Really well made but it might help the suspense if you don't show the monster. For example you could have shown the character going into the bathroom when the door kept closing and opening and then go to the outside view of the house with the screaming. But again this was really well made. Another genre I think this story could go great with is keep the entire video through the eyes of the computer. You could keep the door open kinda see where that takes you. These are just ideas you can use however you want but this was great and its great that you didn't rely on jump scares which even horror movies with a much bigger budget do way to much. Another thing to keep in mind is music. It can really help bring more ambiance to the scene and keep the person watching enthralled by the story. Keep up the great work!
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La Llorona.
Better than most. I was freaked out about the screams 😱
Really well made but it might help the suspense if you don't show the monster. For example you could have shown the character going into the bathroom when the door kept closing and opening and then go to the outside view of the house with the screaming. But again this was really well made. Another genre I think this story could go great with is keep the entire video through the eyes of the computer. You could keep the door open kinda see where that takes you. These are just ideas you can use however you want but this was great and its great that you didn't rely on jump scares which even horror movies with a much bigger budget do way to much. Another thing to keep in mind is music. It can really help bring more ambiance to the scene and keep the person watching enthralled by the story. Keep up the great work!
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very good bro
A bit anti-climatic. The shadow should have emerged from the bedroom adjacent to the bathroom door as we saw it pass by this original room.
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