a little basic on the rhyme scheme and feels a little forced as a result. look at diversifying your rhyme patterns. a little more work and you could stop sounding like rap lite. not bad, try looking at what the greats have done in the past to step out from the using such a basic flow
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a little basic on the rhyme scheme and feels a little forced as a result. look at diversifying your rhyme patterns. a little more work and you could stop sounding like rap lite.
not bad, try looking at what the greats have done in the past to step out from the using such a basic flow