I hired someone to edit and make videos MOTIVATIONAL (Fiverr)

This is a fun video! I decided to use fiverr and see if I could find someone to edit my transformation video • 30 DAY BODY TRANSFORMA... and make it motivational for youtube shorts.
Here's the fun video! Enjoy!
Let me know what else I should try and do.
Music credit: Artlist
email: botongsaramm(at)gmail.com