The Justice League Rewrite (Part 1)

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  • čas přidán 25. 08. 2024
  • Justice League was a disappointment. Critically. Financially. Creatively. It wasn't great.
    And I don't think you can make one small change to fix it.
    I think you need to make A BIG CHANGE.
    So, this is Part 1 of my Justice League rewrite. I'm taking the whole movie apart, beginning to end. Some things will stay the same but a lot of it will be different but hopefully it will accomplish everything the original Justice League was supposed to accomplish and embody the spirit of the movie we all wanted it to be.
    Part 2 is coming soon.
    MOSTLY NITPICKING PODCAST
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  • @logancox9280
    @logancox9280 Před 6 lety +2355

    Nando “I’m in no way saying that I’m a better writer than these guys”
    Proceeds to be a better writer

    • @michaelsayavong2656
      @michaelsayavong2656 Před 6 lety +99

      He’s not saying he’s better, it’s just implied.

    • @logancox9280
      @logancox9280 Před 6 lety +25

      Axtwyt Starkiller hindsight’s 20/20

    • @Gomenred
      @Gomenred Před 6 lety +30

      I Make Content Sometimes but Is it really hindsight when he's pretty much taken the movie in an entirely different direction

    • @blackmanwithcomputer
      @blackmanwithcomputer Před 6 lety +10

      Hindsight makes everyone better, yo.

    • @notstorm208
      @notstorm208 Před 6 lety +6

      You really didn’t understand why he said that did you?

  • @michaela.webermann4141
    @michaela.webermann4141 Před 6 lety +719

    Holy crap. Not only is this such a better premise for a Justice League movie, but it’s so good that I truly thought the video had only been six or seven minutes when the 20 minutes were up. I was actually edge of my seat gripped by this plot. I can’t wait for the follow ups!

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  Před 6 lety +33

      Thanks! Part 2 is fun.

    • @patrickparadis9038
      @patrickparadis9038 Před 6 lety +3

      can;'t wait! i missed the part about how this was only part 1... biggest cliffhanger since the snap...

    • @AffectiSaVerb
      @AffectiSaVerb Před 6 lety +2

      I totally agree. Isn’t a movie supposed to be riveting? Edge of your seat excitement. I don’t get it wouldn’t you make more money on a movie if it was an awesome, repeatable watch rather than a built in audience? Wouldn’t you make more money by having twice as many people go to see the movie and see it more than once than hitting a number?

    • @lebronjim1582
      @lebronjim1582 Před 6 lety

      Nando v Movies When is part 2?

  • @your_dar_ling
    @your_dar_ling Před 5 lety +1122

    Nando: oh no big Villains
    *Literally 3 seconds later*
    Nando: So we got DEATHSTROKE-
    *IM SORRY WHAT?*

    • @thelittleredhairedgirlfrom6527
      @thelittleredhairedgirlfrom6527 Před 5 lety +90

      dar He’s not a “big villain” in the sense that most non comic book fans or DCTV fans wouldn’t really know much about him

    • @nynjanyck
      @nynjanyck Před 5 lety +38

      @@thelittleredhairedgirlfrom6527 Dctv fans would know about Deathstroke

    • @unamandlaxulu5840
      @unamandlaxulu5840 Před 5 lety +41

      Lol XD! I was literally like, "No big villains? Are we just gonna ignore the fact that Deathstroke could probably destroy Batman in hand-to-hand combat?"

    • @sarasamaletdin4574
      @sarasamaletdin4574 Před 5 lety +38

      Unamalda, I am sure he means by name recognition not power. Besides there are more powerful villains too.

    • @aaronxiaofj
      @aaronxiaofj Před 5 lety +5

      UnamandlaS Xulu well to be fair if it’s one-on-one, Batman would win easily

  • @Eccentrick218
    @Eccentrick218 Před 6 lety +243

    "It's the Legion of Doom."
    The moment you said that, I realized everything that should've been didn't happen. It would've tied the whole DC cinematic universe together in one scene, without having the need to retcon anything at all. An apocalyptic villain never feels like a true threat, because no one on a meta level is ever afraid of the world dying. But seeing the Legion of Doom show up? That would've left fans desperate for more.

    • @stevenirizarry1304
      @stevenirizarry1304 Před 3 lety +4

      The legion of doom is unique

    • @Chuck_EL
      @Chuck_EL Před 2 lety +3

      @@stevenirizarry1304 or the intergang since theyre also founded by darkseid ...also it could of been man-bat since he also fights batman on rooftoops plus it would fit with the whole "meta humans" reveal nando pitched

  • @acopella431
    @acopella431 Před 6 lety +586

    10/10 would watch the Nando Cinematic Universe

    • @leisurelyindex
      @leisurelyindex Před 6 lety +10

      Amani Jones that has a great ring to it.

    • @SimonCleric
      @SimonCleric Před 6 lety +4

      yes please

    • @sephikong7880
      @sephikong7880 Před 6 lety +4

      Amani Jones 9002/10

    • @Modification102
      @Modification102 Před 6 lety +1

      Rolls of the Tongue far better than "Sony's Universe of Marvel Characters"

    • @abdullahx4908
      @abdullahx4908 Před 3 lety +1

      How about Nando Cinematic Interconnected Universe or, drumroll please,.....
      NCIS

  • @JustKrin
    @JustKrin Před 6 lety +802

    At least this Justice League will have a part 2

  • @Sephern
    @Sephern Před 6 lety +465

    I'm really glad you added that you're not trying to say you're a better writer. That's super respectful, and it's awesome you acknowledged that there are so many reasons a good writer's work can get ruined by someone else in a production. I may not like entirely where your changes are going, but I'm really excited for part 2. :D

  • @thejoshbrown95
    @thejoshbrown95 Před 6 lety +789

    Screw the Snyder Cut, I want a Nando Cut.

    • @kerberb5994
      @kerberb5994 Před 5 lety +29

      I think we’ll need more than a cut...

    • @toytoonz1421
      @toytoonz1421 Před 5 lety +17

      I think I can make the Nando cut. I'll report back when I'm finished.

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 Před 5 lety +11

      @@toytoonz1421 Work fast, my friend.

    • @toytoonz1421
      @toytoonz1421 Před 5 lety +6

      @@Sentryman002 I will try.

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 Před 5 lety +8

      @@toytoonz1421 I know you will friend. No pressure from me.

  • @ross396
    @ross396 Před 6 lety +1098

    This guy... started the movie off with Clayface? Omg. I'm like... speechless.

    • @bobwilson679
      @bobwilson679 Před 6 lety +31

      In a good way or a bad way?

    • @jokerstein627
      @jokerstein627 Před 6 lety +22

      Still waiting for a response...

    • @kryptonian56
      @kryptonian56 Před 5 lety +72

      I've said for years that clay face fight/ chase would be great for a opening scene.... Awesome!!!!!

    • @anglozombie2485
      @anglozombie2485 Před 5 lety +40

      I think they would fuck up the cgi on clay face though

    • @iainarlt7668
      @iainarlt7668 Před 5 lety +38

      @@anglozombie2485 I don't think clayface needs good CGI the more abhorrent and unnatural the better right? Correct me if I'm wrong I don't know much about CGI.

  • @Relfar2
    @Relfar2 Před 6 lety +1299

    I cried. 20 minutes of better content then the whole actual movie

    • @officialtrailers9075
      @officialtrailers9075 Před 5 lety +27

      Jesse Harrison I cried. 500 likes and you couldn’t bother using the right than/then

    • @matthewcrane5294
      @matthewcrane5294 Před 5 lety +6

      Tortanus The MegaCarrier 💀

    • @mik3y448
      @mik3y448 Před 3 lety +6

      @@officialtrailers9075 its just one grammar mistake get over it

    • @SomeGlasses
      @SomeGlasses Před 3 lety +4

      @@officialtrailers9075 truly heartbreaking

    • @Chuck_EL
      @Chuck_EL Před 2 lety +1

      one thing ill add is clayface also was in the batman animated series and his arc was one of the best of the series...but i love his addition here since hes a batman rogue villian

  • @adammuniz4149
    @adammuniz4149 Před 6 lety +601

    I didn’t have a problem with the casting of aquaman

    • @mikemike7326
      @mikemike7326 Před 5 lety +68

      Same, its a rarity to see someone disagree

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 Před 5 lety +11

      I agree.

    • @isaiahmaldonado349
      @isaiahmaldonado349 Před 4 lety +35

      I love Jason Mamoa as Aqua Man

    • @princesoulger999
      @princesoulger999 Před 4 lety +52

      I love Jason, but he looks like Lobo wearing Aqua-Man's costume

    • @sdprz7893
      @sdprz7893 Před 4 lety +58

      @@princesoulger999 The original Aquaman look is very basic, typical blonde blue eyed guy. I like the new spin, it makes him way more memorable and unique.

  • @RadinV1
    @RadinV1 Před 4 lety +108

    "Justice league was bad. I mean it was fine, but it's fineness makes it bad."
    -Nando v movies, 2018

  • @tomatoanus
    @tomatoanus Před 6 lety +1511

    not enough forehead tattoos, the studio would never sign off on this

    • @That1BlkDude
      @That1BlkDude Před 6 lety

      tomatoanus why hello there

    • @thisisfyne
      @thisisfyne Před 6 lety

      LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

    • @fehzorz
      @fehzorz Před 6 lety +6

      damaged

    • @onekthmatt
      @onekthmatt Před 6 lety +21

      When Bruce unmasks, it'll be revealed he tattooed "I'm sorry clark :(" on his forehead.

    • @antjack6192
      @antjack6192 Před 6 lety +3

      How about start off with a younger Batman 25-28 years old, instead of a old seasoned Batman stupid idea

  • @dustinviers4508
    @dustinviers4508 Před 6 lety +481

    Can I just say, I love your editing cuts of completely different, but related, media to help visualize the scenarios you layout. Like, eyes on that Weather Wizard shooting lightning at Wonder Woman transition. Just really smooth work, props earned.

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  Před 6 lety +34

      Thanks! I'm glad someone noticed. Each video has one shot combo that I really like and that was this one.

    • @Pants.69
      @Pants.69 Před 5 lety

      Dustin Viers completely agree👏

  • @box2122
    @box2122 Před 5 lety +85

    12:16
    Well obviously I would have to say kite man. That's a no brainer.

  • @snaake9389
    @snaake9389 Před 6 lety +34

    There’s one huge problem with using the Legion of Doom:
    Casting

  • @bruce7068
    @bruce7068 Před 6 lety +786

    Imagine an after credits scene where Amanda Waller pays Slade a visit in prison offering him a place on Task Force X similar to the post credits scene in Arkham Origins. Presumably teasing a decent Suicide Squad sequel.

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  Před 6 lety +73

      I actually have two post credits scenes planned and that may be close.

    • @solidpython4964
      @solidpython4964 Před 6 lety +24

      I feel like Deathstroke has been so depowered over time and given a backseat when imo he is such a cool villain

    • @matthiuskoenig3378
      @matthiuskoenig3378 Před 6 lety +2

      be is not a Batman villain tho, he is a merc and a titans villian that fights alongside and against most heroes, although he does go up against batman alot.

    • @TStamp-lw4ku
      @TStamp-lw4ku Před 6 lety +1

      Bruce but then it would be copying Arkham origins

    • @emc246
      @emc246 Před 6 lety +1

      SOLID PYTHON The Arrowverse used him pretty well.

  • @luciapando2668
    @luciapando2668 Před 6 lety +365

    This is just.... this is AMAZING. It sounds so much more interesting than the original one. Also, you have a way of narrating the movie that just paints the action in my head. Love this! Amazing work!!!

  • @thedick009
    @thedick009 Před 5 lety +7

    I like how you never even actually say it out loud, but your casting of Toby Jones as Toyman is perfect

  • @Daydreamer1130
    @Daydreamer1130 Před 5 lety +82

    How are you not a movie writer/director/everything, all your ideas are super intriguing and great changes to what were bad/meh movies

  • @Marbletrain60GR
    @Marbletrain60GR Před 6 lety +257

    Batman in traffic, now that’s what I wanna see

    • @seandabest6353
      @seandabest6353 Před 6 lety +7

      Batman’s just sitting in the bat mobile while car horns go off.
      He sighs.
      Sits there for a bit.
      Adjusts the seat position.
      Makes those popping noises bored people make, I dunno how to describe it.
      Turns on the radio.
      Radio plays the Batman theme (you know which one I mean).
      Grins slightly.
      Starts humming along.

  • @Jesse-yo7uw
    @Jesse-yo7uw Před 6 lety +132

    I think scarecrow should be in the legion, it would be a great opportunity to get to know more about flash and cyborgs backstory while under the fear gas. It could also show of character conflict, say flash and batman are fighting some members of the legion and scarecrow is one of them, flash would think "oh this is just a regular guy in a costume, I can take him easy" and before batman can warn him about what scarecrow can do, flash is already running at him and ends up with a face full of fear gas. That would show off flash's quick to act personality and how he's not willing to listen to others a lot of the time. Just a thought, really enjoyed the video!

  • @userunknown203
    @userunknown203 Před 6 lety +38

    Holy heck when you said "Legion of Doom" I lost my shit because I've literally been saying they should be the Justice League villains since 2013. This is not the first time you've said exactly what I've always felt and it gets better every time. You're a dank fellow Nando

  • @markreid6251
    @markreid6251 Před 6 lety +24

    Wait! You hate Wonder Woman's theme? I was loving everything about this video until you said that. Her theme is amazing and never fails to get me fired up even more in an action scene.

    • @Chuck_EL
      @Chuck_EL Před 2 lety +2

      i agree it fits her to a t

    • @Im.myfuture
      @Im.myfuture Před rokem +5

      It's a badass theme. The problem is it's a battle theme. It builds hype for when she's about to go ham. But when it's a cameo of her just assisting in a rescue or saying hi, it's...overpoweringly jarring.

  • @ColinDakotaKelly
    @ColinDakotaKelly Před 6 lety +169

    Nando, I've watched all of your videos, this is absolutely beautiful! I fully respect your hard work and all of the effort you put into these videos. Let it be known that your hard work does not go unnoticed.

  • @IAmGeorgeLucas
    @IAmGeorgeLucas Před 6 lety +41

    When you're more excited for part 2 than you are for anything from the DCEU.

  • @grimmjow_jaegerswag
    @grimmjow_jaegerswag Před 5 lety +15

    "Amanda waller"
    "Flag"
    "Hopper"
    A demogorgon should be the villain instead of Steppenwolf

  • @herbertdiesoe1124
    @herbertdiesoe1124 Před 5 lety +4

    You are one of the two only CZcamsrs that does these kinds of videos while staying humble, other so called "film critics" will simply pander the filmmakers without having any idea about the process of making a blockbuster while managing studio interference. Great video!

  • @saj-manthesonicfan1893
    @saj-manthesonicfan1893 Před 6 lety +348

    20 Minutes?! Part 1!?! JUSTICE LEAGUE!?!?!? All my dreams are coming true! Love your channel, love your ideas, can't wait for the 2nd and 3rd act!
    I absolutely agree that there should have been supervillains throughout the film and Superman should have stayed dead for a while longer. So glad you brought that up! C:

    • @TybudX
      @TybudX Před 6 lety +6

      It is a great solution to that mustache problem.

    • @saj-manthesonicfan1893
      @saj-manthesonicfan1893 Před 6 lety

      Tyler Desrosiers; YES, EXACTLY!

    • @codymaple8959
      @codymaple8959 Před 6 lety +2

      Can't wait for parts 2 and 3

    • @saj-manthesonicfan1893
      @saj-manthesonicfan1893 Před 6 lety

      Cody Maple; The anticipation is killing me! >.

    • @codymaple8959
      @codymaple8959 Před 6 lety

      SAJ-Man the Sonic Fan I know right this was the first video of his I saw I submitted to him and watched his old videos

  • @MrE_
    @MrE_ Před 6 lety +434

    2:48 I caught that jab at BVS
    "...where superman fought Doomsday for a second..."

    • @phone5579
      @phone5579 Před 6 lety +44

      Kevin the whole channel is a jab at BVS

    • @CabezasDePescado
      @CabezasDePescado Před 6 lety

      yeah he is an idiot

    • @Ok-eg8dg
      @Ok-eg8dg Před 5 lety

      @rice milk. It had it's moments tho

    • @LjuboCupic1912
      @LjuboCupic1912 Před 5 lety

      rice milk. He said had it’s moments, not that it was good.

  • @TheYankeesUnited
    @TheYankeesUnited Před 6 lety +17

    Imagine that issue alfred saying bring in the younger heroes.
    Batman saying no, not again. They are to young, I won't let something like this happen once more.
    Alfred goes its not the same Bruce, these young men can help.
    And Batman just yelling "I will not bring in another one Alfred, not after everything that has happend!"
    I would of loved that.

  • @Cadambank
    @Cadambank Před 4 lety +8

    In comics / cartoons, the legion of doom was created as a reactionary mechanism to formation of justice League.
    It is interesting that here Legion is first formed then followed by justice League.

  • @sfdko3291
    @sfdko3291 Před 6 lety +32

    So I'm guessing the Egyptian artifacts are for Black Adam or .... maybe Dr. Fate?
    Can't wait to see where this goes.

    • @kingcole5977
      @kingcole5977 Před 6 lety +4

      It's the Egyptian God Cards! That's why the book was about Ra. haha

    • @lenwezzyman
      @lenwezzyman Před 6 lety +6

      Why not Vandal savage

    • @RickyLiveOG
      @RickyLiveOG Před 6 lety +3

      I'm thinking they will be trying to resurrect BA and the Legion will be defeated by the JL, but not before setting in motion the resurrection anyway in a post credit scene, leading into Shazam.

    • @purpleglasses4511
      @purpleglasses4511 Před 6 lety

      R C Why can't WB writers think like this, what kind of shit do they imagine smh

    • @shriramprasadvenkatesan5459
      @shriramprasadvenkatesan5459 Před 6 lety +1

      Or could it be the Hawkman/Hawkgirl? Maybe evil thanagarians?

  • @cam3rian
    @cam3rian Před 6 lety +124

    This is so much better definitely gonna listen to your podcast

  • @CL12356
    @CL12356 Před 6 lety +127

    Love it! What would you think if at the memorial service, the final person to speak is, of course, Lois Lane. She begins the speech honoring Superman and the all the good he’s done for mankind, but then turns very dark, saying mankind let him die: “You let the Batman kill him. You killed the only god willing to protect your pathetic lives, and now there’s no one left to save you,” as she turns around and pulls out a gun on the president. Batman throws a baterang, which not only relieves Lois of the gun, but also her hand. Batman jumps to the stage as the secret service takes the president away. Lois, in “pain” screams at Batman, “Look at what you’ve done. You destroy everything you touch, everyone around you...” Batman is distraught, taken aback. Then Lois holds up her hand, which is not bleeding, but dripping clay. Batman realizes who he’s dealing with. The fight ensues, and Lois is later discovered to be held captive by the Legion of Doom. This allows Clayface to show off his infamous acting skills and it makes sense he would impersonate Lois, since she is the most unassuming to get closet to the president. Clayface also gets a stab at Batman’s insecurities of letting down both Superman and Robin (further fueling Bruce to work alone) and it turns the public’s attention on the role Batman played in Superman’s death (which is later escalated by the media). And his mentions of “gods” can allude to the possible agenda of summoning and evil god in the absence of Superman, if that’s where you were going. Thanks for reading all of this if you did!

    • @CL12356
      @CL12356 Před 6 lety +25

      AnHeC she wouldn’t actually be Lois Lane, she’d be Clayface incognito. And the whole thing isn’t about killing the president, it’s about creating a distraction and drawing mass attention to Batman’s role in Supe’s death

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 Před 5 lety +4

      Wow, I TOTALLY like this!

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 Před 5 lety +4

      My friend, this is chilling. I like it!

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 Před 5 lety +3

      Buddy, this scene is chilling. I've already added it in my head!

    • @ThatOneDude521
      @ThatOneDude521 Před 2 lety +1

      That’s… incredible

  • @luislima3476
    @luislima3476 Před 6 lety +14

    Instead of the Legion, it could be the Cryme Sindicate. With this, the “they don’t know which villain they want to use” wasn’t really a problem, since they would be used just for this story

  • @rejachemno
    @rejachemno Před 6 lety +205

    Nando making Justice League great again.

  • @mr.e3768
    @mr.e3768 Před 6 lety +88

    Love this channel, everything is so well thought out and well written...

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  Před 6 lety +2

      Thanks!

    • @mr.e3768
      @mr.e3768 Před 6 lety +4

      Keep up the great work man! I always look forward to new videos from this channel... Btw would you ever consider doing another video on improving Thor 2? Or maybe a video about how to make Thor Ragnorak better as in less silly and fit the tones of the original more? The first Thor I've always felt was really underrated and really similar to a Shakespeare drama...

  • @zap4th368
    @zap4th368 Před 5 lety +1

    i am so glad you added weather wizard. the flash weather wizard is the best example of a glass cannon i have ever seen. no stronger than a normal person but can tear buildings apart without effort

  • @francisjomergallardo4593
    @francisjomergallardo4593 Před 3 lety +7

    The Nando cut is still better than the Snyder Cut. #ReleaseTheNandoCut

  • @suspiciousmaninhat5941
    @suspiciousmaninhat5941 Před 6 lety +27

    I was wondering today, “I wonder if Nando forgot about that big Justice League rewrite... OH SHIT”.

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  Před 6 lety +3

      I heard that, so I was decided to put this out today.

  • @logan_was_here_3382
    @logan_was_here_3382 Před 6 lety +166

    p-p-p-p-p-part....1...?
    *AND ITS 20 MINUTES?? YESSSSSSS*

    • @filthy.kasual
      @filthy.kasual Před 6 lety +2

      AqUaM_CaPaciToR and there’s going to be 4 parts lol

    • @RicardoHipper
      @RicardoHipper Před 6 lety +1

      Filthy Casual All those parts pretty much make up a movie

    • @frankteng
      @frankteng Před 6 lety

      AqUaM_CaPaciToR and then you realize the 20 minutes have just past

  • @soldofpol7026
    @soldofpol7026 Před 5 lety +70

    Hey there bud, don't hate on Jason Momoa as Aquaman...awesome casting there
    But actually, great job, you should write movies

    • @TickleMeElmo55
      @TickleMeElmo55 Před 4 lety +7

      Jason's casting was a bit inspired. Whole Aquaman movie needed a better script. The actress who played the love interested needed to be replaced. She was mediocre.

  • @pedanticat9479
    @pedanticat9479 Před 6 lety +13

    Man, this act alone is a million times better then what we actually got

  • @HxH2011DRA
    @HxH2011DRA Před 6 lety +15

    Now *THIS* is gonna be fun (btw I NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED a Nando Cinematic universe series. Get artist and do whatever else ya need to do to make it happen)

  • @viatic5878
    @viatic5878 Před 6 lety +45

    The only positive thing I can think about the DCEU is that Nando is gonna come out with a video with something better

    • @kingcole5977
      @kingcole5977 Před 6 lety

      It's like how 'Something Witty Entertainment' abridged 'Sword Art Online' from dirt to gold.

    • @evolvedturtleproductions7600
      @evolvedturtleproductions7600 Před 6 lety +1

      Only to be even more disappointed because it isn’t the real thing.

  • @theperson101ful
    @theperson101ful Před 6 lety +18

    Love this! And not having Superman in this movie means no moustache contract, will miss the Superman vs Justice League fight tho, thought that was the best part of the movie.

  • @JaguarBrickFilms
    @JaguarBrickFilms Před 5 lety +68

    Would you mind if I used this to make a Lego film?

  • @thepriorstone4064
    @thepriorstone4064 Před 6 lety +74

    But...why NOT have a Nando v movies universe?

  • @alexanderaljabbar7773
    @alexanderaljabbar7773 Před 6 lety +70

    I have been waiting for this video for such a long time. Thank You for making it. The DCEU is such an interesting universe with diverse cast, and You have fixed some of the movies. My favorite video of yours is The wonder woman series. Please keep making these kind of videos.

  • @cadenpresley3674
    @cadenpresley3674 Před 6 lety +89

    Something I disagreed on: WW's theme. Her main theme is badass and catchy. But to each their own. Otherwise, I actually love your version of JL. A much better premise than what we saw. As you mentioned, they should've used the roster of other DC characters to their advantage since they own the rights to all of the DC characters.

    • @FirstLast-kp9jx
      @FirstLast-kp9jx Před 5 lety +3

      I also don't like it. I'm not saying it's bad, I just don't find it to be badass or catchy.

    • @jayjaysink1828
      @jayjaysink1828 Před 5 lety

      and that's where you are wrong my friend

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 Před 5 lety +3

      I like Wonder Woman's theme too.

    • @InoMercy
      @InoMercy Před 4 lety +2

      It doesn't really work for a Wonder Woman theme. It's catchy, I guess. But it doesn't really convey the grandeur or legendary status of a woman literally created by the Gods. Other than the obnoxious guitar riff, it's just an uninspired orchestral piece.

  • @CarlosGarcia-zo1vm
    @CarlosGarcia-zo1vm Před 5 lety +6

    “I’m not going to change the movie much”
    Completely changes the villain, premise, and base story.

  • @dojomojo5085
    @dojomojo5085 Před 6 lety +159

    I still don't know why you aren't a writer at Marvel Studios or something.

    • @knallekalle9920
      @knallekalle9920 Před 6 lety +8

      Because that would probably be overkill for the DCEU, which the Justice League is a part of...

    • @getschwifty5537
      @getschwifty5537 Před 6 lety +34

      To be fair, while Marvel has a few misfires and Nando would have made a much better Age of Ultron, MCU is doing fine without him.
      DC/Warnerbros need Nando the most.

    • @rayshiotile9487
      @rayshiotile9487 Před 6 lety +7

      let's be real the execs would meddle to much and ruin his great script because of "the charts"

    • @ghost_pl9259
      @ghost_pl9259 Před 6 lety +2

      David Lopez That Age of Ultron rewrite of his sucked in my opinion. Defenders one wasnt so good as well.

    • @frogholdingmachinegun377
      @frogholdingmachinegun377 Před 6 lety

      DOJO MOJO! He's good but calm down there, kiddo.

  • @sambennett1757
    @sambennett1757 Před 6 lety +18

    When you get the time I would love to see a DC based Nando Cinematic Universe

  • @PapasKino
    @PapasKino Před 5 lety +3

    They should call themselves the Society and the members are, Toyman, Gentleman Ghost, Copperhead, Sportsmaster, and Tsukuri. Later on, in Justice League 2, the team will fight the Legion of Doom, led by Maxwell Lord.

  • @DeclanCorey
    @DeclanCorey Před 6 lety +6

    "Outside of Turkish Airlines of course" *I'm suing you for giving me a heart condition*

  • @BakaryD
    @BakaryD Před 6 lety +665

    Everyday we figure out a little more how bad the DCEU is.

    • @no-vd2rh
      @no-vd2rh Před 6 lety +4

      Yusuke Urameshi warner bros*

    • @juanmanuelcardona19
      @juanmanuelcardona19 Před 6 lety +14

      Warner Bros has become a mediocre entertainment company now a days, it used to be Disney’s rival but now they are below mediocre

    • @gkay8889
      @gkay8889 Před 6 lety +4

      Bilal Ahmed no..DCEU*

    • @Leon-xo4wl
      @Leon-xo4wl Před 6 lety +1

      True

    • @mckenanbundy3578
      @mckenanbundy3578 Před 6 lety +1

      I love it

  • @DCMarvel2009
    @DCMarvel2009 Před 6 lety +51

    Lol Toyman played by Toby Jones...THAT WOULD LEGITIMATELY WORK.
    Also, LOVE the Legion of Doom idea. Great work Nando!

  • @sleepwalking4301
    @sleepwalking4301 Před 4 lety +3

    whenever i’m craving some justice league content that doesn’t make my eyes, nose and ears bleed i watch part 1-4 of nandos rewrite

  • @Rinchen8192
    @Rinchen8192 Před 6 lety +22

    Why does Clayface need to plow through a crowd? he can just shape shift into a police officer or a journalist, or maybe even a President's special security guy if he's part of some team that is planning stuff.

    • @zap4th368
      @zap4th368 Před 5 lety +15

      Because he was supposed to make a scene

    • @MrSircharles05
      @MrSircharles05 Před 4 lety

      @@zap4th368 attempting to assassinate the President isn't causing a scene?

    • @zap4th368
      @zap4th368 Před 4 lety

      The true hero of Naruto it is if no one REALIZES you are trying to assassinate the president.

    • @noahthompson2912
      @noahthompson2912 Před 4 lety

      @@MrSircharles05 he was distracting everybody for the legion of doom

  • @neccodealer
    @neccodealer Před 6 lety +15

    Since I haven’t seen Justice League and I’m not planing to, I’m gonna pretend this is what actually happened.

    • @kingcole5977
      @kingcole5977 Před 6 lety +3

      I reject your reality and substitute my own!

  • @Jun-bm8ly
    @Jun-bm8ly Před 6 lety +259

    this is actually great, definitely better than JL. but can you change the "collect some mcguffins" part to something else? "collect the mcguffins" trope in superhero movies is getting pretty old now (same goes for Villain "hunger for power". "world domination" and "something shooting some/a giant hole into the sky" trope)

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  Před 6 lety +71

      Thanks and to that I would say, I have a feeling you're going to be cool with the Mcguffins. Give me a few more videos.

    • @Jun-bm8ly
      @Jun-bm8ly Před 6 lety +20

      senpai just noticed me :o .. jokes aside, your explanation on how character in DCEU should behave is really on point and great!! I hope those hacks behind DCEU should atleast learn something from you.

    • @ELFanatic
      @ELFanatic Před 6 lety +22

      It's a common mistake to think mcgruffins make a movie weak. The problem is too many movies misuse mcgruffins. Paychecks are a mcgruffin in our real lives. How do we choose to make our paycheck, what do we do with our savings? Do we have aspirations? nest it in fear of the future? How do we survive the hard times? What do we put up with at work to make that paycheck. Put that in a story and it defines your character, it motivates them. A mcgruffin is a thing you need. When the story's end goal is just getting the thing you need, it's weak. but when the thing you need is a tool to define who your character is, what their ambitions are, and how they handle not having it. Who are their during hardships. That's where the real power lies.

    • @unstoppableExodia
      @unstoppableExodia Před 5 lety +2

      The average movie goer:
      Yeah hi I put me down for a mcguffin with fries and a sundae to go

    • @samsulh314
      @samsulh314 Před 5 lety

      What about just collecting muffins?

  • @pizzachef3358
    @pizzachef3358 Před 5 lety +6

    5:36. in the scripts i write i usually start them with someone dying

  • @lucavincenzo5526
    @lucavincenzo5526 Před 6 lety +7

    Nando: "And I am in no way saying i'm a better writer than these guys."
    Me: *Reaches through screen to snap Nando out of it.*

  • @matejas8433
    @matejas8433 Před 6 lety +20

    FINALLY. Do you know how long i have waited?

  • @etnisanches2564
    @etnisanches2564 Před 6 lety +6

    Ha! I love it!
    If this video was 1 hour long, I would watch it completely with a smile on my face!
    Love the changes, love how you turned the Batman/Alfred more Batman/Alfred. And I love how you'd construct everything.

    • @kingcole5977
      @kingcole5977 Před 6 lety +1

      He even set up a good mystery in act one, super hyped for more!
      Think you've made a typo, @Etni Sanches.

  • @cringeproof100
    @cringeproof100 Před 5 lety +10

    These clips and description aren't even a real movie but it's still way more gripping than the real JL. If only the industry allowed for more creativity & thinking

  • @mruv5944
    @mruv5944 Před 5 lety +4

    It’s funny cos you mention the MCU not yet capitalising on a Villain team up, yet if you take a closer look at Phase 4... that could be what’s coming next!!

  • @venomissocute3448
    @venomissocute3448 Před 6 lety +10

    Step 1: Give other characters such as Flash and Aquaman movies BEFORE Justice League.
    Step 2: Remove the ‘Big Red CGI Fight’
    Step 3: ?

  • @lucmorris9183
    @lucmorris9183 Před 6 lety +344

    How the heck can you fix the unfixable mess that is justice league?
    Edit: oh nando just answered my question

    • @GoldLight73
      @GoldLight73 Před 6 lety +51

      Stop letting the competition with Marvel take center stage over making a good movie franchise.

    • @thaisolomon9519
      @thaisolomon9519 Před 6 lety +16

      He just did

    • @lucmorris9183
      @lucmorris9183 Před 6 lety +17

      Gold Wade who said anything about marvel? Justice league is a generally bad movie.

    • @leonardodavi2695
      @leonardodavi2695 Před 6 lety +11

      How? Did you not watch the video? Nando just described a first act that is goddamn eons better than the movie's.

    • @MrDman21
      @MrDman21 Před 6 lety +4

      I wanna see Nando fix the mess that was Age of Ultron.

  • @JOVONO
    @JOVONO Před 6 lety +5

    The person who recorded the Batman v Superman fight could have been the Riddler.

  • @caiquemarlon5579
    @caiquemarlon5579 Před 4 lety +9

    So next year he's gonna make "Snyder Cut rewrite"

    • @djgaben6187
      @djgaben6187 Před 3 lety +1

      Impossible. The Snyder Cut was fantastic

    • @SomeGlasses
      @SomeGlasses Před 3 lety

      Well I mean he wouldn’t have to since this exists

    • @whyequalswhat
      @whyequalswhat Před 2 lety

      @@djgaben6187 The Snyder cut was horrible too.

    • @djgaben6187
      @djgaben6187 Před 2 lety

      @@whyequalswhat I personally found it far more enjoyable than the Whedon Cut, but I will admit there are a few points that just drag and drag

  • @marc5533
    @marc5533 Před 6 lety +10

    I'd pay for a Nando Cinematic Universe

  • @sfdko3291
    @sfdko3291 Před 6 lety +55

    You have got to stop doing this bro.
    You're way too good to do this for youtube and get nothing out of it.
    If you're good at something, never do it for free.

    • @magic75450
      @magic75450 Před 6 lety +9

      SergioTov
      He gets money from it if he has enough subscribers and viewers.
      Not a lot, but still.

    • @kingcole5977
      @kingcole5977 Před 6 lety +9

      Hop on his patreon boys.

    • @loonaticzack3447
      @loonaticzack3447 Před 6 lety +4

      I understood that reference

    • @AnastasiaIoppolo
      @AnastasiaIoppolo Před 6 lety +1

      Hafiz Rafiee sorry, what was that? I was playing galaga

  • @randomknowledgeperson2872

    At first I was skeptical but after the part with the statue destroyed and it possibly being Batman got me hooked.

  • @smartalec2001
    @smartalec2001 Před 6 lety +5

    This Egyptian scroll thing, are you going Black Adam with this? I approve.

  • @Maggoz777
    @Maggoz777 Před 6 lety +20

    #ReleaseTheNandoCinematicUniverse

  • @youmnasherif9424
    @youmnasherif9424 Před 6 lety +20

    i'm calling it, you're definitely getting hired by some big company real soon

    • @ubayyd
      @ubayyd Před 6 lety

      Sounds good but not necessarily

  • @strawhatweez
    @strawhatweez Před 6 lety +1

    This is a fantastic rewrite to the first act. Can't wait to see where you take this.

  • @davidjohnson6087
    @davidjohnson6087 Před 4 lety +2

    “something’s coming in fast.” bruh were you trying to trick us with the flash orrr

  • @DrakeVagabond
    @DrakeVagabond Před 6 lety +27

    I hope Slade is a part of a bigger picture, because Deathstroke with ambition is cool, but not his best. Still great video.

  • @connormagee9858
    @connormagee9858 Před 6 lety +35

    Alright, you say your not a better writer than the staff of justice league, so let me say it. Your a better writer than the staff of justice league and I honestly think you could show a producer one of your videos and get hired like that

    • @shawnk6736
      @shawnk6736 Před 6 lety +1

      if only the film industry were built on merit...

  • @kdrfcgaming7902
    @kdrfcgaming7902 Před 5 lety +5

    Legion Of Doom? Finding Egyptian artefacts. Someone watched Legends Of Tomorrow 😂😂

  • @Theolppoman
    @Theolppoman Před 6 lety

    Yeah, this is definitely better. Even with your fairly vague descriptions of events, I was absolutely hooked. Can't wait for part 2!

  • @Sailn2Sunsets
    @Sailn2Sunsets Před 6 lety +11

    How do we show this to DC?
    I think one of the biggest things I took away from this is that the villains have to be just as *awesome* as their hero counterparts. Which seems to be a running theme for your DCEU fixes. Loved this.

    • @purefatdude2
      @purefatdude2 Před 6 lety

      This is amazing but studios do not have creative freedom. The sole fact that superman does not get resurrected will reject this proposal .

  • @jeremyliebe8732
    @jeremyliebe8732 Před 6 lety +12

    Idk if anarky is the best choice, while he is all about chaos(mostly) he's more of an anti hero. Maybe someone like the trickster would work better

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  Před 6 lety +8

      Trickster would be fun.

    • @jeremyliebe8732
      @jeremyliebe8732 Před 6 lety

      My thoughts exactly anyway keep up the good work man

    • @magic75450
      @magic75450 Před 6 lety

      Jeremy Liebe
      But he has no power.
      Even one hero can win easily.
      Mabye he can team up with someone.

    • @Iritis-
      @Iritis- Před 6 lety

      I would have gone with Black Mask and scenario swapped it to a bank robber instead of a terrorist attack.

  • @blindreddragon
    @blindreddragon Před 4 lety

    Literally going to rewatch these videos for a third time,
    I love your version of the Justice League so much more than the actual movie

  • @Typhon414
    @Typhon414 Před 5 lety +2

    this dude is actually making a better movie right now than any other dc writer, also the guy with the bomb in the museum could be a interesting way to do the origin of firefly by making wonder woman focus on saving the civilians and then he blows the bomb while she thinks he is unconscious in a final desperate attempt at killing wonder woman and instead he just scares himself setting up for another member of the legion of doom with his late arrival, side note if martian manhunter gets put in these films, firefly would be a great counter to MM because fire is one of his only weaknesses.

  • @marietheotaku94
    @marietheotaku94 Před 6 lety +9

    This is so good, it's making me feel embarassed on behalf of DC. I can see that it's very Batman focused, which I get, but what do you think would be the arcs for the other characters? Batman learns to trust the others, Diana rejoins the world? Cyborg would clearly clash against the Toy Man both of them being hackers. Flash is still a young hero so it might be like in the movie where he is learning the trade. Not sure what's in it for Arthur tho.

  • @Luismanuel77777
    @Luismanuel77777 Před 6 lety +9

    Can you imagine Nando's Vision of this movie adapted into a comic book series, maybe something called "Justice League: Year One or Year Zero". Have this whole video be like the first issue, Then maybe make like the last issue brings Superman back in the end or something. I would honestly pay for that!

    • @Luismanuel77777
      @Luismanuel77777 Před 6 lety +1

      or even a short 8 episode series......... I just want Nando to write or direct something lol

  • @leftybefty9766
    @leftybefty9766 Před 3 lety +3

    The Nando cut

  • @theliato3809
    @theliato3809 Před 5 lety +1

    Your ideas about the crime wave are spot on. I read somewhere that Diana could have been stopping inter-gang, who at times have ties to apocalypse.

  • @TommFoolery
    @TommFoolery Před 6 lety +10

    This is just great, I love all your ideas, so glad I found your channel all those months ago!

  • @maxhydekyle2425
    @maxhydekyle2425 Před 6 lety +11

    You're not allowed to close plot holes! This is the DCEU not the DCAU! It's not supposed to make sense, it's only meant to look good.

    • @kingcole5977
      @kingcole5977 Před 6 lety

      Yeah, I thought one of his rules was to leave the film consequences the same, plot holes and all, haha.

  • @vaheakopian
    @vaheakopian Před 6 lety +126

    My problem with your "big change" of creating the legion of doom is that it doesn't make sense. The LoD exists as a reaction to the justice league. Villains are inherently selfish and not inclined to work together. If superman is dead, the villains have a free pass to do whatever they want. I doubt they are gonna team up. But when the justice league existed, they villains needed a force to counter the JL, and that's how the LoD came to be.

    • @agentice7718
      @agentice7718 Před 6 lety +24

      Honestly if I saw that instead of what the movie did it would be soooooo much better

    • @cheetoschrist5685
      @cheetoschrist5685 Před 6 lety +35

      it still beats whatever Step-on-wolfs was

    • @optillian4182
      @optillian4182 Před 6 lety +12

      This is why I like the idea. It adds a twist to the usual narrative.

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  Před 6 lety +63

      Well, I think Batman could conceivably stop all of these criminals if they are on their own.

    • @ELFanatic
      @ELFanatic Před 6 lety +33

      I don't know all those villains but the initial group appears to be weaker villains, villains that batman would be able to stop. Seems like this legion is just to win against Batman, and once JL forms, the legion would expand to include the heavy hitters.

  • @efp722
    @efp722 Před 4 lety +3

    So this is just a straight up different movie. got it. I like it.

  • @venomissocute3448
    @venomissocute3448 Před 6 lety +4

    This is more interesting than the real one, and this doesn’t even have visuals

  • @Gustavo-tm9ct
    @Gustavo-tm9ct Před 6 lety +4

    Oh I've been waiting to see this, this part series might end up being longer than the actual movie

  • @Thelazyninjas4eva
    @Thelazyninjas4eva Před 5 lety +5

    You sound like a happier Chris stuckman

  • @wizardgreycat3836
    @wizardgreycat3836 Před 6 lety +1

    Just an Idea: Instead of Diana flying, Alfred could send a stealth/invisible prototype jet that they've been building to bring her to the museum. And by the end of the movie Bruce could say that she should keep it