Millionaire sees a woman in the rain with her newborn baby, he hands over his credit card and…
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Robert is so a wonderful man you a good person keep it up
How come she appeared in a picture with a dog instead of the baby?
Lots of repetitive reading. Should be edited before uploading .
Too much repetition
Lovely story
Good story. Enjoyed watching it.
Why the irritating background music? I don't see that it adds anything to the story, but, in fact, detracts from it.
Way to many words interesting story could be 10 min. shorter.
I don't like the background music
❤❤❤❤. What a wonerful act of love ❤❤
Very enjoyable! I liked the characters
Dumb dad using daughter to pay his debts to loan sharks .
Very Good Video.. they have each other!😊❤
A nice story, yet lacked continuity. As a published author, I learned the necessity of several editing of the manuscript. Never be in a hurry to get your story out.
What abbout learnt.?
Nice love story! Hopefully it will be a happy ending!
Nice story too bad it wasn’t edited before it was sent
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Good nice story - a dubbel recounter of the story -need a good editor, no music ore soft music - if you do that more will come to get your Chanel in there favorites,
Wonderful and in-depth story. Robert is so good looking
Very much irritating background music
If the baby is a new born it would not be capable of playing with anything on the floor.
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Is good to be kind and render help at anytime. The good.
Can't see any millionaire giving to anyone, usually they are very mean.
Nice story , but needs serious editing.
Very interesting story. Writer is impressive..decent story
Needs an edit. Thanks.
... And they lived happily ever after ?
BOLLOCKS!
What's with the repeat around 34 minutes into the story?
Too wordy. Can be cut by 5 minutes. There’s also a random repeat section. Decent story that needs an edit.
Wonderful story, thanks to Robert for being Emily's protector and life partner
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This type of long, drawn-out story works like a sleeping pill while your eyes are closed and the volume is low. It must be nice to be a rich man, I wouldn't know. Sweet dreams.
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I agree, too many unnecessary words and scenes that make listeners impatient. Otherwise good. I too picked up some vocabulary from it. Thank you.
100% agree your sentiments.........story dragged out with verbose narrations !!!!!
Nice story but you need to preview it before posting. Too many repeats.
Very interesting story!
Thank you!!!
Repeating is kill the story for me
Never heard a story told like this. You tell something and start to tell something else then go back to the part you were you were telling
Two different ways the fight ensued when Robert got into Emilys apt
Enjoyed the story but there were too many repetitive sentences and the ending seemed to be hanging without a continuance..
What a mess, the story all screwed up; things out of order.
Claire is a little baby in Emily's arms in the rain, and a few weeks later she is chasing butterflies . story is getting to be more far-fetched. not worth reading further. REAL BOTCHED JOB IN THIS SCRIPT
Thanks!
This time it’s knot, not is the wrong word
Why is this girl so special that Marcos and his allies try to get her. Does she hold their secrets? The story made it very complex, like missions impossible .
5:01 Emili's father was abusing her after her mother's death. She was probably pimped by her own dad so she tried to escape with her daugther perhaps born of rape by her own father.
great story,, I just felt like we needed more story at the end ,, like a update on what happened at the end,,, just need more please ,.,, thank you
Miracles do happen. How and when it will happen? Only God ha the answer
Good story. Definitely needs editing
God forbid Robert should call the police when he heard the door being broken down. Nope -- that would be too logical. Can't have THAT!
I thought Samuel was his lawyer. Why the sudden switch to Thomas, and who/what was Samuel?
I like this story.Background music is not good
EDIT IS CORRECT. How weird this story is. I thought Claire was a few Mos old.
Good story, but a bit mixed up
Very boring. No reason given for Marcos threatening Emily. Who and where was Clair’s father. Too many repetitious phrases. A story without head or tail. Apologies to the author.
The . millionaire didn't nust stop there till he got involved emotilly to romantically
And who is the father of Claire? Where is be?
Did Robert recover his credit card and the items purchased?.
I tkink along the same lines that person stated
Thought solicitors name was Samuel
Story is going back and forth
Miles to long and dragged out I gave up before the end
Wonderful story the music is perfect❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Poor Robert to get entangled with a very troubled person and situation.😢
he fought off MARCOS, AND THEN AGAIN ROBERT DROVE TO EMILY'S APARTMENT ?? SOMEBODY MIXED UP THE PAGES OF THE SCRIPT ???? ( TIME FRAME 34: 17 )
Sounds like a bs story prepared by an ai bot.
he had the cell phone while driving and had ignored the many calls ! yet when he finally got home , next morning he found his cell phone ??? slight editing glitch !!!
LOOKS LIKE TO PARALLEL SETS OF SCRIPTS, YET DIFFERENT YOU NEED A MUCH BETTER RE-WRITE
Not nodded, knotted
Where do you find all these gorgeous men ?
Good story to ponder rhe happenings in life not easy to resolved
A very very LOUSY story! Too long, repetitive and monotonous!
Is it new james bond script?
It’s SIGHED, side
This is horrible. Very poorly written n weak story.
Seriously AI stories are too converlouted
This seems impossible ( but nice I guess). Wouldnt it have made more sense ( if he were rich) to just pay the loan shark back, so Marcos does not come after her. Since she was so poor ( in the beginning) what did Marcos want? to sell her to a pimp? She was lucky to find the rich guy. It just would have made more sense for the rich guy to pay off Marcos whatever Emily owed. Instead, he had Marcos arrested and now the criminal friends are coming after them. Story mentions that he was going to hire security guard, so why he did not just pay off Marcos. Anyhow, I dont think this story really exists in real life. Marcos and his friends might still be a threat. Emily should just move to a new town ( if he wanted her to be safe) and start some life far away from the criminal loan shark.
on the phone with emily and also with samuel ???
Too dis jointed to be worthwhile.....get a new vocation
Hallo . Ek wens ons kan die videos in Afrikaans sien. Waarom word so gediskrimeneer teen AFRIKAANS.?
Robert is a kind man. He help Emily and her daughter. But for him to give his card to her something I couldn't believe because he didn't know her. It was found that Marcus was the man who took Robert's card. Emily was in danger and Robert has to find her because Marcus escaped. Marcus went to Emily apartment and found Marcus fight with Emily. Poor Emily been abused by her father and then Marcos. Lucky Robert arrived on time. Police arrested Marcos. Emilt found refuge with Robert. Nice story of kindness and resilience. The repetiton of part of the story is annoying and should never repeat in any other story.
😊Judge not and you will not be judged as the message given to all Baptised. Christians as mrn
Mentioned in the Bible our Book of Life
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She is beautiful girl, but sometimes show a baby another times show a dog which one is true you guys take long time read a story
Sometimes Emily held at Infant sometimes she held a baby. Sometimes she held a puppy confused. in Manitoba Canada
What are you talking about? That was not in the story.?????
Audio needs editing.
Good grief he nice looking!
Lousy
It is one of the worst narrivated story.
I enjoyed this story it was very exciting well read
Nice story! Interesting, needed to finished it!
Clair from baby to child playing in the park from repairing the house to finding a new place kind of off and some part mix-up but a good story
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Good story but badly edited! Two versions of same scene....very annoying! N often sentence construction a bit off! To long f spoken language ...n jumps from 1st to 3rd person on occassions where unecessary! To many verbs! ......so makes it 'overwordy'....little bit more attention t that n could be excellent!
Did AI write this?
No, AI did not write this.
Why do you have to repeat and mix up the timeline. This is really stupid
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