"I Used To Work As A Park Ranger, Now I'm A Cryptid Hunter" Creepypasta

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Komentáře • 956

  • @MrCreeps
    @MrCreeps  Před 4 měsíci +116

    Part 2: czcams.com/video/B7HEXEAGewA/video.htmlsi=aq4Rpcu2LsbbBtPB

    • @KCG42069
      @KCG42069 Před 4 měsíci +6

      Yay finally! 🎉

    • @GG07ghost
      @GG07ghost Před 4 měsíci +3

      Yeepiee

    • @bram7703
      @bram7703 Před 3 měsíci +1

      Ayyyyyy

    • @dezd8802
      @dezd8802 Před 3 měsíci

      I love you, I just found this storyline .

  • @Horror_writer_1717
    @Horror_writer_1717 Před rokem +2220

    Just wanted everyone to know, I'm currently working on part 2. I'm glad for all those who have enjoyed the story so far. It's been one of my favorites to write. Thank you for all of your positive comments. :)

    • @Tengu125
      @Tengu125 Před rokem +32

      Nice, can't wait 🙂👍

    • @andrewjohnson8235
      @andrewjohnson8235 Před rokem +16

      Hell yea! I love stories like this!

    • @andrewjohnson8235
      @andrewjohnson8235 Před rokem +15

      When is part 2 coming?!

    • @Horror_writer_1717
      @Horror_writer_1717 Před rokem +78

      @@andrewjohnson8235 I'm about 2/3rds done writing it, then it's up to Mrcreeps if and when he wants to narrate it.

    • @andrewjohnson8235
      @andrewjohnson8235 Před rokem +16

      I can't wait for it! Cryptids always have the coolest stories.

  • @darknessbobulus
    @darknessbobulus Před 10 měsíci +118

    The thing I like about this story is how relatable the MC is. No quest for vengeance or mission fueled by hate. Just "Man's gotta make a living somehow."

    • @oan1249
      @oan1249 Před 7 měsíci +7

      the vibe i'm feeling is more "no vengance, just spite"

    • @SiNevesh
      @SiNevesh Před 3 měsíci +4

      If you find this character relatable, you may wish to visit a psychiatrist.

    • @The_Reaper0713
      @The_Reaper0713 Před 3 měsíci +2

      ​@@SiNevesh Per chance would you pay for it?

  • @ReqLeBeax
    @ReqLeBeax Před rokem +635

    5 minutes in and I’m laughing my butt off. Man pisses off Bigfoot by peeing in a lake while Bigfoot was thirsty. Best start to a creepypasta EVER.

    • @lajuanwilliams68
      @lajuanwilliams68 Před rokem +8

      🤣🤣🤣🤣

    • @jordenfrost2329
      @jordenfrost2329 Před rokem +13

      I was expecting big foot to get revenge for the lake pee

    • @jerseyprepper
      @jerseyprepper Před rokem +9

      That is something that I can actually picture in my head omg 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

    • @shammy1233
      @shammy1233 Před rokem +2

      🤣🤣

    • @druidslads
      @druidslads Před rokem +4

      This isnt just funny, its Goofy in a good way I'm sitting her backing beer and laughing out loud.😂🎉❤

  • @Tengu125
    @Tengu125 Před rokem +262

    51:04
    "Oh my God..."
    "Eh, it's not as bad as you think. It's not your rib"
    Best line 😆

    • @kirstenornelas881
      @kirstenornelas881 Před rokem +17

      My favorite was in the park Ranger story.. "Big foot for sale.. slightly used " 😂 💀

    • @DJRainbowToxic
      @DJRainbowToxic Před rokem +5

      "oh don't be such a baby,ribs grow back"

    • @skim9923
      @skim9923 Před rokem +3

      @@DJRainbowToxic *whispers to bird*
      No ze dont

  • @robertbarlow6715
    @robertbarlow6715 Před rokem +232

    The park ranger and the fire tower is a real good one.

    • @jcbefree7325
      @jcbefree7325 Před rokem +9

      Agreed

    • @t-stash1965
      @t-stash1965 Před rokem +1

      Which one

    • @ghozt1442
      @ghozt1442 Před rokem +7

      Isn't there like a fake person who lures through Mc into a cave or sm?

    • @lowerweb8466
      @lowerweb8466 Před rokem +5

      I'm bout 80% sure fire tower started out as a video game. Generally follows the story line.
      Edit: name of game is firewatch. But the name of the occupation is actually fire lookout, standing fire watch is an action, commonly used by the armed forces. IE "Watson stand firewatch at the door, nobody in , no body out."

    • @robertbarlow6715
      @robertbarlow6715 Před rokem

      @@ghozt1442 yes

  • @prestongarvey2599
    @prestongarvey2599 Před 11 měsíci +42

    I love how the main character here actually seems like he fell into bullshit, he doesn't really know what's going on, but over time he's realistically growing in experience and expectation, if and when this series meets its end, I hope we get to see his transformation into a more serious and gristled crypid hunter, that would be pretty cool

    • @KimchiYeo
      @KimchiYeo Před 3 měsíci

      Bro stop telling me to help a new settlement :P

  • @samuelcolt2600
    @samuelcolt2600 Před rokem +111

    It really got me when he said. “I can’t just go on Craigslist, one big foot slightly used.” 😅😅😅😅

  • @donovanphillips6278
    @donovanphillips6278 Před 8 měsíci +12

    "You have a broken rib... It's not yours." Why is that so funny to me!? 🤣

  • @MarcusCull
    @MarcusCull Před rokem +57

    “Come find me big boy” that line made me laugh way too hard😂 also brilliant writing style horror_writer_1717 and great job Mr creeps you make these stories 15x better always!

    • @christianleocastelo342
      @christianleocastelo342 Před rokem

      Never knew I needed Mr. Creeps to say "I'm Batman" 😅

    • @duck7445
      @duck7445 Před 4 měsíci

      Who needs enemies when you have friends like this😂

  • @michaelkinnecom5165
    @michaelkinnecom5165 Před 7 měsíci +14

    This was outstanding can’t wait for part 2. This could be a movie and a really good one

  • @robynsmith4164
    @robynsmith4164 Před rokem +108

    I REALLY REALLY HOPE this is the first part of a series! There were A LOT of loose ends left. Delores is obviously a cryptid of some kind who is up to something sinister. Anyway, this was an amazing story narrated by the best! I truly hope there’s WAYYY MORE to this story!
    Love from Texas ♥️🤠🌴

    • @Axilstealspie
      @Axilstealspie Před rokem +9

      It explained that she was a banshee though

    • @atbobickman
      @atbobickman Před rokem

      @@Axilstealspie it was

    • @faradaychain8733
      @faradaychain8733 Před rokem

      Well, Banshee is a very sinister ghost, of a troubled woman. You cant negotiate with it, it will drive you insane, make you deaf and kill you. And then, it expects YOU, to marry her in Afterlife or she will make it living hell!
      None of you read anything about the ghosts!? Delores is not nice, old lady, you can call grandmama, SHE WILL KILL, any man, she gets hold of.

    • @no_life4627
      @no_life4627 Před rokem

      Did you not pick up she’s a banshee?

    • @faradaychain8733
      @faradaychain8733 Před rokem

      @@no_life4627 I suppose so…. But she didnt behave, like one. It is morelike, the writer liking the word “Banshee!” But not knowing, what it actually is. I mean, if he uses the name, but made up a whole new creature, how are we supposed to understand, what it actually is!? But I get it. This is the trend now, people stealing IPs from left to right, like the SCP hack and turning all his loot, to something “supposedly different,”(I guess, to avoid the legal and moral issues), that we, the audience, have no idea, what the author, want US, to think about, the plagiarised stories and their stolen IPs.
      First, I thought Delores being a Mermaid, cause of her singing and mental influence, she really had NO UNDEAD, pointers, at any moment, we heard about her. You do know, Banshee, being a undead ghost, of a vengeful woman right?

  • @kentworch
    @kentworch Před rokem +242

    Wow this one was awesome. Loved how the storyline progressed and stays interesting all the way through. There's a good dynamic and the ending feels like well deserved justice. As always you did an excellent narration of it. Thank you so much Mr Creeps for making my night.🖤🖤🖤🖤

  • @dianef.1592
    @dianef.1592 Před rokem +128

    Really loved the first story when I first heard it and was very happy that it had a continuations. I hope the Ranger and Banshee actually do stay friends. Can't wait to hear more of his dumb luck. Lol

    • @atbobickman
      @atbobickman Před rokem

      Hes gonna get her captured or killed

    • @watermelonseednpc
      @watermelonseednpc Před rokem

      im looking forward to more interactions with the nurse

    • @manman1139
      @manman1139 Před 11 měsíci

      I can't find part Two or three for the life of me

  • @magicmaniac5482
    @magicmaniac5482 Před rokem +16

    I like the relatively calm story. Not much death, i didn't think I'd like such a chill creepypasta this much. Looking forward to part 2

    • @faradaychain8733
      @faradaychain8733 Před rokem

      Part 2 is out already?

    • @magicmaniac5482
      @magicmaniac5482 Před rokem

      @@faradaychain8733 I don't think so, but i meant I'm exited for part 2 whenever it comes out. I apologies if i got your hopes up for nothing :(

    • @faradaychain8733
      @faradaychain8733 Před rokem

      @@magicmaniac5482 No worries, Im not an English speaking person, so, I dont actually understand(correctly), many other common phrases either, like, If someone says “to be honest,” It makes me to think, the person was lying about everything, before that, even they were not. But I try to build, my understanding of words, bit by bit. It was my mistake, when I read you comment again.
      But yes, this story, is one of the greatest, funny at times and just enough horrific, that I really want to hear, what happens to this Ranger/Cryptic Hunter, cause, the story has, the elements, that I thought, will put the writers in to prisons now days… Very brave writing.

  • @RubenBtraining
    @RubenBtraining Před rokem +28

    I cannot wait to hear what happens next,really great job,had my complete attention the whole time and laughing.

  • @robertlowther6979
    @robertlowther6979 Před rokem +73

    Awesome, I was hoping there'd be more to the original story. Did not disappoint!!

  • @elnoway2335
    @elnoway2335 Před rokem +7

    "I fell." 🤣🤣🤣 I love this smart ass guy in the story hahaha!

    • @scottwages517
      @scottwages517 Před rokem

      We used that alot when I was an Army MP. We actually tried to help people but sometimes you run across some asshole that the world would be a better place without them. Like the guy who almost cut my friend in half with a sawed off double barrel 12ga.

  • @WerewolfVampire625
    @WerewolfVampire625 Před rokem +17

    Me: Can y'all quit using "park ranger" in your titles and making me think it's the Wolf Lake/Brawn crossover?!
    *recognizes the author's name*
    Also me: Okay, I'll let this one slide

    • @lukehemingway4224
      @lukehemingway4224 Před rokem

      Next Sunday all being well

    • @WerewolfVampire625
      @WerewolfVampire625 Před rokem

      @@lukehemingway4224 *insert Hawkeye voice* Don't. Don't give me hope.

    • @lukehemingway4224
      @lukehemingway4224 Před rokem

      @@WerewolfVampire625 can assure you the episode has been submitted to Mr Creeps. He’s received it and confirmed it’s in the que to be recorded. And given how it’s probably 50 mins for this episode, it will have to be done on a Sunday as that’s when he does the long videos. He already had one pre recorded for this week so the target is next week.

  • @Billy_West
    @Billy_West Před rokem +33

    This was a really good one. Thanks a tin for the fun my dude. I hope to hear more. I also think this one could be written into a tv show…lol

    • @MrsOx-jz9fg
      @MrsOx-jz9fg Před rokem +1

      This is from a book. The author has a serious 9f books on Bigfoot and cryptids..the Dixie Cryptid channel narrates both on youtube and gor the audio books. He puts parts of the books on his channel. He just did this one last week I believe it was..

    • @hayleypaigereviews6744
      @hayleypaigereviews6744 Před rokem +1

      The show Supernatural is basically the same as this story except they’re not park rangers and they don’t sell the cryptids

  • @king81992
    @king81992 Před rokem +4

    Thumbnail Image- A cryptid hunter on the job.
    The early part of the story sounds familiar.
    Second creature= Jersey Devil?
    I love how everyone notices the MC's excess spending.
    LOL, the other park rangers are so fake.
    I feel like the head park ranger knows more than he lets on.
    The story's moral is that luck is a part of skill.

  • @Victoria-sl7ky
    @Victoria-sl7ky Před rokem +8

    Well that was awesome but if you do a part two please dont let him sell out the old banshee , shes a keeper for sure.

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 Před rokem +31

    A lot of the comments say they want more of this storyline, but I feel that it ended just right. Not too much of a cliffhanger, if at all, and left me with a smile. Of course it’s the authors choice as to whether or not it’s done, but personally I’d leave well enough alone. It ended just right.

    • @burliesanford1863
      @burliesanford1863 Před rokem +2

      I have to agree with you about the ending just right . Mr. Creeps did fine job on this one .

    • @jadedillusions8311
      @jadedillusions8311 Před rokem

      Boo! lol I likw the quirkiness of this hunter. There needs to be more .. ;P

    • @regirock7313
      @regirock7313 Před rokem +1

      I agree, but it’s a shame if we were to no longer here the banter of our ranger and Dolores

    • @jackdurden466
      @jackdurden466 Před rokem

      @@burliesanford1863 thank you! It’s not often that I actually have anyone agree with my comments, as I don’t think that every single story is Oscar worthy and I make my feelings known. But, I do my best to try and assist the authors in their mistakes, and a better way to do it next time. I’ve never told any writers to just hang it up. If you’re going to do any type of creative work, whether it’s writing, painting, acting, etc., you better be able to handle the criticism. So again, thanks!

    • @jackdurden466
      @jackdurden466 Před 3 měsíci +1

      @@jadedillusions8311well it appears that you absolutely got what you wanted! I think it’s up to episode 4 and with 5 incoming. And I will admit they’ve been good. 😊

  • @mrVd0min0
    @mrVd0min0 Před rokem +24

    Around 24:00 is where you can start if you've already listened to the first part which was its own creepypasta and you still want a little context. 26:17 for new content

    • @ImmortalAbsol
      @ImmortalAbsol Před rokem +3

      Thank you, some of the recent videos have been quite confusing for daily listeners.

    • @sabieleclipse5799
      @sabieleclipse5799 Před rokem +3

      Thanks, thought I was going crazy when I noticed that the first part was something I'd listened to almost 2 months ago 😹

    • @FreewayKingz
      @FreewayKingz Před rokem +3

      NOT ALL HEROS WEAR CAPES! LOL I was like wtf isn't this a re-upload??

    • @jagnoorsangha3911
      @jagnoorsangha3911 Před rokem

      Goated

    • @Shia10101
      @Shia10101 Před rokem +1

      Thank you I was so confused when I started the video and was like I've listened to all this already 😅

  • @truthylucy7068
    @truthylucy7068 Před rokem +9

    This was a really good story, I found myself lol at the rangers comments! I hope there's a part 2 with this cryptid hunting park ranger.
    Excellent narration Mr. Creeps! 😃

  • @adamwoodman7882
    @adamwoodman7882 Před rokem +9

    Great story I’m very glad we got more of this, hope it continues!

  • @danhunt285
    @danhunt285 Před 3 měsíci +1

    WOW WOW WOW. Its taken me over a year to finish this. I was in a coma for a few days. Homeless, and fighting alcoholism and depression. I failed an assination attempt. A lot of things have happened. Im back now and ive been getting away from all the chaos by escaping into the wilderness in PA. Thanks for the distraction. I see theres more to this and im so happy now that I see theres more to this story. Thank you and well done to the author and mr Creeps

  • @thevideogameempire
    @thevideogameempire Před rokem +2

    "It was a beautiful yet discordant melody. I could never see it making the top 40."

  • @iantop1034
    @iantop1034 Před rokem +31

    These are my fav videos! Any story that takes place in the forest and includes some cryptid like a wendigo, skinwalker, or unknown. If you upload more stories like this I’ll be thrilled! Keep up the great work!

  • @thegreengouf56
    @thegreengouf56 Před rokem +6

    This was awesome. I seriously hope they continue this

  • @peachycream8674
    @peachycream8674 Před rokem +2

    Never thought I’d find a creepy pasta with a Main character I hated. Like damn. This dude is a terrible person, neglecting his job, throwing innocent people to death, all just to prove himself right about catching big foot.

  • @danielrandom3127
    @danielrandom3127 Před rokem +2

    My god this story was so beautifully descriptive and interesting the entire way through! Just like Bigfoot spitting piss water or Mrs.”Foot” searching for her man, it was a whole range of emotions from funny to tense within one paragraph. Great job HORROR_WRITER_1717, I really loved this one!

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 Před rokem +40

    I always love cryptid hunter stories, but this one was incredibly hilarious! I stopped trying to make sense of all of it and just enjoyed the ride. So many crazy dumb luck episodes, that would most of the time irritate me, made me laugh so loud! This was outstanding, and that ending couldn’t have been better! 😂😂😂 Well Done to the author, another with your sense of humor is welcome here! 👏👏👏👏

  • @BoomerG21
    @BoomerG21 Před rokem +12

    I love how the narrator is sarcastic and a d bag this whole time lol

  • @ethanburns1605
    @ethanburns1605 Před rokem +1

    Mr.Creeps will you please do the sequel to this. It’s one of my favorites

  • @jojomafia3851
    @jojomafia3851 Před rokem +5

    I haven’t even heard it yet but I know I’m going to love it! Park ranger turned cryptid hunter! Freaking Epic! 💯😎👌

  • @stephenvalley3284
    @stephenvalley3284 Před rokem +9

    if he messes with my campervan ,! then it's the rocket launcher! I'm trying to enjoy my holiday!

  • @RedrumZombies
    @RedrumZombies Před rokem +3

    Is there more to this?
    I really like the "banshee" Dolores.
    Hope she stays ok.

  • @flycatchful
    @flycatchful Před rokem +1

    This story you composed and narrated was exceptional. I can almost see it being turned into a screen play. I'm waiting with baited breath for part two.

  • @twotonecloudboxing1471
    @twotonecloudboxing1471 Před rokem +6

    Has a park full of children and people
    “Bear traps should do”

  • @Nuggetwill
    @Nuggetwill Před 7 měsíci +3

    I love this story and I am looking forward to the next part. This is one of the few stories I can listen to repeatedly and still laugh like its my first time hearing it. 😂

  • @jruskky7545
    @jruskky7545 Před rokem +4

    One of the best you have done. More cryptid hunter stories please😀👊

  • @usmc5131
    @usmc5131 Před rokem +2

    I’ve been listening to this while plowing snow for my job. This is probably one of my favorite stories. I got a good chuckle from it. I imagine the character as a young Chevy Chase from the vacation series. Thank you Mr Creeps.

  • @gtrguy17
    @gtrguy17 Před rokem +1

    I don't usually watch these types of stories, I'm more into research about these creatures to find the truth of their existence. Anyway I saw your story and decided to listen and I loved it! Great story. Can't wait for part 2.

  • @KellJell
    @KellJell Před rokem +8

    Ok Mr. Creeps, love the story, but for the first quarter, I thought I was having some intense deja vu!! Phew, glad to see it really was an earlier story 😂 and i wasnt having some crazy time slip/glitch in the matrix experience!

  • @crsed
    @crsed Před rokem +5

    Aight this one was pure gold. Loved it

  • @coinexplorer
    @coinexplorer Před rokem +1

    Can’t wait for part 2. These are the types of stories that keep me going through my days!

  • @bennymoore5866
    @bennymoore5866 Před rokem +2

    Character development is creative. I’m a sucker for an ani-hero.

  • @geogemini8528
    @geogemini8528 Před rokem +6

    This was a good one! I hope there are more to come!

  • @coreythompsonTheOneandOnly
    @coreythompsonTheOneandOnly Před 7 měsíci +3

    1:24:44 O my God "Hello um Mrs. Foot 🦶👣, i bet youre wondering where your husband is" funny 🤣 as ever. Chicago Illinois rocks with this content

  • @birdmadd8137
    @birdmadd8137 Před rokem +1

    I don't usually comment on videos, but I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this story and this channel in particular. One of the best so far

  • @ZaBoiii1620
    @ZaBoiii1620 Před 4 měsíci +2

    "As the days went by and I looked for myself in vain"
    I feel you bro 🚶‍➡️
    But honestly I thought it was hilarious when I heard those words 😂

  • @piercingtheveil7749
    @piercingtheveil7749 Před rokem +12

    AWESOME “STORY”. I remember a friend of a friend, that was trained by the Gov in a special unit to engage these types of things, helped “relocate” many bigfoots after the Mt.St.Helens eruption. After about 7 years supposedly he went private as well.. wish I could find him again!
    I’ve got a Sasquatch den about 10 miles from my property. In a well known area for Sasquatch inhabitation…

    • @jojomafia3851
      @jojomafia3851 Před rokem +2

      Ten miles is a hop skip and a jump for them. Be cool if you have any encounters to tell us about! I’d certainly listen. On a positive note I’ve heard of many pleasant encounters. They don’t have to be a negative thing. 💯. You mean them no harm then they would know it. 👍

    • @piercingtheveil7749
      @piercingtheveil7749 Před rokem

      @@jojomafia3851 yes, I have several, two with pics, one with clear pics.. the government here knows all about them, and if people are hunting them for whatever reason, it being big game, or private collection, I’d surmise a big reason they are a high ticket item is their elusiveness of course, as well as how protected their known “home locations” are by the Gov… once you k ow what to look for they are quite prevalent in the Pacific Northwest. A little secret is that they love apples!

    • @counterspellgoon6854
      @counterspellgoon6854 Před rokem +1

      Where in WA are you? I'm ea spokane area. I've heard many stories just never knew them to be true. Should share your pics my guy

  • @j.k1688
    @j.k1688 Před rokem +4

    I really look forward to a sequel on this one!

  • @firefly9838
    @firefly9838 Před rokem +2

    Yeahhhhh I'm gonna need a part 2,3,4 to this one.

  • @leonievanheerden7090
    @leonievanheerden7090 Před rokem +1

    "Tell Mrs Bigfoot not to be too hard on Mr Bigfoot"😀... please,we need the follow up, and may Dolores keep safe 💐

  • @slickmet
    @slickmet Před rokem +3

    This story here, by far one of the best ones I've ever heard. Keep going. 👍

  • @HiTicky
    @HiTicky Před rokem +4

    Good as always, I love these types of stories!

  • @raymondmontiel4543
    @raymondmontiel4543 Před rokem +2

    This should be a series like supernatural it woul have so many seasons

  • @demoneyin9390
    @demoneyin9390 Před rokem +1

    When he want to walk away from the guy trapped in the bear trap and the guy asked “where are you going” I was really hoping he would say “to look for Bigfoot”

  • @badasiwnt2b
    @badasiwnt2b Před rokem +4

    Well done! Can't wait for part 2. He needs to hook up with Steve Lilly.

    • @scottwages517
      @scottwages517 Před rokem

      That's exactly what I was thinking he keeps getting beat up Steve might be able to teach him a thing or three.

  • @lacoste856
    @lacoste856 Před rokem +3

    I can listen to these park ranger and fire tower stories all day💯, great narration mr. creeps🙏🏾

  • @jennyjenny8190
    @jennyjenny8190 Před 4 měsíci +1

    "The chimichanga" lol I needed that laugh.

  • @mx_honey
    @mx_honey Před rokem +2

    FINALLY. A protag with ANGER and IMMORAL INTENTIONS!!!!! love it!!!!

  • @Optimism1974
    @Optimism1974 Před rokem +5

    Damn, I didn't want it to end...FABULOUS!

  • @tazkol
    @tazkol Před rokem +3

    i enjoy the depiction of the banshee here, too often there characterized as malevolent spirits despite them not being so in folklore.

  • @michaelharper6485
    @michaelharper6485 Před rokem +1

    I usually use these kinds of stories to help me fall asleep, but this time I couldn’t stop listening. The bad part is that it 4:00am and now it’s time to get ready for work.

  • @jamesholman9366
    @jamesholman9366 Před rokem +1

    Loved it,hopefully there's more of this story. Thanks JDH

  • @danhunt285
    @danhunt285 Před rokem +7

    I'm commenting for the yt algorithm but I can't wait to listen to this on my graveyard shift in a few hours

  • @Mrsnowmanballz
    @Mrsnowmanballz Před rokem +3

    I get the feeling this story is related to the Bonesaw Vics Cryptozoological Gardens stories. I think the man with no name is Bonesaw Vic and the hunter in this story is one of his sources for cryptids, him and his business seem too similar to be coincidence.

  • @privatekarateka3745
    @privatekarateka3745 Před 4 měsíci +1

    This story is full of funny lines but the "ahh, the chimichanga." Nearly made me choke on my pancake 😂

  • @coreythompsonTheOneandOnly
    @coreythompsonTheOneandOnly Před 7 měsíci +2

    30:55 "maybe 🤔 if you were out there 🔍🔎 searching for them instead of trying to coddle me they'd be back 🔙 already. I like this woman ♀️👠." I'm Chicago Illinois and I like this content. Great 😃👍 work narrator and author

  • @dragonmaid1360
    @dragonmaid1360 Před rokem +3

    lol omg "its not as bad as you think - its not your rib"

  • @awaitthyextinction
    @awaitthyextinction Před rokem +5

    I think you should make a Pinned Post letting people know this is a Reposted Video with an Extended cut. Looks like I was definitely not alone with the Deja Vu feeling lol

    • @sabieleclipse5799
      @sabieleclipse5799 Před rokem

      Definitely not alone, thought I was going crazy for a moment lolz

  • @aniketsawant2240
    @aniketsawant2240 Před rokem +2

    Sequel would be nice. What would happen between the man who doesn't exist and Dolores?

  • @pieceless224
    @pieceless224 Před rokem +2

    Ok, but you have to admit, the tranq gun is the MVP.

  • @diane_alworth
    @diane_alworth Před rokem +4

    My fav voice on the Tube.
    “Natural Selection”. For real.

  • @jimkimbrell4878
    @jimkimbrell4878 Před rokem +9

    I love your stories and narration, thank you.

  • @mariusmunteanu7431
    @mariusmunteanu7431 Před rokem +1

    This would be a banger TV show hopefully gonna find part 2 somewhere or at some point

  • @toanle2185
    @toanle2185 Před rokem +2

    "Laughing all the way."Did I just finished the origin story of Santa Clause? Lol. Amazing story btw! Looking forward to part 2.

  • @Doom_guy88
    @Doom_guy88 Před rokem +4

    This was a great story! Love it !

  • @TheCynthiahawkins
    @TheCynthiahawkins Před rokem +5

    Candelabra!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @lilyawoodburn
    @lilyawoodburn Před rokem +1

    Honestly I love that the main character is kind of an asshole, makes the whole thing feel more real somehow

  • @badasiwnt2b
    @badasiwnt2b Před rokem +1

    I can't wait for the second one

  • @zohaibshah
    @zohaibshah Před rokem +6

    I am sure Mr creeps uploaded this story before I heard this before on this channel.!

    • @loganjeffery7030
      @loganjeffery7030 Před rokem +2

      I thought so to once I heard the beginning

    • @zohaibshah
      @zohaibshah Před rokem

      @@loganjeffery7030 defo it was like last month or so when this story was uploaded

    • @sabieleclipse5799
      @sabieleclipse5799 Před rokem +1

      @@zohaibshah it's an extended cut to a story, rather than simply doing a pt2 with the new content

  • @t-stash1965
    @t-stash1965 Před rokem +3

    Really makes you feel for Mr.foot cause he was just gettin abused, but i lost it when he said chimichanga

  • @ghozt1442
    @ghozt1442 Před rokem +2

    Oh my goodness I loved this one Tell the creator to make a part 2!

  • @burliesanford1863
    @burliesanford1863 Před rokem +1

    Good job Mr. Creeps . I believe you nailed it with the ending . It's left open for another chapter if the writer chooses, would make a good mimi series I think. Thanks.

  • @JZT-JZT
    @JZT-JZT Před rokem +3

    Omg my rib. It’s not your rib. 😂

  • @OzzyNe0n
    @OzzyNe0n Před rokem +3

    Of course nature is not man's best friend. We're destroying it! In fact, notice how the first cryptid appeared to the protagonist *right* after he peed in a lake?

  • @udaitenma3337
    @udaitenma3337 Před rokem +2

    Imagine you're big ass cryptid, feared by people, going to drink some water at the lake, then you see some mf pissing on it right in front of you, contaminating the very same water that is in your mouth rn

  • @danielahernandez6877
    @danielahernandez6877 Před 8 měsíci +1

    I really liked this story the fact that’s it’s long added bonus bcz i work on a computer all day and I can’t really touch my phone that much . So awesome story can’t wait for part 2

  • @Horror_writer_1717
    @Horror_writer_1717 Před rokem +4

    I need a little help. I'm eventually going to publish all 3 parts of this story as a book. In your opinion, what genre do you think best fits this story? Horror? Suspense? Dark Comedy? or something else?

    • @Ttkfragzz
      @Ttkfragzz Před rokem +2

      Suspense definitely

    • @williamdabill
      @williamdabill Před rokem +2

      Where can i read the rest? Any videos in audio for the rest of the story?

    • @Horror_writer_1717
      @Horror_writer_1717 Před rokem +1

      @@williamdabill Mrcreeps hasn't narrated part 2 yet. I'm actually posting the story on kindle vella in episodes, but it'll take a while to get to new material.

    • @ljohnson9384
      @ljohnson9384 Před rokem +4

      Definitely been checking back every month since release for part 2

  • @JustSomeGuywithEpicGrasses

    Your videos are amazing, dude.

  • @thedude4414
    @thedude4414 Před 9 měsíci +1

    Cant wait for part 2!

  • @Lilmickcrocodiledundee0001

    Outdoors and dogman stories are the best!! Thank you Mr Creeps for all the hard work bringing us these incredible stories. Stay blessed Bro

  • @timtimmins6996
    @timtimmins6996 Před rokem +3

    Thanks for the content

  • @strgazerlilly
    @strgazerlilly Před rokem +5

    🍷Congratulations to the author this was a such a good story and thank you for bringing us such a long story to enjoy I enjoyed the mind movie very much📽 🎬 👏Bravo🍷

  • @bluerose1014
    @bluerose1014 Před rokem +1

    That "gone coo coo for cocoa puffs" caught me off guard and made me laugh

  • @yotj65
    @yotj65 Před rokem +1

    This needs to be a series! 🔥🔥