE AND I'M SURE YOU'LL GO PLACES :))
Thank you!!!!!!!
:)))@@kayoticLightning
This is amazing! I’m speechless. I need to hear this song again and again. It’s the new Come With Me!
Thank you!!!
This is so beautiful and tragic, im obsessed
Thank you!!!!
Same
im so happy youtube showed me this, its absolutely heartwretching, your voice is beautiful, the lyrics are clever and the emotion in your voice is perfect, and piano is always good for things like this.. i wll just go and listen several more times 😭😭😭
Ahhhhh Thank you so much!!!
F*ck you for making me bawl my eyes out at 7am in the morning. But also thank you for creating such a wonderfully heart wrenching song🤧💖
Thank you and also I’m sorry 🤣❤️❤️
i am speechless and unwell, sobbing hard in the dark corner. masterpiece
Ah thank you! We're all sobbing in the dark corner with you my friend lol
HOWW COULD YOUUUUU WITH THAT ENDDDDD IT WAS AS PAINFUL AS THE SHOW, AND I MEAN THAT IN THE BEST WAY, THE SONG IS SO INCREDIBLE BUT I AM ON THE VERGE OF TEARS HERE!
IMAGINE HOW I FELT WHEN THE UNIVERSE SNIPPED ME OUT OF NOWHERE WITH THE LINES IN THE MIDDLE OF DINNER WITH MY GRANDMOTHER LOL fr I'm glad you like it though, thank you!!
@@kayoticLightning PDHEHEGRHR I HADN'T EVEN THOUGHT OF THAT- urgghhh you have created something truly beautiful here, that's all I can say.
Just listened to this like 30 times in a row while stuck in traffic, and I genuinely wished the traffic jam would never end.
Ahh!! Im glad to have helped you pass the time lol, thank you!!
@kayoticLightning I can't help harmonizing with the vocals when I listen. I would love to record and send it to you. Do you know how I might go about doing that?
@@mariecurious9085 Not that I can think of right now, but I'd love to hear it eventually!
@@kayoticLightning I did this thing... czcams.com/video/2_0A1_8g_9M/video.html
This song is absolutely stunning, by god… I am a singer myself and this right here? Wow- I’ll be singing this to myself and recommending this song to others to listen to as this is truly gorgeous!! We’ll done! The writing was beautiful and your tone is gorgeous! ^^
Thank you. Your song made me almost cry for the 5th time this week (I watched 2nd season a bit late, so the feels are almost fresh hahaha). Omg, it's just so perfect! Thanks for this contribution to the fandom, pure gold I swear 💕
Everyone Like and Comment so the algorithm pushes this to more GO fans. This is amazing art
AH THANK YOU!
if I ever need to cry at any specific moment, all I gotta do is think about this and the end of season 2.
This is amazing and the saddest thing in my playlist.
I’m heartbroken 😭😭💔and this is beautiful (like crowleys nebula and zira smile) who the hell…heav…. Who the ducks gave you permission to create such beauty and love !!!! And why am I crying 😭
WHO THE DUCKS, I HAVE TO START USING THAT LMAO!! Thank you so much!!!
The good thing about s2 having a bad ending is that i am currently going through heartbreak and this helps me cope
Beautiful. Just beautiful. 😥
Thank you so much!
This is one of the songs of all time!
Lol thank you!!!!!
Idk if I already wrote a comment but Idc I write it again. Heartbreak in song form. Wonderfully painful.
Thank you so much! Im glad we’re all suffering together lol
Also you are so sweet for your voice, talent and gratitude to every comment... thanks but to you!! From Spain. Diying in the waiting for S3 and in loneliness (apart from the internet) about my GO obssession (and everything else really...)
i can’t stop watching this
I'm crying 😭 beautiful music, beautiful voice, beautiful lyrics and a great video. Thank you so much for creating this gem, and sharing it with us ❤
Thank you so much!!!!!
This is truly beautiful beyond further description.
I have listened to this song countless times and I become sobbing mess every single time 😭😭😭
What to say perfection. I've been bingeing Good Omens content on loop since finishing season 2 just last week. And this is the most perfect heartwrenching edit I've seen for the two of them. You are a wonderful song writer
Oh my God, this is so heartbreakingly beautiful and legit caused me physical pain 😭
Bro it's so beautiful and fits totally in the two of them, and your voice is so good and aaaaa i just loved this so much and almost cried, it's really wonderful
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh thank you!!!
I'm crying, this is amazing
Thank you!!
THIS IS SO DAMN BEAUTIFUL I CAN'T😭
Thank you!!!
Just watched it again and, oh my God, your lyrics!!!! They are heart-wrenchingly perfect. 💔🐍😇💔
Thank you!!!
Late to the game but OH MY GOD, pun intended. Saving for my next episode of crying myself to sleep over those two morons.
lmao, thank you!
Amazing how much creativity this beautiful fan community has to offer, well done! 💖
Thank you!!
Thank you for posting the lyrics because i was singing along to this while trying not to cry 😢 hope Neal and the team see this 🥰❤️
Oh my God 😢 it's perfect, it's beautiful and now I'm crying
Thank you!!
The "angel please" part kills me every time and yes I am listening to this on repeat I'm totally normal about them 😢
This song is incredible. The lyrics are so well crafted, it keeps getting stuck in my head. It no longer hurts, it feels healing somehow. Amazing job!
ah thank you!!!! I'm glad its helping now!!
Absolutely gorgeous... I didn't need to be happy today... no not at all 😭💔😈😇💔😭
Lmao thank you!! we all must suffer together lol
Wow. The words, the music, the edit and your voice all combined to make this absolutely perfect! This one is going in my favorites folder. You are very talented and this song just perfectly encapsulates the relationship that Crowley has with Aziraphale. Thank you so much for creating this and sharing it with us! Cheers!
thank you so much!!!!!
My heart shattered but it's beautiful.
Great song
I really like it
Happy to see fan made song
It matches the story of them
❤
Thank you!
This just so good. You are amazing and I am so happy to see that this show has sparked such creativity in others as well. I have been writing like a fiend! ❤
ahhhhhh thank you so much!!
Oh my goddd this is beautiful, I'm crying
Thank you!!
WOW! The lyrics are perfect👏👏👏
Thank you!!!!!
the part that broke me in good omen S. 2 was not ''nothing lasts for ever'' or ''i forgive you'' it was ''we could have been... us''
Oh my god same, that line haunted me for days
@@kayoticLightning yeah and the fact that the intro probably wont start with crowley adna aziraphale walking 2gether
Edit: also quick quiestion whenh will this be on spotify i need it on my playlist
@@frejaviolahrningdyhr100 I'm hesitant to put it up since I'm unsure how that would work since I had to purchase a license for the instrumentals. Plus I've never uploaded anything to spotify before, so I'm not sure how to go about doing that in the first place lol
@@kayoticLightning ah that alright i understand
I mean somebody send this to david tennant and michael sheen pls
I would quite literally burst into flames if either of them saw this lmao
This is incredible!
This is genuinely excellent ❤
Oh god, this is so so gorgeous!
this is perfect, i love it.
Wow this is so lovely and heartbreaking!!! So glad I stumbled across it! Thank you for sharing it!
Thank you so much!!
This is beautiful and I'm crying again 😭
Thank you!!!!
This is heart achingly beautiful and you are so talented you have touched so many people with this wonderful video, thank you for sharing this song with us
Ahhh thank you so much!!!!!
Really beautiful!!
*oooo hoo hoo* I don't have time to watch this rn but the production value is AMAZING, I'm excited
Thank you!
Very sad and sweet. Impressive.
Thank you!!!
This is absolutely beautiful. Very well done.
Thank you!!!!!