As constructive criticism I say firstly improve your intonation, make sure you're hitting all of the notes perfectly. Next, improve your tone quality a little bit as it was quite scratchy in places especially whilst playing on the D and A strings. Then, make your playing come to life more. Your playing sounds very chopped up and robotic almost. You want to put emotion and feeling into it making it have more of a personality and sounding more alive if that makes sense. Finally, once your comfortable with the piece, speed up your time signature to make it well faster. Your time signature is a good starting pace or practice speed but when performing it make it faster so it doesn't feel as if its going on forever.
Thank you for the comment, David. These are quickly created practice videos for my students, which is why I play with a metronome that is set under performance tempo. I am a violinist so my cello recordings aren't always the best
@@katekowalkoski765 Ah ok, that makes a lot of sense now. Yea, it is definitely good for your students to learn the basic melody and then be able to apply they're own skills or twist onto the song.
I really liked your version! Any opportunity of sharing your score? Please?
Que coisa mais linda♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ parabéns garota, sucesso pra ti
Great job keep it up
Keep up the good work! 👍
Thank you. Very helpful.
I'm learning this right now. Please do
sheet music?
Could you share the score?
not bad
Hi cellist ❤
As constructive criticism I say firstly improve your intonation, make sure you're hitting all of the notes perfectly. Next, improve your tone quality a little bit as it was quite scratchy in places especially whilst playing on the D and A strings. Then, make your playing come to life more. Your playing sounds very chopped up and robotic almost. You want to put emotion and feeling into it making it have more of a personality and sounding more alive if that makes sense. Finally, once your comfortable with the piece, speed up your time signature to make it well faster. Your time signature is a good starting pace or practice speed but when performing it make it faster so it doesn't feel as if its going on forever.
Thank you for the comment, David. These are quickly created practice videos for my students, which is why I play with a metronome that is set under performance tempo. I am a violinist so my cello recordings aren't always the best
@@katekowalkoski765 Ah ok, that makes a lot of sense now. Yea, it is definitely good for your students to learn the basic melody and then be able to apply they're own skills or twist onto the song.
David Maloney no one asked u
Horrible tone. Try to make it smoother
She’s a violinist, also that was amazing
i agree