Songwriters Backing Track (Piano Song 1)

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  • MUSIC FOR YOUR LYRICS
    PIANO BACKING TRACK TO WRITE YOUR SONG
    *you can purchase this music for your song here for only $10.99 and you can then upload your song to all music stores and streaming sites like iTunes and Spotify www.danwilliamrooney.com/song...
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    What you get with your purchase:
    1. a HQ untagged version of the track to use in your song.
    2. an Unlimited licence, meaning you can use the track in your song for as long as you like and as many sales and streams.
    Below is a summary of the terms of use:
    [YES] You can release your song to all online music stores for Unlimited years and Streams
    [YES] You can post your song/video on your Social Media/CZcams & monetise with CZcams partner program
    [YES] You keep 100% of Distribution sales/streams revenue for your song
    [YES] Synchronization rights are included
    [YES] Yes Live performance is allowed
    [YES] Unlimited Pro Music videos and social media videos are allowed
    [YES] Radio and TV play is allowed
    [YES] You can register the song with a Publishing company and or a Performance
    Rights Organization like BMI/ASCAP and we will split shares same as all Writers/Producers do 50/50 equally (does not affect your 100% Distribution Revenue)
    [NO] Your Song cannot be added to digital audio fingerprinting services such as CZcams’s Content ID or similar services through your distribution company. Your distribution Company will not allow songs that use samples/BackingTracks to use the Content ID System anyway and I don’t allow this either. (This does not affect your song being released as normal to CZcams Music streaming platform and you can of course still monetise your song for Ad Revenue using your own youtube partner program)
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    *illegal use of this track without purchase is prohibited,
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    Intro:
    C// F// Am// G// x2 times
    Verse:
    C// F// Am7// G// x4 times
    On 4th time play G//// G////
    Chorus:
    F//// C// Am// x 4 times
    G//// G////
    Verse 2:
    C// F// Am7// G// x 4 times
    On 4th time play G//// G////
    Chorus:
    F//// C// Am// x 4 times
    G//// G////
    Bridge:
    Em// Am// Em// Am// G////G////
    Chorus:
    F//// C// Am// x 4 times
    Outro
    F//// C// Cm// G//// G//// C////
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  • @daniella.meeke.6530
    @daniella.meeke.6530 Před 3 lety +2950

    I’m going to use this, I’m gonna write a song for the first time, I’ve always felt in my heart I’ve wanted to sing

    • @DanWilliamRooney
      @DanWilliamRooney  Před 3 lety +199

      Looking forward to hearing it 👍😀

    • @katiepronovost8140
      @katiepronovost8140 Před 3 lety +64

      Same here, except I have been writing songs for as long as I can remember

    • @MCbarry4
      @MCbarry4 Před 3 lety +36

      @@katiepronovost8140 me too bit cant rly sing. Hows the singing going?

    • @katiepronovost8140
      @katiepronovost8140 Před 3 lety +16

      @@MCbarry4 good I wrote a song called First

    • @MCbarry4
      @MCbarry4 Před 3 lety +12

      @@katiepronovost8140 Nice. Im curious. Could i hear it?:)

  • @theyluvkyl3e
    @theyluvkyl3e Před 3 lety +62

    I JUST STARTED SINGING MY HEART OUT AND I MADE LITERALLY SUCH A GOOD SONG

  • @yildizku
    @yildizku Před 3 lety +10

    i did a blind react and just song along without knowing ANYTHING it was so fun :)

  • @xeniabarrientos6467
    @xeniabarrientos6467 Před 3 lety +24

    Now I'm crying
    Tears are fallin'
    Hiding and isolating
    and now the clouds are telling me
    "it's okay to feel heavy"
    I'm hurt
    But it's okay
    Its my pain
    The sound of raindrops
    It comforts me
    Now I'm broken
    And outspoken
    Don't wanna open up
    'Coz no one understands
    Except the rain, except the rain..

  • @erinc129
    @erinc129 Před 3 lety +307

    I have so much homework to do but instead I'm here procrastinating and writing my silly little song about my silly little life
    I told myself I was worthy of you
    told myself I didn't have to lie
    But every day I wake up to your message
    and I wish we were saying goodbye
    And all my friends keep talking about you
    Saying how you fit me right
    And it feels like I'm lying again
    By telling them everything is fine
    I hold my hand out and ask the sky to take me somewhere new
    somewhere without the eyes, the sounds and all the things to do with you
    I hope you know I'm sorry, for leaving you to deal with all the hurt
    But everything is rotting and I can't help but feel its all my fault
    You hold back because you're scared you're not enough for me
    You type the messages you know you'll never sent for free
    You want my packaged love, delivered to you nice and easily
    But I can't be that for you, I can't allow myself the peace, so
    No I'm not afraid to tell you now
    I hold my hand out and ask the sky to take me somewhere new
    somewhere without the eyes, the sounds and all the things to do with you
    I hope you know I'm sorry, for leaving you to deal with all the hurt
    But everything is rotting and I can't help but feel its all my fault
    Call upon your armies, vying for my blood since the day
    I walked into your life, and stole the happiness away
    I hold my hand out and ask the sky to take me somewhere new
    somewhere without the eyes, the sounds and all the things to do with you
    I hope you know I'm sorry, for leaving you to deal with all the hurt
    But everything is rotting and I can't help but feel its all my fault
    All my fault

    • @bleysh8801
      @bleysh8801 Před 3 lety +18

      Bro this is really good I love it

    • @sadie3600
      @sadie3600 Před 3 lety +6

      Can I use this?!

    • @erinc129
      @erinc129 Před 3 lety +10

      @@sadie3600 ofc!!! I'd love for someone to use this and maybe clean up the rough edges

    • @sadie3600
      @sadie3600 Před 3 lety +5

      @@erinc129 perfect tysm I’ve been wanting to start a singing yt channel but I didn’t really know what I wanted my first video to be so I think I’m gonna use this!!!

    • @erinc129
      @erinc129 Před 3 lety +3

      @@sadie3600 OMG!!! good luck! I'm glad you like my song :))))

  • @gensisj4238
    @gensisj4238 Před 3 lety +78

    I came up with a chorus
    “And i-I-I-I loved you but you-u-u loved her, i-I-I-I can’t compare to her in your eyes. Well at least I tried, it just wasn’t right”

  • @b3ll4sre1ndeers3
    @b3ll4sre1ndeers3 Před 2 lety +21

    Im standing in this ball room
    Thinking about you
    Trying to understand how days go by
    No one really knew you
    like I’m supposed to
    Everyone says it’s going to be alright but what if I die
    What if I die for you
    What if I cry for you
    What If I plead to you to come back tonight
    What if I fall for you
    What if I land for you
    What if I beg the lord to bring you home tonight
    But What if I die
    How do I go on without you in my life
    How do I move on from the traumas I hear at night
    How do I say to you that I’m alright when I’m not even right
    But what if I’m dieing inside
    What if I die for you
    What if I cry for you
    What If I plead to you to come back tonight
    What if I fall for you
    What if I land for you
    What if I beg the lord to bring you home tonight
    But What if I die
    I’m losing my mind not knowing what’s wrong and right I keep asking myself
    What if I die for you
    What if I cry for you
    What If I plead to you to come back tonight
    What if I fall for you
    What if I land for you
    What if I beg the lord to bring you home tonight
    But What if I die
    I guess I’ll die
    To make it alright
    To have you back with me just one more night

  • @exquisitediamond5016
    @exquisitediamond5016 Před 2 lety +19

    (Verse 1)
    Why can’t i just feel normal
    Thoughts run inside my brain
    Little things make me hella emotional
    I think im going insane
    Oh tell me how to feel normal
    Please, tell me how to feel normal
    I’ve cut myself multiple times
    I try to speak but all I do is cry
    (Chorus)
    If I could make one wish
    It would be for it to come true
    I swear I’ll do anything
    To stop what ever I’m going through
    Excuses to leave
    It’s harder to breathe
    Please stop this crap
    I would do anything
    Things in my mind start to shade
    Oh i can’t handle this
    Please, I’m only in 6th grade
    ITS SHORT BUT YEAH THATS MY LIFE 😍✌️

  • @jadaduckhorn
    @jadaduckhorn Před 11 měsíci +21

    (Verse 1)
    In the silence of the night, where stars shine bright,
    A melody begins to take flight, with pure delight.
    Words dancing on the tip of my tongue,
    A heartfelt story yet to be sung.
    (Chorus)
    Oh, this is the song we've been longing for,
    A masterpiece that will forever endure.
    With the power to heal, to inspire, and to ignite,
    There's magic in these notes that we can't fight.
    (Verse 2)
    Through the ups and downs, we'll find our way,
    With the rhythm of life, let's seize the day.
    A symphony of emotions, a tapestry of sound,
    Together let's create something profound.
    (Chorus)
    Oh, this is the song we've been longing for,
    A masterpiece that will forever endure.
    With the power to heal, to inspire, and to ignite,
    There's magic in these notes that we can't fight.
    (Bridge)
    The melody takes us on a journey,
    Beyond the boundaries of what we see.
    Through harmonies and lyrics, we'll find release,
    This song, a testament to inner peace.
    (Chorus)
    Oh, this is the song we've been longing for,
    A masterpiece that will forever endure.
    With the power to heal, to inspire, and to ignite,
    There's magic in these notes that we can't fight.
    (Outro)
    So let the music guide our souls,
    As we embrace the beauty that unfolds.
    In this song, we can find solace and light,
    A gift that will shine on, forever bright.

    • @aewin.
      @aewin. Před 11 měsíci +2

      Oh my god this is so amazing bro good job❤

    • @mimisnowflake2007
      @mimisnowflake2007 Před 10 měsíci +1

      Hey can I make this song

  • @ilovehollybond
    @ilovehollybond Před rokem +10

    I got emotional and started crying writing a song to these lyrics. Writing a song and singing really gets out your emotions and is a beautiful thing. Thank u so much

  • @aidynyoung2457
    @aidynyoung2457 Před 3 lety +26

    Ok yall, tell me what you think
    Verse 1:
    I see you standing there on the floor,
    I see your eyes they're wanting more, But it's not me, the one they want.
    They're lookin at her in that satin dress,
    Over there lookin all picturesque,
    Right then and there, I get jealous.
    I've never felt this way before...
    Chorus:
    I just wanna dance with you,
    While the lights are dimmed and you,
    Tell me that I'm the one.
    We can dance until the sun sets,
    You'll pull me close, and I will say,
    I love you today and every other day.
    And that is the day.. the say I'll have your heart.
    Verse 2:
    I see her lookin at you,
    I see her eyes bright ocean blue,
    And it's you, the one she wants.
    She slowly makes her way over to you,
    I see your bright big smile too,
    Right then and there I start crying.
    I've never felt this way before...
    Chorus
    Bridge:
    I know i shouldn't feel like this,
    But i can't help my emotions,
    I don't know what to feel,
    Someone help me,
    Is this real?
    Chorus
    Outro:
    She's dancing with you on the floor,
    I've never felt this way before...

  • @bubblepuffs
    @bubblepuffs Před 3 lety +42

    *Timestamps*
    0:16 Verse 1
    0:49 Chorus 1
    1:24 Verse 2
    1:57 Chorus 2
    2:33 Bridge
    2:47 Chorus 3
    3:16 Outro
    Thank you so much for this upload, great work!

  • @reemk2003
    @reemk2003 Před 3 lety +26

    Here's my try in writing lyrics..
    My Love
    (Intro)
    _instrument_
    (Verse 1)
    I woke up to you calling out my name. (mmh)
    A smile appeared right on my face. (mMmmmh)
    Darling i missed you yesterday. ooh
    i never knew that love is so beautiful.
    (Chorus)
    Ever since i met you then
    my life got better again
    Ever since you said 'hello'
    a light shined brighter than the sun.
    brighter than it ever been.
    you got me out of the hole.
    i never wanna let you go.
    cause i don't wanna be lost anymore.
    (Verse 2)
    You held me oh so close to you. (you)
    Nothing can change my love for you. (for you)
    I put my arm around your waist. (mmmh
    )
    to pull you closer to my heart.
    (Chorus)
    Ever since i met you then
    my life got better again
    Ever since you said 'hello'
    a light shined brighter than the sun.
    brighter than it ever been.
    you got me out of the hole.
    i never wanna let you go.
    cause i don't wanna be lost anymore.
    (Bridge)
    _instrument_
    (Chorus)
    Ever since i met you then
    my life got better again
    Ever since you said 'hello'
    a light shined brighter than the sun.
    brighter than it ever been.
    you got me out of the hole.
    i never wanna let you go.
    cause i don't wanna be lost anymore.
    (Outro)
    _instrument_

    • @kiraadams1361
      @kiraadams1361 Před 3 lety +8

      I just sat here singing this song and , I think that it’s time you make this a song , it is beautiful, and the lyrics just go together amazingly , you need to make this a song

    • @storiebadori5996
      @storiebadori5996 Před 3 lety +1

      That’s really good

    • @lapinodla7710
      @lapinodla7710 Před 3 lety +1

      OMG what a coincidence!! I also made a song out of this backing track entitled 我的愛 (wo de ai) meaning MY LOVE hehhehehhe amazinggg

    • @lapinodla7710
      @lapinodla7710 Před 3 lety +1

      OMG what a coincidence!! I also made a song out of this backing track entitled 我的愛 (wo de ai) meaning MY LOVE hehhehehhe amazinggg

    • @lapinodla7710
      @lapinodla7710 Před 3 lety +1

      OMG what a coincidence!! I also made a song out of this backing track entitled 我的愛 (wo de ai) meaning MY LOVE hehhehehhe amazinggg

  • @katielehmann4447
    @katielehmann4447 Před 3 lety +9

    And now only a couple days
    Till I get out of this phase
    I miss you without meeting you
    It haunts me to know that’s true
    And I-’m...
    Counting down the days
    I don’t need any more delays
    I just wanna see your face
    But I’m left in this empty space...
    Oh, only a few more seconds
    Till our first impressions
    I just wanna hold your hand
    But this hasn't gone as planned...
    I’m dreaming of that day
    So don’t you go away
    I'll kiss you till your lips turn blue
    Funny that you have no clue
    And I-’m...
    Counting down the days
    I don’t need any more delays
    I just wanna see your face
    But I’m left in this empty space...
    Yeah, only a few more seconds
    Till our first impressions
    I just wanna hold your hand
    But this hasn't gone as planned…
    Cuz I’ve never felt this way
    So what can I say
    When you're the one for me
    But for now, I'll be…
    Counting down the days
    I don’t need any more delays
    I just wanna see your face
    But I’m left in this empty space...
    Yeah, only a few more seconds
    Till our first impressions
    I just wanna hold your hand
    But this hasn't gone as planned…
    So till then, you'll find me
    Counting down the days

  • @emily3313
    @emily3313 Před 3 lety +15

    i dont know what life will bring
    in the years ahead
    and of course i hope
    this is where we will be,
    but all i know is that you are
    the best thing thats happened to me

  • @troubletroon
    @troubletroon Před 2 lety +23

    *When Did You*
    I cracked a joke
    That only we know
    But this time round
    You didn’t laugh as loud
    It’s been a while
    Since I’ve seen your smile
    Seem genuine
    Question where it’s been
    And I hate to overthink
    So please just spare me
    I need to know
    When did you let go
    Was it all for show
    I thought we had something
    Was it my imagination
    I need to know
    When did
    Fooled me once
    Went on for months
    Won’t fool me twice
    We’re out of time
    Stayed incomplete
    Was it just for me
    Or did you lose the strength
    To tell it straight
    Red under the nails
    Hurt me with the details
    I need to know
    When did you let go
    Was it all for show
    I thought we had something
    Was it my imagination
    I need to know
    When did
    When did you lose hope
    Lose grip on the rope
    Am I too much
    Felt like never enough
    I need to know
    When did you let go
    Was it all for show
    I thought we had something
    Was it my imagination
    Again
    I need to know
    When did you let go
    (Despite the fact I have very little experience with relationships and even less experience with being the one broken up with I have created yet another sad song to a CZcams backing track. Thank you emotions)

    • @amritasingh8033
      @amritasingh8033 Před 2 lety +1

      Can I sing to this?

    • @troubletroon
      @troubletroon Před 2 lety

      @@amritasingh8033 as in post it? Sure! All I ask is that you credit me as the lyricist and of course credit Dan William as the backing track 😅 I plan on posting a video soon to show off my song but I’m the mean time it would be so interesting to hear how someone else not only interprets my lyrics but the melody also :)

    • @juicebox_morgy
      @juicebox_morgy Před 2 lety +1

      this is so good omg i sang along with it and it sounded amazing and i feel like you relate to these lyrics you put ❤️

    • @troubletroon
      @troubletroon Před 2 lety

      @@juicebox_morgy thank you so much ! That’s so sweet 😭

    • @PizzaRolls4949
      @PizzaRolls4949 Před 2 lety +1

      Really good simple lyrics can't wait for you to make a post on it so i can see where your head was at and how it would be sung

  • @just_ariadne07
    @just_ariadne07 Před rokem +12

    Told by a simple pen
    Stronger than all the blue
    Large as an ocean
    The reason I love you
    More than a simple theme
    Passion to continue
    It’s better than it seems
    The reason I love you
    Explain my heart
    And destroy all my parts
    Cause no one understands me
    Better than you
    Get in my mind
    Get me out of the dark
    I don’t need my dreams, baby
    When I have you
    When I have you
    Painful as beautiful
    Deep down inside of you
    Our love doesn’t need rules
    Just because I love you
    It’s pure, and fresh and new
    It’s honest and it’s true
    Our love is just like you
    That is why I love you
    Explain my heart
    And destroy all my parts
    Cause no one understands me
    Better than you
    Get in my mind
    Get me out of the dark
    I don’t need my dreams, baby
    When I have you
    Ooh, take your marks
    And shake my world apart
    And baby, baby, baby
    Get me out of the dark
    Explain my heart
    And destroy all my parts
    Cause no one understands me
    Better than you
    So choose your cards
    And don’t you break my heart
    I don’t need my dreams, baby
    When I have you
    (When I have you)
    The reason I love you, baby see
    The reason I love you, {baby see} 3 notes

    • @Sianzaxna
      @Sianzaxna Před rokem +1

      Sheesh bruh appreciate you

  • @kalapani666
    @kalapani666 Před 2 lety +19

    The multitude of crimes,
    As if written by the grimes,
    A song of a thousand rhymes,
    A well kept secret, keeps this bond alive.
    A key to the fort,
    Mortars and bricks never lie,
    Damsel, don’t you, cry.
    The beat, as it soothes you,
    Anarchy suits you, in this life,
    Here he signed, dawn, dusk till… the end of time.
    The sun kissed grains, oh let them thrive,
    The well kept secret, keeps this bond alive.
    Grey hounds surround, all around,
    Clouds of fate, rain to the ground,
    The wistful ol’ seller sells by the pound,
    Never have I seen it this ripe,
    A well kept secret, keeps this bond alive.
    Here’s to hoping, it shall never pass,
    And let the felons, not to trespass,
    He shrieks yet again, don’t give me that sass,
    Stooping so low, proving the fact,
    As say the queen, the world is its hive,
    Well kept secrets, keep this bond alive

  • @kyliekyliekyliekyliekylie
    @kyliekyliekyliekyliekylie Před 3 lety +139

    so this is the first song ive made, lmao it sucks
    (verse 1)
    sometimes when i look at you
    my face turnes to a shade of blue
    that i wish i could comprehend
    and i could just pre-tend
    that as we got older and our looks got colder,
    we could go back to the day we met so i could just have stayed in bed
    (chorus)
    what if we never met?
    what if i couldve stayed in bed?
    maybe all our probeloms would go
    but not the memories we hold
    and all the times ive spent in bed waitnng for that love you text
    when i could have been with a friend
    and you knew it would hurt me but you did it anyway
    why did you do it?
    why?
    (verse 2)
    sometimes when i look at you
    my face turnes to a shade of blue
    that i wish i could comprehend
    and i could just pre-tend
    that as we got older and our looks got colder,
    we could go back to the day we met so i could just have stayed in bed
    bed, bed, oh-oh
    (chorus)
    what if we never met?
    what if i couldve stayed in bed?
    maybe all our probeloms would go
    but not the memories we hold
    and all the times ive spent in bed waitnng for that love you text
    when i could have been with a friend
    and you knew it would hurt me but you did it anyway
    why did you do it?
    why?
    (bridge)
    im bracking inside,
    the joy you've filled me with were all lies
    and i want to take it back.
    all back.
    all back
    oh
    (chorus)
    what if we never met?
    what if i couldve stayed in bed?
    maybe all our probeloms would go
    but not the memories we hold
    and all the times ive spent in bed waitnng for that love you text
    when i could have been with a friend
    and you knew it would hurt me but you did it anyway
    (outro)
    but you just look at it as another day, oh
    .
    .
    .
    another day, oh

    • @activetiktoks5703
      @activetiktoks5703 Před 3 lety +14

      This doesn’t suck this was actually very good. How’d u think of amazing lyrics? I’m trying to write a song. I’ve always wanted to but I just can’t seem to get it right.

    • @holliepascoe4423
      @holliepascoe4423 Před 3 lety +4

      please can i use this this is brilliant

    • @aaronbasimason5203
      @aaronbasimason5203 Před 3 lety +4

      WOW that is real nice

    • @ananyajoshi3572
      @ananyajoshi3572 Před 3 lety +2

      SO GOOD!

    • @gamingdemon3005
      @gamingdemon3005 Před 3 lety +3

      Nice bro wish I could come up with lyrics but I’m trash

  • @destiny8047
    @destiny8047 Před 3 lety +34

    Love towards you:
    Verse 1:
    Look at the stars and how they always shine for you
    They are always out, and there for everything you do
    Some days when the worlds mean and cold
    You seemed to be always there every time I'm low
    Course:
    But I feel nothing toward your heart
    I should of known it from the start
    Cause he's the one that I'm falling for
    With him I can remove the mask I wore
    Verse 2:
    This indecision is killing me inside
    I don't know what to do I don't know what's right
    I don't want to hurt you but I don't wanna lie
    And I can't always be there by your side
    Course:
    Cause I feel nothing toward your heart
    I should of known it from the start
    Cause he's the one that I'm falling for
    With him I can remove the mask I wore
    Bridge:
    I can’t go
    I can’t stay I can’t move
    What do I do?
    Course:
    Cause I feel nothing toward your heart
    I should of known it from the start
    Cause he's the one that I'm falling for
    With him I can remove the mask I wore
    Outro:
    I don't care if you love me or not
    Just let me love what I want
    It just can’t be you
    To explain this song a bit more, I was in a relationship I wasn’t happy in. I didn’t want to break his heart and I felt so stupid for accepting his confession and dating him. The relationship started to turn toxic and he made me emotionality dependent on him. When I broke up with him, he said all these things like “oh you’re not happy without me” and for the longest time I believed him. But then this other guys came along, and he was the sweetest thing and he made me realized that wasn’t a good relationship. We are celebrating our 1 year anniversary with this song!!! So ty everyone for even taking the time out of your day to read this.

    • @mmbswag5410
      @mmbswag5410 Před 3 lety +1

      This is amazing

    • @destiny8047
      @destiny8047 Před 3 lety

      @@mmbswag5410 arw ty!!

    • @myriamtremblay-java1281
      @myriamtremblay-java1281 Před 3 lety +1

      hey i love what you wrote i have an questions for you? :)

    • @fayem1547
      @fayem1547 Před 3 lety

      Wow this is truly amazing, I just sang this with the song and I'm speechless, well done 👏👏

    • @destiny8047
      @destiny8047 Před 3 lety

      @@myriamtremblay-java1281 omg sure! What questions do you have?

  • @exoticamethyst3204
    @exoticamethyst3204 Před 2 lety +9

    i'm starting my singing career at a young age with covers and my own songs, i'm exited to spread what my heart feels !

  • @gracierose0728
    @gracierose0728 Před 3 lety +34

    Dear best friend
    I wanna thank you for all you’ve done
    Holding me up when i cant walk
    Helping me win the battles I’ve won
    I know its been a hard road
    And there been bumps along the way
    But you were always there
    The consistency i needed every day
    And i know I’m difficult
    And I don’t show this nearly enough
    Dear best friend
    It’s my turn to show you my love
    Dear best friend
    I could never ask for anything more
    Than all you are, its perfect
    Enough for me and so much more
    I know its been a hard road
    And there been bumps along the way
    But you were always there
    The consistency i needed every day
    And i know I’m difficult
    And I don’t show this nearly enough
    Dear best friend
    It’s my turn to show you my love
    And i want you to know
    That i would do the same
    Reciprocate everything you’ve shown
    I know its been a hard road
    And there been bumps along the way
    But you were always there
    The consistency i needed every day
    And i know I’m difficult
    And I don’t show it nearly enough
    Dear best friend
    It’s my turn to show you my love
    Dear best friend
    It’s my turn to show you my love

  • @variableshark5488
    @variableshark5488 Před 2 lety +8

    (To the Chorus)I’ve always wanted to sing but I’m afraid to be heard, always wanted to love but too afraid to be hurt… fits really well

  • @pizzagirl1766
    @pizzagirl1766 Před 3 lety +21

    So I'm just a 14 year old who writes songs from time to time and this backing track was dope so here I am... Please do excuse my lackluster English, it is far from my first language. Here goes nothing:
    *Love*
    Beautiful, is what I thought as she danced, her head high
    Dangerous, like a red rose but pricked with thorns
    Furious, like a comet burning through the night sky
    Uncanny, like the blossoming hope as they mourn
    I see her lurking in the shining of my mother’s eyes
    I feel her blossoming as I look up at my whole life
    I feel her tearing me apart, skin to bone
    But she’s the one I yearn whenever I feel alone
    I guess this wretched girl’s called love
    Criminal, is what I think when I see my parents
    I don’t know why I can’t see her when I’m looking at them
    Fading, is what she’s doing from past to present
    She’s still strong and there, but she’s just not the same
    I feel her firm rhythm on my father’s steady hands
    I see her lovely smile as I give up my seat for her
    I see her peeking as I’m laughing along with my friends
    And she’s always there whether it be near or far
    I guess this mercurial girl’s called love
    Beautiful and dangerous, Wise but preposterous
    She can heal you and break you at the same time
    I feel her shadow as the tears come rushing out
    I hear her whisper through my brother’s words
    I don’t want anything to do with her
    But I want her because I’m fragile like a house of cards
    She’s not a wicked girl nor is she a wise woman
    She’s just a feeling I’ve been trying to hide for way too long
    I guess this feeling is called love...
    Please leave a like if you like it. It makes me happy...
    *peace*

    • @Julia-lc6od
      @Julia-lc6od Před 3 lety +2

      i think the lyrics are really good. I tried to sing it though but it didn´t quite fit on the Melody. But amazing work:)

    • @faithcason445
      @faithcason445 Před 3 lety +2

      This was beautiful it fit perfectly when I sung it

    • @Julia-lc6od
      @Julia-lc6od Před 3 lety +1

      @@faithcason445 oh thats good:) me and my vocal coach just couldn't really get it maybe haha

    • @pizzagirl1766
      @pizzagirl1766 Před 3 lety +1

      Thank you!!

    • @pizzagirl1766
      @pizzagirl1766 Před 3 lety +2

      @@Julia-lc6od Oh sorry if it didn't fit. I probably sang it in a different way because it fits when I sing it. Thank you!

  • @morpher44
    @morpher44 Před 2 lety +11

    I will wait
    I won't leave
    I'll stay
    you were there for me
    in my day of pain
    and now I am here
    have no fear
    no shame
    what you go thru now
    I know, not the same
    not the same as then
    not the same, amen
    not the same as then
    not the same, amen
    amen, amen, Amen!
    0:50
    Think about how you always loved the sky
    How you loved the trees
    and your joy made you cry
    And how you are loved
    By those you taught
    And how you are loved
    By the ones you have sought
    And they love you, like me
    1:26
    I will wait
    I won't leave
    I'll stay
    you were there for me
    and I'm here for you
    and I hope you know
    you are in my heart
    and I won't give up
    on you
    my love
    my love
    my love!
    1:59
    Think about how you always loved the sky
    How you loved the trees
    and your joy made you cry
    And how you found love
    Even now, even now
    You are loved
    By the ones you have saved
    like me, like me, like me, like me,
    my love.
    -bridge-
    Yes we change
    Rearange
    Yes it's strange
    So strange.
    So think about how you always loved the sky
    How you loved the trees
    and your joy made you cry
    And how you found love
    Even now, even now
    You are loved
    By the ones you have saved
    like me, like me, like me, like me,
    like me, like me,
    my love.

  • @aloemae2106
    @aloemae2106 Před 8 měsíci +4

    when the roads all seem so endless
    and i cant
    see ahead through all the fog
    when the birds songs just seem to fall on deaf ears
    and i can't feel if I'm still here
    I can always come home with you
    I can find your love among landmines of life

  • @allendionnelastcall3749
    @allendionnelastcall3749 Před rokem +11

    As a singer of many many many years.. I'm showing my age.. after playing in a number of bands and still do, I have one piece of advice for anyone getting into writing lyrics. My advice is keep it simple, do not fall into the trap of over writing. Yes that is an actual thing, over writing lose the charm and simplicity of a good song. The average listener will only remember a chorus to a song. So let your feeling out, enjoy writing, enjoy singing just have fun with it. Don't over think it. Let it flow out of you. Cheers my friends.

  • @hendyhidayat6954
    @hendyhidayat6954 Před 4 lety +13

    This is the end
    Hold your breath and count to ten
    Feel the earth move and then
    Hear my heart burst again
    For this is the end
    I've drowned and dreamt this moment
    So overdue I owe them
    Swept away, I'm stolen
    Let the sky fall
    When it crumbles
    We will stand tall
    Face it all together
    Let the sky fall
    When it crumbles
    We will stand tall
    Face it all together
    At skyfall
    At skyfall
    Skyfall is where we start
    A thousand miles and poles apart
    Where worlds collide and days are dark
    You may have my number, you can take my name
    But you'll never have my heart
    Let the sky fall
    When it crumbles
    We will stand tall
    Face it all together
    Let the sky fall
    When it crumbles
    We will stand tall
    Face it all together

    • @svvap_
      @svvap_ Před 4 lety +1

      nice try bro

  • @softiestoffie6115
    @softiestoffie6115 Před 3 lety +7

    I'm gonna write a song for my mom and I'm really grateful to find this melody 🥺❤️

  • @THTBRXT_TEE
    @THTBRXT_TEE Před 3 lety +8

    The sky isn’t as blue as it used to be
    I miss the day when it was all about family
    Cause now I’m all messed up
    And I guess it’s cause my family didn’t love me enough
    They did the best could and it’s not their fault
    But I’m tired of hiding behind a brick wall
    Hiding my feelings at all cost
    Because truth is I’m lost

  • @BM-tx2ph
    @BM-tx2ph Před 3 lety +7

    There's a special kinda quiet
    When your alone
    When you think that no one's listening
    And your at home
    Reminiscing of all your pictures
    Of him&her
    And you're stuck up in the middle
    Of love birds
    Come take me back to the time

  • @Lexagon14
    @Lexagon14 Před 10 měsíci +7

    Verse 1: As the day bleeds into night. I’ll lay in bed and hold you tight. I want you to know that you’re the one. I couldn’t imagine someone else. You’re the book that’s on my shelf, that I can’t ever replace. Replace.
    Chorus: I just wanna dance with u while the lights are dimmed and you make me feel like I'm the one. As I saw you in that dress. Looking so picturesque. I love you today and everyday, you know I'll always feel that way. That way.
    Verse 2: Imagine us at the sunset beach. The feeling of sand beneath our feet. The sound of the ocean and the waves. Sometimes the road is dark and long and I feel like I don’t belong. But that feeling goes away. Goes away.
    Chorus: I just wanna dance with u while the lights are dimmed and you make me feel like I'm the one. As I saw you in that dress. Looking so picturesque. I love you today and everyday, you know I'll always feel that way. That way.
    Bridge: the little texts and heart felt thoughts. Means more than you’ll ever know. Please don’t ever go.
    Chorus: I just wanna dance with u while the lights are dimmed and you make me feel like I'm the one. As I saw you in that dress. Looking so picturesque. I love you today and everyday, you know I'll always feel that way. That way.

  • @Haileyrodriguez288
    @Haileyrodriguez288 Před 2 lety +8

    ^Love runs cold^ 🎶 ‘If I dare you to love then you make me feel brave if my heart wasn’t broke would I be the same it’s deeper you know the feelings I’ve grown for you nothings the same or nothing is the same cause love runs cold . 🎶

  • @mylifeasliz2683
    @mylifeasliz2683 Před 3 lety +20

    I don’t want to here it
    I don’t want to feel it
    I’m stuck with my demons
    Ain’t no room for healing
    These days
    And the dayyyyys
    They blur
    And the pain
    It hurts
    And Ik in my heart
    that my minds all apart
    And I miss the outdoors
    I can’t cry anymore
    Everyone’s going through a transformation
    My parents are the only thing I’m translating
    I can’t learn this way
    I never did
    I won’t change
    But theses days
    And the dayyyyys
    They blur
    And the pain
    It hurts
    And Ik in my heart
    that my minds all apart
    And I miss the outdoors
    I can’t cry anymore
    I didn’t change
    I didn’t move
    They say mirrors lie
    But mines telling the truth
    They’re all in love
    But I’m stuck in the blues
    I’d say I’m in pain
    But these days
    And the dayyyyys
    They blur
    And the pain
    It hurts
    And Ik in my heart
    that my minds all apart
    And I miss the outdoors
    I can’t cry anymore

  • @allabout.ferly7023
    @allabout.ferly7023 Před rokem +16

    (Verse 1)
    In the hush of the moonlit night,
    A bittersweet tale, our hearts ignite.
    There's a love that burns, deep inside,
    But fate's cruel hand keeps us apart, denied.
    (Pre-Chorus)
    Oh, the chemistry, it's electric, it's true,
    We share a love that's forbidden, me and you.
    A connection that's unbreakable, it's clear,
    But circumstances keep us in this sea of fear.
    (Chorus)
    You're the one I can't have, but we both know,
    Our love's a wildfire, it continues to grow.
    Caught in a dance of heartache and desire,
    We yearn for each other, our souls on fire.
    (Verse 2)
    In the whispers of the midnight air,
    We steal glances, a love we can't share.
    The world around us may disapprove,
    But in this secret love, our hearts still move.
    (Pre-Chorus)
    Oh, the longing, it's relentless, it's strong,
    Yet we keep our love hidden, hoping it's not wrong.
    The universe conspires to keep us apart,
    But the love we feel, it beats within our hearts.
    (Chorus)
    You're the one I can't have, but we both know,
    Our love's a wildfire, it continues to grow.
    Caught in a dance of heartache and desire,
    We yearn for each other, our souls on fire.
    (Bridge)
    Oh, if only the stars aligned,
    And destiny chose to be kind.
    We'd find a way to make it right,
    To break these chains, and end this plight.
    (Chorus)
    But for now, you're the one I can't have,
    Yet we both know, our love's true and steadfast.
    In this tangled web of love's cruel game,
    We hold on to each other, despite the pain.
    (Outro)
    In the depths of our hearts, our love will reside,
    A love that's forbidden, but cannot be denied.
    Forever intertwined, in this cosmic embrace,
    You're the one I can't have, yet our love won't erase.

  • @starlightsky5029
    @starlightsky5029 Před 4 lety +75

    Verse 1
    There once was a time when you had a joyful smile
    But then it’s gone like the spark in your eyes
    All you hear are just the painful lies
    That the demons in and out say as you cry
    Everyday you’re waiting for the day to come
    That for once you can say that you belong
    As you grew your differences still remain
    But that doesn’t mean there is nothing to gain
    Chorus
    My Starlight
    Fly into the night
    My Starlight
    You will be just fine
    My Starlight
    I can see that day is today
    Just come with me
    As the memories fade away
    Verse 2
    When you think it stopped it comes back again
    As the never ending stress builds inside your head
    The silence inside the room fills the air
    As you’re thinking why would the people even care
    You just want to feel freedom inside your soul
    And people to see that you can carry more
    The past is the past even if it’s a drag
    you can carry through the battle with our hearts in your hands
    Chorus
    My Starlight
    Fly into the night
    My Starlight
    You will be just fine
    My Starlight
    I can see that day is today
    Just come with me
    As the memories fade away
    Bridge
    Even if you feel you can’t carry on
    We’ll be here singing your sweet song
    As you fly up high and look down below
    Chorus
    My Starlight
    Fly into the night
    My Starlight
    You will be just fine
    My Starlight
    I can see that day is today
    Just come with me
    As the memories fade away
    Outro
    My Starlight
    Fly into the night
    My Starlight
    You will be just fine

  • @leeannl0118
    @leeannl0118 Před rokem +12

    say you don't want me
    and say its all a dream
    take away my heart
    leave it torn apart.
    oh say you want me
    and its all a dream
    ....

  • @xaniakpop3170
    @xaniakpop3170 Před 3 lety +221

    me who has literally no idea what to do 🙂✌️

  • @notanickifan2971
    @notanickifan2971 Před 2 lety +8

    A girl that’s full of life
    That’s me, with an innocent smile
    I have a big dream that someday
    I could be on stage singing,
    Singing the first song that I wrote
    Dance like Britney and sing
    Like Christina
    Looking in the mirror
    I see a beautiful girl,
    Dancing and singing
    Hoping that world would
    Be loving when I’m finally
    Reaching that stage yes,
    Yes I will - this makes me
    Alive just singing and dancing
    reality slapped me
    Im grown up now
    People took
    Their masks off
    Full of hate, prejudice
    And all they see in you
    Are your flaws, wish I
    Was prepared but I’m caught
    Off guard, trying to do
    The best but they
    Pull me down.. no
    Bridge:
    You are gifted
    Everyone of us have
    Something that’s special
    You put the work,
    Don’t give up on yourself
    Quit comparing to others
    And just do your thing
    It’s better do it now and
    No regrets - we only live
    Once.. ohh..
    Just a young girl
    That’s me with the innocent smile..

  • @ksss7771
    @ksss7771 Před rokem +9

    You're giving a smile
    Yet your words say it all
    You done have a great fall
    As I fall-
    Fall like angel
    I call you upon a river
    In my head
    You're giving me a lot to think about
    Yet you're blaming me
    So I walk out the door
    As it rains and poors
    Across the coradoors of my heart
    Oh your touch so tart
    You're giving me a smile
    You're giving me
    Another chance now baby
    Yet I wanna leave
    This old place behind
    Where I found you
    In my head
    Don't get me started

  • @sarahmariposa9475
    @sarahmariposa9475 Před 3 lety +9

    You're not here anymore
    You went to heaven now
    I know you look upon my shoulders
    You're my angel
    I used to take you under my wing
    But now it's you I see you in my dreams you seems so angelic and real
    I know you wouldn't like to see me be shedding tears and reminiscing our memories all night long
    But I can't I just want to be here with you
    I just want to take these pills and joining you for eternity
    I got you under my skin your stuffs still on my night stand
    The way you use to be with me
    Nobody could never be able to replace you
    I don't even want you to think I'm gonna go get an another you
    You are all I want, all I wanted from the start
    I can't live in this earth without you being present physically
    I just want giving you hugs all night as I used to
    My heart belongs to you even you not here
    I regret this day I should've been here by your side
    But you was lonely at this moment
    At your last moment on this earth you was lonely
    I could never forgive myself
    This crash did change all our destiny
    This 14th November I would never forget this date
    I remember your mom's call these words still be in my head
    I couldn't not believe these words it was unreal
    If I did imagine a day of you being gone that way I wouldn't believe it more that unrealistic
    It's been months now you left this world and you took my soul with you
    You it was always you and you and you
    I just got eyes for you and you for you
    I wanna to embrace you all of you without us to be separated
    The love that I got for you it's more alive everyday
    I don't want you to think that you're my past
    Even with you not here you're here in my life
    You're my present and my future
    You're under my skin and in my brain and that's a fact
    I vowed you my love in sickness and health for richer or poorer alive or not alive
    When you was still here don't you remember how they hated us being together
    Because they knew the love we had for each other could never be destroyed even when they have tried with voodoo
    It hurts me more than ever to think about you
    It's hard to say what it is
    I never told you but you got your mom's eyes fasho
    We had so much things planned and now shattered

    • @DanWilliamRooney
      @DanWilliamRooney  Před 3 lety +2

      Beautiful, Very Touching words thank you for sharing them here 💙

  • @alexzumwalt1151
    @alexzumwalt1151 Před 2 lety +5

    There's a strange silence
    That keeps us apart
    And the strain of being so alone brings me home right from the start
    And if even there was a way things will never be the same
    Because that road was then and now gone that's why I wrote this song
    So that you can recognize when I'm gone
    Just be you I know you will carry on I'm not as strong...as you

  • @georgialoompa3885
    @georgialoompa3885 Před 2 lety +7

    my best friend just ditched me, and I would like to thank you for such a beautiful song. I am going to try and write a song to hopefully get this sadness and depression out of me.

  • @zhokhruitetseo430
    @zhokhruitetseo430 Před 3 lety +5

    I made an emotional song with this track for my buddy whos Dad is gone.. Thank you💛

  • @irenevelvet4645
    @irenevelvet4645 Před 2 měsíci +7

    (Verse 1)
    Underneath the starry night,
    We walked and talked until first light.
    Smoking in the silence deep,
    Just you and I, our secrets to keep.
    (Chorus)
    Butterflies dancing in my soul,
    As you leaned in to make me whole.
    Magical moments, dreams come true,
    Kissing under the sky so blue.
    (Verse 2)
    A day spent together, almost gone,
    Yet you lingered, not wanting to move on.
    Time stood still, just you and I,
    Lost in each other, reaching for the sky.
    (Chorus)
    Butterflies dancing in my soul,
    As you leaned in to make me whole.
    Magical moments, dreams come true,
    Kissing under the sky so blue.
    (Bridge)
    But now the stars have lost their glow,
    And I'm left wondering where to go.
    Caught in a cycle of hope and despair,
    Wishing you'd see how much I care.
    (Chorus)
    Butterflies fading in my soul,
    As you slip away, leaving a hole.
    Dreams shattered, reality in view,
    Lost in the darkness without you.

  • @pinkylipsssss
    @pinkylipsssss Před 2 lety +6

    This song is so good it doesn't even needs a lyrics to feel it ♥️

  • @ArtAttack98
    @ArtAttack98 Před 3 lety +9

    I'm glad that I found this. I enjoy songwriting but I can't play any instruments. I need to find a way to learn guitar or piano by myself without taking any courses lol

  • @flxralxmoon5803
    @flxralxmoon5803 Před 3 lety +34

    i found a chorus yesh lets go
    I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU OOOOO
    oh darn thats a song already

  • @hersheannecunanan791
    @hersheannecunanan791 Před 3 lety +2

    We are all made equally
    And we we'll be gone eventually
    So while we live in this beautiful world
    Let's respect each other and create a world we can mold
    at tayo nga ay nilalang sa mundo
    Upang maging TAYOOOO
    Wag alalahanin ang ibang taOoooooo
    Dahil ikaw ay masayaaaa sa iyoo
    Tayo ay ginawa ng Diyos
    Mahal nya tayo ng lubos
    Kaya tayo'y mabuhay at maging masaya

  • @sweetzingg
    @sweetzingg Před 2 lety +4

    LOVE YOU SO MUCH. I started writing a song with this music and I’m already done. Did this in a whole day. I wrote about my mom and sister being in jail. This song fit so perfect with my lyrics. Thank you for make this.

  • @BaseballSam2
    @BaseballSam2 Před 3 lety +12

    Verse 1:
    You are so far away
    I am alone today
    You found a better man
    I do understand
    Chorus 1:
    I could've done better
    You are a go-getter
    I want another chance
    At love and romance
    Verse 2:
    I've made my mistakes
    But now whatever it takes
    I'll be there for her more
    And I won't shut the door
    Chorus 2:
    Time for me to grow up
    Let love bloom, not blow up
    I want another chance
    At love and romance
    Bridge: *(Instrumental~ Let the music play here)*
    Chorus 3:
    For her, I will do
    What I didn't for you
    I need another chance
    At love and romance

    • @bangtanmendes6433
      @bangtanmendes6433 Před 3 lety

      this lyrics is awesome! i would like to ask if i can make a song out of it and say that the lyrics is from you! we can talk private uhm my instagram is : defnemelisaakduman add me and text me private!

    • @mickydrew
      @mickydrew Před 3 lety

      I tried singing along with the lyrics and its definitely lacking. There needs to be another verse

    • @BaseballSam2
      @BaseballSam2 Před 3 lety

      @@lysolflavoredpoptarts No problem. I'm usually not the best at writing lyrics to love songs that are pretty basic. I'm reworking it so it's something more.

  • @kwisaweinn704
    @kwisaweinn704 Před 2 lety +34

    2022, anyone?

  • @tanwenwarren3714
    @tanwenwarren3714 Před 3 lety +11

    I'm 11 and always wanted to write my own songs and this really helped me get know how to lay them out it took me an hour to finish but time went so quick and I really enjoyed it ❤️

  • @cassiebrynteson1900
    @cassiebrynteson1900 Před 3 lety +11

    My 13 year old daughter wrote a song about her troubles in school with your music!! It sounds amazing. Thank you for allowing me to purchase your music!!

    • @DanWilliamRooney
      @DanWilliamRooney  Před 3 lety +1

      That's great and thanks for purchasing my track! I'm happy to hear it turned out great! You're very welcome 😊 stay tuned for more!

    • @cassiebrynteson1900
      @cassiebrynteson1900 Před 3 lety

      @@DanWilliamRooney czcams.com/video/aBWg7Rs4K2M/video.html here is the link to her song! Let me know what you think!

    • @DanWilliamRooney
      @DanWilliamRooney  Před 3 lety +1

      @@cassiebrynteson1900 Thanks for sharing Cassie, its a beautiful song and awesome video put together with all the clips! well done to her :)

  • @leticia-zo9dk
    @leticia-zo9dk Před 2 lety +6

    The sound alone made me want to cry. This is only the beginning

  • @emmalinatappert-cronquist9590

    This piano thing was PERFECT for my song I have the perfect lyrics and the melody and rythum of the song matched like a charm for them!! Thank you SO much for creating this and I hope that one i can preform in front of people with these!

    • @DanWilliamRooney
      @DanWilliamRooney  Před 3 lety +1

      You are very welcome☺️ thank you for your support 👍

  • @Amy_Mont
    @Amy_Mont Před 3 lety +26

    My lyrics
    Sitting all alone crying in my bedroom, teary eyes bad nights all because I miss you
    Tryna keep it in but it rushes out, never felt this way want you to come back now.
    All I know is
    Chorus :
    You’re somewhere happy somewhere safe, somewhere where you can’t hear my heart break, all I need to know is that you’re fine, send me a message anything will do, anything that brings me back to you, clear my head and soon I’ll be able to fly... bright eyes.
    Verse
    The sparkle in your eyes the first day that I met you, the tears that I’ve cried because I left you.... you believed in me and I believed in you... I let you go, I let my dreams go too.
    All I know is
    Chorus
    You’re somewhere happy somewhere safe, somewhere where you can’t hear my heart break, all I need to know is that you’re fine.. send me a message anything will do, anything that brings me back to you, clear my head and soon I’ll be able to fly... bright eyes.
    Bridge:
    Tell me this is just a game, did you really fade away going ahead and leaving me behind.. x2
    (Goes into the chorus but ignore it)
    Bright eyes

    • @DanWilliamRooney
      @DanWilliamRooney  Před 3 lety +1

      Thanks for sharing your lyrics, I hope you will make a great song with the track and share it here 😀

    • @Amy_Mont
      @Amy_Mont Před 3 lety

      @@DanWilliamRooney thank you! I’m working on it now! I will share it when it’s done

    • @torilori1739
      @torilori1739 Před 3 lety +1

      This is amazing! I listened to the song and sang your lyrics, it was perfect!

    • @Amy_Mont
      @Amy_Mont Před 3 lety

      @@torilori1739 thank you so much! Means everything to me x

    • @torilori1739
      @torilori1739 Před 3 lety

      You’re welcome! My lyrics didn’t end up as good as yours but I’m still trying!

  • @zachgibson394
    @zachgibson394 Před 4 měsíci +9

    when the sun dies
    verse1-
    do you remember, looking up at the stars?
    even when i was sad, you werent very far.
    i will spend my life finding my way back to you.
    and when i get there i will hold you close to my heart
    chorus-
    even when the sun dies, i could find you without light.
    under stain glass and broken minds, all i need is your smile
    they say home is where the heart is, but you still have mine.
    cant call this living because im not living by your side.
    verse2-
    when in lie in bed at night, i cry so vicously.
    and i cant seem to get the good times off my mind.
    gone in a flash was the times we had.
    I'm a fool for letting you go, i wish it was the past
    bridge-
    I'm hurting i cant let go, can i fall in love again
    knowing that i hurt your soul
    outro-
    thank you for the good times
    thank you for the laughs
    goodbye my beautiful blue flame pyre

    • @avan_sings_4ever
      @avan_sings_4ever Před 4 měsíci

      Hey im a musician and I'd love to use the lyrics to one of my songs, I love these

  • @torilori1739
    @torilori1739 Před 3 lety +19

    my lyrics ( unlike me)
    Verse 1
    Why did i ever leave your side you were the only one for me but now i'm out on the streets looking for someone new but i don't seem to have any luck you don't seem to be giving up, unlike me
    chorus
    If you wont give up i won’t give up on you either you make my eyes shimmer whenever you're not there i'm thinking of you then i'll be thinking bout what you do and i'll never stop
    Verse 2
    Do you know how much you mean to me i've been thinking of you non stop but do you really want me back? I know I want you back but do you agree? Unlike me
    chorus
    If you wont give up i won’t give up on you either you make my eyes shimmer whenever you're not there i'm thinking of you then i'll be thinking bout what you do and i'll never stop
    bridge
    Tell me this is all a dream because i know this would never happen
    Chorus
    If you wont give up i won’t give up on you either you make my eyes shimmer whenever you're not there i'm thinking of you then i'll be thinking bout what you do and i'll never stop

    • @Amy_Mont
      @Amy_Mont Před 3 lety +3

      These lyrics are amazing !

    • @torilori1739
      @torilori1739 Před 3 lety +1

      Thank you so much! I put a lot of effort into making them!

    • @torilori1739
      @torilori1739 Před 3 lety

      New video on my channel

    • @torilori1739
      @torilori1739 Před 3 lety

      And thank you!

    • @jay.jay0
      @jay.jay0 Před 3 lety +1

      I could try making a song with this aha

  • @crikelwood5799
    @crikelwood5799 Před 3 lety +7

    Verse 1:
    It’s time to realize
    Who we’ve become
    Time to right the wrongs
    That we have done
    Promise me that you’ll come back
    From the edge
    All those things you said went over our heads
    Chorus 1:
    We did things right we did things wrong
    Tell me how to fix this now that you're gone
    I'm having trouble staying strong
    I know that i should be moving on
    Verse 2:
    I never thought this is how it could be
    Time to stand up and face reality
    Making sure that I put myself first
    I’ve broken promises and much worse
    Chorus 2:
    We did things right we did things wrong
    Tell me how to fix this now that you're gone
    I'm having trouble staying strong
    I know that i should be moving on
    Bridge:
    I'm sorry i was never good enough
    But you’ve seem to have ran and left me in the dust
    I know we could've got it right
    but now i have to say goodnight
    Chorus 3:
    We did things right we did things wrong
    Tell me how to fix this now that you're gone
    I'm having trouble staying strong
    I know that i should be moving on

  • @simonsmith4586
    @simonsmith4586 Před rokem +5

    Keep pushing on, Keep pushing on,
    As soon there will be another...
    If you stare at the ocean, only then you'll see
    What lies beneath looking right back at me
    Keep pushing on, and on and on,
    Until you're strong, strong my brother,
    Hold on tight, tight, tight and soon you will see,
    The arms of your brother, coming out of the sea.

  • @grace5565
    @grace5565 Před 3 lety +9

    Chorus 1:
    My head is always filled
    with thoughts I cant ignore
    and my heart feels close to starting to break again
    but how can i give advice when my whole worlds falling apart, I try and try to look away and up for the stars, but my gaze is falling under and im sinking...

  • @annelies458
    @annelies458 Před 3 lety +9

    everyone in this comment section is so talented omg

  • @rosie494
    @rosie494 Před 3 lety +16

    I just got bored so I wrote something:)
    Intro
    I really thought you loved me
    You made pretty clear how you felt I only wish you had told me bit sooner
    Verse-1
    You say you love
    We both know you really didn't
    So cut the act
    Get something straight
    For once tell me the truth
    I really thought what we had was real
    Now I can see your true self
    It took 2 months for me to realize
    I only wish I had seen it earlier
    Chorus
    All the words you wrote
    All the hearts you drew
    Were all a joke
    Would you love me if I changed my name?
    Would you love me the same?
    Broke my heart in two
    Your acting all tough on the outside
    Your only weakness is me
    If you loved me
    You wouldn't have let me go
    Verse-2
    You lied straight to my face
    Didn't hesitate
    Didn't care how I felt
    Did you ever really care for me?
    If you did
    You wouldn't have done for what you did
    I really wish you had told me bit sooner
    Because then I could have avoided all this drama
    With you there is always drama
    Chorus
    All the words you wrote
    All the hearts you drew
    Were all a joke
    Would you love me if I changed my name?
    Would you love me the same?Broke my heart in two
    Your acting all tough on the outside
    Your only weakness is me
    If you loved me
    You wouldn't have let me go
    Bridge
    You put me through hell
    Stood by your side after everything you did
    I deserve much better than that
    Chorus
    All the words you wrote
    All the hearts you drew
    Were all a joke
    Would you love me if I changed my name?
    Would you love me the same?Broke my heart in two
    Your acting all tough on the outside
    Your only weakness is me
    If you loved me
    You wouldn't have let me go
    Outro-
    loving you was my biggest regret
    Loving you took so much more from me
    Be safe and be happy:)
    credits @Nidha Aysha

  • @NickOverEasy
    @NickOverEasy Před 2 lety +8

    "NOTEBOOK PAGES"
    I still remember the last time
    That you and I just talked
    It was only for a little while
    But it still felt oh so long
    One day I had so much to say
    And you just drifted to the sky
    And something left my heart that day
    When you didn't even say goodbye
    I still have those notebook pages
    On which we'd draw and write for hours
    And though I haven't touched them in ages
    I know which works of art are ours
    All the corners might be tattered
    But in my mind it's still so new
    Yes, my heart is worn and shattered
    In spite of this, I still love you
    Through these notebook pages
    Remember we were in the park
    Just doing what kids do
    And even though we'd fall sometimes
    You and I would still push through
    You saw the light in everything
    Even when I thought it bland
    You always helped me to my feet
    When I was too weak to stand
    I still have those notebook pages
    On which we'd draw and write for hours
    And though I haven't touched them in ages
    I know which works of art are ours
    All the corners might be tattered
    But in my mind it's still so new
    Yes, my heart is worn and shattered
    In spite of this, I still love you
    Through these notebook pages
    And these are not just memories
    This is what made me who I am
    And now I sing our melodies
    With a pen in my hand
    Writing on new notebook pages
    About the laughter we once shared
    I might not be amongst the sages
    But when I'm with you, I don't care
    And all else seems not to matter
    When your smile is my best view
    I pray that God gives me a ladder
    So I can finally climb to you
    And say...
    Remember these notebook pages
    On which we'd draw and write for hours?
    And though I haven't touched them in ages
    I know which works of art are ours
    All the corners might be tattered
    But in my mind it's still so new
    Yes, this world my heart has shattered
    But now I can say to you
    "I love you"
    Through notebook pages

  • @ashkay7950
    @ashkay7950 Před 3 lety +8

    It hurts to breathe
    Can someone save me
    My eyes are tired if crying
    And im bleeding from the wound
    Don't you see
    Its from when you backstabbed me
    Its sad
    I loved having you around
    And I wish I knew it now
    You weren't the best in my town
    But some things are hard to find out
    (Oh)
    And i love you its true
    And i miss you its true
    And ill never have a friend like you
    Even if you werent as good as I knew
    It hurts to breathe can someone save me
    My eyes are tired from crying
    Im bleeding from the wound of when you backstabbed me
    Backstabbed
    Its sad
    I loved having you around
    I guess ill just go run
    Cause how could I find another one?
    A friend
    They say beauty is pain, I guess that's why im numb
    Oh it hurts to breathe can someone save me im falling of this steep mountain, my ex friend saw me in pain and they just walked away
    Its sad
    But its now
    Hear that sound?
    It means some things are hard to find out.
    But maybe ill find my way out.

  • @Kraziiieee
    @Kraziiieee Před 2 lety +6

    I just wanna die sometimes. Never knew there wasn't a right time. To cry . Sit there and just. Die inside. I'm fading to. A different place. A life that's safe. I don't wanna feel like this my entire life. I wanna spend it with you . Not cry. Oh i would do anything not to feel like this. I love you. Everything you do..I wanna spend my life with you. I wish there was a door . That led me straight into something bigger. Something better. Somewhere out there is my home. Nowhere to go right now. But I wanna build a life with people joyous. Where everyone deserves love . But I still live out an entire mess .
    That was the chorus and outro

  • @Clvudii1
    @Clvudii1 Před 2 lety +10

    This is my song, do it all for you
    If you feel like you can’t do something just because you didn’t try, just know that I’ll be out there, out there urging you on, out there helping you every step of the way, out there, out there
    And I know, I know that seems impossible - I mean, I mean how can I watch over you - how can I help you?? When I’m so far away
    Try doing that puzzle of life, I know that all the pieces will fit, try making that money- making that family, I’ll help you every step of the way, help you because you love me, help you
    And I know, I know that seems impossible - I mean, I mean how can I watch over you - how can I help you?? When I’m so far away
    My love, my life, I’d fall if you died, my spirit, my heart
    And I know, I know that seems impossible - I mean, I mean how can I watch over you - how can I help you?? When I’m so far away
    I’d do it all, do it all for you

  • @xolaylaroberts1009
    @xolaylaroberts1009 Před rokem +7

    Verse
    When i saw you for the first time,
    I wanted to walk away.
    When I saw you for second time,
    oh i knew it was fate.
    I didn't know what to say or do,
    because i thought it was always you.
    Every day was a useless chore.
    So love me a little more.
    Chorus

  • @theguerreros4043
    @theguerreros4043 Před 2 lety +11

    EVERY TIME by: Avani
    Verse 1
    I see the stars at night
    It's shinning like his eyes
    I faint and fall some times
    Chorce
    Ooh, oh (x2)
    I know I know I know
    It's him in my eyes
    I cry myself at night
    bc I miss him every time (x2
    Verse 2
    I see him in my shadows
    It's him playing the trombone
    So calm and jazzy from time to time
    Ooh, oh
    Why me why him why do I cry like this
    EVERY TIME (X3)
    Ooh, oh ,ooh(x2)
    Chorce
    I know I know I know
    It's him in my eyes
    I cry myself to the night
    Bc I miss him every time
    Every time~
    Please make a some of this

  • @rene_operating5696
    @rene_operating5696 Před 9 měsíci +8

    Verse 1:
    Fairytales and make believe,
    I look in your eyes I do believe.
    It's what you say and what you do, I forget my past when I'm with you.
    Oh yeah I see theres a chance. I flirt with you my heart tells me to make my advance. Why can't you just take my hand and take me for this dance...?
    Chorus:
    Our memories, all that we made together. Healed, I'm scarred we laugh about it.
    If I knew the words I’d say It to you. Sober im scared to even tell you.
    Mistakes and my fears, they all disappear when I'm with you. Doo doo doo doo doo~
    Verse 2;
    Doo doo doo doo doo doo~
    Going with the flow, the current picks up speed. Down the river you float with me. I give my love no in between.
    Heart racing faster your in front of me, I look at him just let him be. I miss him so when he's so sweet, one wrong move he goes bitter sweet.
    Chorus:
    Oh so scarred, emotions running wild. Sit in your car, I'd drive a million miles.
    I just wanna let you know, that everything I say is true. drunk I told you, drunk I talked. Internally I was being blunt. It's not like I'd lie to you, this confession over-due.
    Bridge:
    Dearest, I wish you nothing but the best. I feel like I cannot attest.... but my love~ I'll treat you better then anyone
    Chorus:
    All I ask is you think, I wrote this for you took a leap. I wish that you were mine, don't you think we could give us a try?~

  • @lovelyadoptme9808
    @lovelyadoptme9808 Před 2 lety +7

    i can't wait
    til the day i die
    because the day i die
    ill finally feel alive
    i can't wish
    the same for you
    our love is gone
    and that's the truth
    ¡ just want to feel a beat
    cause this flatlines
    always on repeat

  • @jamespotterforever_2131
    @jamespotterforever_2131 Před 2 lety +8

    Hiding from heartbreak
    There you are again
    With A tear running down your face
    I stand and stare at you
    with hatred and distaste
    You try not to look at me
    With my eyes burning into you
    I keep focused, my eye on the prize
    I can’t go back to you
    Cause I’m
    Hiding from heartbreak (yeah I’m)
    Hiding from heartbreak (cause I)
    Cant afford to lose control with someone like you
    Hiding from heartbreak (yeah I’m)
    Hiding from heartbreak (cause I)
    Feel like a monster when I’m around you

  • @ryleewainwright4248
    @ryleewainwright4248 Před rokem +8

    Verse 1:
    I try to love myself, but it's hard to do
    When I'm constantly comparing, to someone new
    I scroll through Instagram, and I feel so small
    But why should I believe, that's the perfect goal
    Chorus:
    Cause I'm more than just my body
    More than what they see
    I'm beautiful and worthy
    Just the way I wanna be
    I'm learning to love myself
    For who I am inside
    And I won't let society's standards
    Make me wanna hide
    Verse 2:
    I used to skip meals, just to fit in
    But now I know, that's not where I begin
    I'm embracing my curves, and my flaws too
    Cause they make me unique, and that's so true
    Chorus:
    Cause I'm more than just my body
    More than what they see
    I'm beautiful and worthy
    Just the way I wanna be
    I'm learning to love myself
    For who I am inside
    And I won't let society's standards
    Make me wanna hide
    Bridge:
    I'm done with the pressure, to look a certain way
    I'm done with the judgment, that comes my way
    I'm gonna live my life, on my own terms
    Cause I am enough, just as I am
    Chorus:
    Cause I'm more than just my body
    More than what they see
    I'm beautiful and worthy
    Just the way I wanna be
    I'm learning to love myself
    For who I am inside
    And I won't let society's standards
    Make me wanna hide.

    • @jenniferchai5267
      @jenniferchai5267 Před rokem +2

      DANNGGGGGG. these lyrics are really touching and DEFINITELY underrated. The public needs to see this

    • @MusicDJVolkov
      @MusicDJVolkov Před rokem

      You should be a songwriter it’s so real. I am so sorry that you had to go through that pain and I hope you’re better now.

  • @fullerenergy
    @fullerenergy Před 2 lety +5

    I ABSOLUTELY love writing songs for friends this is going to help so much

  • @Zoe_Liv1214
    @Zoe_Liv1214 Před 6 měsíci +10

    I wrote some lyrics for this backing track and I think they turned out ok. The song is about regreting everything after a breakup and not knowing what to do about it. I called it "Who am I" Here it is. I hope you like it! 😁
    I can't believe I just fell for all that again
    Thought I had gotten smarter but I guess I'm still naive
    Maybe love just isn't for everyone after all
    Yeah I wish I could think of something happy
    But nothing's happy anymore
    When will love stop embarrassing me
    When will I stop feeling like a fool
    When will I stop thinking about
    How little I've learned
    Oh nothing seems to distract me
    I don't know how to get out of this misery
    I'm not feeling like me
    Ooh ooh oh
    Gosh I feel so stupid I can't even
    Think properly to reflect on my actions through that time
    Thought I had finally find my type and my person
    But I guess that as usual I was wrong
    It feels like I always am
    When will love stop embarrassing me
    When will I stop feeling like a fool
    When will I stop thinking about
    How little I've learned
    Oh nothing seems to distract me
    I don't know how to get out of this misery
    I'm not feeling like me
    Ooh ooh oh
    What did I do wrong
    What did I mess up this time
    What can I do to fix it all
    What can I do to save myself
    When will love stop embarrassing me
    When will I stop feeling like a fool
    When will I stop thinking about
    How little I've learned
    Oh nothing seems to distract me
    I don't know how to get out of this misery
    I'm not feeling like me
    Ooh ooh oh
    Ah ooh

    • @Thatonepersonly
      @Thatonepersonly Před 6 měsíci

      Ima have to use those lyrics they are great!!❤

  • @Cat-fb7nh
    @Cat-fb7nh Před 2 lety +7

    Verse 1:
    I look into your eyes
    Their almost like starlight
    Lookin at that smile
    Its radiating
    Levitating
    Im telling you how much I love you
    And Your sayin it back too
    Chorus:
    In my heart I wish it was real
    But no matter what I feel
    It will never be true
    You never feel for me
    The way I feel for you
    The way I feel for you
    I wish you would say it too
    I love you
    Verse 2:
    Something bout your voice
    Makes it seem like there's no choice
    But You don’t have to say anything
    You make me feel like I can blaze off with wings
    But your always the one shining
    But you see through me
    Maybe it's not meant to be
    But in my dreams it is
    Chorus:
    In my heart I wish it was real
    But no matter what I feel
    It will never be true
    You never feel for me
    The way I feel for you
    The way I feel for you
    I wish you would say it too
    I love you
    Bridge:
    Im crumbling to pieces
    I can’t resist
    Loving you
    But no matter how much I wish you would too
    It will never be true
    Chorus:
    In my heart I wish it was real
    But no matter what I feel
    It will never be true
    You never feel for me
    The way I feel for you
    The way I feel for you
    I wish you would say it too
    I love you

  • @lisalisalisa4299
    @lisalisalisa4299 Před 3 lety +6

    Verse1:
    Houses built growing to the sky
    Stars will fall catching your soul die
    Water flows through the poorest hearts
    Lean your side and close your eyes
    Chorus:
    Sun is here till the dusk
    Clouds not hiding raining through the stars
    Moon will rise again for you
    Giving what you never start to knew
    Verse 2:
    Shutting down the falling drops in love
    Waiting them to meet each other slow
    Let this be your hidden ground and time
    Never forget what you were to find
    Chorus:
    Sun is here till the dusk
    Clouds not hiding raining through the stars
    Moon will rise again for you
    Giving what you never start to knew
    Bridge: let the music play
    Sun is here till the dusk
    Clouds not hiding raining through the stars
    Moon will rise again for you
    Giving what you never start to knew
    Thank you! 🙃
    I also named it "Lofé" from love-life

    • @crazzyee1845
      @crazzyee1845 Před 3 lety +1

      this is a beautiful song I love it!!

  • @ryleesworld4465
    @ryleesworld4465 Před 3 lety +9

    This is what I have so far
    Verse 1
    When I look at you, you look at me. It’s been ups and downs and I’m feeling lonely. Do you really not care? Can you just notice me? And I’ve been through a lot hoping you’d be there for me.

    • @keira2774
      @keira2774 Před 3 lety

      nice :)

    • @keira2774
      @keira2774 Před 3 lety

      @Riya Robinson its good!

    • @Anonymous-gk7fo
      @Anonymous-gk7fo Před 3 lety +1

      Will you finish and sing it? I want to see it 👀👀 i wanna vibe

    • @ryleesworld4465
      @ryleesworld4465 Před 3 lety

      @@Anonymous-gk7fo No, sorry - I don’t sing online

  • @imogenyoung1297
    @imogenyoung1297 Před 3 lety +17

    I suck at writing songs, but here's my lyrics
    I've been holding back emotions
    Now I'm swimming in an ocean
    Trying to comprehend these potions
    Learning how to breath
    I've been leaning against trying
    but all I learn is dying
    what's this song about lovin'
    cause now I'm stuck in a wreath
    Chorus-
    All I have is Deja Vu
    and this songs that's meant for you
    I only want to hear softening blues
    cause I'm learning how to breath
    All I have is Deja Vu
    and this song that's meant for you
    I only want to hear these sadning blues
    Cause now I'm stuck in a wreath
    Deja Vu
    Verse 2-
    Why do I keep lying
    The only thing I've been tryin'
    Is to stop this cryin'
    cause it'll lead me nowhere
    Oooo
    Oooo
    Oooo
    Chorus-
    All I have is Deja Vu
    and this songs that's meant for you
    I only want to hear softening blues
    cause I'm learning how to breath
    All I have is Deja Vu
    and this song that's meant for you
    I only want to hear these sadning blues
    Cause now I'm stuck in a wreath
    Breakdown`
    And now he put me in his past
    Our memories won't last
    Now he's found someone new
    End Chorus-
    All I have is Deja Vu
    and this songs that's meant for you
    I only want to hear softening blues
    cause I'm learning how to breath
    All I have is Deja Vu
    and this song that's meant for you
    I only want to hear these sadning blues
    Cause now I'm stuck in a wreath
    Deja Vu
    Deja Vu

    • @DanWilliamRooney
      @DanWilliamRooney  Před 3 lety +2

      You definitely DO NOT suck at writing!! Amazing lyrics! thank you for sharing them here 😀😀😀

    • @bobakuchan1062
      @bobakuchan1062 Před 3 lety +2

      Can I flipping hire you for my series?!?!???? Thats dang good!

    • @imogenyoung1297
      @imogenyoung1297 Před 3 lety +1

      @@bobakuchan1062 thank you XD Although, your being very modest, but still, thank you XD

    • @imogenyoung1297
      @imogenyoung1297 Před 3 lety

      @Autumn Labossiere aww, no, I'm sure your great at it! But thank you, I had no idea what I was doing

    • @kirajanae3331
      @kirajanae3331 Před 3 lety +1

      May I please sing your song I will definitely give you credit I want to post it on tik tok can you drop yours so I can tag you??

  • @micadelrosario531
    @micadelrosario531 Před rokem +3

    At a young age, I was gifted with grace, singing, dancing, and acting
    Writing poetry can also be done, playing sports is also what I want
    My talent will be taught to others, I will share whatever I can, I will always show it, I will act on it with full joy.

  • @isabellabosch148
    @isabellabosch148 Před 29 dny +7

    Oooh oooh its the morning light.
    Woke up to the morning light, a bittersweet surprise,
    Memories of you and me, they still haunt my mind,
    We were young and reckless, thought we had it all,
    But like the sun, our love had to fall.
    Pre-Chorus:
    I tried to hold on, but you slipped away,
    Now I'm left with nothing but the words I couldn't say.
    Chorus:
    Morning light, it breaks my heart,
    Shines on the pieces of us, torn apart,
    I thought forever meant you'd stay,
    But now forever's just a word we threw away.
    Verse 2:
    Drove by our favorite place, where we used to laugh,
    Now it's just a ghost town, echoes of the past,
    I play our song on repeat, it's my only friend,
    Reminds me of a love that had to end.
    Pre-Chorus:
    I tried to hold on, but you slipped away,
    Now I'm left with nothing but the words I couldn't say.
    Chorus:
    Morning light, it breaks my heart,
    Shines on the pieces of us, torn apart,
    I thought forever meant you'd stay,
    But now forever's just a word we threw away.
    Bridge:
    Maybe someday I'll heal, find someone new,
    But they'll never be you, never be you,
    I'll keep our memories locked up tight,
    In the morning light, I'll say goodbye.
    Chorus:
    Morning light, it breaks my heart,
    Shines on the pieces of us, torn apart,
    I thought forever meant you'd stay,
    But now forever's just a word we threw away.
    Outro:
    Woke up to the morning light, a bittersweet surprise,
    Memories of you and me, they still haunt my mind.

    • @tamaragresham4312
      @tamaragresham4312 Před 29 dny

      OKOK I SEE YOUUU. If you don’t sing i will use this backing track and use your lyrics and give you credit!!

    • @EllaSmellaSlays
      @EllaSmellaSlays Před 24 dny +1

      Ummm I love this SO MUCH I sang it for my friends and said I found a random comment and it was the song and they were shocked they told me I should sing it for the talent show next yeat

    • @With_Army_5818
      @With_Army_5818 Před 14 dny

      ​@@EllaSmellaSlaysgood luck

  • @VeryMuchShyGuy
    @VeryMuchShyGuy Před 7 měsíci +8

    It just happens that this was the perfect instrumental that I needed. Basically my enemy just started dating the person I had a crush on since 5th grade, So.. Here is the song I made:
    (Verse 1)
    Isabella and Mason, a couple in the air,
    It's hard to deny, it's a little hard to bear.
    But I won't let it bring me down, I'll keep my head up high,
    Because love's a funny thing, and life's a wild ride.
    (Chorus)
    But hey, I won't let it break my heart,
    I'll find my own path, a brand new start.
    There's someone out there, waiting just for me,
    So I'll keep on smiling, and let my heart be free.
    (Verse 2)
    Isabella may have caught his eye, that's true,
    But there's a whole world of possibilities, and I'll find mine too.
    I'll focus on myself, my dreams, and my goals,
    Love will find its way, and mend my wounded soul.
    (Chorus)
    But hey, I won't let it break my heart,
    I'll find my own path, a brand new start.
    There's someone out there, waiting just for me,
    So I'll keep on smiling, and let my heart be free.
    (Bridge)
    Maybe Mason's not meant for me, and that's okay,
    I'll cherish the friendship we have, every single day.
    (Chorus)
    But hey, I won't let it break my heart,
    I'll find my own path, a brand new start.
    There's someone out there, waiting just for me,
    So I'll keep on smiling, and let my heart be free.
    (Outro)
    So let's raise a glass to love, and to moving on.

  • @remiellis972
    @remiellis972 Před 3 lety +20

    Here’s my try, tell me wat u guys think (1st time )
    Verse 1
    Why do I feel like I don’t belong
    too many faces
    Just wanna talk to someone
    Without thinking everything
    I say is wrong
    Chorus :
    Will someone tell me what’s wrong
    Tired of feeling all alone
    Will someone tell me what’s wrong
    Sometimes I don’t even wanna know
    Maybe I should just stay alone
    Verse 2:
    Now you’ll be gone with him
    What can I say
    It’s not my fault ?
    I say love will never last unless
    You are of sound mind and thought
    Chorus :
    Will someone tell me what’s wrong
    Tired of feeling all alone
    Will someone tell me what’s wrong
    Sometimes I don’t even wanna know
    Maybe I should just stay alone
    Bridge : Maybe soon ,Maybe soon ,Maybe soon
    I’ll be ok. *2
    Outro:
    It maybe stormy now but it never rains forever .
    -Bjorn

    • @sofijas.5334
      @sofijas.5334 Před 3 lety +2

      This is amazing you actually have amazing talent you should really start thinking about being a song writer:D or a singer that can write their own song:D

    • @remiellis972
      @remiellis972 Před 3 lety

      @@sofijas.5334 thank you !!

    • @r.5500
      @r.5500 Před 3 lety +2

      its good, i just couldnt fit it in

    • @SPADEXixa
      @SPADEXixa Před 3 lety +1

      Do u make music becuase if u do i think you would be rlly good at it

    • @remiellis972
      @remiellis972 Před 3 lety

      @@r.5500 thank you ... what do u mean ?

  • @aveprexiequijano2151
    @aveprexiequijano2151 Před 4 lety +38

    This melody is very good❤ Can I use this music for my original lyric composition?😊Thankyou.

  • @neilrobin2313
    @neilrobin2313 Před 2 lety +5

    I see u lighting in the sky but u never saw me i waited till i grew up i see ur face but u never look at me do u think im ugly ugh i wish i was beautiful like u now help me to overcome fear i can't do this without youuuu so yea help me help me to grow in ur eyes
    I wish i was there for uuuuuuuuuu.

    • @neilrobin2313
      @neilrobin2313 Před 2 lety +4

      I wish i was there for u i waited my entire whole life for uuuuu for uuuuuuu for uuuuuu
      And i dont wnna waste on it another things and i wish to see the stars glowing the sky still.
      the sky’s look so pretty at the darky night i see it glowing now i feel it in my heart

  • @inqeed5879
    @inqeed5879 Před 2 lety +15

    *Intro until **0:16*
    Have you ever had those dreams,
    When all you did was think of me.
    Waking up in my bedroom,
    Didnt understand what you’ve been through.
    Maybe you want a drink or two,
    We have coffee, milk-, orange juice.
    Maybe you wanna lay back down,
    Darling dont look at me with that frown.
    *Chorus: **0:49*
    Im sorry you have ever felt this way,
    Im sorry that I tried pushing away
    Dear, I know how much it meant to you...
    But I think I need this break
    Its nothing severe is just the way
    I need to get up and go away
    All of this is just to clear my mind...
    *verse 2: **1:25*
    Soon in a day you need to go
    Pack all your stuff dont be too slow.
    None of this is personal,
    Make sure you got everything from the drawer
    Today is the last day to stay this week.
    Im sorry it had to end this way.
    -----pause------
    But therefore,
    *chorus again: **2:00*
    Im sorry you have ever felt this way,
    Im sorry that I tried pushing away
    Dear, I know how much it meant to you...
    But I think I need this break
    Its nothing severe is just the way
    I need to get up and go away
    All of this is just to clear my mind...
    *bridge: **2:34*
    It’s been a bit without you here
    It sucks being alone, you disappeared
    When your name is said I always hear.
    *chorus finale but with a pinch of a change: **2:48*
    Im sorry you have ever felt this way,
    Im sorry that I tried pushing away
    Baby I know that I love you
    And I think im done with this break
    Its finally fine, I was overwhelmed
    Have a seat we need to chat.
    I love you so much dear, remember that.~

  • @idk-kr7nh
    @idk-kr7nh Před 3 lety +58

    im only 13 so i aint good with song writeing but i got this
    1st verse
    are you really inlove with me
    or are u just playing me like a slot machine.
    i wondered do you really love me
    and thats the pain i really dont wanna see.
    so if you wanna break me go ahead and fucking leave.
    chorus
    go ahead and just leave
    i dont care if u break me
    you choosed her over me
    and i gotta face reality.
    thats all i have so far

    • @scarlettr2438
      @scarlettr2438 Před 3 lety +3

      Omfg howwww I love this so much can u help meeee

    • @idk-kr7nh
      @idk-kr7nh Před 3 lety +1

      @@scarlettr2438 oh ofc I can help you 😁

    • @scarlettr2438
      @scarlettr2438 Před 3 lety

      @@idk-kr7nh do u have Instagram?

    • @idk-kr7nh
      @idk-kr7nh Před 3 lety +1

      @@scarlettr2438 in fact I doo

    • @scarlettr2438
      @scarlettr2438 Před 3 lety

      @@idk-kr7nh ok, what is your username? So I can dm u

  • @xothat_music_oliviaxo9465

    Just made a full song its called love like R&J its actually quite good considering how young i am Thank you so much Dan couldn't thank you more

  • @hplovers1526
    @hplovers1526 Před rokem +7

    Verse 1:
    Feeling alone on this special day
    Wishing someone would come and say
    Happy birthday, you mean so much to me
    But instead, silence is all I see
    Chorus:
    So I'll celebrate myself, in my own way
    I'll dance and sing, and make it a great day
    I won't let their absence bring me down
    I'll wear my crown, and own this town
    Verse 2:
    I'll treat myself to a fancy meal
    And indulge in something sweet and real
    I'll buy myself a gift or two
    Because today, it's all about me and you
    Chorus:
    So I'll celebrate myself, in my own way
    I'll dance and sing, and make it a great day
    I won't let their absence bring me down
    I'll wear my crown, and own this town
    Bridge:
    Don't need anyone else to make me feel whole
    I'm strong and independent, that's my goal
    I'll cherish myself, and love who I am
    Because today, it's my birthday jam
    Chorus:
    So I'll celebrate myself, in my own way
    I'll dance and sing, and make it a great day
    I won't let their absence bring me down
    I'll wear my crown, and own this town
    Outro:
    Happy birthday to me, I'm grateful for this life
    I'll keep shining bright, through any strife.

  • @maddy4392
    @maddy4392 Před 3 lety +7

    Verse 1.
    i...want you in my arms...didnt you hear me when i cried for you that day
    Is it so hard just to feel me
    Can you tell me how it tears you apart
    why
    chorus: I hold on, but you just run away
    I try so hard but you just shun my face
    I love you so why dont you just say I do..I do.
    verse2:
    Your love is blunt and it hurts like a gun
    I hold it tigght but you just hit and run
    Iv tried so hard be an angel but i see now
    we are just devils
    chorus:
    I hold on, but you just run away
    I try so hard but you just shun my face
    I love you so why dont you just say I do..I do.

  • @kyo_x
    @kyo_x Před 3 lety +17

    Here is my lyric! It isn’t the best but still! :)
    Here I am again
    All alone by myself
    I never thought we’d come this far
    I guess I really tried too hard
    I loved you
    But you can’t
    Thought we’d do this together but I guess I fooled myself
    I wont ever love that much again
    I trusted you
    But you left
    Like everyone else
    Here I am, thinking about the times we had
    We dreamt so much, but I guess it was just living hell
    We loved so much, we trusted so much
    But I can’t seem to find the answer in it
    Was it really all fake?
    I loved you
    But you can’t
    Thought we’d do this together but I guess I fooled myself
    I wont ever love that much again
    I trusted you
    But you left
    Like everyone else
    I really thought it was something
    Something special that no one else could ever rebuild, yeah
    I loved you
    But you can’t
    Thought we’d do this together but I guess I fooled myself
    I wont ever love that much again
    I trusted you
    But you left
    Like everyone else
    Love is Nice
    Love is fine
    But can Love ever really last?
    That was the question I had asked myself

    • @claire9513
      @claire9513 Před 3 lety +5

      That was really pretty!!!you need to upload a video of you singing it

    • @DanWilliamRooney
      @DanWilliamRooney  Před 3 lety +2

      Beautiful Lyrics😍😍 please share a recording if you made one, would love to hear it ❤️

    • @DanWilliamRooney
      @DanWilliamRooney  Před 3 lety +2

      So good 😍

  • @gm.8805
    @gm.8805 Před 3 lety +12

    okay so here’s the first verse and chorus:
    heaven’s reaching my ears
    and fate is coming to get a grasp on all my fears
    but that’s just what i think of it, right?
    sipping lime and i’m taking off my sweater
    two brown eyes seeking out for adventure
    but the only thrill i will receive is the pain from this so-called weather
    is everything falling back together like an unfinished puzzle
    like this unfinished puzzle
    or am i daydreaming again?
    cause its conceivable, it might satisfy my needs enough
    but it can never satisfy who i truly am
    or who i was
    it’s so hard to comprehend

  • @hannahcaan1832
    @hannahcaan1832 Před 2 lety +6

    Verse 1
    I just want you to know
    that i can see your eyes on me
    When i walk past to you
    My heart starts to shake yeah
    All the memories we had
    even though that you’re not sad
    it makes me feel even worse
    to know that you found a girl
    Doesn’t you think about me once?
    Chorus
    You’re playing with my head again
    Thought that you’ll look at me this time
    Guess that i was wrong again
    It hurts me to see you with her
    Can’t you just leave her?
    Am i not that pretty as her?
    Why can’t you choose me?
    Why am i the second choiiiiiiiice
    You’re the only one i want
    even though that you’re so bad
    And today i saw you again
    she hugged you right in front of me
    But i saw your eyes on me
    why are you playing again?
    God i hate that you’re with her
    Dreamed that i could change it
    But you look so happy with her
    Why is the world so unfair?
    But i need to move on
    even though it’s going to hurt
    Chorus
    You’re playing with my head again
    Thought that you’ll look at me this time
    Guess that i was wrong again
    It hurts me to see you with her
    Can’t you just leave her?
    Am i not that pretty as her?
    Why can’t you choose me?
    Why am i the second choiiiiiiiice
    You’re the only one i want
    even though that you’re so baaaad
    Bridge:
    Now i need to let you go
    it breaks my heart to see you with her
    why can’t i just forget you
    Oh it’s been 3 years
    Chorus
    You’re playing with my head again
    Thought that you’ll look at me this time
    Guess that i was wrong again
    It hurts me to see you with her
    Can’t you just leave her?
    Am i not that pretty as her?
    Why can’t you choose me?
    Why am i the second choiiiiiiiice
    You’re the only one i want
    even though that you’re so bad
    And what i learned
    is that love hurts
    even if you try your hardest
    It will destroy you
    Take care of you

  • @ellahenderson5993
    @ellahenderson5993 Před 2 lety +11

    Here’s my lyrics😭
    They say you never know
    What you've got until it's gone
    They say that everyone
    Can see the truth but you .
    I don't know what it is,
    That makes me feel like this.
    How I wish I could live another day of seeing you.
    Another day I just can't fight my way through.
    I hope you know it's true.
    {choirs}
    That I couldn’t love anyone but you.
    I've been in love a time or two.
    You are my dream come true,
    But I guess you’ll never love me like I do you.
    But there's something bout you
    That makes me wanna stay.
    Could hold me in the night
    Kiss you till the morning light
    When I think about you sometimes
    I can't help but wonder if I can make you mine.
    And I know you’re never gonna hear this song.
    So im gonna give it all I got.
    {choirs}
    I couldn’t love anyone but you.
    I've been in love a time or two.
    You are my dream come true,
    But I guess you’ll never love me like I do you.
    Even when the sky isn’t blue,
    And you probably don’t feel the same way as I do.
    know I’ll always love you.
    I try to put my pieces back together, now that my hope is gone
    But I can't seem to find the strength to move on, 'cause baby you're all I want
    I was just a girl in front of the boy who didn't love me back
    The boy who I loved with all of my heart, he just couldn't see it in me, and that hurt like hell
    And I'm trying to keep it together
    It's hard when you're not around
    And I'm trying to be so brave.
    And now I'm standing still and looking back on where I've been
    Waiting for him to catch up with me
    It's time for me to start a new chapter without him,
    And now I'm standing still and looking back on where I've been
    Waiting for him to catch up with me

  • @angelxbvnnyedits
    @angelxbvnnyedits Před 2 lety +5

    My heart hurts
    I see yours is too
    Helpless eyes
    And the color of blue
    I see your shine
    And I want you too

  • @444..maiiii
    @444..maiiii Před rokem +3

    “You’re little girl” this song is dedicated to my dad
    you Watched me talk you watched me crawl I’m grateful for your love you’re my everything I don’t know what id do if you were, but I’m happy that you’re here for me but always remember I’ll be a little girl our loves so strong it would never be torn in my darkest time ur right by my side I know you’re gonna be walking me down that aisle just like you ever dreamed of I love you so much no matter what if I’m mad at you just know I don’t ever mean to hurt you I will always be a little girl no matter what I will love you always
    ooooo~ yeah~
    our Love will never be lost for im your little girl yes ur little girl I’ll be with you every step of the way
    ❤️❤️❤️

  • @mikaylareyes6722
    @mikaylareyes6722 Před 3 lety +10

    Verse1
    Never thought Id have this dream like everyone’s just starring at me never thought I want to be like the other girls who are prettier than me never though this guy like me now everyone just talking about me Feel so weird but funny to me cause I never thought it was easy for me
    Chorus:
    But I’m always getting butterflies when this certain guy is always around me in science class I see the way he looks back at me I’m praying that he likes me too and it’s not just me (hmmm)
    Verse2:
    I don’t want fix myself because of some guy I want to be beautiful with out a doubt (ohhhh)he just laughing with friends and hopefully not talking about me (hmmm)
    Chorus: this is very thing I hoped and dreamt of since we met I laughed and talked about him all the time (hmmm)(ohhhhh) (woahhhh)
    Bridge:
    Instrumental
    Chorus:
    I hope I’m good enough pretty enough for me confident to be who I want to be ohhhhhhhhh) (ohhhhhhhh)
    Outro:
    ahhhhhhh)

    • @atiny6157
      @atiny6157 Před 3 lety

      hi just a little tip the chorus needs to be the same in a song the bridge needs to be some that connects the verse and the chorus but over all it was good

  • @lena-lz8xx
    @lena-lz8xx Před 2 lety +6

    1.Strophe:
    Every time you look at me
    When you look at me and smile
    I feel so easy, i feel so free
    my heart beats faster for a while
    Refrain:
    I've never been so in love
    I feel like a dream
    With you, it feels like I’m enough
    My thoughts are so clean

    • @lena-lz8xx
      @lena-lz8xx Před 2 lety

      1.Strophe:
      Every time you look at me
      When you look at me and smile
      I feel so easy, i feel so free
      my heart beats faster for a while
      Refrain:
      I've never been so in love
      I feel like a dream
      With you, it feels like I’m enough
      My thoughts are so clean
      2.Strophe
      I'm fine when I'm with you
      I think that will last forever with us
      still can't believe it's true
      Even if we sometimes discuss
      Refrain:
      I've never been so in love
      I feel like a dream
      With you, it feels like I’m enough
      My thoughts are so clean
      I enjoy the beautiful days
      please trust me, i'll stay with you, always

  • @layomi8505
    @layomi8505 Před 2 lety +5

    Honestly
    I didn’t see what you were looking for
    I didn’t think you would close the door on me so quick
    Maybe if
    We had that I talk had been asking you for weeks
    I wouldn’t be standing here bag in hand
    I thought that my eyes were like diamonds
    Yet here you are treating me like coal
    I thought I was the one with problems
    Looking now I guess it’s you
    Three years gone and now I’ve moved on with someone else
    They treat me better than you ever could
    It’s the last snow of winter and I hear a gentle ring outside my door
    I open up and there are you
    Remember when I said your eyes were like diamonds
    I’m sorry for treating you like coal
    Yes we both had our own separate problems
    But the only one I love I guess it’s you
    The memories they start to rush in
    Heart to hearts felt just like loving
    Take me out of this state
    I just dont wanna go back
    Remember when you said my eyes were diamonds
    And how you treated me like coal
    You were the one with the problems
    I stood there waiting for you to open the door
    Guess it’s you I was being a fool for