BAND 9 IELTS Writing Task 2 SAMPLE Essay | PROBLEM - SOLUTIONS

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Komentáře • 450

  • @FasTrackIELTS
    @FasTrackIELTS  Před 3 lety +132

    Hi guys, don't forget to DOWNLOAD the list of recent IELTS Writing & Speaking topics and the PDF with the sample answer (#FT4). Go to FasTrack IELTS on Telegram: t.me/IELTSFasTrack

  • @rlynstar1459
    @rlynstar1459 Před 2 lety +203

    Hi Asiya, I would like to thank you for your videos. I just received my academic test results - speaking 7, writing 7, listening 8.5 and reading 9. I didn’t have to attend a review class, I just followed your tips and practiced speaking with my friend. I just want you to know that you helped change my life. God bless you.

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Před 2 lety +22

      Very well done and good luck with whatever you took this exam for!

    • @not_jyx
      @not_jyx Před 2 lety +3

      wth reading 9? how

    • @lally1094
      @lally1094 Před 2 lety +4

      Reading 9 ? This is impossible 😥

    • @rlynstar1459
      @rlynstar1459 Před 2 lety +6

      @@lally1094 it is possible. If I was able to do it, you can do it too.

    • @rlynstar1459
      @rlynstar1459 Před 2 lety +1

      @@not_jyx practice. I took the computer based exam. Asiya’s tips really helped a lot. Read and follow the instructions carefully. You can do it

  • @yassinkamel.
    @yassinkamel. Před 3 lety +202

    your "Let's get started!" makes me feel like I already got an 8.5 !

  • @CravingPoetry
    @CravingPoetry Před 3 lety +45

    Hie Asiya, I received an overall band 7 score yesterday 30/04/2021. I am happy and wanted you to know that your videos helped me a lot. Thank you 💖

  • @explorewithfestus
    @explorewithfestus Před 3 lety +87

    As non-biodegradable wastes like plastics continue to accumulate and contribute to environmental problems, ‘recycling’ has become a very important global topic. For some reasons, people have not developed the culture of promoting the re-use of materials. This essay will examine possible explanations for this and also present practical solutions to this issue

    • @FrangoTraidor
      @FrangoTraidor Před 2 lety +4

      on the whole that's good. just do away with words such as "very" and "important", as these are strongly recommended against on the actual test

    • @explorewithfestus
      @explorewithfestus Před 2 lety +10

      @@FrangoTraidor Thanks, got an 8 in the actual test in June though

    • @adukeyonwato6196
      @adukeyonwato6196 Před 2 lety +2

      My test is next week can you give me tips and materials pls

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  • @eddiedans87
    @eddiedans87 Před 2 lety +29

    You're one of the channels I got inspiration from when I took my IELTS a few days ago, and it helped me tremendously! I got an 8.0 band score overall, and I can't thank you enough for all that you do for us test takers!

    • @rizwanziyad
      @rizwanziyad Před 2 lety

      Can u provide me ur watsapp number please ??

  • @blissmint
    @blissmint Před 2 lety +4

    Love it! Thank you so much for teaching us all these great lessons!

  • @aestheticsbysimra3234
    @aestheticsbysimra3234 Před 3 lety +137

    Took the IELTS last week and I got an overall 8.5 and your videos helped a lot! Thank you so much ❤️

    • @bluesky8418
      @bluesky8418 Před 3 lety +6

      Hi hope you’re fine. How did you prepare mean any materials or you just followed this lady ?

    • @s.p.777
      @s.p.777 Před 3 lety +5

      Perhaps you're lying through your nose

    • @aestheticsbysimra3234
      @aestheticsbysimra3234 Před 3 lety +6

      @@bluesky8418 Hi, I also followed Edx video’s a bit, they give some practical info as well as tips. You can sign up and watch most videos for free. Next to that I watched a lot of her videos and practice!! Like a lot! Hope this helped:)

    • @sarahsidrah5544
      @sarahsidrah5544 Před 3 lety +7

      @@s.p.777 Perhaps you’ll never know.

    • @rishikeshsawant7322
      @rishikeshsawant7322 Před 2 lety +1

      @@s.p.777 😂😂😂

  • @amirakoroma5336
    @amirakoroma5336 Před 3 lety +10

    Here's my intro
    Lately, recycling of waste materials has been a trend which has environmental benefits as well as job creation and innovation. Despite, reusing of waste has a tremendous possibility of contributing to individual, national and global economies, yet most people neglect its essence. With many reasons for failing to recycle waste products, lack of awareness raising and innovation skills on re-usable refuse are primary.

  • @starling93
    @starling93 Před 3 lety +110

    I received my IELTS result today. I scored an overall 8 and I just want you to know that your videos helped me A LOT during my preparation before i take the test.
    So, thank you very much 🙏

    • @lesyafly7765
      @lesyafly7765 Před 3 lety

      Hello, what’s in writing section?

    • @starling93
      @starling93 Před 3 lety +2

      @@lesyafly7765 Sorry for late reply, for task 1 i got pie chart n a table about land degradation in 4 areas around the world, units measured in percentage. For task 2, i got why social media becoming increasingly common as source of news and is it a positive or negative development.

    • @lesyafly7765
      @lesyafly7765 Před 3 lety +1

      @@starling93 thank u, Fenny! what band in writing u scored ?

    • @milenamartirosyan6580
      @milenamartirosyan6580 Před 2 lety

      Reallly? with such grammar I can hardly believe you could score 8

    • @stepbroimhardstuckinvalorant
      @stepbroimhardstuckinvalorant Před 2 lety +1

      @@milenamartirosyan6580 the youtube comment section isn't an IELTs exam. Stop being so daft.

  • @leiadava1868
    @leiadava1868 Před 2 lety +4

    Came back here so that i can thank Asiya, finally i was able to get the required score i need to practice my profession here in UK. Thank you for all the lessons, videos, and boosting my morale above all. Take care always ❤️

  • @aayraworld3496
    @aayraworld3496 Před 2 lety +3

    Truly grateful for such clear yet advanced use of writing. Learning so much from you mam🙏🏻

  • @user-yv3yj9qf5l
    @user-yv3yj9qf5l Před 3 lety +1

    so clear explanation! thanks you a lot, I'll certainly practice taking all things you've mentioned into account

  • @maxliyosobirova9358
    @maxliyosobirova9358 Před 3 lety +3

    Hey Asia. Your videos , all of them are super beneficial, they are helping me to boost my score🤩Good luck in your work❤

  • @rinslythennakoon8452
    @rinslythennakoon8452 Před 2 lety +1

    It's appreciated your iconic way of teaching....thanks a lot for the tricky points that you have raised nicely.....!!!!!

  • @samridhimishra1946
    @samridhimishra1946 Před 2 lety +71

    Hey! Let me know your thoughts on this essay.
    Writing Task 2 (practice)
    The environment suffers from severe damage because of the misuse and over-exploitation of the resources on earth. This problem escalates to its peak when many people do not recycle or reuse objects. If this misconduct continues, humans will be the cause of degradation of the environment and endangerment of exotic animals’ species. In this essay, I will address some main problems that lead to environment degradation and share simple ways to solve them.
    The major reasons why many people do not recycle waste materials are lack of awareness and facilities. It is quite evident that this problem is mainly in third world countries or areas that authorities are unable to access. Firstly, the reason why people do not recycle is because they are not aware of the benefits of recycling. Recycling leads to less waste which naturally in turn keeps our surroundings clean. Besides, reusing materials is cost efficient and economical. One way to overcome this obstacle is to set up awareness campaigns with the help of social media or talk to people in your locality about it. Another action is to write to local newspapers and spread the word.
    The second challenge is the lack of governmental facilities. Sadly, sometimes many people have no choice but to throw away waste materials because of the lack of appropriate organizations that can recycle waste. However, the solution is straightforward. We can reuse waste materials at home easily. For example, use old shirt as a kitchen rag, use soda bottles and plastic bags for storage, and donate used books to charities or schools.
    In conclusion, the steps to solve environmental degradation are easy. I believe that it can only be solved if all of us come together and incorporate these practices in our daily life. Our small steps will create a better earth for generations to come.

    • @fattyfatty709
      @fattyfatty709 Před 2 lety +2

      superb

    • @mukaddastaj5223
      @mukaddastaj5223 Před 2 lety +20

      I read the inro only and already noticed a huge mistake you did. You're starting too far away from the topic. Here you're not supposed to talk about pollution and environment degradation, but about recycling only. What you said simply means "k, here are the ways we damage ecology" and then you can literary include like factories, cars, etc. Initially though you only needed to explore the recycling topic and nothing else.

    • @beautyisinmind2163
      @beautyisinmind2163 Před 5 měsíci

      You already deviated from the original topic. The question is asking "WHY" people aren't recycling the household wastes; however, you answered the consequences that may arise when people ignore reclycling.

  • @anuchoubey1491
    @anuchoubey1491 Před 3 lety +7

    Your videos helped me a lot and i got an overall band of 7 with 7.5 in speaking. Thank you ma'am❤

  • @walterwhite5307
    @walterwhite5307 Před 2 lety +2

    I just want to say,i like you madam. Thanks a ton you saved my hunderds of dollars which i was going to waste in coaching far from home and you provided me better coaching in these hard times of pandemic at home and off course for free…keep going mam you deserve 10 Million subscribers.

  • @khushleenchauhan578
    @khushleenchauhan578 Před 3 lety +1

    Thanks alot ....your way of demonstrate, clear the doubts is brilliant ... This help me improve my writing task 2.

  • @janethuo6437
    @janethuo6437 Před rokem +2

    Thanks to your channel, I was abe to get the concept of what I needed to do in my tests. SWriting was my hardest, but managed to get a 6.5 in it. Scored 8 in listening, 7.5 in speaking, 7.5 in reading and an pverall score of 7,5. I;m so happy.

  • @07johnjan
    @07johnjan Před 2 lety +13

    Took the computer-based exam last 11/14/21 and I got my results today.
    Speaking 8.5
    Writing 7.5
    Reading 9
    Listening 9
    Overall score 8.5
    Your videos helped me a LOT during my preparation so THANK YOU!!!

    • @imperia6368
      @imperia6368 Před 7 měsíci

      What the hell, you a machine or what? How did u get 9. In reading in Reading?🎉🎉

  • @AjayVerma-cc2no
    @AjayVerma-cc2no Před 3 lety +8

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  • @jorgemotorsport4916
    @jorgemotorsport4916 Před 3 lety +9

    Hi Asya! I'm so grateful with you.. I've just completed one the biggest requirements for my application to a Master's Degree at a Canadian university.. It took me two months of preparation to improve my results from my fisrt test (6 Overall) to my most recent one (7,5).. Your contents in your online courses and videos are amazingly clear and deep.. Congratulations for your channel! Thank you, thank you, thank you!! =)

  • @ganesanaruna6437
    @ganesanaruna6437 Před 3 lety +14

    Really useful one. The way you are explaining makes me feel confident and learn easily.. Thank you❤️❤️

  • @kamalpritkaur1153
    @kamalpritkaur1153 Před 3 lety +1

    Best essay i have ever seen in order to provide right guidance..

  • @faizahmadcheema5274
    @faizahmadcheema5274 Před 2 lety +1

    You are just awesome. Love to watch your videos. Keep it up, keep shining.

  • @MrAnupa89
    @MrAnupa89 Před 2 lety +3

    Hi.... This is to say thank you for your great videos. They helped me so much in achieving Overall 8 in Academic test... Keep up the good work..!!

  • @todorokisocklol8865
    @todorokisocklol8865 Před 3 lety +1

    Thank you so much!!! This is exactly what I'm looking for!!! 💖

  • @dhimoberati8382
    @dhimoberati8382 Před 3 lety +2

    First of all you are stunning , today it was my first day I have watched you , I wish I found you earlier , anyway you make the IELTS test exam so easy and you are so punctual on any word you say , in my opinion You are the best of all, Regards Dimitri

  • @natalinalabakana5185
    @natalinalabakana5185 Před 2 lety +1

    Thanks you Asyian you make me feel interested to join ILETS lessons so I will continue to follow one by one to enable me score the needed marks thank you again

  • @boyorgirl7915
    @boyorgirl7915 Před 3 lety +2

    Thanks for all the effort you put in the video, was helpful

  • @realknowledge110
    @realknowledge110 Před rokem +2

    Hi Asiya, thank you for your amazing work, I just wanted to say that you are doing super fantastic, please keep it up.

  • @Rafiquemunna
    @Rafiquemunna Před 2 lety +1

    The way, you are teaching is excellent.

  • @kas.5821
    @kas.5821 Před rokem

    Hi, Asiya! Thank u so much for posting videos and making them free. Got my academic Ielts results, overall 8 with 9 in reading, 8.5 in listening, 8 in speaking and 6.5 in writing. Was a bit disappointed with my writing section, since i prepared for it and did my best.

  • @sebastianmendoza7313
    @sebastianmendoza7313 Před 2 lety +4

    Thanks Asiya for all of your time and effort invested in this channel! You helped me obtained an overall score of 7.5 in my first IELTS 🤗 Un abrazo!!! 🇰🇿 🇨🇴

    • @MilkywayDreaming
      @MilkywayDreaming Před rokem

      Do you ever write in intro last line ( ..... discuss in upcoming paragraphs. ) ?
      Or is it ok as she mentioned?

  • @Mrhunish
    @Mrhunish Před 2 lety +1

    Thank you Asiya!!! I prepared for my IELTS in a week by watching your videos and got an overall score of 8.

  • @ensaftaha1805
    @ensaftaha1805 Před 2 lety +1

    Excellent explanation and clear instructions .Thanks Miss Asyia

  • @chintan12386
    @chintan12386 Před 3 lety +2

    Hi..thanks for the video, it was very informative. I just had a doubt and wanted some clarification. In the first body paragraph of the essay, two reasons were provided. The first reason was highlighted using discourse marker "Firstly", but for the second reason you didn't use discourse marker " Secondly". So just wanted to check if this is correct from IELTS examination point of view.

  • @riyarai2387
    @riyarai2387 Před 3 lety +1

    Hi Asiya! Your essay samples answers are extremely helpful. Could you please produce an essay structure of discuss both views and give your opinion .

  • @okeleyedamilola2316
    @okeleyedamilola2316 Před 2 lety +3

    I just received my test results I got 7.5 learning from your videos. Thank you

  • @Optimistic_Outlook
    @Optimistic_Outlook Před 2 lety +3

    Your sessions were really helpful for me. I got my desired band in just two weeks. I just wanted to say thank you so much.

  • @aryangilani6826
    @aryangilani6826 Před 2 lety

    Thank you mam.
    This video is much helpful for me to increase my band score and I got more information about grammer and accuracy as i sawn in video..... 🙏

  • @wilhelmgardeleone1867
    @wilhelmgardeleone1867 Před 2 lety +1

    simply excellent.! (as always)

  • @arshgillarts7853
    @arshgillarts7853 Před 3 lety +2

    I just love the way you speak. very calm and easy to understand. thanks for this perfect guidance mam..

  • @joanep5961
    @joanep5961 Před 3 lety +6

    Just done with my exam, following were the topics-
    Task 1- Write an application to an international company for a job, advertised by them.
    •why are you interested in this job?
    •what makes you a suitable candidate?
    •ask them few questions.
    Task 2- Many people find giving presentations or public speaking difficult. And children should be taught this in schools.
    Agree or Disagree.

    • @ivyo1503
      @ivyo1503 Před 2 lety +1

      Really?
      I thought task 1 is always a pictorial representation of something.

    • @jk4301
      @jk4301 Před 2 lety +1

      @@ivyo1503 maybe it's for general paper. I've heard in general task1 you need to write letter...

  • @shafaqzehra8651
    @shafaqzehra8651 Před 3 lety +3

    Hey Asya... Thankyou very much for your super amazing tips... I have recently given my Ielts and achieved a great score following only your coop tips. The only thing that makes me sad is my writing score..
    Here is my band score :
    Listening : 8
    Speaking : 7.5
    Reading : 7
    Writing : 6.5

  • @dhruvparthasarathy2050
    @dhruvparthasarathy2050 Před 3 lety +10

    This was the essay that I was able to write along following the instructions in the video:
    Waste material recycling is a crucial activity that helps in maintaining a clean, safe and healthy environment. Un-recycled waste that ends up in landfills pollutes the surrounding environment in myriads of ways and this is a problem in many countries, where safe recycling practices are not followed rigorously. In this essay, we are going to discuss two reasons why this happens and also talk about what can be done to solve this problem.
    The following are reasons as to why waste recycling seems to not be followed rigorously in many countries. First, there is a lack of awareness amongst people. For an idea to be considered seriously, they need to be exposed to it often. When they are not educated or reminded constantly about the importance of recycling, it does not gain much importance amongst people. Secondly, it is a widely accepted fact that to establish some practice into everyday routine, it has to be strictly followed. Not having stringent rules and mechanisms to keep bad recycling practices in check is one other reason why this is still continuing in many countries. Since recycling waste requires some effort, if there are no measures to keep things in check, people will always find ways to avoid this and stick to existing ways of dumping their refuse.
    Now we will be discussing the various solutions that can help solve this problem. Creating awareness amongst the public can help address this issue. When people are educated about how harmful unrecycled waste is to the environment and the various advantages that waste recycling confers, this trend will change. The government and various NGOs can play a crucial role here by sending out posters, advertisements on TV, Radio, and Newspapers and also by running awareness campaigns in both residential areas and educational institutions. Thereby the community as a whole can participate in recycling waste. Alongside running educational campaigns, strict rules and regulations can be placed with respect to waste recycling. Laws can be put forth and regular checks can be conducted amongst the community to ensure people do not violate them and follow recycling practices as per standards. For example, there could be rules as simple as having two bins at home, one for dumping wet waste and one for dumping dry waste such as newspapers, cartons, and cardboard boxes. While initially, it might take some time for people to get habituated to these practices, over time this will become the default.
    While avoiding recycling waste is a big problem in many countries, it is not something that cannot be solved. In this essay, we saw two reasons as to why this problem exists: lack of awareness amongst people and stringent laws and measures not being present to keep this problem in check. It is proposed that the Government and various organizations should pitch in to help solve this problem through awareness campaigns and also in monitoring waste recycling practices closely. By following these measures, I believe that this problem can be alleviated to an extent, thereby leaving our surroundings cleaner, healthier and safer.

  • @mokhimjakhongirova2915
    @mokhimjakhongirova2915 Před 3 lety +1

    Hi Asiya
    Thank you for your videos and PDFs
    They are really useful

  • @hiroshilanguageinstitute8668

    You born teacher. Only need maturity! Wish every luck!

  • @maiconmarcelino2123
    @maiconmarcelino2123 Před 2 lety +3

    Hi Asiya! How are you ? I am so thankful to your videos...my IELTS is going to be on January 22, 2022... I am training my essays according to your lessons. Would you mind to check If my structure (paraphrase + thesis statement + outlined ideas) is well located in my introduction paragraph below?
    Task 2: Many argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home. Do you agree or disagree?
    After centuries, the current world experiences the possibility to understand or, at least trying to figure out, what and how the knowledge about everything ever seen is comprehended by human brains. Either being a student at the school or performing teaching skills as a teacher, nowadays the method has been changed to a new fashion about learning process, which is the internet-based lessons. This essay agrees that saving time and money through not being in-person at the education settings like universities, lead learners to the success as much as if they were there.

  • @abab-qr4ff
    @abab-qr4ff Před 27 dny

    You are really awesome, It is just what I was looking for. Thank you so much.

  • @navneet5628
    @navneet5628 Před 3 lety +37

    Today's ielts writing topic for computer-delivered GT was "In some countries, teenagers are encouraged to do part-time jobs. Some people think this is good and others disagree with it. Please discuss both views and give your opinion. Support with relevant examples

    • @breatheandrelax1550
      @breatheandrelax1550 Před 3 lety +15

      Just let me know how do you find it guys,
      Body Part 1- Agree
      Learning skills
      Getting out of comfort zone
      Practical knowledge
      Body Part 2- Disagree
      Believe in knowledge through educational institutions
      Stereotype of working after certain age limit
      Conclusion- I personally agree knowledge should go hand in hand with practical skills.

  • @tarekabdelouhab4333
    @tarekabdelouhab4333 Před 2 lety +1

    Thank you so much for your help!

  • @koji2107
    @koji2107 Před 2 lety +1

    man, you are an angel!!!

  • @mariarosariascala5155
    @mariarosariascala5155 Před 2 lety +5

    Hi Asiya! I received my IELTS results today. I scored an overall band 8 with 8.5 in Listening and Reading, 7.5 in Speaking and Writing. Your videos and the FasTrack course helped me A LOT for achieving this result! Thank you ❤️

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Před 2 lety +3

      Hi Maria! What an amazing result, congrats! And all the best with whatever you took this exam for

  • @nufaismohamed5734
    @nufaismohamed5734 Před rokem

    Hi,what a wonderful explanation
    I really enjoy your pronounce and teaching speed are very nice
    It’s very useful for IELTS followers like me

  • @sweetnaina1989
    @sweetnaina1989 Před 3 lety +11

    Hi Asiya! I have been following your videos to prepare for IELTS General Exam & have excelled with your help! My scores just came & they are: L: 9.0, R: 8.5, W: 7.0, S: 7.5 (I had seen your multiple videos on speaking!)

    • @amirsadeghi7809
      @amirsadeghi7809 Před 3 lety +1

      Hi Naina, I wanna study for IELTS and I really appreciate your help if you're okay with it🙏🏼❤️

    • @shiningshinin
      @shiningshinin Před 2 lety +1

      Hi Naina, congratulations and may I know if you have done self -review or had a coaching?

    • @sweetnaina1989
      @sweetnaina1989 Před 2 lety +1

      @@shiningshinin thankyou 😃.. had done self review 😃

  • @lgs1599
    @lgs1599 Před 3 lety +1

    It would be very helpful if u can also make some videos on each type of essay of task 2 . Same like this .
    It will help a lot
    Thanks

  • @tejasai2795
    @tejasai2795 Před 3 lety +7

    I have watched your videos 3 days before my exam and got 7 band. Love the way you explain each and every aspect. Thank you soo much Asiya.

  • @bikea.4873
    @bikea.4873 Před 3 lety +10

    Thank you Asiya for all you do. I got an 8.0 overall band score, I watched some of your videos, they were really helpful.

  • @GillSaab-lt4ts
    @GillSaab-lt4ts Před 3 lety +1

    Your videos are quite helpful thank you so much mam...

  • @rubas7104
    @rubas7104 Před 2 lety +1

    Thank you so much because of your amazing tips I was able to get a band of 8

  • @dreamtheater2064
    @dreamtheater2064 Před 3 lety +1

    You're a great teacher.

  • @vss3039
    @vss3039 Před 3 lety +1

    Hi Asiya.Your reading videos have helped me a lot to improve.
    I have a question in task 1 (General -writing) can we leave a line after Dear sir, and all the body paragraphs? Also in task 2, is it possible to a leave a line after every paragraph?

  • @Gman.Official
    @Gman.Official Před 2 lety +1

    Passed the Ielts test but I keep on watching because I find amusement in listening to your voice and English 😊

  • @Ali-pd4kx
    @Ali-pd4kx Před 2 lety

    Thank you for the video, i learned many points from you

  • @shreeyashsansare7321
    @shreeyashsansare7321 Před rokem +1

    Recycling materials such as glass, plastic and cartons is an important practice that helps to reduce our impact on the environment. Many people across the world, however, do not recycle their waste and send everything to landfill. This essay will discuss why this might be the case and how this problem can be alleviated / The causes of this problem seem to lie in lack of awareness and convenience; each should be addressed separately.
    One of the reasons why recycling is not as popular is that the people are unfamiliar with the concept altogether. The old concept of treating waste as garbage is yet to be eradicated and the idea that selected used materials can be reused by further processing is still loose at large. For instance, despite many plastic recycling machines being installed on numerous train stations in Mumbai, people still throw their bottles in the bins, since they are unaware of their purpose and locations. Another reason is that there are less provisions in place that make it easy for individuals to go out of their way and work towards recycling. A good example of this will be the unavailability of bins that say “recyclable material” in and around public places like malls and parks, that would help people to naturally start the recycling process.
    The authorities need to play a crucial role in presenting solutions to the above problem. Promoting ads and organizing campaigns in densely populated areas explaining the economic and environmental benefits of recycling will ensure that the idea reaches a magnitude of people in a very short time. Social media is a great medium to help promote the agenda by creating and forwarding interactive posts. Besides, the local bodies can simultaneously make provisions for infrastructure that will enable the populace to indulge in good practices. Meanwhile, imposing some rules and regulations in public places will also ensure the cooperation of people in the vicinity.
    In conclusion, the dilemma associated with recycling as a process is quite naïve as compared to the variety of solutions that can be implemented to uproot them. In other words, a small step from each of us can help us ensure that we as well as our future generations profit from the remunerations of recycling.

  • @iremkaraer9997
    @iremkaraer9997 Před 3 lety +1

    Hi Asiya! Thanks for the video. Is it OK to talk about the reasons and the solutions in a sentence in introduction part?

  • @Bhavesh6603
    @Bhavesh6603 Před 3 lety

    I am extremely happy with this lesson 🙏🙏🙏

  • @razmypreena9248
    @razmypreena9248 Před 2 lety +1

    Hi Asiya, Can we choose two reasons and describe each reason in one paragraph with the necessary solution for it? Else, is it always better to describe all reasons in one paragraph and the solutions on another? Please advice.

  • @Londonzthebest
    @Londonzthebest Před 2 lety +5

    Hello Asiya,
    I am thankful for the help that i got from your videos. got 8.5 bands in speaking, an 8 band score in listening, 7 bands in reading and 7 in writing.

  • @fabiof4946
    @fabiof4946 Před 2 lety +2

    Do I really need to provide two reasons when the questions ask "reasons" in the plural?
    I've seen some content saying that I only need to write about one problem and solution to meet the task requirements and that writing more will make me have a 350-450 words essay, which I might not have enough time to write...
    Is it really necessary to write two problems and two solutions?

  • @asankarukmal382
    @asankarukmal382 Před 2 lety

    This helped me to understand task two very well
    Thank you

  • @shaiziskin6005
    @shaiziskin6005 Před 3 lety +1

    great videos. just a question- could I separate the paragraphs in the test? to make it easier to read?

  • @raunakdpenha913
    @raunakdpenha913 Před 2 lety +1

    Recycling waste material is extremely important. It is perhaps the most effective way to protect and preserve our environment for future generations. Having said that, not all countries recycle waste equally and efficiently. In fact, in some countries, people do not recycle waste item, such as bottle and newspapers, at all. This short write up will look at some possible reasons for this, while also highlighting some easy solutions.
    The first reason could simply be the lack of awareness. If people are unaware of the damage these items could have on our environment, they probably won’t make the effort to have them recycled. The second reason people fail to recycle bottles and newspapers could be the lack of infrastructure. For example, if there are no special disposal units in their apartment complex, they may simply discard these items along with their everyday trash. Alternatively, if these disposal units are few and far between, people may not be willing to put in the extra effort to visit a community recycling center or something of that sort.
    Fortunately, the solutions to these problems are extremely straightforward. To begin with, governments should educate people about the benefits of recycling and the ill effects of avoiding it. Ideally, this should be done at a grassroot level, like schools and colleges. This ensures that the next generation grows up with the habit of recycling. The next part of the solution is the develop recycling infrastructure to ensure it is easy to dispose such items in an ecofriendly manner. Better infrastructure removes the effort barrier to recycling and ensures people do it more willingly. A third solution would be to offer some incentive for recycling such items. It doesn’t have to be a large reward, just something that will encourage people to recycle these materials, as opposed to simply discarding them.
    In conclusion, I would just like to say that this planet is our only home. Therefore, it is our duty to take care of it. And simple things like recycling bottles and newspapers can go a long way in this regard. It doesn’t take much effort, but it can make a huge difference.

  • @j.crodriguez9055
    @j.crodriguez9055 Před 2 lety

    saludos espero se encuentre bien, veo que todos sus cursos no hay una gota de español y quisiera que me suguieran como prepararme para el ielst desde cero no se nada de ingles, alguna sugerencia

  • @omki28787
    @omki28787 Před 2 lety +2

    Thank u Asiya for ur brilliant videos. They helped me a lot in my preparations. I got a band 8 overall score in my first attempt. Thank you again

    • @rizwanziyad
      @rizwanziyad Před 2 lety

      Hey ... Can u provide me ur watsapp number please

  • @dr.anistabrizi3602
    @dr.anistabrizi3602 Před rokem

    Great explanation and careful details and ideas discussed

  • @kamalpritkaur1153
    @kamalpritkaur1153 Před 3 lety

    This essay is very helpful in order provide right direction in writing

  • @basmaibrahimforlearningeng5106

    Very helpful .Thanks 😊

  • @sam_belieber_army_blink_7298

    You are so amazing ❤️ I like the way you speak English wanna speak like you ❤️❤️ lots of love from India ❤️❤️

  • @senawirana
    @senawirana Před 2 lety +1

    Your channel is wonderful. It was one of my main assets in IELTS prep. Keep going with your videos. With you and all students a great success.

  • @truphata.9215
    @truphata.9215 Před 3 lety +2

    So I took the IELTS today and my writing topics were, write a letter to your friend who you are watching the house for while he is overseas and tell him about the storm damage, describe the damage and suggest what needs to be done, this is for task one and task 2 was about whether or not school-leavers should get a job immediately or go to universities, discuss both ideas and write your opinion. Hope this helps

  • @mimisspace808
    @mimisspace808 Před 3 lety

    My test is on 10th july, please make a video on how much space should we give between paragraphs in a written form.

  • @user-hz1yh5yo3s
    @user-hz1yh5yo3s Před 29 dny

    As a matter of fact, recycling is an important phenomenon that can mitigate the harmful effect of harmful environmental damage. Accordingly, many environmental activists have debated this issue and provided some solutions.This essay will delve into 2 main causes and a solution.
    To begin with, one of the primary grounds is that in some countries, individuals are unaware of the importance of separating wet from dry litter such as: vegetables, fruit peels, papers, cardboards, and coca or water bottles in the recycling bin, so they keep mixing both kinds of refuse excessively over and over. though, the dry waste will not be capable to be utilized again. Besides, inconvenience and lack of easy access to public recycling dustbins in each neighborhood is also another problem. Particularly, there might be a single huge bin in which combined garbage is taking place there that ends up going into landfill.
    The way that this vital subject needs to be tackled is through raising public awareness. considering that government play a huge role in educating people and even kids since early age and providing each city or even rural areas with facilities like free recycling bins that make people more comfortable to do so, But I assume that the key method is that governors should enact a strict rule that everyone must obey otherwise they will be heavily fined or may be deprived of a common service.
    To conclude, as I stated above, recycling can alleviate the destructive harm to nature. Hence human being alongside government can encounter this difficulty.

  • @thaoduong5746
    @thaoduong5746 Před 2 lety

    Thanks your lessons!

  • @jyotisheemar5345
    @jyotisheemar5345 Před 3 lety +1

    I subscribe you but i see your video today . Now i got hope from your videos in your way of teaching may i got 7 band .😊

  • @mahyaislam4494
    @mahyaislam4494 Před 3 lety +13

    U r doing great 😊 💘💘
    May Allah give you the reward 😇.
    🇧🇩

    • @itsmemay-may8045
      @itsmemay-may8045 Před 3 lety +1

      Im having my IELTS exam in the MAY.13TH.. AFTER Ramadan . Please pray for me sister , and I hope it will be easy for me in sha Allah. ...
      And thank you Asian for the teachings :) bless you

  • @munkaeelawiasu2487
    @munkaeelawiasu2487 Před 2 lety

    Very helpful, I was told that, the general statement does not need indented line. I'm confused, is it really true that the general statement for an essay doesn't need paragraph? And how should the paragraph be on the answer paper? Talking about the space you will leave before starting a paragraph, just need to be sure .

  • @preetkaur3233
    @preetkaur3233 Před 3 lety

    Hi Asiya!
    Where can we get solved solutions of recent topics of writing task 2 that are provided in your workbook?
    And can I get details about paid course please, like will we get study material or will there be one to one lessons and practice sessions?

  • @shamma6466
    @shamma6466 Před 2 lety

    Hi
    in my conclusion, I write,
    In my conclusion, recycling is an important point in the life cycle, recycling bins are a great way to aware people of how much is it important to take care of the environment.
    this is the conclusion that I write it thank you so much for your help.

  • @garimamehta7575
    @garimamehta7575 Před 3 lety +1

    I love this channel❤️

  • @bakepoint6548
    @bakepoint6548 Před 3 lety

    Thank you soo much mam, cus of u i scored well 🙏

  • @vallybaskar
    @vallybaskar Před 3 lety

    I had always thought my English was kinda good, the way you write about a topic makes me question that now, it’s so clear , concise with no attempts whatsoever to show off your language , you do your writing do that for you instead , I’m in awe 🤓 PS. Can’t take my eyes off your outfit ! I want that too cos it is so me 😢

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Před 3 lety +3

      Thank you so much! My writing skills have improved a lot over the years but I must admit that this essay took more than 40 minutes to write. It takes time to make it concise :))) All the best!

    • @vallybaskar
      @vallybaskar Před 3 lety

      @@FasTrackIELTS Thanks Asiya, my IELTS exam starts today , will let you know how it goes ☺️

    • @kunicapadhiyar3153
      @kunicapadhiyar3153 Před 3 lety

      How was your exam?

    • @vallybaskar
      @vallybaskar Před 3 lety +1

      @@kunicapadhiyar3153 honestly I’m not sure , will let you know my scores when I get it , the reading part was the toughest , the second passage was so dry and consumed most o my time, so had to rush through the rest , also for the writing I felt I dint get enough points to cover and not enough time to finish it well too so 😔

    • @kunicapadhiyar3153
      @kunicapadhiyar3153 Před 3 lety

      @@vallybaskar hope for the best..

  • @florencekckobama2514
    @florencekckobama2514 Před rokem

    Asiya,you are exceptionally great

  • @ChauKhanhLinh
    @ChauKhanhLinh Před 2 lety +2

    why there are 'firstly' but no 'secondly' ?

  • @gurwinderkaur8615
    @gurwinderkaur8615 Před 3 lety

    Hello asiya, i learned so many new things from your lessons but i have a doubt , in one of your lessons u taught not to use however to link sentences. But , in this lesson you used however in introduction. Could you please clarify my doubt.

  • @kurotunes891
    @kurotunes891 Před 2 lety

    I’m in love with that stockings

  • @vaibhavwisdomtv
    @vaibhavwisdomtv Před 2 lety

    Recycling waste material is considered to be one of the most important missions to prevent the environment from deterioration. Till date, tons of plastic decompose from bottles and dumps of newspaper do not reach the recycle stage across the globe, even in the most developed nations. This essay shall enlighten the reasons and provide a plausible solution.
    Ignorance is bliss. However, ignorance of potential disaster could only cause havoc. People in general are unaware about where the plastic waste material ends up at the end of it’s cycle. Not being aware leads to prevention of the right action steps. The solution to this is bringing awareness by showcasing the polluted water bodies, filled with plastic bottles and newspaper which could have been recycled and the repercussions of it, if left in that state.
    In continuation, running away from the responsibility is another big reason for material not being recycled. Accountability is tough and it is always easier to blame others than being on the other side. The answer lies in incentivizing, by either morally or monetarily. Making people feel good about recycling by rewarding their work on a national level or by providing monetary benefits for the same.
    In conclusion, spreading awareness on the recycling mission and incentivizing the recycling process can eventually lead people to recycle the dangerous material which is burdening the mother earth and its various life forms.

  • @tanjimomy8266
    @tanjimomy8266 Před 3 lety +4

    Good to see you back ❤️

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Před 3 lety +3

      Working hard to come back every Tuesday :))

    • @tanjimomy8266
      @tanjimomy8266 Před 3 lety +1

      I really appreciate all the hardworks you are doing for us