"The New Hospital I Work at has Some Very Strange Rules" (COMPLETE SERIES)
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- čas přidán 21. 08. 2024
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Alright the reverb issue in part 5 is fixed! And here are the timestamps.
Part 1- 0:0:17
Part 2- 0:11:14
Part 3- 0:41:24
Part 4- 1:09:26
Part 5- 1:43:14
Bookclub- 2:42:46
Girl I absolutely adore you. Your voice is incredible, and i can feel the emotion in the story, which is quite rare even the most subbed dude who has great range just kinda sounds frantic everytime. I love that you narrate good quality, esoteric, literary works of art. You are by far my absolute favorite. Even over your man lol
Oh my goodness thank you so much! That's so sweet 😭 I feel very honored and flattered to be your favorite (:
This was amazing @RomNex probably my favorite story of yours, so far! But then again I haven't heard all of yours yet! You did an amazing job!💯💯✌🏿🙏🏿👍🏿👍🏿
I am sorry about the losses in your life. I am doing some Novenas and other rituals for my own dead loved ones right now. Would you like me to include them in my own prayers?
1:36:15 I don't want to be that guy but this girl was the dumbest 12 year old I've ever heard about
Lmao "You've got 3 hours left on your shift, and those symptoms aren't gonna google themselves" legit had me cracking up. Amazing story!
As someone who has been working in a very fast paced 80 bed emergency room in North carolina, this happens. More often than you think.
You missed the chance to say it had you in stitches
I laughed outloud at work. Everyone thinks I'm nuts but godamn that was funny XD
You and the dark somnium have revitalized my love for creepypasta/scarystories. Your voice, the music, sounds, oh my God it's all phenomenal. Keep up the great work, you're doing fantastic.
I'm glad we were able to bring you back ❤
marry her
I was brought into creepypasta by Chilling Tales for Dark Nigts. Their audio effects were beyond par. But now they're unable to sustain themselves so they no longer have the full-feature stories. Most creepypasta channels do some narration, slap on some of Myuu's music, and done. Dark Somnium and You are a welcome exception
I also enjoy Mr. Creepens (I think that’s the name). Have you listened to any of his stuff?
same tbh, i think it's the tone of voice for me. gets across the "telling a scary story" vibe well
As a nurse, the medical inaccuracies were highly annoying, BUT you still did astounding working with the story. Your storytelling was good enough to distract. 🥰
Thank you so much!
Married to a Doctor, she is the breed that realizes Nurses often know MUCH more than their peacock-doctor counterparts.
However, according to what i described to her last night, she seems ok with the “accuracy” of the story.
We must realize writers take minor creative liberties in order to enrich the story.
Would you prefer a dry summary of your day at the hospital, each detail as shiny perfect as a brand-new intravenous needle..?
Or this wonderful story..?
Not an attack, just a gentle statement of solidarity with you, as a man without much formal education who loves his “Doctora” and knows how hard Nurses work.
Much respect.
It probably works symbolic and on an emotional level. I dont but it seems that person talked about the emotional horror thats possible and made it magical realism?!
Which works. I think it can be very bizarre in medicine, just for a story it might need a focus XD
But i know doctors earnings and debt can be that depressing, :(
Saint Francis Hospital Rules
1. Never under any circumstances share your copy of the rules with anyone else.
2. If any other Doctor displays erratic behaviour leave the area immediately, do not make eye contact.
3. If any other Doctor is approached or detained by someone in a janitor's uniform do not interfere. Never ask about that former Doctor again.
4. Never touch any seemingly abandoned Reese's Peanut Butter cups those are Doctor Scrit's favourite candy.
5. Any child that dies in saint Francis hospital MUST be cremated within 120 minutes of the official time of death, If you suspect this rule has been broken alert Doctor Scrit and the hospital will be evacuated.
6. There is no children's burns unit at Saint Francis hospital, if you find yourself there continue walking until you find yourself in familiar territory. This usually requires traveling down the central hallway for 47 minutes, you will not reach a wall during that interval.
7. This rule is on a need to know basis.
8. A small quantity of sulfuric acid is kept in every room, this is only intended for use on patients with severed spinal cords. If thy attack a hypodermic injection of H2SO4 into the cranium is the only way to subdue the subject.
9. The morgue must house at least 13 cadavers at all times.
10. If you find yourself on the hospital roof with no memory of how you got there, you have only two choices. Either wait for an extraction team to find you or, jump 4 stories to the sidewalk on court street.
11. If you see room 1913 do not look directly at the numbers, do not open the door. This is by far the most important rule.
Why is there no comments for how useful this is 😑. I was scrolling praying for this 😭😭
Doctor Scritt really seems really selfish. Like damn man why I can't have some Reese's candy tf?
Thank you for posting this!
Wow, your awesome. I never knew I needed a copy of the rules until some lovely person in the comments decided to take their precious time and type them out for myself and all the listeners of this story 😊 thank you!
#4 Scrit and I are gonna have some problems.
You realize you broke #1 right?
I did notice the change in accent while Dr. Scritt talks to her younger self! It made it more realistic in the way that she was trying not to let anyone know. It's a subtle detail that YOU as a narrator added to this beautiful story! Great job!!!
"Doctors are just nurses who are afraid of getting their hands dirty" - that line was a killer! My wife is a nurse and she 100% agrees with that :D
Thank you to your wife for her hard work, we need more good nurses in this world.
Surgeons are a thing
As someone going into nursing, this certainly isn't inaccurate lmao
2:17:14
Daaammmnnn gurl! This is my first story read by you. You REALLY blew me away. I normally don't listen to female narrators- I find it hard to lose myself in the voice...BUT YOU!! You changed that! I'm like a fly on the wall at St Francis Hospital! I found myself sitting in the car outside the house, Wal-Mart, and the house again- just IN the story. Great story, great voice actors, great all around. New sub here! Brava!
Welcome to the channel! 😄 I'm glad you enjoyed it!
The character came across as someone who had grown used to putting up a shield so people couldn’t reach her if you know what I mean, so her sometimes being so different actually made it more realistic. I really liked the story, I loved the way you narrated it and honestly as someone who wants to be a narrator too but doesn’t have a male voice, I’m glad to know there are female narrators after all. I absolutely love narrating and acting, but I’ve been looking for someone like me because I never met any female narrators. You motivate me to actually do it. I’ve been practicing with reading and tone in voice so who knows :) you’re such a talented narrator & I am glad to have found you!
I really hope you do it! I love it and there is lots of stories for ladies or if you want you can play men oriented stories too! I have a few I've done (: you can do it!
@@RomNex thank you!!
When life gives you lemons, Fuck it!
Best line ever 🖤
This is one of the best creepypastas I've ever heard. I couldnt turn it off, even when i was eating dinner or getting my son dressed, i had it on! Hearing TDS narrate some of the male characters was awesome, you two make an amazing team ❤️
Samesies
I actually really appreciated the different voices for the main character. It really helped me keep track of who’s talking. Also, people’s voices and accents change over time, so I think it makes sense diagetically too.
If you don't let the past go, the past won't let go of you.... Good God, I needed to hear that. My eyes are leaking water..Thanks Rom. Thank you.. 💕
Holy 🐄😱. You made this story a mind meld. Your voice perfection. Your emphasis on point. Girl you blew me away with this one. Fantastic job. I honestly can't praise you enough. I actually listened to this twice and will probably do so again. Awesome writing for the author 👍. Bit your rendition was spot on. I was transported into it from the beginning. Thank you for that. Much love and light to you and yours ❤️.
Thank you so much Kelly! (:
With the accent bit, I had noticed sometimes that the old crone would not have an accent. When you told me that you took effort in making that intentional, with all the other things you said, I feel more amazed at your dedication to story telling. Though some of your lines were a bit unexpected in delivery, most hit the mark.
All that needs to be said is, thanks a lot for always striving to tell a good story. I enjoyed this one a lot!
Well I'm so glad you liked it! (:
I have been a patient at St Francis hospital many times over the years. I don't think I'll ever go back there again.
Thanks for sharing your own story, Rom. I think the majority of us have lost someone so close to our hearts that it felt like a piece was torn off when they had to go.
I’m an only child, so for me it wasn’t a sibling, but my pappy. My absolute best friend until I was 11. I never got to say goodbye because my stupid 11 year old self thought that he’d still be alive when I got home from school. He wasn’t. I’m 26 now and I still cry at l least once a week because I miss him so, so much. I’m crying thinking about how much I miss him writing this.
But it’s not all bad, because I remember how much he cared about me, how much fun we had together, his beautiful smile which I see so clearly on my cousin’s little guys, how much he just loved all of us and how much he’d love all of us that have come after he had to go. So it’s okay if we cry sometimes too, Rom. We all have to feel our feelings.
Never stop keeping it real and sharing as much as you feel like sharing. Stories like yours help people like me, and I appreciate you a lot.
Wow thank you. We both lost our loved ones so young. Everyday I feel myself able to cope with it more, and I'm so happy you can have those happy memories to help you through 💚
The reading was amazing, I’ve listened twice now. Absolutely caught onto the way you played the woman in past/present. Fairly new subscriber, you have quickly become an absolute favorite.
Well welcome Andrea! (:
I never saw that twist coming. Also as a scrubs fan I loved Dr. Scrit. I imagined the janitor as the janitor from that show lol
At the very end there's a part where Dr. Scrit says to herself maybe she'll put it together this time and I came back to that at the very end. Maybe young Ellie wasn't the only one who needed what was being offered and it would be interesting to see how things go if the offer was taken. I think I just didn't want the story to end. I'm sorry for the personal sorrow you have experienced and I thank you for sharing about it with us.
A GLORIOUS read. Cant BELIEVE I've missed stories like this. Came over from Dark Somnium. SUBBED
I wanted to badly for her to mention the phone at the bank to Ellie 😭 your transition of thr voices between Ellie and Scrit was amazing.
I’m well, I guess I was touched when you said you read all the comments. I really enjoyed this narration ... really all your narrations and I’m pretty new around here so the book club was a welcome surprise. I never considered the fact that communities could crop up around stories like these, much less be so warm and welcoming ... willing to delve so deep into personal things. Keep on doing what you’re doing, it’s really amazing work
Thank you so much, I'm glad that you like this community we have here (: I think its something really special and I love that it's growing 💚
I am so sorry about your troubles. This message may not soothe you, but I felt a need to comment on this video to show my support for you and your work. You do amazing work.
Thank you so much for your support (:
Agreed.. quality on par with mrcreepypasta for sure. Actually, I think she's even better.. she's easier to listen to, yet her voice carries the same range of emotion.
Thank you so much! Being compared to one of the big guys like that.. its very humbling! And it flatters me
To think, I skipped this story over and over until the completed story was compiled into one video. I really liked it.
I've been waiting for the complete story. Literally jumped up w a smile on my face! Such a pleasure, R.
Yaaay! ❤
I listen to creepypastas while I work and this is the first one to truly shake me to my core with the descriptions and voice acting. The scene with Timmy played so vividly in my head
I know this story is a bit older now, but I wanted to say that Im glad I listened to the book club at the end, and I understand the whole “hitting too close to home” part. I lost my older brother as well in a car accident. I was a year or two older than you were when you lost yours, but I sat at work listening to this story today, and I cried along with you when that part happened. I’m so sorry for your loss, but I also wanted to thank you. It’s moments like that where I remember to think of him and the brother I loved so I never forget him. Thank you Rom, so much
Alright 44 mins in and i have chills. The writing is fucking fantastic and your voice brings it to life. Im wholeheartedly enamored
I am 22 minutes in and this is gross as shit 🤩🤩 trying to eat while listening *chefs kiss* empossíblé 😂😂🙏 great job queen, as always!
I’m 22 minutes right now as well, those sounds don’t do me any more good
Ive heard this before and decided to give it a relisten. I never realized i didn’t finish it.
Cant believe I went so long without that ending. I needed that ending.
Great Job. 🥂
I love the way that you interpreted dr script. I work in health care but I'm not a Dr but I play one on TV. I did not realize the time passing. I was so much ellie as I have a hard relationship with my parents. Thank you for helping me relive my past and feel great for overcoming my past. I am still held in the same disdain by my family but I have great esteem for you and look forward to listening to your environmental stories again. Thanks again, Gravedigger.
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! 💚 thanks 😄
3 years - back for it again. And its still both and amazing and heartbreaking story 💔 loved it just as much the secund time
The condition of the child with no skin in 18:40 is called facial degloving/avulsion. It's a real thing, So I didn't even have to imagine it. This is amazing, I cannot stress how much I love your narrations. The fact that there is female lead stories as often as male lead stories is refreshing, to say the least.
I'm so glad you enjoy them! (:
I don't think you realize that you and the dark somnium are literally the highest quality narrators I have ever heard. I've listened to over 20 different channels, and none compare to yours.
I am extremely flattered by seeing you say that thank you so much!
@@acid_tongue_4315 🤓
most people probably wouldn’t know what to think when they hear that term though and they certain wouldn’t wanna google it to find out hahah! i’m glad it was described that way
Man, it's rare that a story makes me feel so much. This was an incredible ride.
Your narration was excellent, thank you, and thanks to Dark Somnium.
This is already an amazing story, that is well written and has great imagery, but the narration takes it to a whole new level! The accents and emotions you used throughout the story worked wonderfully to bring the work to life! Also I loved the sound effects that played in the background that made it feel like the scenes were playing out right in front of me!
That makes me so happy! Thank you
The end is amazing!! 10/10 listening. Such a twist!!! Omg! Also your voice acting is so... not even words for how amazing it is!
You're so sweet to me!! 🥰 thank you!
This was incredible. By far the best narration I’ve found, honestly, huge kudos.
I did pick up on the protagonist thinking in Ellie’s original voice, but speaking out loud with the accent, once she realized who she was in the time loop situation. It was a good pick.
Really enjoyed the deeper explanation at the end as well, and I wanted to give you my deepest condolences for your brother. And I appreciate how vulnerable you were, as well as kind to other listeners who may have been hit specifically hard by parts of this story.
Subbed and really glad I found this channel!
Off to listen to the social worker story you mentioned. Sending good vibes. ✨✨✨
I’m so glad this started randomly playing, I’d probably never click on it cause I hate hospital stories lol. This is amazing!
I'm glad you like it! 😄
Such a refreshing , disturbing story, thanks Rom and Byfels. You are greatly appreciated.
Glad you did the voices initially cuz i could figure out who was the narrator. And then once you explained it i really appreciated those little differences.
You got me, Ms. Awesomesauce! It's been so long since i couldn't put down a narration, like you can't put down a REALLY good book. I'm excited to be here from close to the beginning! You got this, Mama! YAY!
I'm so glad you loved it! (:
Me too:).
You've listened to Creeparoni, right? If not, check her out. She hasn't been regularly active for some time, but SO AWESOME. Your delivery and excellent story choices are on par with her for sure. There's something about your content that's reminiscent of her somehow. I'm so excited to watch you blow up, m'lady!
I love the emotion you put into your narration. You and Dark somnium are the best narrators imo. I love when you two do a story together. Anyway got yourself a new sub in me. Keep up the amazing work.
Thank you so much!
I just listened to the final chapter last night, but I couldn't resist listening to the whole thing again lol!! 🥰🤗
Technically you’ve listened to the same story 4 times then instead of for the second time
I don't know what touched me more, the story itself, or your book club. Thank you for that part by the way, it was an added dimension to the whole thing, a sort of "closure" to all the experiences I was going thru when listening to such a good strong story like this one.
You performed it very well, and you added just enough "spice" to each character to make me recognize each flavor they were expressing as a character both in the story as a whole, as well as within their own individual story of themselves.
I did not dislike the main character even after I learned about her past guilt. I share in the experience of how much it can bury someone so deep within themselves that you can literally go thru something like this in your head alone, and not be able to escape this painful loop. And it prevents your Light from ever shining as bright and even brighter than you can make it because of the ghosts of "if only I can go back" constantly playing over and over in your head... You performed Ellie well enough to make me see myself in her. And that last line you delivered about if I don't let go of the past, the past will never let go of me, wss like a kick in the head for me...
Now as Dr Skrit, I really liked her. You infused something in this character that made me wish I had someone like her earlier in my life. She came across as a beeotch in the beginning, you know, she was a beeotch that i'd like to learn from because you colored her with texture and depth that made you feel her cold uncaring attitude was just a shield. I like the accent. Actually I didn't even recognize that you had given her one till you shared this in the book club. I enjoyed listening to her little quips of wisdom, sarcastic but true. I found myself chuckling at some of her remarks, and I really like how she said 'Dr. Fae-llissss' you did that perfect! As for coming to the conclusion that student and teacher were one and the same, I first flirted with the idea when the doc found Ellie in the closet reading the set of rules from her fellow intern who just killed himself. I'm like how did she know Ellie was in the closet? Oooowhat if that was her in the past? But I dunno, I watch and read too much scifi to always resort to that conclusion... But you know, after listening to the third part, you did something wonderful, you voiced each character so that I could tell them apart, but then you gave a little something to Dr Skrit to make her sound like she was almost straining to give Ellie the answer to a mystery...not like a mother would, or teacher, but someone closer. And that was when I came across a question that asked, if I could meet and have lunch with anyone I wanted, dead or alive, or otherwise...who would it be? And I immediately answered, I want it to be with my 12 year old self, so that I can tell her what the right decisions are, and what we she needed to do so that my life would be better. But will she understand me? Will she be interested and accepting of what I will disclose to her about our future? Will I be accepting what her thoughts and ideas then? Will I be disappointed at her attitude? Will she freak out over mine? We're we meant to relive the past in order to change the future? We say that parent can be very hard on their children when it comes to encouraging them to build a good future. But if we had the chance to 'raise' ourselves, would we be harder on our younger selves?
I apologize for rambling. I really love listening to your narrations. And ThankU for this bookclub!
It sounds to me like you pretty much got the same sort of conclusions from the story I did! You say you've ingested so much scifi so you mull over the story points too much. I really do too, I have the same sort of issues looking so deep into stuff like that. I think it makes them more interesting! 🤗 I'm glad you liked the story so much, and really caught on to the "spice" of the characters. I love that lingo 😁
This is a gorgeous story and I really loved how you approached it, it felt very cinematic and heartfelt. I had no idea how close to home this hit you, I have an older brother too, and I can’t imagine losing him at 12. I hope you’re doing alright, best of luck on your future readings!
Thank you! I am doing just fine now (:
Lol this has to be the best story I've ever been allowed to enjoy. I cant believe someone possess a level of sarcasm equal to mine. Stupid questions are very real
Great voice acting
And remember, they *are* different people
Schritt's already been through the purgatory room and is the hard, no time for nonsense bitch we know and love
Ellie hasn't been through that yet. She's still carrying the eighty-something percent guilt over what happened
There's not just years, but experience between them
An absolutely Fantastic production...! Didn't see the twist at all what a great story... Also YAY book club...!
This was my first story by you. I very much Liked your style, and subscribed.
Edit. I too thought that she was too old for her choices. If she was 9 or 8, it would have been more believable. I think I kinda did imagine her as younger, despite what the story said.
I have to be careful with some horror stories, because of a loss I suffered less than a year ago. I wouldn't have blamed you if you had quit after coming to the part of the brother's death. I am greatful you didn't, but please don't trigger yourself if you feel too bad. Even if you consider this to be your job, a job shouldn't come before your mental wellbeing.
That said;
You told the story beautifully, and I think what you did with the accent fit well into the story. I'm not a native speaker, so I didn't starkly notice the accent, only that the main character(s) started to sound a bit similiar at the end, which made perfect sense.
Thank you for your kind words. And your empathy for me, I appreciate it so much. I hope none of my stories are too bad for you, I do try and put trigger warnings on the ones that are especially sad or hasve parts I think are triggering but I did not always do that, if there was a way to edit that into some of my older videos that I didn't even think about it at the time I would. But for my newer videos, there will be warnings for you and hopefully that will help 💚
I found Dark Somnium a few months ago. fell in love with your work after I found you on so many of his videos. researched you and found you last week... and my goodness I didn't know what I was missing. every narration channel I've come across is male. your immersive delivery actually calm me to my core. even if its a gory story lol thankyou so much for putting yourself out there and posting these videos
Damn, looks like I just found myself a new favorite creepypasta narrator.
I didn't think anyone could be as good as dark Somnium, but you've done it 🥰 now I have two favorites
Wow thank you so much! I'll have to tell Ronnie he better step up his game 😎
@@RomNex hehe 😅 you guys make an awesome team
The Appalachian accent of Dr. Scritt was PERFECT! It really helped hide that fact that Elle and Dr. Scritt were the same person. I liked Elle a lot but I also agree that a twelve year old (me) would absolutely know better than throwing a stuffed bear on an open flame. I would also have probably died trying to save my little brother from a house fire. But, we are all NOT the same and I don’t think less of Elle for making the decision to run out of the burning house to safety. Twelve is a really hard age. So many twelve year olds are not on the same level of maturity or have the same level of responsibility as other twelve year olds. I look at my three children and they all had totally different levels of maturity among many other things even though they were raised in the same house. I really loved this story and was extremely surprised that Dr. Vivian Scritt and Elle were the same person! You do an AMAZING Appalachian accent! I grew up not too far from that area but moved to Texas at age fifteen. This was the very first time I’ve ever listened to you narrate and was so pleased! You have a NEW SUBSCRIBER! Thank you for all of the hard work you put into this story and I am really looking forward to listening to MANY other narrations by you! I hope you and your loved ones are staying happy and healthy!
Love from Texas ♥️🤠🌴
Thank you! I'm a native to those mountains so I'm glad I did them proud (: Welcome to the channel! Glad to have you! 😄
Wow...just wow. Ugly cried on this one..did not see the ending (I usually do) and very well written (and performed!) I noticed the accent change but it didn't really morphe for me until the end..yes skrit was an assholes but to toughen herself..and i agree Ellie should have been younger because at 12 I was full time taking care of my sister's baby after school while she was in college. So I would have known to act differently. I'm sorry this was hard for you because of your brother..I think it came out in your story though, and made it better. Immensely enjoyed!
I listened to a bit of this last year and forgot about it because I was more than half asleep but listening to you again it instantly clicked because of how much passion you put into the characters and realistic atmosphere
The whole thing rocks, thank you, but hats off to the author - I know a bit about trauma and that roof sequence is exceptional.
This story was absolutely amazing I'm super late to the channel I just found you and your a beautiful soul. The story itself was great but the commentary at the end where we get the one on one experience that's what locked me in as a follower I will be spending the future weeks listening to all of your narratives
Omg YAAAAAY I'm so excited to binge this series. It has been my most anticipated series from you so far (made sure I 👍the individual videos as well) much appreciated
You did very well on this... Second listen and it still feels like a new story, everything made sense and you did do a very good job with Scrit's accent, don't ever think that you didn't.
I love this story. And I really didn't see it coming that they were the same person. The story was done really well. I wish more channels would do sound effects and stuff in the stories cause it makes it so much better.
You did such a great job! I love your narration, I can’t wait to listen to more of your work!
Thank you so much!
Your channel is so underrated! I came across one of your videos earlier this week and I cant get enough. Rom, you did such a great job with this story.
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you're liking what you're hearing! (: this series was reallllly fun to do. Especially Doctor Skritt, bitches are fun to voice act!
This story hit me hard. I felt every emotion the main character was going through. I even cried the ugly tears.
What an amazing story narrated by an equally amazing and talented woman and artist.
This story will stick with me for a long time.
Wow, this is really good. Didnt feel like there were any boring parts at all, it kept my interest the whole time.
Very well done!
It was amazing, I thank you for doing such a wonderful job and your voice is beyond mezmirizing to me, I look forward to listening to you everytime there is a new story uploaded, the book has been pre-ordered I am just waiting for it, thanks once again
A beautiful story about regret self-doubt and sorrow...plus cool time travel!
this is added to my playlist of fav stories now
This was amazing, never suspected who she was, the JD from Scrubs reference was hilarious.
I love your videos so much and they seriously help through tough times and I hope you see this and continue to voice these stories.
And you did great
Yaaay! I was spook waiting for this! ThankU💖
I know I'm super late to this party but I just wanted to comment how much I love Byfels stories, and you did an excellent job telling this story. You are definitely one of my favorites on CZcams along with Dark Somnium, Lighthouse Horror and a couple others which I only learned of from yours and Dark Somnium's channels.
This is EXTREMELY AMAZING!!! I want to tell you that you did an EXCELLENT JOB!! I had a few hunches around the "children's burn unit" part and the little "pizza boy"... but I never expected the plot twist in the loop. The writer is very talented and you did a WONDERFUL JOB! Especially loved Ronnie's prayer part. That was interesting🤔👏🏿🙏🏿 I loved this! The only part I am still a little bit confused or indifferent about is the paranormal stuff like the rules, and how that tied into the time travel. The ghosts and the 47 minute hallway, 13 corpses, and having to lock away in the incinerator. How did that tie into time travel? 🤔🤷🏿♂️
Either way it was a really good story! And my condolences to you and your family, God bless them! Rest in peace! #Blessings #KeepUpTheGoodWork ✌🏿🙏🏿💯🙂
This was super well written right? Some of these stories that pop up are brilliant. And well narrated. Bringing it to life.
Found you via TJ Lea’s bar story,
Absolutely worth the subscription, loved this!
This is perhaps the most well written, tightly constructed, and most intelligent creepypasta I've ever listened to. The author should deffinitely consider a career as a novelist. Though I am assuming she is either a huge medical drama fan or a practitioner of the medical arts.
Thanks for uploading this in one go! Cheers mate!
listened to this in one sitting and loved every minute of it. not a single moment of boredom. for something as emotional as this, it was beautifully written unlike a lot of other stuff like this i've heard. loved your narration as well and i'm definitely gonna listen to more of your work!
I really liked this story and think the narration was very well done. I know the chief was a bitch but I really liked her character from early on, I am around a lot of tough love kinds of people though so I know they're kind of an aquired taste. I'm sorry to hear about the crash involving your brother Rom... I have 3 little brothers myself and as much as we fight at times, the only nightmares that really get me involved watching something happen to them, I can't imagine living through that experience
I feel the same way even though she was so bitchy I liked her a lot! Mostly because she was so fun to act 😃 and thank you very much for your kind words!
Same... I don't want anything to happen to my brothers...
I thoroughly enjoyed the story I'm adding it to the road trip playlist thanks for all the work you've put into this I can't wait to see what's next
WOOOOO gonna be going on roadtrips with ya :^)
Wow!!! Listened to this again for the second time a couple months after the first, and hearing the story knowing more details about the end sure does change a few things listening to the first “half”
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!
Man that ending hurt :c
Hey RomNex, I'm writing because of your openness to it in the Book Club portion. I love this story, and you did an excellent job producing it. I particularly like the way the dialogue of the hardass characters is written, including the philosophy behind their speech. (Sometimes wish I was more similar to them.) And, no, I didn't see the identity twist until the scene that first repeats. Just before she said her name, but certainly not even at the Janitor's door...
I like the tactic you took with the accents, and think that not only does it make sense, but is actually pretty clever, and seems plausible the character would do that with intent. My critique, though, is that I actually didn't hear the accents. Only in a couple of words here and there, and I honestly thought that it was your native accent showing through very slightly. I took pleasure in hearing it and realizing that I'd discovered where you are from, just by a little hint in a couple of words sometimes. If you want to use accents, I'd try to push it a little more. I understand the danger if overacting, but I'm fairly sensitive to accents, and I really didn't catch it until you discussed it in the Book Club. Maybe that's just me though. I'm happy to hear a reply, if you like.
Because you know Dark Somnium, I should mention that he's my favorite narrator, and his music, foley, etc. is just super satisfying. He did a story that was first person of a young black girl, and I actually felt the same with his use of accent; that it simply wasn't strong enough, and didn't really nail it. I love the work both if you make, and offer this as constructive criticism. Thank you so much for these stories, both you and Dark Somnium. Reply if you like! :)
Thank you so much for your kind words! Dark appreciates it too (: we always appreciate constructive criticism so we can grow so you have been helpful too!
@@RomNex That's great! I just listened to NaturesTemper reading of 1971: Vietnam Experience, and his accent was apparent and believable.
I remember seeing a chalkboard in an acting class laying out alterations to change a plain newscaster accent into a metro British accent. It was a set of vowels and such, with a replacement version, phonetically in the same news accent, but when spoken aloud, sounded like the Brit accent. Don't know if I explained that well, but my point is that, if you two want to use accents as part of your work, there are useful tools like that to study different accents. Thought it was fascinating, and I lingered at the chalkboard, sounding it out... :)
Thanks again for your work!
This is a beautifully told story! I NEVER saw the twist coming, and I'm glad that she never went back to change things.... makes it sad, haunting and scary at the same time.
Thanks so much for putting this all together in one vid. What a rollercoaster ride!
Of course! 🤗
So well written, I can't even believe how much I loved this! Epic.
So glad you liked it 😄
I liked this for its moral, if you don't let go of the past, the past will never let you go. This is so true. I let go of my past just three months ago, and feel so much much better for it. It will sneak up and bite me at some point, but I don't have any problem in facing the past later on. Great story, keep it up.
Jesus now that’s a phenomenal story I have never felt/understood anything like it. It makes you feel what life is and how it’s so pointless
I'm so glad you liked it (:
I just found you and I love love LOVE how you explained some of your artistic decisions you took with the story to bring out other parts of the story I didn’t even realize. Thank you so much
Wow this is excellent, the story was amazing and horrifying at parts. I really enjoyed your telling of and the voice acting.
I've been listening to your old stuff, and this is my favorite story so far. So many bits of wisdom. Even if it's not medically accurate it's well acted, and engaging
This is by far some of the best narration work on CZcams in my opinion great job guys!!!
Thank you so much!
Ok so I think she had to be that age for the time loop to happen. To have the guilt which led her to make the decisions that led her to the loop. Also you did great at differentiating the character into separate characters but the the same as well. This story has made me think more then any has in years. Spectacular story and spectacular narration!!
This is the absolute 100% best story I’ve heard in YEARS and I can say hands down to me at the very least no one else I’ve heard doing narrations would have given this story the justice and emotion and just brought it to life the way you have. Absolutely stunning! I am so grateful to have found your page.
Wow thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it 😄💚
Wow, you did the story incredible justice. At the start I wasn’t sure I would get into it and now I’ve finished I think it’s going to be one of those stories I think about for days. Thank you
This was, wow, immensely beautifully done. Just Incredible! You've got a listener for life!
Thank you so much! 😄💚
Listening to this all at once, what a masterpiece in story and sound design 👏👏👏
at first i thought it was Yet Another "ohh weird rules to follow OR DIE" but then it just hit me with that and yeowch! My brain AND my heart
I'm late, but name a more dynamic duo than the age of 12 and severe trauma!
My dad died just a little after I turned 12. Out in the wild world I cope with dark humor, but even going on 14 years later, it's still raw if I let it be.
I'm not a stranger to your work, I've enjoyed your collabs with Dark Somnium for years, but it was only very recently where a new job allows the use of headphones that I've embraced your personal work. The long stories / all parts combined are really convenient for me to not have to walk away from my desk as much. Not to mention the great voice work both from yourself and our boi Ronnie. I think you've definitely found a place among my frequent checks for new content.
PS- the new ferrett is cute!
Thank you so much! 😄
I love listening to the long stories! 👌🏿❤️
Wow, this story was a thrill ride of twists and emotions. You did really well on the narration. Sorry that happened to your brother, I'll never be able to know what it's like, but I love binge watching this stories.
I'm so glad you enjoyed (: thank you
When I realized this story was about a theme I super like, I knew this was a nice one. Thank you for the great great narration. It became even better~
Wow absolutely amazing. I have listened to countless creepypasta narrations, and there has never been one with such a amazing life lesson to take away from it as this one did.