[mind the gap]-slam poem about london

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  • čas přidán 7. 11. 2018
  • wooo I feel like I haven't written in months and was so worried that I would never find that spark to create poems again but I'm so glad this happened
    this poem is one I've been thinking about a lot, I travel into London for work and fun and I have a lot of thoughts about it
    London is my home and always will be and holds a special place in my heart
    However, to think it perfect would be a crime, London has its faults- ones that I don't necessarily have all the solutions for
    I just wanted this poem to look a little more into this clean, bright souvenir of London that I always see
    [mind the gap]-manisha premlal
    [mind the gap]
    bricks and mortar,
    tracks and trams.
    this city is a walking contradiction
    commuters scuttle onto tubes,
    stone faced and silent,
    busker's voice robbed in the halls- this act is violent
    a stampede of heels,
    single file marching.
    children wake up missing meals,
    spend their whole day starving
    madam spare me a pound,
    november brings a chill,
    you're going home safe and sound,
    with a plush bed to fill
    [mind the gap]
    we both take a pill,
    but mine's with a side of disdain,
    you're in for the thrill,
    I'm just trying to hide my pain
    ambulances chase after our youth,
    headlines blame it on knives,
    see an eye for an eye becomes a tooth for a tooth,
    our city's bleeding out lives
    housing prices are simply spinning,
    ms prime minister no one's winning
    this situation is out of control,
    please start seeing society as a whole
    national health is desperately struggling,
    staff are pushed and pulled and juggling
    urgent call for nurses to stay,
    try to rethink their hours and pay
    [mind the gap]
    you can try to jump
    but you just might fall,
    this city maybe wasn't built for us all
    this city is bright lights and city sights,
    this city is shattered glass and gang fights
    tall skyscrapers knocking past council flats,
    in london you're never too far from a rat
    'we are sorry to say the 20:18 train is delayed by approximately _ minutes'

Komentáře • 7

  • @derpyto3z
    @derpyto3z Před 3 lety +2

    7 dislikes are by the people who disagree with free school meals

  • @nabelanawaz2796
    @nabelanawaz2796 Před 5 lety +2

    Wow. Love it 👍🙋❤️

  • @paolagomes2379
    @paolagomes2379 Před 5 lety +4

    Woah. So deep.

  • @eternalexperience2489
    @eternalexperience2489 Před 5 lety +1

    Treasures are treasures because they are hidden from the crowd. Your words are gold but only a few will behold. And I like when I go onto adventures and find dreams that are not allowed. Because, in Truth, there is no hiding place from the Father of Creation.

  • @serenaramewal9831
    @serenaramewal9831 Před 5 lety +1

    it's really beautiful.
    You have so much courage to post this online.
    You should really do more poetry.
    The World deserves to hear what you have to say.
    xoxo

  • @derpyto3z
    @derpyto3z Před 3 lety

    I'm here for English home learning

  • @thomasgale96
    @thomasgale96 Před 5 lety

    acc p good