[JK] When you came to know about his second wife

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Komentáře • 317

  • @maknaesobsession03
    @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +41

    Bonus part 👇
    czcams.com/video/qfsvH4jMtkA/video.html

  • @Youarealoser97
    @Youarealoser97 Před 2 lety +55

    He cheated for 2 years! That’s not a short time at all. He lead an innocent person on all these years and didn’t even tell her the truth. If he wanted a baby, then at least tell your partner instead of cheating. It hurts less to know that someone wants to break up than cheating. He doesn’t deserve her at all. All these years of cheating is a long time of pain that can’t be forgotten. And on top of that, he had a baby with another girl. I’m glad y/n is independent bc that’s deserving

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +4

      Yes we have to be brave and strong in every situation 🙂 Every girl should stand herself in every situation and mainly she should be an independent 🥲 Thank you for commenting 😚💜

  • @deepthirajeswari6421
    @deepthirajeswari6421 Před 2 lety +304

    Yess you aren't give birth to your baby means when you will be adopted also you will be also a mother ..don't insult anyone for not being a mother....and u can't leave in their middle...... and in this ff I don't like jk character.....he regrets his every decision... I really really love this. Ff author

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +17

      Thank you bubs😚😚 That's what i want show with this Ff, If we really love other's we should respect them and accept their flaws also🤧 Every Action has an equal and opposite reaction 🙃 we may move on from the time being but Karma never leave us alone🙂 Thank you once again for commenting ☺️ Take care 😘💖

    • @deepthirajeswari6421
      @deepthirajeswari6421 Před 2 lety +2

      @@maknaesobsession03 😍😍

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      @Min Yoonji is there any mistakes? If any then I'm sorry about grammatical mistakes 🥲🥲💜💜

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      @Min Yoonji ohhh:^)

    • @RakeshKumar-cx9mo
      @RakeshKumar-cx9mo Před 2 lety +2

      MeegobynooHaapyybabu😞

  • @jkxshaa
    @jkxshaa Před 2 lety +130

    I love it truly...this is so amazing the way y/n teach them their lesson with the truth i love it...the fault is just not jungkook's but sana's too....love itttt ♥️

  • @s_p732
    @s_p732 Před 2 lety +18

    13:17 "hey you cat uncle".... imagine BTS kids will call Yoongi like that🤣 aww

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +3

      Hahaha it's hilarious 😂😂 just imagine our cat face expression
      Suge look "wtf- I'm so done with these kids" 😾😾

    • @s_p732
      @s_p732 Před 2 lety +2

      @@maknaesobsession03 🤣

  • @aeiaemily3162
    @aeiaemily3162 Před 2 lety +36

    we need a bonus of jk pov of suffering . he didnt suffer enough , we need to see his suffering . just like you made yn a mother by adopting why is always you have to show only girls struggle and not boys like they arent a part of story . there were many unnecessary dialogues and you could have made something else in that place and showed jk life of suffering but no you only showed yn suffering and making her give all those useless lectures which arent needed . you didnt show jk life of suffering but glorified yn sturggle , are u sadist towards girls that you cant boys struggling . jk suffering was only said then done , idk anything but we need a bonus of jk life of suffering he didnt even suffer or regret enough and it looked like he still loved sana . we a bonus

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +7

      I didn't thought of any other things except showing a girl who can't be a mother can still become a mother through her love and affection. And for the lectures which I want to tell my feelings and emotions from those dialogues that's it. And if you didn't like those parts you can skip those bcoz i never thought it was useless 🙂 I didn't think about bonus and for Jk also. At the end sana is love jk but jk didn't gave his attention to her bcoz in the deep he is still love y/n and he was about touch Sana to console her but she didn't let him touch her. When she didn't let him touch her that's when he realise that he lost everything in his life....

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +6

      I really didn't thought about any bonus sorry for that. Sorry for the plain ending actually i want to write some jk dialogues but it seems long video and i really don't know whether you all like it or not that's why i edited shortly hope you understand me. And for the bonus if you have any ideas plz let me help with idea's 🙂 Thank you for spending your valuable time and share appreciable word's with us😊 Take care 😘💖

  • @kontessica
    @kontessica Před 2 lety +36

    I’ve never cried so hard in silence but this right here was beautiful yet sad 😢

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +2

      Don't cry bubs 🤧🤧 And thank you🐱 I'm glad you all are like my video 🙂😊💜

    • @kontessica
      @kontessica Před 2 lety +2

      @@maknaesobsession03 o okie i w will t try b but t this w was j just s so s sad

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      @@kontessica ohhhh babyyy just it was a fictional story so don't take it to your heart 🙂💜

  • @user-sk1tk6bn3j
    @user-sk1tk6bn3j Před 2 lety +16

    Jungkook said Y/N can’t be a mother but in the end he is the one who couldn’t be a father lol

  • @darkjkfanfics4397
    @darkjkfanfics4397 Před 2 lety +25

    The fact that he is married to his secretary for 2 fcking years without letting Yn know anything about this disgusts me

  • @tanexyy
    @tanexyy Před 2 lety +32

    This is truly a masterpiece, babie 💖 You're improving day by day 😽😽 loved this oneshot

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +4

      Thank you bubs actually i didn't convey this how i want i think i miss some lines that's why it didn't gave exact meaning 😭😭 My work load is too much in these past one week and i forgot some lines which are actually included in this video 🤧🤧 Thank you bubs😚😚💜💜 Love you💖

    • @tanexyy
      @tanexyy Před 2 lety +3

      @@maknaesobsession03 it's okay babie. Don't stress yourself 😽 love you more 💖

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      @@tanexyy Thank you bubss😚😚💖💖💜💜

    • @RakeshKumar-cx9mo
      @RakeshKumar-cx9mo Před 2 lety

      Sooojjjjj

  • @sandusspark4542
    @sandusspark4542 Před 2 lety +5

    Stay with me my fav song 🎵

  • @Shreya32454
    @Shreya32454 Před 3 měsíci +1

    After reading this my tears are continuously flowing down.
    I don't know how it feels but it is really hurtful.
    I loved it...❤😢

  • @user-cq9ye7kz3o
    @user-cq9ye7kz3o Před 2 lety +21

    I need a bonus part where its Jungkook's POV suffering.

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +4

      I didn't thought about any bonus but i will try to make a new one. Plz gimme some Idea's 😭😭😭

    • @Kim_anna1
      @Kim_anna1 Před 2 měsíci +1

      ​ Can you make when your professor show you your private pics and say sleep with me or else I will post it on Internet so you cry on your mafia husband Shoulders Taehyung ff
      Taehyung as mafia
      Yn as student pls pls I

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 měsíci

      Hi bub... Currently I'm not doing any ff's bcoz of my studies but I'll come back for sure then I'll remember to make a ff on this.. Thank you for your Suggestion 🙂 Take care bub😘 and Thank you for watching the video 💞💜

    • @Kim_anna1
      @Kim_anna1 Před 2 měsíci +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 tysm ❤️it's ok

  • @mangalikakodippili92
    @mangalikakodippili92 Před 2 lety +54

    Bonus part pleaseeeee . JK and Sana didn't suffer enough and Y/N needs happy ending with someone. pleaseeeeeeee make it

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +18

      Actually i didn't thought about any bonus and the main theme here is a girl didn't want shoulder to lean on she can move on with herself. If you want bonus plz let me know some ideas ☺️ take care😘💖

    • @michim6463
      @michim6463 Před 2 lety +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 we all want a bonus part, we that slut and jerk to suffer more until they die without any peace

  • @sujantalukdar2132
    @sujantalukdar2132 Před 19 dny +1

    In search of gold jungkook lost the diamond 😔🙁

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 19 dny

      Yes... We should value things (person or anything) when they're with us... Once we lose it that's it you'll never gonna get them back.. Thank you for watching my video 😁 Gud n8... Take care 😊💜

  • @itz_devil_queen2107
    @itz_devil_queen2107 Před rokem +3

    This ff actually made me cry 😭

  • @paulastjohn1165
    @paulastjohn1165 Před 2 lety +75

    Loved this very much, you put so much emotion in each word you wrote, her speech to jk before she left is a masterpiece! I don't feel sorry for jk as there were options, like adopt, but he threw y/n away ! I thought loving someone and wanting to spend your life with them was most important in marriage? Children are a blessing and bonus? I see your readers asking for bonus? I like it as it is but have an idea? Maybe y/n and suga fall in love, get married, sana and jk divorce as he obviously didn't love her and used her for child,,,,maybe jk adopts a child being single parent but never gets over y/n? Aish I'm no writer ha ha ha, thank you 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +6

      Hahaha thank you bubs😽😽 and I'm already uploaded the bonus part and suga is like brother to her so she can't ended up with suga. Thank you so much for commenting and for expressing ur valuable ideas🙂💜

    • @RakeshKumar-cx9mo
      @RakeshKumar-cx9mo Před 2 lety +1

      HayameebabyJHopee

  • @sampapaul2028
    @sampapaul2028 Před 2 lety +3

    I cried when suga told the line like :- how she will stop her tears 🥺😢

  • @rehanaqazi1968
    @rehanaqazi1968 Před 2 lety +5

    They both should suffer...... They broke an innocent soul...... Relationship is not a game...... Its a trust between two. People..... If one. Person broke everything.. Would fall apart I want both of them to regret.... Can you please end y/n with taehyung....... And if you want you can even take revenge on jk......... But end y/n with taehyung pweaseeeeee.... A bonus part pweaseee

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      Thank you for the commenting but i can't end up y/n with taehyung bcoz they're frnds since y/n married with jk so hope you understand me and yah i will make a video which they get the punishment of their sins

  • @shrutikolla1636
    @shrutikolla1636 Před 2 lety +5

    It was so painful I literally cried in the last few parts. Amazing work 👌🏻👌🏻 heads of to u 🙇

  • @reetarani7931
    @reetarani7931 Před 2 lety +8

    Wanting his own child wasn't wrong but he could have asked y/n for divorce....first he cheated and top of that freaking 2yrs, it can't be forgiven that easily, jk and Sana deserve more pain....
    y/n suffered *2yrs alone* living with him, when he was enjoying his fullest day and night with his other family.....he could have freed y/n and himself too by divorcing, he didn't had to meet Sana and his child secretly.....even Sana could have forced jk to give divorce his first wife (which is y/n) but she didn't..
    I didn't understand why he didn't left y/n when he already got what he wanted, was he going to keep y/n like this his whole life?(what a f**Ker)
    Plz punish them more and y/n will get her true love too🥺🙏

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      Noted😁 And thank you for commenting 😚😚 Soon i will update bonus part too thank you🙂💜

    • @reetarani7931
      @reetarani7931 Před 2 lety

      @@maknaesobsession03 👍

    • @RakeshKumar-cx9mo
      @RakeshKumar-cx9mo Před 2 lety

      Ooo😳😳

    • @N_3416
      @N_3416 Před 2 lety +1

      Exactly. What was the point of staying married with Y/N when he's just trapping her and destroying her life. It's not like he's using her for love and for free care and free meals, he literally ignores her yet he kept cheating and for what? He has a life with Sana already, if Y/N found out he'll just cheat on her forever? Without any reason? Pathet!c manwh0re.

  • @btsarmyforever5998
    @btsarmyforever5998 Před 2 lety +7

    Author I beg u please don't make Sana and jungkook together in end plzz I really beg u 😭😭😭

  • @C-ryst_al7.
    @C-ryst_al7. Před rokem +2

    When y/n was talking to suga thanking him my eyes just started to tear up

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem +1

      Me too I've cried when I'm writing this ff especially when she expresses her numb feelings to him!! Hope you enjoyed this video thank you😊💜

  • @s_p732
    @s_p732 Před 2 lety +2

    13:34 wah .....now I'm crying again that's so endearing calling them like that like how we call them

  • @gracyliu8420
    @gracyliu8420 Před 2 lety +2

    Bish you made cry so much😭😭😭 it's a masterpiece ✨✨ anyway love you 😭😭

  • @saminee_bts07
    @saminee_bts07 Před 2 lety +5

    This is a masterpiece... ❤️I don't have any words... it's superb...❤️✨best .. Lots of love and thanks to u author💜👌✨ Actually, this is called ff not those which only have 18+...Story is the main which make the whole ff beautiful 💜I hope if every Author would be like u...the way u think...✨this is what now happening in a society normally...and today...in ff ...I'm watching this .. ...🙌✨💜💜💜💜💜✨✨✨✨✨💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜u deserve more....u will be a famous writter one day.... remember this word...✨

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      Awww thank you bubss😭😭😭 you know this means a lot to me🤧🤧🤧 I'm glad you like my Ff and yeah i too felt like that now a days Ff's are only mentioning about 18+ actually they're literally spoiling our fandom bcoz most of our Fandom members are 15 below and these type of videos effect them very badly 🥲 I hope every author should focus on concept than the other things. An author should share their wonderful idea's and their emotions through the Ff's🥲 Thank you😽💜

    • @saminee_bts07
      @saminee_bts07 Před 2 lety +2

      @@maknaesobsession03 u became my fav Author from today ❤️✨I want all Author to be like u 🤧💜✨
      And I don't know what Happened to some armies ... they request 18+ff and they said those ff masterpiece 💨💀...I hope those type of ff will stop in future....💜💜💜I love u author💜💜💜

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      @@saminee_bts07 love you too bubs😭😭😭🤧🤧 Thank you so much 😘😘

  • @aeiaemily3162
    @aeiaemily3162 Před 2 lety +12

    How about you make jungkook and Sana being in toxic relationship cause as you said they both don't love each other and being only for their son makes it toxic . Daily fights and one day jk loses it and says to Sana what have been achieved in life and then Sana replies back that atleast she didn't cheat on the love of her life for a pathetic reason and this makes jk shut up and goes to his room and sees all the pictures and feels emotional and guilty and cries till morning . From that day onwards his life seems grim and even his son isn't able to make him happy and he goes into deep depression and starts hallucinating yn and cries randomly , gets usual panic attacks about yn . Whereas Sana being in this not loved relationship she thought she could move on and be in relation with some so she starts dating q random guy who in turn cheats on her as he had a wife and children and he humiliated Sana in front of them saying she is a desperate slut an Sana gets heartbroken since she really loved that guy . Jk starts taking anxiety pills and starts searching for yn whereas Sana suicides because of love failure and in suicide note she writes everything about jk too so police arrests him for polygamy (double marriage is a crime) and jk goes without any tantrum and his son is sent to yn for adoption . In jail jk starts gets tremors and seizures , his mental health worsens and he gets shifted to mental hospital where he dies of severe depression . So how's this author I hope you like it

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +3

      Thank you bubs😚😚 It's really a gud idea but here sana was not entered into this relationship on her will means jk was convinced her to the marriage so i want to she is loyal like y/n but i will try give a punishment for her Karma and for Jk i also thought about the room and i will try to make new but make sure he will take punishment for his Karma 🙂 Once again thank you so much for your valuable idea bubs😚😚😚💜💜

    • @aeiaemily3162
      @aeiaemily3162 Před 2 lety +2

      @@maknaesobsession03 you are soo adorable 😍

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      @@aeiaemily3162 Thank you bubss😚😚 You're also so adorable and cute🥰🥰🥰😘😘💖💖💜💜

  • @gaurisingh150
    @gaurisingh150 Před 2 lety +5

    U can make in bonus like jk and Sana relationship become toxic and they both got divorced because sana started to cheat on him and left them and yn married taehyung and lived happily and if u want u can make yn take revenge on both of them like destroying jk completely

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      If she want she can do that before she left from him right i don't want her as accused one 🙂 Hmm thank you for the suggestion and i will try to make a bonus considering all your suggestions 😊 Thank you once again 💜💖

  • @sameditz4611
    @sameditz4611 Před 2 lety +3

    This is a masterpiece i really loved it ❤️🥺

  • @chandanjha3184
    @chandanjha3184 Před 2 lety +1

    U know authornim...i am already in love with u......dude....how could u write such an ff and make me cry

  • @madhupriyatudu4329
    @madhupriyatudu4329 Před 2 lety +2

    I loved the storyline...its amazing...♡

  • @ramsuryasuraya9465
    @ramsuryasuraya9465 Před 2 lety +4

    Want part2 like y/n getting married with a another man and havr her own child

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      I'm already uploaded the next part plz check once and y/n can't get pregnant bcoz she is infertile 🥲💜

  • @jeonkims7311
    @jeonkims7311 Před 2 lety +2

    this ff need bonus part because YB & jungkook was still inlove with each other😭😭

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      Why everyone asking same question 😭😭😭😭 I'm already done with bonus part and i have posted also! Please check in my playlist or pin comment of mine😭😭😭

    • @jeonkims7311
      @jeonkims7311 Před 2 lety +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 it’s sad to accept the fact that jungkook didn’t get another chance😭

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      @@jeonkims7311 Hmm but don't you think Once a Cheater are always a Cheater right! I Don't want to ended up with him and He was cheated on y/n bcoz she can't get pregnant right so in what aspect i can ended up y/n with Jk. So i didn't gave another chance to him. Thank you for commenting and sorry if I'm disappointed with Ending 🥲💜

    • @jeonkims7311
      @jeonkims7311 Před 2 lety +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 aww it’s okay btw your ff is so very nice to read🥺❤️

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      @@jeonkims7311 Thank you thank you so much bubs😽😽💜💜

  • @fahmidaalam4448
    @fahmidaalam4448 Před 2 lety +4

    This story has touched my heart, 💖 Everyone should learn from this story that we have to respect the people we love and accept their faults and love them. No one in this world is perfect. And never knowingly break someone's relationship

  • @GayathriManiratnam05_Ot7
    @GayathriManiratnam05_Ot7 Před 2 lety +1

    No words.......JUST GREAT STORY.......👌🤝💜💜

  • @hobis_wifey6144
    @hobis_wifey6144 Před 2 lety +6

    i love the story that jk regret now this regretion is not enough after what he did to her he should have that adopt a child or if he want his real child atleast then he can divorce her and marry another women but he choose cheating on her , and i m not sorry for jk in this ff and about sana she too did fault but atleast she is regretting and punish herself right now😯😯😯😯 great one author☺☺☺i love you💜💜💜💜

  • @armygirlbts1372
    @armygirlbts1372 Před 2 lety +7

    This was best unni.... 💜 just mind blowing...unni plzzzz make part 2 just telling about their lives or y/n gets someone who will love her nd her daughter or maybe ara's real father.... Plzz, Ijust want JK nd his wife to regret more.... Well I know that a woman doesn't need a man in their life bec we r independent nd unstoppable but it's a ff so y/n also end with someone 😊 only if u r okay with this unni 💜😊

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +3

      Awwww thank you bubs😚😚 You really understand me very well😭😭 Yup i will try to make bonus🥲🥲 Thank you bubs😚😚 Love you😘😘 Take care 😘😘

  • @yn7114
    @yn7114 Před 8 měsíci +1

    15:21 jk says jimin HYUNG!! Woow 😅😂😂😂

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 8 měsíci

      Atleast we should make him call jimin hyung right bcoz he won't in real life 😂😂😂

  • @mainuldewan997
    @mainuldewan997 Před 2 lety +1

    This ff so emotional but when ari say cat uncle i can't stop my laughing 😞😅😅💗💜

  • @ojasvineelu9944
    @ojasvineelu9944 Před 2 lety +1

    Amazing story author....I cried twice 😭

  • @II-kh5hp
    @II-kh5hp Před 2 lety +2

    YES U ARE RIGHT.......... regret is the best and worst punishment for every mistake in the world ..............the persons who leaved me will feel that .............. and if we love them but did not loves back us. but the pain is really hurting me ........its not our fault .......i was just shit of piece in every ones life ......but they will REGRET that now

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      Yes karma never leaves 🥲🥲 and regret is the best punishment for their mistakes 🙂💜

    • @II-kh5hp
      @II-kh5hp Před 2 lety +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 YES ..........BUT THE REALITY IS HURTING ME

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      @@II-kh5hp hmmm it will take time to heal but yet we can't forget them🥲🥲

    • @II-kh5hp
      @II-kh5hp Před 2 lety +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 YEAH NOW IT IS 3rd YEAR
      THAT HEY LEAVE ME

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      @@II-kh5hp oh sorry for that🥲 but don't you think we should spend our time who is worth for it. We must pay our attention and love towards them who give their time, love to us. So you should move on from him. May be the best is waiting for you🥲🥲💜 You are a star to your life no matter it is day or night but it is always shine in her own way, it didn't stop glowing whether the moon is with them or not. So you will definitely glow in ur way and i believe you😊💜 Thank you 😚💜

  • @durga6958
    @durga6958 Před rokem +4

    We all want a brother like Suga 🙂
    If this ever happened to me..
    R.I.P to those people
    (The cheater and the girl)

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem

      Yess!! And yeah I've brother like him who care for me 😁💜

    • @durga6958
      @durga6958 Před rokem +1

      @@maknaesobsession03
      Lucky 😩

  • @le-anne4309
    @le-anne4309 Před 11 měsíci +1

    💟Beautiful story ! It's magical ! Y/n in this story is strong, sweet , and has such a beautiful personality ! I also like the storyline !👍💟

  • @gayanad2869
    @gayanad2869 Před 2 lety +1

    It is one of the best ff I have seen u did amazing job 😍😍😍

  • @arshiya9505
    @arshiya9505 Před rokem +1

    It's was amazing FF which i never see
    You have a great writing skills 💜

  • @musicupdates9640
    @musicupdates9640 Před 2 lety +6

    Author can u please give epilogue how y/n built her career and that jungkook and sana regret like hell with karma

    • @mangalikakodippili92
      @mangalikakodippili92 Před 2 lety +1

      agreeee

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      I didn't thought about any bonus but now i will make a bonus bcoz of you guys😭😭 Thank you for commenting 😚💖

    • @musicupdates9640
      @musicupdates9640 Před 2 lety +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 author but please make jihoon be with y/n because of jungkook and sana karma an innocent soul is suffering for what jungkook cheated on y/n he should never be happy with he should suffer as he can’t see his own child growth.

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      @@musicupdates9640 Accepted your suggestion🙂 Thank you for the suggestion bubs😊 Gud night 💜 Take care 😘💖

    • @RakeshKumar-cx9mo
      @RakeshKumar-cx9mo Před 2 lety

      MybabyJHopee🙅🙅

  • @gsarcaderoadto100subs7
    @gsarcaderoadto100subs7 Před 2 lety +1

    I'm laughing at "Hey you cat uncle"

  • @nayanarathilal1831
    @nayanarathilal1831 Před rokem +1

    wow srly this ff has my respect no bullying no mafia and rhe y/n was so damn good character this ff was the best one I really hope to see such ff more and more. Hey author you did a great work 😍😍😍

  • @lovinstudentangel9241
    @lovinstudentangel9241 Před 2 lety +2

    Amazing 💜💜💜

  • @Drawing_asthetic375
    @Drawing_asthetic375 Před 2 lety +1

    This FF is realllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy heart touching and we have no right to hurt anyone heart 💜 and feeling and cheat on her/him
    Y/N is so strong and brave enough that she BCM more stronger than before

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      Yes everyone should be strong to face our problems it is him/her. You must be brave in every situation to face difficulties in our life🙂💜

  • @tahirazafar2690
    @tahirazafar2690 Před rokem +2

    while watching it I cry

  • @s_p732
    @s_p732 Před 2 lety +1

    Imagine being the the most lovable than Jungkook (being JK's wife) to Yoongi or other boys wow that would be so damn special position seriously

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      Hmm we found precious person's in our life without even we realise that they're special to us untill they're withstand for us in a worst situation! They share a special bond indeed!!

  • @aditisharma8899
    @aditisharma8899 Před rokem +1

    Here i just wanna say one betrayal is enough to ruin many precious relationships and lives of people. You have to move on from problems cuz life is a continuous process and it will not stop on ups and downs. So don't losse hope and love yourself.

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem +1

      That's what we've to do in our lives!! Don't stop even you're tired of everything around you!You can win as long as you're running in your way! Thank you for reading and sharing wonderful words here😊💜

    • @aditisharma8899
      @aditisharma8899 Před rokem +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 yes I agree with you and thanku for bringing up the topic and ending it in a good way. Giving lesson, birth of children is a blessing.. Don't ruin that natural feeling, thousands of children out there deserves the warmth of parents but don't have one, you can adopt them.

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem +1

      @@aditisharma8899 yes that's what the main concept in this ff!! Thank you for getting my point 😁💜 and Gud mrng hav a nice day 😊💜

    • @aditisharma8899
      @aditisharma8899 Před rokem +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 ahh!! No need for thanking and all🥰well good morning to you too & have a pleasant and wonderful day ahead😁💜✨

  • @paroojohri4941
    @paroojohri4941 Před 2 lety +3

    Amazing ff....no doubt.....neat and clean....keep it up author 👍👍

  • @jungkookkimrs5886
    @jungkookkimrs5886 Před 2 lety +1

    My mother thinking why I am crying 😭😭😭😭

  • @btsonism1398
    @btsonism1398 Před 2 lety +1

    I love your ff so much it's my first ff from you channel and i know my English is week but i think you can understand 💜😅 keep going .
    By the way who is your bias mine is kookie 🐇🐰.

  • @nisha3161
    @nisha3161 Před rokem +3

    It's really amazing and fantastic. I love and enjoyed it a lot. Such a heart touching story . I'm so much disappointed by junkook. Thanks author for this ff of yours.
    😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem +1

      Thank you for watching and commenting your thoughts here☺️💜

  • @shreyagaikwad9073
    @shreyagaikwad9073 Před rokem +2

    Thank uhh xiii. This was so beautiful. Thanks to jm because of him a baby got a mother. And a woman got a baby❤️🌈🌎🦋. This ff had a beautiful lesson uhh taught me a new lesson today!!🌈🌎❤️🦋🥺

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem +1

      Thank you 😊💜 Hope you've a great time while reading my fics ☺️💜

  • @mk-dq2zi
    @mk-dq2zi Před rokem +1

    U know its hurts 😭😭💜💔💔but this is awesome ff💜💜

  • @tamizhwathani__07
    @tamizhwathani__07 Před rokem +1

    It was so amazing ff I never see in this I cried i smile I'm so happy in the late I love this ff 💜💜

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem

      Thank you so much that means a lot to me! I'm glad you've enjoyed this ff 😊💜

  • @rinki327
    @rinki327 Před 2 lety +2

    *Moral : don't even try to cheat on Y/n I repeat my words never or u will suffer*

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      Yes! Not only with y/n but also Don't cheat with other's too!! Bcoz Everyone deserves true love so don't try to cheat on other's 🥲🙂

    • @rinki327
      @rinki327 Před 2 lety +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 yeahh and that's the reason why I'm a subbie

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      @@rinki327 Thank you😽💜 Can i ask you one thing what is subbie between?!😅😅

    • @rinki327
      @rinki327 Před 2 lety +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 lol I'm your subscriber a bun

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      @@rinki327 Oops😬😬 sorry Buns🥲🥲 and Thank you bun😻😽 Between can i know your name?

  • @richiee1843
    @richiee1843 Před rokem +1

    The story was amazing, I was crying, it gave such a good lesson to us how strong, dedicated, loving and caring a mother is and breaking relationships just because your partner is infertile is the most regretful thing anyone could do because know that God will bring karma to you for hurting the person who loved you the most.

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem +1

      Yeah!! Definitely 💯💯 Karma never leave us alone!! And thank you for commenting and loving my ff!!

    • @richiee1843
      @richiee1843 Před rokem +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 welcome!

  • @durga6958
    @durga6958 Před rokem +1

    Also like if u marry a girl dont expect them to give u a baby that fast pregnancy is pain and beauty at the same time guys can never experience that pain its a special one

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem

      Yes!!! We should respect the choice of the woman who is going through the pain and it's her body so we should respect her decision!!

    • @durga6958
      @durga6958 Před rokem +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 :) ur right

  • @jeonsjuliet
    @jeonsjuliet Před 2 lety +3

    Jungkook was a really disgusting person here...his thoughts..his deeds..everything abt him was disgusting (except his hansum facue ofc) n I'm really glad yn didn't ended with Jungkook..Jungkook must me punished for ruining yn's life yn's trust yn's heart..great work author nim👏👏

  • @payojapai5947
    @payojapai5947 Před 2 lety +1

    mochi uncle 🤣🤣

  • @s.o.t.s.o.t.
    @s.o.t.s.o.t. Před rokem +1

    Y/N lashed out on the wrong person. She should lash out on the one who had a commitment (marriage vows) with her. The other party is just an outsider which could have had any other name like Anna, Mari, Carol, Sana ... It is in his character ... Good thing she cut him out of her live. She should have also cut out her "friends" who knew it and kept quite.

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem

      They're not like before bcoz they leave him when they came to know about this but after sometime they are with him bcoz of seeing his miserable life!! But yeah the one who did wrong definitely get karma for sure!!

  • @sanaamir6766
    @sanaamir6766 Před 2 lety +1

    my name is sana tooooooo😫😫😂😂😂😂

  • @starryeyes7577
    @starryeyes7577 Před 2 lety +2

    Thank you for making Yn to leave jk he don't deserve her unnie please make a historical Ff

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      I will try to make after completing my ongoing series 🥲 Thank you 😚💜

    • @starryeyes7577
      @starryeyes7577 Před 2 lety +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 unnie plz make one historical Ff

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      @@starryeyes7577 yess! I will soon bubs😽💜

  • @annipienalaza2926
    @annipienalaza2926 Před 2 lety +1

    👏👏👏👏👏

  • @the_moon_ff_door176
    @the_moon_ff_door176 Před 2 lety +1

    I am your ,744 subscriber yesssss!!!

  • @KunalKumar12333
    @KunalKumar12333 Před 3 měsíci +1

    Please bonus part please author

  • @yenamoon7111
    @yenamoon7111 Před 2 lety +3

    Author don't need bonus part for those shameless people....destroying someone's happiness those betrayer will never be able to live happily.....cz God will gave them enough suffering the rest of their's life......

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      Ahhh thank you 🤧 You're the 1st one who don't want bonus part🥲🥲 Thank you bubss 😚💜

    • @yenamoon7111
      @yenamoon7111 Před 2 lety

      @@maknaesobsession03 welcome ☺💙

  • @jolife721
    @jolife721 Před 2 lety +2

    Why it looked like YN was more of a preacher than a wife... too many unwanted dialogues and lines

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      Hmm i just go with a flow with my words sorry if you feel like that🥲

  • @sylviaprice1683
    @sylviaprice1683 Před rokem +1

    ❤❤❤

  • @fluffykookijungkook
    @fluffykookijungkook Před rokem +1

    this is meaningful ff first time I read.. I'm also do the same but not including BTS...btw this ff inspire to army😁🥰💜💜💜

  • @sharonram2000
    @sharonram2000 Před 2 měsíci +1

    There is no justification for cheating , how selfish and cheap of both sana and jk to have this kind of mentality and thinking, because a woman can't get doesn't mean that its their fault , only God know know why he allow it to happen , it is very difficult for any woman to be in this situation, it heartbreaking, it take a lot of courage to move on from this situation, jk could've use a surrogate or adopt a child and continue to have happy life with his wife , any woman that cheat with a married man is pure evil and disgusting. Cheating on the whole is a sin and a choice and selfish cowardly act from people with no moral value in them self . Regret doesn't justify forgiveness nor a sorry mend a broken and shattered heart . That is my humble opinion ❤

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 měsíci

      Yes!! You're absolutely correct... That's why they get what they deserve neither happiness nor peace in their lives.. I just want to say through this ff your sorry never mend the broken hearts and your regret Neve makes someone soul that crushed through your acts.. So be true to yourself and if you don't want to continue the relationship then plz leave bcoz cheating is a disgusting thing that nothing can make it nice..Thank you for watching my video.. Gud N8 and Stay safe🙂💜

    • @sharonram2000
      @sharonram2000 Před 2 měsíci +1

      @maknaesobsession03 ur most welcome . Thank you for making yn have self-respect and not making cheating look like a mistake or some light situation . If someone doesn't love that person or is not happy in the relationship, the honorable and dignified thing to do is to break up , that way, it's less painful on both parties . Honesty is the best policy

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 měsíci

      Yes... There is no justification for cheating and the Women and girls all around the world should stand for themselves... In every situation they should be strong (like these situations) [PS : I'm not biased 😹😹 ] Hope everyone get their beautiful ending in their lives 🙂💜

  • @chandni_8639
    @chandni_8639 Před 2 lety +2

    Happy women's day!!

  • @hadia4lyfee
    @hadia4lyfee Před rokem +1

    Seriously I don't like sad ending but this story is Soo much awesome then happy ending stories well the character of y/n is maybe fictional but her character was so awesome and motivational for all infertile girls

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem +1

      Thank you bubs😽💜 Hope everyone thinks positive!!

    • @hadia4lyfee
      @hadia4lyfee Před rokem +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 💜💜💜💜 awesome work 💜💜💜

  • @lobsangjk4866
    @lobsangjk4866 Před rokem +2

    What to do now i hav morning class tomorrow and i m crying so hard in 1 am 🥲 why these ff are sooooo good 💜💜💜

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem +1

      Don't cry bubs🫂🫂 You should sleep by now! See who is talking about sleeping who isn't sleeping knowing she have to study morning 🥲🥲 But don't cry and sleep bubba!! Take care and Gud n8😘💜

    • @lobsangjk4866
      @lobsangjk4866 Před rokem +2

      @@maknaesobsession03 💜💜 thankyou for your ff 💜💜 you nice keep going 🐰🐰

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem

      @@lobsangjk4866 Thank you 💜

  • @akankshyasahu1634
    @akankshyasahu1634 Před 2 lety +1

    To become a mother, there is not any necessary to give birth a child.

  • @mahamarif1446
    @mahamarif1446 Před 2 lety +1

    🙂

  • @badriyasiyad6722
    @badriyasiyad6722 Před rokem +1

    I think make yn marriage with another man and she have her own baby at end .Jung kook was sad

  • @tanyal8810
    @tanyal8810 Před 2 lety +1

    Sorry to be aggressive butI f****** love the story

  • @ikikiweired
    @ikikiweired Před 2 lety +1

    And marriage is not all about kids

  • @sonslibehera7179
    @sonslibehera7179 Před 2 lety +1

    Why always suga is yn's brother... its not fare

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      Ohh sorry 🥲 I narrated this story Suga as her brother and he will acted a protective brother Cold by looks but soft by heart 🙂

  • @gaurisingh150
    @gaurisingh150 Před 2 lety +2

    What happened to jk after that please tell

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      I didn't thought about anything 🥲 but i will try to make a bonus for you guys😭😭 Thank you💖 Take care 😘💖

  • @diahnadiah3316
    @diahnadiah3316 Před 2 lety +3

    Is there bonus part that yn married with Suga?

    • @armygirlbts1372
      @armygirlbts1372 Před 2 lety +2

      Suga loves y/n like his sister 😂 maybe someone else like jimin or tae or any member of bts or maybe ara's real father if he is alone 🙈🤔

    • @deepthirajeswari6421
      @deepthirajeswari6421 Před 2 lety +1

      Yes Suga is her broo😑

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      Suga is her brother 😭😭😭 I will try to make a bonus part and for ari's parents they're left her in the park so don't expect him😭😭🤧🤧 plz gimme some suggestions for bonus🥲🥲 Thank you💖 Take care all of you😘💜

    • @armygirlbts1372
      @armygirlbts1372 Před 2 lety

      @@maknaesobsession03 I really want JK nd Sana to regret , maybe Sana left JK nd his son nd y/n to end with someone else nicely 💜

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      @@armygirlbts1372 Noted and I'll try to make a video which can satisfy you all😊 Gud n8 bubs😚😚💜💜

  • @ladyknj
    @ladyknj Před rokem +1

    So did Jungkook marry Sana while he was still married to Y/n? I may have missed that detail. Why would she sit around waiting for him for 2 years? I would have been moved on. You never miss your water 'til your well runs dry

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem

      Yes! He married behind her back and she doesn't know about that until she found it in the hospital him with his second wife!!

  • @irfanghantiwala9540
    @irfanghantiwala9540 Před 2 lety +1

    Not my name being sana

  • @dawooddios3290
    @dawooddios3290 Před rokem +1

    But they didn't divorce right okay yeah I love the story unieeeee💜💜💜💜

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem

      They did! Jk gave divorce to her before she married to Jaemin!! And Thank you😘💜

    • @dawooddios3290
      @dawooddios3290 Před rokem +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 I am your new subscriber😀😀💜💜💜

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před rokem

      @@dawooddios3290 Thank you for subscribing bun😽💜

  • @btsk_army07
    @btsk_army07 Před 2 lety +1

    idk but this name sana i hateee....i have one friend name sana.....she stole every crushes of mine and i hate her.........suprisingly here too is sanaaaaaaaa:( arghhhh!!!!!

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      She may take ur Crushes but not your lover!! If he/she wants to be with us then no one can take them from Us!! Lol In Every Story why is sana being like this??!!😂

  • @lokeshbasavaiah2646
    @lokeshbasavaiah2646 Před 2 lety +4

    BRUH! CAN U GUYS JUST STOP MAKING JK AS A BAD CHARACTER?! EVERYTIME EVERYWHERE YOU GUYS MAKE JK AS A BAD CHARACTER AND A CHEATER LIKE DUH! IDC IF AM RUDE ITS JUST THAT WHY ALWAYS JK? CANY U MAKE OTHER MEMBERS TOO? AM NOT TELLING THIS CUZ JK IS MY BIAS AM TELLIBG IT BECAUSE HE IS ALWAYS A BAD CHARACTER!😐🔪

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +3

      Sorry Bubs if i make you feel like that i have another master piece of JK Ff after this and I'm sure you will like it🙂 Thank you for commenting 😚 And we are not against anyone and even I'm a Jk bias lol😭😭 I'm just want to portray my thoughts through this that's it. Don't take serious and enjoy the Ff's 🥲💜

    • @lokeshbasavaiah2646
      @lokeshbasavaiah2646 Před 2 lety +3

      @@maknaesobsession03 its ok and thx for making ffs but plz dont make jk a bad person since i just saw 3 jk ff of him being a bad character that's why it made me more angry😩

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +2

      @@lokeshbasavaiah2646 ohhh in my channel another Jk Ff is ongoing you can watch that to shift your angry mood to calm🙂🙂

    • @lokeshbasavaiah2646
      @lokeshbasavaiah2646 Před 2 lety +3

      @@maknaesobsession03 ok i will "om shanti shanti" my mind now✌

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +2

      @@lokeshbasavaiah2646 Haha that's better 😇😇

  • @Lisagutierrez724
    @Lisagutierrez724 Před 2 lety +1

    Love the ff great job part 2 plz Jk and y/n be together plz. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      Thank you bubs😚 But i don't think to ended up them together bcoz he was cheated on y/n if he confort his intentions to her and divorce her it is another criteria but now it's not gud idea to ended up together and most of the viewers may not like that. Sorry if i was hurted you🥲🥲 hope you will understand me 🤧🤧

    • @Lisagutierrez724
      @Lisagutierrez724 Před 2 lety +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 not it ok it's your decision and I respect it. ❤❤

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      @@Lisagutierrez724 thank you bubs😚 I'm uploading bonus part now hope you will like it🥲💜 Take care 😘💖

    • @Lisagutierrez724
      @Lisagutierrez724 Před 2 lety +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 yes of course. 💜💜

  • @skyisthelimitforpallavi7764

    Ok. Authornim.... Here jk cheated on yn only becoz she couldn't be a mother.... He could have adopted a child.... But still he cheated on her with his secretary, married her for 2 years and had a child,but didn't give yn divorce, fooled her all along. And he enjoyed his life to his full... But when got caught yn left him..... You said sana loves jk and when jk tried to touch sana to console her she didn't let him touch and he didn't give his attention to sana coz deep down he still love yn, but if he really loved yn he would never cheated on her..... So his love has no value at all... And what attention you are talking about, when he gave his all time, and love to sana for two yrs did he think about yn at that time

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      Nope he didn't gave his time y/n all he wants is his baby so he never thought about it. His eyes blinded by his selfishness so he never thought about y/n and he was forgot his most important days in his life with y/n after knowing him she left from him. About sana after seeing him so long and he always care about sana. So she was unknowingly fall for him.

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      I said he didn't even gave attention to y/n but y/n never left him bcoz she loves him that much. Hope you'll understand me now.

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      @@skyisthelimitforpallavi7764 1) she know that's why she rejected so many times but atlast his words persuade her to marry jungkook
      2) yes that's why he regretted
      3) That's what we called it is as cheating. If he want he let y/n but somewhere he can't do that bcoz their relationship was started long ago and he love y/n but he persuade sana for his children
      4)we didn't know their value when they're with us. He can't realise his love when she is with him bcoz he Only focus on his child.

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      @@skyisthelimitforpallavi7764 sorry yaar if I'm being rude actually i forgot total episode which i have done. Yesterday i got results and I'm failed now I'm not even focus on anything so please understand my situation. I know you're asking me which i haven't included in the video. These are questions i consider as my mistakes bcoz i didn't gave a clarity about some topics in the video which makes me feel bad. I'm having hectic schedule when I'm making this video so i forgot to add some lines and interpretations in the video and i thought if i again add those lines then video extended the long i didn't post any long video in my channel so I'm just scared what if you all are not like my video bcoz it was too long 🥲 I gave you a perfect explanation when i will came out this mood. Please understand me and sorry if i was rude 🤧🤧 Thank you💜

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety

      @@skyisthelimitforpallavi7764 yes there some people like us feel guilty even we don't hurt others intentionally but believe me Karma never leave us alone who are doing the sins they must paid for it. Actually i also saw some cases like this but i just made this video for a woman who was infertile but yet she can be a mother with her love and affection. Thank you dear😽 you have so much patience to confort your feelings and questions here and I'm really appreciate it. Thank you and Take care 😘💖

  • @asmitasahu62
    @asmitasahu62 Před 2 lety +1

    so basically i am the Yuna in this story!!!

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      Hahaha if you're comfortable then take any character in this Ff😁

  • @F_M20
    @F_M20 Před 2 lety +1

    honest opinion, grammar is terrible. sorry.....
    listen, you can always improve it.
    maybe english is not your first language (so am i), but we can always improve ourself.
    story is ok, just the grammar is a bit confusing.

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      Oh ok thank you for remaining me 😊 i will try to improve myself 🙂 It is too bad or ok? Bcoz now I'm having insecure about English🥲🥲

    • @F_M20
      @F_M20 Před 2 lety +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 just need some editing here and there for the grammar. the overall story is ok.
      you can improve both, just dont stop improving.

    • @F_M20
      @F_M20 Před 2 lety +1

      @@maknaesobsession03 maybe double check before uploading to you tube, will be a great help.

    • @maknaesobsession03
      @maknaesobsession03  Před 2 lety +1

      @@F_M20 yup thank you bubss😽 It will be helpful in my future videos 🐱💜

  • @thepro3293
    @thepro3293 Před 2 lety +1

    Too childish and common