Really nice melody! I will say in the intro phrase, the 4th chord sounds wonky as you resolve a dominant chord to an inversion, but oh well, the melody makes up for it 10 fold. The break section is also quite nice and is a good change of pace. Amazing piece, and always keep writing.
I personally want the key centre to be more stable, but if you intend to make it unstable, I believe you can try to do something so it can sound more convincing to the listeners.
I love it! ☺️
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Really nice melody! I will say in the intro phrase, the 4th chord sounds wonky as you resolve a dominant chord to an inversion, but oh well, the melody makes up for it 10 fold. The break section is also quite nice and is a good change of pace. Amazing piece, and always keep writing.
I personally want the key centre to be more stable, but if you intend to make it unstable, I believe you can try to do something so it can sound more convincing to the listeners.
Question G minor, major or G minor, minor??
Because i don't understand random acords and i say: what's the tonality? 😂
@@Lorensas the piece is in G minor, although it does have some measures in major.
13 measure (4 same measures) maybe change si bemol, sol - > si (basic), sol, maybe better, my opinion