day#14 of uploading my things till they are great. (attempt 2 of the "rap" saga second fail)

not quite the right feel or as listable and loop able as I wanted and gets annoying quite fast. its not horrible but would need some crazy effort to make a decent song.
I am starting to get an understanding of what makes a beat good to rap on so that's good.
(I will be back to more instrumental focused tracks with variation tomorrow)
any feedback is great.

[@Xoltie]

Pretty groovy, just not as memorable as day 12. You’re making good progress 👍🏽

[@GeezSus]

This would make a fire song if you use automation clips and noises correctly ngl