imma be real this is horrible, but here's some stuff you can improve on first of all, personally ,i wouldn't try this trend at all, it's a bit overused the font looks ugly, it is completely optional but i'd change it to smthing else the effect at the end of plan a is just disgusting, get rid of it i noticed some of the scenes in plan A seem to be sped up, i don't really recommend that i guess you did a good job with the transitions? could be alot better though try to put the scenes together in a chronological order, for example: season 4 episode 6 to season 4 episode 7, season 5 epsiode 1 to season 5 episode 2, you get it (lmk if i need to elaborate on this) i do agree on when plan b and c start, so no comments there include season 3 clips too, the governor appears for like... idk, 5 seconds? guy changed rick a lil so i think he deserves a lil bit more screentime in this edit all the advice i could give, i'll probably come back to this later
Didn't expect this to hit a little over 1K, thanks guys.
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I loved the transition between him playing with Judith and his final episode ❤
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This is such a fire edit man! Good shit fr.
Thanks, I don't think it's that good but nice to know someone likes it.
That transition at 0:45 is CRISPY fr! :)
Keep it up!
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imma be real
this is horrible, but here's some stuff you can improve on
first of all, personally ,i wouldn't try this trend at all, it's a bit overused
the font looks ugly, it is completely optional but i'd change it to smthing else
the effect at the end of plan a is just disgusting, get rid of it
i noticed some of the scenes in plan A seem to be sped up, i don't really recommend that
i guess you did a good job with the transitions? could be alot better though
try to put the scenes together in a chronological order, for example: season 4 episode 6 to season 4 episode 7, season 5 epsiode 1 to season 5 episode 2, you get it (lmk if i need to elaborate on this)
i do agree on when plan b and c start, so no comments there
include season 3 clips too, the governor appears for like... idk, 5 seconds? guy changed rick a lil so i think he deserves a lil bit more screentime in this edit
all the advice i could give, i'll probably come back to this later
Ok thanks I will try
no problem, if you need any more advice lmk @@0fficer-friendly
good job bro nice copy
Copy?