"I Took A Job Working At A Mansion In The Olympic Mountains, Something Is Wrong Here" Creepypasta

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  • čas přidán 2. 04. 2022
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Komentáře • 524

  • @OliversWorld333
    @OliversWorld333 Před 2 lety +379

    @Mr. Creeps, THANK YOU!!! I am honored to hear my creation through your channel, you just keep on surprising me FrankenTeddy!!! 😈😎😇

    • @thelastofthecoychicas4701
      @thelastofthecoychicas4701 Před 2 lety +32

      Bravo! Please tell me pt 2 is already written and just waiting to b narrated?

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před 2 lety +65

      @@thelastofthecoychicas4701 Yes. Mr. Creeps has the whole thing. I cannot disclose how many parts are left, but since he put "To Be Continued" I can at least say there IS indeed more 😈😎😇

    • @nikki.londonuk6881
      @nikki.londonuk6881 Před 2 lety +15

      @@OliversWorld333 I didn’t want it to end!😁…..Fantastic story!🤩Thankyou for sharing with us your amazing creation,I can’t wait to hear the next part!🤗🥰

    • @stalkingnightwolf4484
      @stalkingnightwolf4484 Před 2 lety +8

      Where do you post your stories?

    • @blainmcgregor1288
      @blainmcgregor1288 Před 2 lety +9

      @@stalkingnightwolf4484 I'm with u need to hear or read the rest of it!!

  • @nemonada3501
    @nemonada3501 Před 2 lety +247

    I really hope there's a continuation to this story at some point. That was awesome!

    • @Bigg_Redd
      @Bigg_Redd Před 2 lety +9

      I know right!

    • @lucaslivingstone-sitch5443
      @lucaslivingstone-sitch5443 Před 2 lety +16

      there friggen better be... cant leave me hanging like this

    • @bradenalder9016
      @bradenalder9016 Před 2 lety +20

      To get the full story go to dead man talking forest of fear and look for the mountain

    • @nemonada3501
      @nemonada3501 Před 2 lety +4

      @@bradenalder9016 Awesome! Thank you heaps.

    • @JosePerez-sw3gn
      @JosePerez-sw3gn Před 2 lety

      czcams.com/video/k73YlQYRNog/video.html full story

  • @donutpredator4945
    @donutpredator4945 Před 2 lety +41

    anybody with roofing experience knows you never ever work on a roof by yourself even if you don't need there help

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před 2 lety +19

      (Writer here) I wish someone would have told all my old bosses that hahahahahah!!!! I agree 100% my friend, thanks for listening and I hope you enjoyed it 😈😎😇

    • @Roma-rusk
      @Roma-rusk Před 2 lety +6

      What we do and what were supposed to do are different things. 😂😂

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před rokem

      😈😎😇

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před rokem +1

      @@Roma-rusk Indeed they are Bropacylpse lol 😈😎😇

  • @PeppieP
    @PeppieP Před 2 lety +54

    F**k - I was so into this story and hyped up listening on your every word that I did not realise it was coming to an end. I so want this tale to continue, please. Brilliant narration. Thanks

    • @davidmorningway6025
      @davidmorningway6025 Před rokem +1

      I sent Mr. Creeps my new story THE HUNT to narrate while you all wait on the next big stuff im writing, so maybe we will see that come up soon here!!! 😈😎😇

  • @jameswilliams2481
    @jameswilliams2481 Před 2 lety +47

    Creeps, thank you so much for the company on these long nights studying. Don’t know if you’ll ever read this but I’ve been listening for years. You’re hands down the best on CreepyPasta youtube!

  • @nicomoreno5028
    @nicomoreno5028 Před 2 lety +68

    This could be the beginning of something great, Mr. Creeps. Please ask the author to keep the pages coming!

    • @davidmorningway6025
      @davidmorningway6025 Před 2 lety +5

      😈😎😇

    • @nicomoreno5028
      @nicomoreno5028 Před 2 lety +3

      You're a good author, man. Do we have another part coming soon?

    • @davidmorningway6025
      @davidmorningway6025 Před 2 lety +7

      @@nicomoreno5028 Several more parts (even though Mr. Creeps has 2 more parts out, there is 1-3 more, depending on how long he makes them. It is complete on other channels at 4 hour running time if that helps) Ive been working on more stories within this Universe, but have been sick and overworked for about 2 months. However, I started back a little today, thats when I saw this comment lol. SO GLAD you enjoy it man!! I wrote a short stand alone Lovecraftian style story that Mr. Creeps narrated a few months ago called WE WERE TOLD TO NEVER LEAVE THE FOREST, I SHOULD HAVE LISTENED 😈😎😇

    • @nicomoreno5028
      @nicomoreno5028 Před 2 lety +3

      @@davidmorningway6025 I have heard all 3 parts by Mr. Creeps. I've been hoping for a new one this weekend, but haven't seen it pop up yet. I'll check out your other stuff, thanks for responding. I love a good creepy story with some world building.

    • @nicomoreno5028
      @nicomoreno5028 Před 2 lety +2

      @@davidmorningway6025 BTW sick and overworked definitely don't go well together. I hope you feel better soon.

  • @genericcrab7206
    @genericcrab7206 Před 2 lety +59

    First time on CZcams in 3 years with a fresh account and my boy Mr creeps pops up with the peak of horror reading

    • @tunics6015
      @tunics6015 Před 2 lety +6

      3 years damn where you in jail

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před 2 lety +7

      (Writer here)Be Wise, and Behold the signs, the rules of 3's and the laws of 9's (prime numbers that are supposed to govern the universe, so if you were gone for 3 years, there was most likely a divine reason my friend). PEAK HORROR...wow thats one hell of a compliment (although Mr. Creeps breathed life into it) thank you Rowan (cool name!!!) Are you German descent (Kienholz)? My mothers Maiden name is Zickgraf, so REPRESENT LOL 😈😎😇

  • @chadlegob-1battledroid159

    I live near the Olympics it's good to here something local for once

  • @maximillian1109
    @maximillian1109 Před 2 lety +29

    Aww, that’s oddly cute!! A momma wendigo with her two fawns, teaching them how to terrorize hoomans and destroying property!! What a lovely sight!!

    • @David-sp4tc
      @David-sp4tc Před 2 lety +4

      Cringe

    • @dragon22214
      @dragon22214 Před 2 lety +1

      @@David-sp4tc people like you who over use cringe need to grow up

    • @Matth3w-wil
      @Matth3w-wil Před 2 lety

      @@dragon22214 thats the thing, it’s impossible for them to.

  • @navigatorofnone
    @navigatorofnone Před 2 lety +40

    What a suspenseful story 👏👏👏 which hopefully turns into a long series. Cant wait for the next part. 👍👍

    • @IRageMetal
      @IRageMetal Před 2 lety +3

      It's a 4 hour story, I've already listened to it on another channel

    • @chirpydragonfruit9464
      @chirpydragonfruit9464 Před 2 lety +1

      @@IRageMetal details plz

    • @IRageMetal
      @IRageMetal Před 2 lety +2

      @@chirpydragonfruit9464 wouldn't want to draw viewers away from creeps channel

    • @navigatorofnone
      @navigatorofnone Před 2 lety +2

      Nice :) :)

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před 2 lety +7

      @@IRageMetal (Writer here) thank you, that is a respectful decision appreciated by both I, and I'm sure, Mr. Creeps 😈😎😇

  • @reenxalex
    @reenxalex Před 2 lety +19

    Nice story Creeps! I'm looking forward to part 2

  • @ericthompson8740
    @ericthompson8740 Před 2 lety +3

    Plz do another one to finish it this time awesome story can't wait to c what direction u take it in

  • @roseintheplains6164
    @roseintheplains6164 Před 2 lety +4

    There has got to be a part 2, you can't leave us hanging like this. Please don't be cruel. This is one of the best stories I have heard in a very long time.

  • @C-SD
    @C-SD Před 2 lety +2

    "Oh, I already had a few panic attacks up on the roof." That was so flippant it made me laugh.

  • @tomhutchinson9981
    @tomhutchinson9981 Před 2 lety +21

    I absolutely love your series. So excited for this one wolf Lake was incredible

  • @creative_panda_system2852

    Ahhhhh I was invested up til the end! I need to know now omg what a place to leave us hanging. 😅 I hope the continuation comes out quick.

  • @andrewjohnson2884
    @andrewjohnson2884 Před 2 lety +45

    Hope this becomes a series good job all around.

  • @syreetas.8134
    @syreetas.8134 Před 2 lety +2

    Really liked that!!! Can’t wait for part 2

  • @deanhall2381
    @deanhall2381 Před 2 lety +13

    I love this and the creatures sounds like Skinwalkers if not they're pretty close, and can't wait for the next part. Love the channel glad I found it all those years ago 💯💯💯💯💯

  • @youngarnold4
    @youngarnold4 Před 2 lety +2

    Great story. Sounds like something out of a sci-fi movie. Just don't understand how they could hire a contractor to do the roof if they know monsters are running around up there on the mountain?

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před rokem +2

      Writer here, I am a body builder and have seen that picture of Arnold (the oak) alot in my old gym. My dad owned it so I put Arnold, Bruce Lee and many others on the walls for inspiration. Good choice. Oh and John did not know how bad the veil was torn when he asked Wade to do his roof job...but they know now hahahahaha! 😈😎😇

  • @gypseking85
    @gypseking85 Před 2 lety +2

    Ok I need more lol great story I’ll be waiting for the next chapter patiently

  • @pandivplayz6039
    @pandivplayz6039 Před 2 lety +3

    masterpiece

  • @davidstamey3378
    @davidstamey3378 Před 2 lety +6

    THIS IS NEXT LEVEL GOOD!!!! This is the beginning of a straight novel, with horror Sci fi and dark fantasy all rolled into one!!!! Not many writers can create such an immersive and captivating world!!! Good vs. Evil re-imagined for the new age.....just epic!!!!!!!!!

  • @victoriataylor5584
    @victoriataylor5584 Před 2 lety +3

    I love the picture of the mountains. It's beautiful.

  • @irishnik4689
    @irishnik4689 Před 2 lety +2

    OMG!!!!!!!
    I can not wait for the rest of this story PLEASE!!!!!

  • @TattooedPink
    @TattooedPink Před 2 lety +4

    Cheers ♡

  • @danjum6194
    @danjum6194 Před 2 lety +1

    This makes you nominated for “CZcams Best Creepypasta Narrator Awards 🏆 2022”

  • @dewayneadams9999
    @dewayneadams9999 Před 2 lety +7

    Amazing part one, really looking forward to hearing the conclusion bro

  • @jakedenton1231
    @jakedenton1231 Před 2 lety +2

    Need a part two. Too good not to have one

  • @jurbroek8117
    @jurbroek8117 Před 2 lety +8

    Perfect timing, I was just looking for a story to listen to while going to sleep.

    • @bananomet4052
      @bananomet4052 Před 2 lety +4

      Same lol

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před 2 lety +1

      @@bananomet4052 (Writer here) I just beat Doom Eternal, so I recognize the Mark of THE SLAYER anywhere!!!! Hope you enjoyed the beginning of my series! Rip n Tear!!! 😈😎😇

  • @kingharrisiii7250
    @kingharrisiii7250 Před 2 lety +5

    We Most definitely need the rest of this story bro... great reading and amazing content...I can’t wait for the next installment...got me itchin like a crack fiend... lol

  • @travisbuckman5563
    @travisbuckman5563 Před 2 lety +2

    I'm almost always late to the game and have several hours of episodes to listen to. This is the first time I was almost legitimately enthralled and of course it was the first episode, posted only 3 hours ago 😭

  • @maryann3820
    @maryann3820 Před 2 lety +5

    Can't wait for part 2!!

  • @USAngel4u2
    @USAngel4u2 Před 2 lety +2

    Whaaaat?!?!?
    Noooo!!!!
    Where’s the rest of the story!
    This was completely amazing and captivating.
    👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
    Please please finish! 💗

  • @mikekling4605
    @mikekling4605 Před 2 lety +3

    Aw man, we need part 2, asap!

  • @justindunlap1235
    @justindunlap1235 Před 2 lety +3

    Thanks for another great upload. I love going over to camp on the Olympic peninsula, it's gorgeous but it can get a little spooky on the cloudier days.

  • @rodneychernowsky5687
    @rodneychernowsky5687 Před 2 lety +2

    okay dude now its time to go through and make part 2's to ALL the ones you left like this! lol

  • @witchycat5432
    @witchycat5432 Před 2 lety +2

    If you ever need to limit your breathing try rhythmic breathing. Breath in for a set amount of numbers hold your breath for the same amount of numbers and breath out for the same amount of numbers if you can't make it obvious your breathing, or you have lack of oxygen, or your poisoned like get bit by a Poisonus animal doing this pattern can help. That's actually partially how I survived a murder attempt. A man had his hands around my next and I had limited oxygen I went into rhythmic breathing to preserve what little oxygen I could get

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před rokem

      (writer here) Im glad you survived that, I have experianced alot of crazy stuff that should have killed me and almost did, so I sympathize and relate. I hope the coward got what he deserved for doing that to you, I had to watch my mom get hurt by a creep when I was young, so I snap on guys that do that shit around me or even raise a hand ect. I have had to retaliate on old "friends" that did that in front of me, no sir, not around me, it brings back PTSD from watching my mom, and I will get violent with a guy getting violent with a girl REAL QUICK. I hope you enjoyed the story and I have more stuff coming out soon 😈😎😇

  • @robbie9723
    @robbie9723 Před 2 lety +2

    I need a pt 2 immediately holy hell

  • @lollyt932
    @lollyt932 Před 2 lety +3

    From the way that ended it's obvious that I'll be checking in every second for the continuation 😂

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před 2 lety

      (writer here) Why Thank You Lolly T, I am glad you enjoyed it!!! 😈😎😇

  • @joelaramore3027
    @joelaramore3027 Před rokem

    I love smoking weed and listening to Mr. creeps, but I figure I’m gonna try something new and listen to him sober. Either way hands down this guy is the truth.

  • @Zero_The_Kid
    @Zero_The_Kid Před 2 lety +2

    Please have a continuation, this story is amazing

  • @MichaelBacon212
    @MichaelBacon212 Před 2 lety +5

    We need the continuation of this story ASAP!!!!

  • @frontallobe3937
    @frontallobe3937 Před 2 lety +3

    David Morningway...Bravo my dude looking forward to what comes next...mr.creeps thanks for narrating the beginning of another fantastic adventure

  • @mitchellcongrove3413
    @mitchellcongrove3413 Před 2 lety +3

    DMT did this entire series. It's called The Mountain and it's already on his channel if anyone doesn't want wait to hear the rest of the story.

    • @mitchellcongrove3413
      @mitchellcongrove3413 Před 2 lety +1

      @Mason Kunesh Dead Man Talking. He's another Creepypasta Narrator here on YT.

    • @davidstamey3378
      @davidstamey3378 Před 2 lety

      @@mitchellcongrove3413 yes, Dead Man talkings forest of Fear, and it's also uncut with curse words and some lycan voice mods.

  • @briansetoe
    @briansetoe Před 5 měsíci +2

    Been a while since I listened to this one, I also know that there are more parts. These ever been made into 1 single video? Or do I need to search them in your channel and make a playlist of my own to listen to them one after another? Keep up the good work, I listen to one of your stories every night.

  • @Enigma-Sapiens
    @Enigma-Sapiens Před 2 lety +4

    Here I am listening to possibly te BEST story I have ever heard and then I hear, "to be continued."
    AAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHH!

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před 2 lety +2

      (Writer Here) Oh, there is more my friend 😈😎😇

  • @GIRThaLabel
    @GIRThaLabel Před 2 lety +2

    Hey bro trust me we love your videos and stories told but please don’t over exert yourself. I see your on point with your posting time everyday and it’s been that’s way for years. I’m what they call an OG subscriber 😌🤷🏽‍♂️😂 and I’ve been wit you for awhile but please also think about yourself too. You have been working your ass off wit these videos so if you take a take for awhile all of us will understand. We wouldn’t want you to burn yourself out anyways you need to stay in good health so we can get the best videos outta you. So take care bro enjoy your day.💯👍🏽💪🏽😌

  • @fallon5B
    @fallon5B Před 2 lety +2

    i soooooooooooooooo want part 2...omg! this is an awsome story

  • @mr.smiles1031
    @mr.smiles1031 Před 2 lety +1

    1st story in awhile I'm really invested in!!!

  • @robertlowther6979
    @robertlowther6979 Před 2 lety +4

    Finally a good long cliffhanger, been to long since you've done one of these

  • @wyntersteele1a
    @wyntersteele1a Před 2 lety +1

    I am really feeling this story. I kept looking at the red bar hoping that it would extend itself out so that the story might continue. I definitely hope that the author will release a second part to this story.

  • @Bnubs951
    @Bnubs951 Před 2 lety +3

    Love the longer videos!

  • @TheStuart-of-Cosby
    @TheStuart-of-Cosby Před dnem

    Im back again. Ots a rainy evening here in the Mountains of Tennessee. An well this is one of the best Creepypastas of all time.

  • @smkthegreen7170
    @smkthegreen7170 Před 2 lety +2

    Please give us a part 2! I'm interested in the story and was disappointed by not seeing any other parts posted:( or does anyone know where to find the full story?

  • @stardew1986
    @stardew1986 Před 2 lety +2

    Can't wait for part 2. It's gonna be total badass

  • @gailjenkins9197
    @gailjenkins9197 Před 2 lety +6

    I can't wait for the next part, when will you put it out? This is such a great story. Please hurry. I will be checking your channel all the time, looking for it

  • @CreepingShadows
    @CreepingShadows Před 2 lety +21

    Another great video from you, love your channel so much that it inspired me to start making creepypastas also. I still watch your videos every day, please never stop

    • @horrorfan-uf1hr
      @horrorfan-uf1hr Před 2 lety +6

      Ur actually pretty good

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před 2 lety +2

      Writer Here, I will have to check you out sometime Bropacylpse 😈😎😇

  • @nevasoba5953
    @nevasoba5953 Před 2 lety +4

    The person who wrote this story , has worked in construction a time or 2. I have a creative writing itch also. I've been a wood butcher for 25 years. I'm thinking the author has the right idea. It's getting too hot to keep doing this past my fifties

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před 2 lety +3

      Writer here, I may have been a gopher a time or two on some jobs lol (more like about 50 times lol). I am EXTREMELY heat sensitive, and dream of moving from Appalachia to rather Washington or Colorado (anywhere further North really lol), because it gets hotter and more humid every year here. Hope you enjoy the rest of this series 😈😎😇

  • @Soralinknaruto
    @Soralinknaruto Před 2 lety +1

    Everyone needs to subscribe the this legend he is amazing!!! Your awesome Mr. Creeps!!!

  • @TheStuart-of-Cosby
    @TheStuart-of-Cosby Před 2 měsíci

    Im back again. This has to be my absolute favorite.
    You Sir Creeps should do a completion of this Masterpiece.

  • @allannapier3124
    @allannapier3124 Před 2 lety +2

    Mr c this story is epic plz can we have more as this story can go so much longer please ask the writer for more pages thank you so much for all your hard work this is a master peace in the making

  • @scottagnor1505
    @scottagnor1505 Před 2 lety +4

    CRAZY! The story just stops right when it gets good! Part 2!????????

  • @ttvkidbytheway2673
    @ttvkidbytheway2673 Před 2 lety +5

    I came back and searched you after like 2 years away and found this vid I absolutely love your vids they kinda scare me but I have a laugh about it so it’s fine

  • @jasontwynn7356
    @jasontwynn7356 Před 2 lety +1

    Love it,great story. I can't wait for the rest of it to get posted.
    Love your channel.
    Your voice makes it feel like I'm hearing an old friend tell me a story.
    Keep up the great work

  • @quintonmurray2293
    @quintonmurray2293 Před 2 lety +2

    Loved it and most definitely want to continue so I can know what happens.

  • @charlesfowler4205
    @charlesfowler4205 Před 2 lety +1

    I MUST HAVE PART 2 !!! This is one of the BEST stories I have ever heard
    Can someone tell how to get part two (2)?

  • @wolfofoinn9640
    @wolfofoinn9640 Před 2 lety +2

    This Creepypasta was great! this needs a continuation for sure

  • @jaredwhite2140
    @jaredwhite2140 Před 2 lety +2

    Holy shit there better be a part 2!!!

  • @the_gaming_rabbit8017
    @the_gaming_rabbit8017 Před 2 lety +3

    As someone who was born, raised, and still lives in Washington state, I can confirm

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před 2 lety +2

      Writer here, I live in Appalachia, but want to move to Port Angeles Washington 😈😎😇

    • @the_gaming_rabbit8017
      @the_gaming_rabbit8017 Před 2 lety

      @@OliversWorld333 Port Angeles is a really beautiful place. I've only been there a few times but it's really nice there

  • @jfrederick77
    @jfrederick77 Před 2 lety +2

    You gotta have a part 2 to this

  • @lonewolfnergiganos4000
    @lonewolfnergiganos4000 Před 2 lety +4

    The background of the video is looks so nice.

  • @TheStuart-of-Cosby
    @TheStuart-of-Cosby Před rokem

    This has to be my absolute favorite narration of all time. I've come back to listen to this more than once. I love this series of narrations

    • @TheStuart-of-Cosby
      @TheStuart-of-Cosby Před rokem

      This Has to be my Absolute favorite Creepypasta. I'm back to listen again. This is definitely a Work of Art

    • @TheStuart-of-Cosby
      @TheStuart-of-Cosby Před 8 měsíci

      Once more Back again. Thanks as always Sir Creeps

  • @BeniMaru484
    @BeniMaru484 Před rokem

    This one definitely needs a follow up, very interesting to listen. Hats off to the author

  • @kcklueless
    @kcklueless Před 2 lety +3

    One of the best stories I’ve heard in a long time! I want to hear the rest!!

  • @jaryncovell2538
    @jaryncovell2538 Před 2 lety +1

    It made me giggle when he left the guy hyperventilating and then randomly heard some coughing and then he goes to discover he's ripping a dab pen😂😭

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před rokem +1

      Writer here, I wrote Daniel after my REAL friend Daniel and we used to always listen to creepypasta while vaping or smoking (we dont really like to drink so we blaze lol) and I told him that I was going to write him in a story as himself (minus the badass martial arts the character knows lol) and he would have pulled the vape of Indica out like that lol. Im writing another story now (im about halfway through this stories coninutation and more) to put on NoSleep and am about to pull out a King Louie dab cart to help inspiration lol) Glad you enjoyed my series man, drugs are bad, but if it grows from the earth its probably ok, so I endorse the cannabis lol 😈😎😇

  • @michaelkhouri913
    @michaelkhouri913 Před 2 lety +2

    I hope there is a part two to this awesome story

  • @wanderingcalamity360
    @wanderingcalamity360 Před 2 lety +1

    This was great.
    Looking forward to a sequel to this.

  • @deborahnicholson4071
    @deborahnicholson4071 Před 2 lety +2

    Can't wait for the second half, very suspendful. Love these stories

  • @krishaskin8809
    @krishaskin8809 Před 2 lety +1

    More please!!! Keep up the good work!!!

  • @PenguinFury
    @PenguinFury Před 2 lety +2

    I want so much more of this story.

    • @davidmorningway6025
      @davidmorningway6025 Před 2 lety +1

      Its basically the prologue to a 3 part novel I am writing (just started) 😈😎😇

  • @aaronweaver9751
    @aaronweaver9751 Před 2 lety +3

    That's definitely a hostile work environment.
    Kudos

  • @LeeroyPorkins
    @LeeroyPorkins Před 2 lety +3

    Tune in next week for "I Think It Was Mr. Green In The Library With The Candlestick."

  • @camikazi2737
    @camikazi2737 Před 2 lety +1

    This was sooo good!

  • @nicholasmarion8468
    @nicholasmarion8468 Před 2 lety +1

    I can't wait to get home and fall asleep to this later!

  • @justinator1010
    @justinator1010 Před 2 lety

    What a great story so far, absolutely cannot wait for part 2

  • @ashleydonica2336
    @ashleydonica2336 Před 2 lety +1

    This is an awesome story! I can't wait to hear more of it.

  • @claire-1745
    @claire-1745 Před 2 lety +1

    Awesome story!! I can’t wait for the continuation 🤗 Oh! And I listened to it twice lol

  • @chamelon3211
    @chamelon3211 Před 2 lety +1

    I'm definitely hoping this turns into a miniseries! Would love to see this go to part 5! Great job sir!

  • @nonablouin2606
    @nonablouin2606 Před 2 lety +3

    Cool that is always awesome hearing stories about Washington State I live there it's beautiful here

  • @alienostrich8685
    @alienostrich8685 Před 2 lety +2

    Please tell me there is more that was amazing

  • @morningstar8959
    @morningstar8959 Před 2 lety +1

    I’m actually glad I missed part one now cuz I get to listen to them both back to back. I was tryna do the same with dirty work by nature’s temperature but it is just to dam good. I have no doubt this one will be awesome.

  • @malcolmscally1533
    @malcolmscally1533 Před 2 lety +1

    that hour just flew by :)

  • @Dark_Angel..
    @Dark_Angel.. Před 2 lety +3

    Creeps for my Birthday? YES PLS!💜

    • @Dark_Angel..
      @Dark_Angel.. Před 2 lety +2

      And it's long perfect 🥳

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před 2 lety +2

      @@Dark_Angel.. (Writer Here) HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! More to come! 😈😎😇

    • @Dark_Angel..
      @Dark_Angel.. Před 2 lety +1

      @@OliversWorld333 Thank you😉

  • @jackson0575
    @jackson0575 Před 2 lety +1

    Thanks for letting me know about the quick camera feature on my phone.

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před 2 lety +2

      (writer here) hahahahahahaha, glad I could help lol, I only found out about it about 4 months before writing this lol. 😈😎😇

  • @DaGrimmLoXx
    @DaGrimmLoXx Před rokem

    Oh this is that ONE! I cannot wait for the follow up!

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 Před 2 lety

    Wow, what an amazing beginning! I’m off to the second part now! Excellent work, the author should absolutely be praised! 👍👍👍👍👍

  • @kristiyanastoykova6745
    @kristiyanastoykova6745 Před 2 lety +3

    Would there be new merch with your logo on it ? 🙈

    • @OliversWorld333
      @OliversWorld333 Před 2 lety +1

      (Writer here) for REAL, I want a hoodie with Mr. Creeps on it!!!! 😈😎😇

    • @kristiyanastoykova6745
      @kristiyanastoykova6745 Před 2 lety

      Yess I am hoping for it everytime new vid comes out 😤

  • @aradustruitt6956
    @aradustruitt6956 Před 2 lety

    Thanks for tagging the other parts in the description, great touch 👍.

  • @danielnunez1237
    @danielnunez1237 Před 2 lety +2

    talk about cliffhanger Damn it needs a second part