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Your sentence could have used less contractions. Also, you could have started your second sentence with a word other than a conjunction.
I try my best, better then nothing.
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Your editing could've been a lot smoother. And there's too much dead air.
Your sentence could have used less contractions. Also, you could have started your second sentence with a word other than a conjunction.
I try my best, better then nothing.
thank you,. I do my best and have someone say that ugh.
@@harnessracingfans1000 So dont stop and never let people make you feel bad. Some suck. Most are glad your here.