Ten Weird Writing Tips That Actually Work

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  • Here are ten unusual writing tips that I like to use. Let me know your fav, or share one of your own!
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Komentáře • 736

  • @TimbrrWolfe
    @TimbrrWolfe Před 2 lety +4333

    "I won't tell you what names I use when I want to like a character less but there are a few in rotation" 😂

    • @AlleyBurke
      @AlleyBurke Před 2 lety +37

      Hmm… I wOnDeR wHaT tHe NaMe Is?

    • @sock356
      @sock356 Před rokem +17

      I see you are looking to be a writer well you should learn for a master like myself I'm Edward wartson a professional writer so I will help you just think about the world and realize it's all a story and you can change the world well no I can change the world because It's my job as a history writer you cannot because you couldn't make a story but maybe you can with my help.

    • @meatbleed
      @meatbleed Před rokem +98

      @@sock356 what a comment

    • @TNcFlipbook
      @TNcFlipbook Před rokem +2

      ♥♥

    • @aurin_komak
      @aurin_komak Před rokem +48

      @@meatbleed definitely one of the comments ever

  • @jessicam.g.8529
    @jessicam.g.8529 Před rokem +3463

    A list, because I like lists:
    1.Temporarily change the name of a character with the name of someone you like or dislike to imagine them more complexly.
    2.Cut the last thing you wrote as extra words often make it weaker.
    3.Stop writing while you still have ideas to have a starting point for the next writing session.
    4.Print your manuscript for proofreading, as having a physical copy makes it easier to spot mistakes.
    5.Keep sentence-long summaries of your scenes as you write them.
    6.Keep a list of topics, ideas--- to follow up later
    7.Keep a list of problems for revisions, instead of stopping to fix them while drafting.
    8.Sumarize problem parragraphs
    9.Swap scenes with a writing partner
    10.enter your character's brain.

    • @susanscott8653
      @susanscott8653 Před rokem +65

      I was actually told No. 3 by a writing tutor years ago. He expressed it as leaving a thread for you to pull in your next session.
      No. 4: I can vouch for this one myself. I can't proofread from the screen to save myself 🙄. Reading it aloud helps too, but whether you would want to do that with a whole novel, I don't know...🤔.
      Not a tip exactly, but I wish I had developed a regular writing routine when I was young. Much harder when you are older I think. 😕

    • @griffinrorcrafts
      @griffinrorcrafts Před rokem +2

      Thank you!

    • @TNcFlipbook
      @TNcFlipbook Před rokem

      ♥♥

    • @luamaral4333
      @luamaral4333 Před rokem +7

      Thank you! I also like lists so you saved me some work

    • @katgreer6113
      @katgreer6113 Před rokem +18

      Just use something to read your draft out loud. You can literally HEAR your mistakes, rather than your eyes skipping over words. No need to waste ink or paper here folks.

  • @yunnazee
    @yunnazee Před 2 lety +2840

    My favorite writing hack is acting out the scenes, I know its super weird but I'm a D&D and LARPER so acting out the scenes to see if they flow well before I write them actually helps me work through plot problems I hadn't thought of while typing up the outline. If you are comfortable acting weird its actually super helpful.

    • @Jo-dk9my
      @Jo-dk9my Před rokem +144

      Me too 😂
      I wonder if my neighbors are worried…sometimes I’ll just be jumping around and sword fighting an invisible wall

    • @EmmaBennetAuthor
      @EmmaBennetAuthor Před rokem +28

      That’s such a great idea!

    • @itz_leequirrielexlaflamant2091
      @itz_leequirrielexlaflamant2091 Před rokem +25

      That idea is perfect. I do that too

    • @lunaraydue1340
      @lunaraydue1340 Před rokem +80

      Once I grabbed a friend and pantomimed a scene of choking them on the floor and then being hit off with a bottle so I could better picture how the scene would play out 🤣

    • @EmmaBennetAuthor
      @EmmaBennetAuthor Před rokem +17

      @@lunaraydue1340 omg!

  • @NateMonoxide
    @NateMonoxide Před rokem +450

    The best tip I've ever heard is "don't tell anyone about what you're planning to write. Tell them once it's done".
    Something about getting people's reactions before any of the work is done means you're far less likely to see the project through. It rings true as well, since all the people I know who often mention they're 'writing a book' have been working on the same thing for upwards of a decade with little to show for it.
    There was a psychological study that pretty much reinforced the idea too.

    • @heycj
      @heycj Před 9 měsíci +50

      Yeah, there was this one book I was writing a few years ago, when I first started writing, I told all my friends I was writing a book. I eventually had to stop working on it because the pressure that they all knew what I was writing weighed VERY heavily on my shoulders. It was definitely all psychological though, and since then I only tell people I wrote a book when it's done.

    • @Kephy_
      @Kephy_ Před 8 měsíci +23

      Especially your parents... I told my mother and she is asking every week if I finished bruuuuh

    • @samwallaceart288
      @samwallaceart288 Před 7 měsíci +19

      I've been outlining my graphic novel series for 3 years now in the background of just living life normally and developing myself as a person. Haven't told a soul. It's something I probably won't finish anytime soon; the subject matter is something I'm passionate about but is even more personal for other people; I know for a fact there are things I haven't got right yet, that I wouldn't want put out in their current state. I need to find the right version of this story and be very careful not to fuck it up just because I felt pressured to finish it by an arbitrary deadline.
      I'm not in writer's block, it's been intensely rewarding but exhausting to work through this story and I get new ideas every day; I'm not holding off on actually producing it because I'm scared or unable, but because I know the story isn't matured yet and I want to do this one justice.

    • @chesspiece4257
      @chesspiece4257 Před 6 měsíci +13

      if you’re like me and feel the need to ramble about your plot points to get them straight in your head, try this: “it’s just for fun.” or “i’m just planning it, not writing it.” (don’t lie, obviously, but you can totally convince yourself it’s not gonna happen right up until you start writing it.) and then you tell no one you’ve actually started writing it until you’re finished. it’s also great because if it’s an Offical Project™ people will critique it but not offer any decisions because they don’t want to step on your toes. if it’s just for fun, they’ll mention cool ideas, and have lower standards when it comes to critiquing it.

    • @taewoods2034
      @taewoods2034 Před 5 měsíci +1

      Yep took me a while to realize it. But Andrew Huberman pretty much explains it.

  • @Buffy8Fan
    @Buffy8Fan Před 2 lety +1233

    Writing tips that aren't just the standard ones you hear everywhere. 😁

    • @HannahLeeKidder
      @HannahLeeKidder  Před 2 lety +102

      🙌🙌🙌🙌

    • @thursoberwick1948
      @thursoberwick1948 Před rokem +25

      @@HannahLeeKidderSeconded. Thank you for *original* content.

    • @celtictarotreadings333
      @celtictarotreadings333 Před rokem +9

      It’s so refreshing to hear something new. I get tired of the same boring advice

    • @lukasz96
      @lukasz96 Před 5 měsíci +1

      If thousands of trained and professional writers keep repeating the same 5 tips, it's you, not them. Maybe that's it, huh. All you need to understand. But instead you waste time watching some self-centred ytber who didn't publish shit besides some short stories. Could it be because her alternative and "original" tips suck? 🤔 I mean, if her tips are soooo great that a video needed to be made, surely she's a best-selling author with multilple hits, right?
      It's sad. You start researching, hope to not waste time, and yet, apparently, most of the tips on the internet are some ridiculously bad fanfic circlejerks. Sigh.
      "Original" in this case means "I don't want to learn the hard stuff, I don't understand what I am doing but somehow I still think that whatever I will come up with is just... better". 🤑🤢
      Have some standarts...

    • @bonnietelocole6777
      @bonnietelocole6777 Před 2 měsíci

      ​@@lukasz96have you considered that everyone is unique, and what works for you might not work for them?
      For example, I'm working on 3 projects at the same time while watching videos and thinking of ideas for my handful of other projects. I thrive in this chaos because it's how I function, but I know there are people who would never be able to function in such chaos, because that's them and how they are.
      7.8 billion people on this planet, never expect everyone to agree on anything. Including whether or not professional advice helps them.

  • @edenmckinley3472
    @edenmckinley3472 Před 2 lety +1560

    My weird writing tips: 1. listen to music. A ton of music. Three hour How To Train Your Dragon ambience loop has got the creative juices flowing multiple times. Once, I listened to Hurt by Nine Inch Nails for four hours while I wrote a particularly sad scene. I can now sing it from memory.
    2. have several documents open on my computer so I can work on another story or look up notes if current story isn't going well.
    3. write a poem about how the character is feeling, an element of the world, or a cultural attitude of a made-up culture. Once, I even wrote a love poem from one character to another to cement their relationship in my mind. (My sister read it and pestered me to include it in my book, but I am less confident in my poetry skills than I am in my prose skills.) Poetry never fails to cut to the emotional heart of the subject, whereas prose can get mushy.
    4. eat an apple at the beginning of my writing session. Apples are my favorite food, they're nutrisious, and the physical catharsis of chewing something helps my thought process. I also like to have a cold drink on hand to sip throughout.
    5. If I need time to think or if the plot is stuck, I go for a walk in the park across the street. I get in twenty minutes of exercise so no one can accuse me of sitting on my butt all day, and pacing helps me think.
    6. I often delete the first thing I said rather than the last. Especially in inner monologues, I work up to the point through several sentences, fleshing out the idea, then delete the often weak, unnecessary beginning sentences.
    7. write unnecessary scenes in a separate document. These scenes may not even be included in the book. It could be the MC on their deathbed surrounded by grandchildren, it could be a scene of a group of friends playing volleyball or the MC's first date from the POV of the love interest. It helps me understand the character if I know their life outside what happens in the book. I know that the MC can cook nothing but eggs and oatmeal, I know that he will have six dogs who know him only as "Daddy", I know that his future wife will have a miscarriage at age 37, triggering the only real argument the two of them will ever have. It's small details like that which make the character feel like a living being who has a life beyond the story.

    • @sydneyperson1336
      @sydneyperson1336 Před rokem +42

      u should start a youtube channel

    • @lani490
      @lani490 Před rokem +45

      I like the way your mind works

    • @shlafrock2175
      @shlafrock2175 Před rokem +10

      Nice ✨✨

    • @TNcFlipbook
      @TNcFlipbook Před rokem +3

      ♥♥

    • @Christian-97
      @Christian-97 Před rokem +11

      5 surprisingly helps me a lot. I take walks when I write, it gets the creative energy flowing.

  • @sorinstudies
    @sorinstudies Před rokem +112

    I think this is the best advice I've gotten about writing. My college English professor once told the class that when you don't know what to write, just put you thoughts down on the page. For example, you could write "I don't know what to write but I want to say __ and this is the direction I want to go." This has really helped me as I write a lot of argumentive research papers and I need to get my argument across clearly and effectively.
    But, I think this could really help if you were writing a novel or poem as well.

    • @HannahLeeKidder
      @HannahLeeKidder  Před rokem +11

      Yeah, I had a poetry professor tell me the same! We would do writing sessions in class where we weren't allowed to have a still pen. It's a great exercise!

  • @mariayates8625
    @mariayates8625 Před 2 lety +158

    "writers just don't know how to shut up." TRUE!! I have used this tip so much and it almost always makes my prose (or any other writing for that matter) cleaner.

    • @HannahLeeKidder
      @HannahLeeKidder  Před 2 lety +28

      It is so true!!! One time I reached over my friend's keyboard and deleted the last paragraph of her story and she read it back and GASPED. If you've been staring at a story trying to figure out what's wrong with it, it's Almost Always that it needs a trim

  • @cjpreach
    @cjpreach Před rokem +448

    MY FAVE WEIRD WRITING HACK. I love to brainstorm characters and plot by taking several sheets of printer paper, laying them out on the table, and putting a circle (which represents a character) in the middle of each page. One for my MC, and others are for supporting characters. I draw a relationship web on each page that shows each individual's CHARACTERISTICS, as well as the ACTIVITIES, BACK STORY, DIRTY SECRET and INTERACTIONS each character has with all the others. The whole story comes to life in the scribbles. P.S. I know all this is supposed to be possible with Scrivener, and other programs, but I can't visualize my story on the computer screen.

    • @HannahLeeKidder
      @HannahLeeKidder  Před rokem +54

      Sometime pen and paper just hit different!

    • @Onajourney519
      @Onajourney519 Před rokem +15

      I know I always go back to pen and paper! But the issue is I can't read my own handwriting haha

    • @carolinea5201
      @carolinea5201 Před 7 měsíci

      @@Onajourney519 I tried something similar with a new program that popped up on my MacBook in recent months, it's called Freeform. I can draw boxes, and add text, and insert photos. It's a cool way to make a mind map!

  • @RaptorsCantSwim
    @RaptorsCantSwim Před rokem +238

    My favourite writing tip is using your story/ main plot as a plot for a tabletop roleplay, like DnD. Seeing other people's interactions with your characters or plot (or world, if it's fantasy) is an eye-opener for all angles of the story. Everything from pitfalls to solutions. Seeing your friend's reactions when their shenanigans make it into your book is also a lot of fun. 😅

    • @jacksonkerr2095
      @jacksonkerr2095 Před rokem +10

      That is a really cool idea! I have played RPGs from time to time, and it has brought out some spontaneous (and hilarious) moments.
      The one time I tried to GM, my outline for the episode was more like a script than a regular plan for a session. It certainly gave me out into the different kinds of writing and how they function.

    • @RaptorsCantSwim
      @RaptorsCantSwim Před rokem +2

      @@jacksonkerr2095 It is eye-opening, indeed. I always recommend people to try and write different things and different formats. Sometimes trying to imagine a scene in your book as a scene in a movie or on a stage can change your perspective completely.
      Also writing in different styles, such as writing the outline of the story as if it were a fairytale or imagining it as a comic panel can be helpful, should one have fallen into a block of some sort.

    • @CdFMasterVideo
      @CdFMasterVideo Před 11 měsíci

      I wouldn't be surprised if that was how the script of the DnD movie was written!

    • @M1dn1ghtF0x
      @M1dn1ghtF0x Před 11 měsíci

      this isn't just helpful for writign, but also fun to do with friends when you're all bored in a room xD

  • @stefo66
    @stefo66 Před rokem +122

    Tip 8 is it, my writing increased both in quality and quantity when I realised that what you write doesnt have to be "good" it just had to be writing - you can then just go back and fix it later, but also sometimes what you thought was rough and garbage sometimes actually turns out to be alright. It's better to get a draft down however bad it is and just fix it after the fact

  • @rickcoona
    @rickcoona Před rokem +93

    I find using Text-To-Speech helpful for not only spotting typos, but catching text that may "Look" like it works but when read aloud don't sound right. making it an easy fix.
    I also sit down and interview my characters like picturing meeting them in a coffee shop and sitting down and asking them about their life, history, and loves it makes them much more Dynamic because they will tell you things about their life you had No idea about

    • @timtrottproductions
      @timtrottproductions Před měsícem

      writing for reading and writing for talking are not constructed the same way.

    • @rickcoona
      @rickcoona Před měsícem +1

      @@timtrottproductions no, but it DOES help find typos and you may find that something may look good written, but when you read it out loud, or use a text-to- speech program, you discover the error in your prose.
      consider it a useful tool, rather than just reading it out loud.😺

    • @franceskirsch9906
      @franceskirsch9906 Před měsícem

      100% Text to speech has been immensely useful for me in the editing process.

  • @hey_its_jj
    @hey_its_jj Před rokem +294

    I don’t write my book in order. Ik weird right?
    If I have a chapter that has something significant, like a death or plot twist, my brain gets the ideas and if I don’t write it out I will loose the idea before I get to that part in my book.
    I have used this for my novel I am currently working on and I have been going strong 😊🎉

    • @thursoberwick1948
      @thursoberwick1948 Před rokem +34

      I often write the end towards the start of my project. This is because it keeps it fresh and gives me something to aim for.

    • @khall3131
      @khall3131 Před rokem +21

      I don't write in order, either. I tend to write the opening scene first but then I'll move on to other important plot points in the order that I think of them. I may have a bunch of ideas for how a scene should go but if I waited until I had written everything that comes before it, I'd forget my ideas before I had a chance to write them down.
      I tend to write the beginning, then the end, then the middle. It makes sense to me because if I know where I'm starting and where I want to end, I can figure out how to make the journey from point A to point B.

    • @lesliewells1062
      @lesliewells1062 Před rokem +12

      Some writers write the ending, and then go back to the beginning and everything they write works towards that ending. I like your way of doing it!!

    • @hey_its_jj
      @hey_its_jj Před rokem +2

      @@lesliewells1062 awww Ty ur too kind 😊

    • @TNcFlipbook
      @TNcFlipbook Před rokem

      ♥♥

  • @paneljump
    @paneljump Před rokem +86

    +1 on the 1-sentence summary, and here's a trick if you're using G-docs/Word/similar:
    1. imbed that sentence at the top of the scene within the document
    2. give that sentence a "heading" rather than "paragraph" formatting
    3. (optional) make the imbedded heading text white or very light gray (so it isn't annoying)
    4. add a Table of Contents at the top of your doc
    Doing this keeps the summary synced with the manuscript, automatically provides hotlinks to let you navigate to the scene, and displays page count. NovelPad is better, especially if you're messy, but gdocs are free.

  • @rowan404
    @rowan404 Před rokem +24

    #10 is how I do most of my writing. Instead of writing the scenes in order, I write a scene that matches my current mood, situations occupying my mind, etc. It is both cathartic _and_ productive!

  • @dokida
    @dokida Před 2 lety +248

    these tips are SOOOO GOOD hannah. i have one too! something that really humanizes characters i'm struggling with is imagining the kind of music they really like, or grew up with. this might be super specific to my personal experience (and my slightly unhealthy obsession with finding and organizing new music into genre playlists), but i find that the music we listen to says a lot about us, and listening to artists that my character would listen to is a really easy way for me to really sink into their psyche. i like making lil character mixtapes, so i can swap between several different ones based on who i'm focusing on or what part of the story i'm at.
    it makes me happy to see you on youtube still after all these years

    • @edenmckinley3472
      @edenmckinley3472 Před 2 lety +9

      Oh, I do that too! I make playlists for certain characters, stories, or scenes that have a particular mood. Really helps me get in the mood.

    • @StraightBananaAction
      @StraightBananaAction Před rokem +3

      This is an awesome idea thank you

    • @shieldgenerator7
      @shieldgenerator7 Před rokem +6

      im writing a story this month that was literally inspired by a song i listened to, and i actively listen to it while im writing the story

    • @philcollinslover56705
      @philcollinslover56705 Před rokem +2

      awesome i might use that. i can draw, but cant write for shit

    • @lesliewells1062
      @lesliewells1062 Před rokem +2

      I love that idea! And I started thinking, what about the movies and books and decor styles they would like. I love it!

  • @kiterafrey
    @kiterafrey Před 8 měsíci +8

    Switching colors of the font is very helpful too. As a professional editor, I learned that trick. I use it in my own writing now. I have a color for rough draft, a color for paragraph by paragraph rewrites, and a color for first round of copy edits. Then after doing developmental edits I repeat the process. For me, not everyone but for me, color stands out more for me than font.

  • @KaiInMotion
    @KaiInMotion Před rokem +27

    A fun one I've been getting a lot of miles out of recently is to write a scene as just dialogue, write the convos out as a kind of loosely-resembling-a-script format and then going back in and adding dialogue tags and details and other prose afterwards. Only when I know the convo itself is the core focus of the scene and needs to pack the most punch. It helps maintain the flow of the convo instead of distracting me from the interaction.

  • @Sally-vk9yw
    @Sally-vk9yw Před rokem +80

    a good tip is to try put something i’ve experienced whether it’s an event or emotion in my novel because it makes it more personal and of course its easier to write about something you’ve experienced. Even if it’s something like love, loss, betrayal etc. I wrote a story where one of the side characters were in a really toxic friendship which was something i had just experienced and it was so easy to describe how they felt so useless and they put up with all the comments their toxic friend gave them and how they were there for their friend but the friend was never there for them. it turned out really well and it didn’t take much effort to try put myself in the characters shoes since it was something i had experienced firsthand. It was sort of just writing what i had felt at the time. So yeah i would definitely put something personal in my writing 💕💕

  • @lovelylost4649
    @lovelylost4649 Před rokem +17

    Tips I have found helpful:
    1) Find sounds that match the setting or songs that inspire a scene on repeat, keeps you focused and can write for much longer without losing focus
    2) Writing prompts can sometimes help with world building. Some of my best breakthroughs happened while testing out a prompt and changing the tone from what I have been writing.

  • @s.rtilly5822
    @s.rtilly5822 Před 2 lety +73

    My writing hack I just made for my shitty memory: When outlining (which I recommend everyone learn to do in some format or another), there are little nuances or details that are referenced like "They go to this hidden place and found so-and-so's spellbook." - if this is a newer concept for the novel, I may actually make a footnote (as I write my outlines in google docs before working in Novelpad (link in the description)) on the hidden place and the spell book. This helps in a few ways. 1) Making a footnote makes you think of the thing and thus you may remember it more. 2) Footnotes are non-intrusive. I can skim past that little number if I know what the reference is. 3) If I forgot, the reference is there, in detail, but away from the section itself so it's not clogging up the flow of the point. This may be excessive but that's what I need lol I also color code the names of every character in my outline. It's a great visual to see if a scene is too crowded or chaotic or if too many people are mentioned (info dumpy scenes).

    • @Arkylie
      @Arkylie Před rokem +2

      I use the comments feature on Google docs much like you use footnotes. Also for anything I delete while rephrasing -- should I need to undo it later, or work part of it back in, it's right there, and it quiets the part of my brain that freaks out about losing things.

    • @nikkinewbie6014
      @nikkinewbie6014 Před rokem

      Good ideas. Thanks to you both!

  • @jestypop8698
    @jestypop8698 Před 9 měsíci +9

    not sure if its that weird but one thats really surprised me is how changing my location can really impact my writing. i just spent a day sitting at the computer not getting anything substantial down but sitting on my kitchen counter with google docs pulled up i just wrote a ton more than i expected. just finding somewhere different to be (even better if it matches the vibe your writing) has done wonders for me

  • @johnpublic1623
    @johnpublic1623 Před 2 lety +26

    With number 4, I like to use the document audio feature to read it back to me. My eyes will miss the error but the audio playback will not. It will help find clunky parts that sound great in my head until I hear it.

  • @lajourdanne
    @lajourdanne Před rokem +9

    That assertive yet monotone "don't leave" was fantastic 😂. Subscribed!

  • @starlitbri
    @starlitbri Před 2 lety +39

    i have a couple of weirdish tips (note i use google docs to write so these aren't going to be relevant for everyone):
    1. put everything in different areas, so like one place for your outline, another for a thought dump, your draft, etc. because it makes it easier to find stuff (like you only have to scroll through three pages of your thought dump instead of like 100+ pages of that, your outline, edits, and your draft for one random background tidbit you need)
    2. outline your draft before you revise! i like to read through my draft and comment my edits (like if a scene goes too long, i'll comment "have A leave at *moment* and end scene") then i'll outline again with my edits added in that way i don't have to go through 100+ comments and my previous draft when revising. Also, you can work out plot holes, arcs, etc. in the new outline instead of when you're trying to write
    3. if you don't have a writer friend to swap scenes or ideas with, ask a friend you like and trust for help. i got stuck on reincorporating a sub plot because i made story changes that made introducing this sub plot hard, so i asked my friend if she was up with helping me and she gave me a bunch of ways to add it in and ideas for other issues and stuff for that story. honestly, i love talking with my friends (non-writers and writers) about my writing issues because they always hype up my ideas or suggest something that adds so much more to my story where i can't imagine it without that suggestion 🥰

    • @esztervizhanyo1708
      @esztervizhanyo1708 Před 2 lety +2

      3rd one is so fun! Friend who don't write but read a lot are really good editors!

  • @2boston.m.a610
    @2boston.m.a610 Před 2 lety +7

    (Mainly for drafting a poem, but can be used for fiction.) I'll make a packet of poems by other writers that share something in common--image, form, syntax, etc.--and outline the approaches to how each poem develops based off of that. Then, I'll make myself an assignment from those outlines--e.g., "write a poem that is six stanzas long, use a made up word as a verb, an image of a swan must appear in either the third or sixth stanza, and must use the line 'suppose you do change your life. Now what?'"
    Or, I'll make a cento from those packets.
    Either way, keeps me reading and thinking about writing.

  • @wanderingbelleasmr1054
    @wanderingbelleasmr1054 Před rokem +6

    I like to have a document reserved for loose ends and half-baked scenes/ideas. So like if I write a scene that doesn’t end up fitting the mood or whatever but the writing or characterization or dialogue or whatever was super good, I’ll just ctrlX the whole thing into the loose ends doc so I can use it later if I want. I also put brainstorming, scenes from later parts of the story that haven’t connected yet, and occasionally chapter outlines in there. It works well for me, maybe it’d work for you too:)
    Great tips in this video!♥️

  • @TimbrrWolfe
    @TimbrrWolfe Před 2 lety +34

    I've actually done the second tip a few times after you mentioned something similar previously and it really does work out sometimes to just....chop the last bit off. Authors do be Unleashing Words, and sometimes they gotta be reined in.

  • @nicodiangelo9810
    @nicodiangelo9810 Před rokem +5

    Get a candle that matches the theme or mood of your book. Last year I was writing a story set in a forest, and I had a pine candle I burnt through entirely.
    Also I don't know if it's weird, but if I'm having trouble getting in the head of a character, I just freewrite their thoughts in deep character perspective, so their literal thoughts as narration, no italics, reacting to the world and people around them. Usually it turns into a lot of them complaining about things lmao and it tells me what their mood is. Then I highlight it to delete later and get back into the scene with their mood firmly set in my mind.

  • @sam9797
    @sam9797 Před 17 dny

    i’ve been struggling with finding youtubers who talk about writing in a short interesting way and i really love the way you speak about it. it’s almost like a short little class and i adore it

  • @DomCOuano
    @DomCOuano Před 2 měsíci +1

    my favorite tip is to write the ending first. stories have a beginning middle and end. it's quite natural for us to think up a beginning and a middle and then more middle and more middle and more middle and then dang how do we resolve all these middles? we can save ourselves much of this trouble by writing an ending (or a couple of alternate endings) first. i like this because it can apply to movies, tv shows, parental lectures, anything that any of us may have experienced with seemingly no end, or with a very odd or very wrong end. if you start by writing the end, you'll reduce your risk of everyone loving your show only to hate the ending. you might get better at giving lectures to your kids with a definite ending. you won't be a parent who lectures on and on for literally hours. you'll be mindful parent and you'll waste a lot less time and energy and breath. you'll make more money. your digestion will improve. you'll get better grades. your children will enjoy talking to you. write the ending first.

  • @BrookeLewisballerinagirl
    @BrookeLewisballerinagirl Před 2 lety +13

    These are some great tips!! One tip that I’ve used is to have a notebook or separate place to write ideas down. I use a notebook dedicated solely to ideas for my novel and I usually start the writing session by scribbling down some ideas and get the creative juices flowing.

  • @alousnamer
    @alousnamer Před 2 lety +24

    Good tips! It's always about how to sustain the 'keep going' phase until you have a 2nd or 3rd draft that can go out to betas, imo. I also have found a ton of use going into 'summary' mode for scenes I don't have as crystalized in my head. I think about it when I'm doing a Zero Draft as writing either 'narrative' or 'treatment' and just flipping between them as needed and making little notations for myself when I run into an issue. I've consistently found that your story will shape itself through that first draft no matter how much you try to outline and pre-plan, so it's critical to push through that to the end and these were great tips for that!

  • @cosmo9062
    @cosmo9062 Před rokem +1

    something I do a lot is write all the dialogue of the scene/chapter first bc it makes the conversations flow a lot better + I find I write a lot more in whatever timeframe I have compared to if I did dialogue-action-dialogue-action

  • @briannafenty4403
    @briannafenty4403 Před rokem +6

    Love these! Whenever I finish up for the day, whether that's finishing a scene or a chapter, I like to write the next sentence or 2 sentences of the next scene or chapter that way I have a jumping off point for the next session. It's SO MUCH LESS INTIMIDATING than staring at a blank page. I also do chapter numbers and titles, and I like to set up the chapter headings and title the chapter at the end of the session before I write it in the next one, because it feels like a little reward (I'm obsessed with titling things).

  • @celestegosling6054
    @celestegosling6054 Před 2 lety +14

    Thanks for some great tips! I started doing number 7 recently and it has helped to keep my momentum going with writing my novel.
    I'll be writing and then I'll realise I'm referencing something that I haven't really written much about throughout the rest of the story, but is important, so instead of going back to fix it right then, I'll write a note to fix it in the first round of edits, and just continue my story.
    I have lots of notes, and little questions to myself in a physical notebook (at the moment). Some are general, but a lot I will put the Scene number next to so I know where I need to look for that issue.
    I also have a lot of placeholders(e.g. [name], [inn name] etc.) because I don't want to be spending 10 minutes trying to decide on a name for someone or something every time there's a new one.

    • @lesliewells1062
      @lesliewells1062 Před rokem

      Figuring out names is hard. I have a baby name book that is great and there are lots of lists on line

  • @StutleyConstable
    @StutleyConstable Před rokem +5

    I don't know if this qualifies as weird, but I recently started writing conversations between my characters. I may use these scenes in the final draft, or I may just keep them for personal reference. The conversations are always about elements of the story and have proved useful in exploring how the various characters feel about what is going on and what reactions they will have. I have also discovered characters that I would not have thought of, which allows me to fill in plot holes and find different paths for the plot. Another useful thing from these exercises is I develop background for places. The local coffee shop or bar become more real in my mind when I include a few more details and I can add those details to other scenes if they are useful.

  • @TheDaantje1234
    @TheDaantje1234 Před 11 měsíci +1

    That's an actually new, to me, list of tips! Very helpful, thank you. This is the first video from you I came across and really enjoy how down-to-earth it seems. I'm following and checking out more of your stuff.

  • @HannahLeeKidder
    @HannahLeeKidder  Před rokem +78

    idk why this video is popping off but i'm scared, join my mailing list pls view.flodesk.com/pages/60a6adbc8c76bb525a084442

    • @swordturtles5401
      @swordturtles5401 Před rokem +3

      Yeah, this was the first result when I looked up writing, but it worked out, thanks for the tips!!

    • @ilavalolipop
      @ilavalolipop Před rokem +4

      Because its extremely helpful!

    • @DecoySammy
      @DecoySammy Před rokem +3

      First time seeing your channel but this video was really helpful. I hope that other people will find it also. You deserve a sub. And now you've gotten that sub.

    • @zephyrias
      @zephyrias Před rokem +3

      I got recommended xD

    • @crow_winged_author_kat
      @crow_winged_author_kat Před rokem +1

      I'm a new author on CZcams, and this video just came up on my feed. I love it!!

  • @barrowc
    @barrowc Před 2 lety +3

    Great video, Hannah! I liked the tip about consistent idea generation a lot. I find it too tempting to put lots of time and thought into an idea right away when instead it would do much better if I let it sit for a while first

  • @emmaalbers6320
    @emmaalbers6320 Před 2 měsíci

    3, 5, and 7 are genuinely fantastic tips I had not thought of! Thank you 🎉

  • @kaamn1829
    @kaamn1829 Před rokem +3

    these tips are legitimately such great tips, I've stumbled across/just started doing so many of them on my own and they've really revolutionized the flow of how I write and made it so much easier to actually get story structures out of me. so I highly recommend all those structure/verbiage ones at least, such as the story/scene summaries, keeping lists of problems and ideas, and so forth. they're really helpful! I can't wait to try out these other ones I haven't before, thanks!

  • @ziyanda_theartist
    @ziyanda_theartist Před rokem +1

    I love that this found me right now as I'm coming to the end of my novel and thinking about the editing process. Thank you for the tips!!! I really appreciate you mentioning some of these, because I don't hear other people talking about them, like the quick "this character sympathises with this character here..." which I actually do XD

  • @aquariotutu
    @aquariotutu Před rokem +1

    I just listened it while getting ready to college and it's SO GOOD. I'm more an ilustrator than a writer and I must say that your tips shed some light in my art block... thank u xD

  • @townsendstephen
    @townsendstephen Před rokem

    Thank you Hannah. This is great. I also do the bullet point thing for the next session it helped a lot with something like Nanowrimo when you dint have great ideas or flow everyday.
    I live the hack of using someone who you know as a favourite good or bad character and seagoing out the name in the final draft. I can see how that can help to write with feeling about the character. I am going to use that from now on.
    I loved the other tips too and have subscribed to your channel because of it.
    I had not really thought about it before but what you said about your subconscious working on problems naturally throughout the day is so true.
    And I will look at Novelpad. I have a very complicated way of creating and collecting material for my writing. I need something simpler

  • @sophiafenger
    @sophiafenger Před 10 měsíci +4

    Keeping track of first draft problems (number 7) is soo helpful! I write in Google docs and I'll just comment on my own writing when I'm worried it'll pose a problem later.
    I know this is interpreting the tip in a slightly different way, but even doing this for life problems too can help clear your mind for writing. If you are struggling to focus on writing because you're thinking about what you need to do later or you want to fact check something you just wrote, write it on a notepad so that it's out of your head and you know you can come back to it.
    Hannah, I appreciate that you're straight to the point and informative all the way throughout your videos, which is something not every booktuber can say!! Don't worry about the length of your intros :)

  • @yurisoross
    @yurisoross Před 2 lety +1

    This is the first video I've seen in a while that actually have some good tips !! They are a new and I'll start using them very soon , thank you ~!

  • @thecharmedstudio
    @thecharmedstudio Před 9 měsíci

    Love the hack of cutting out the last sentence or paragraph. I already hack of the first paragraph of almost all my posts and that has really helped. So excited to try this.

  • @hornbeam7131
    @hornbeam7131 Před 3 měsíci

    Great list, tip 7 is golden, I just started doing this myself and it really helps.

  • @anandahuja4319
    @anandahuja4319 Před 2 lety +1

    Wonderful tips, very handy some of them. Loved them. Keep sharing more. I loved your flash fiction collection LITTLE BIRDS!

  • @dare7782
    @dare7782 Před 2 lety +2

    I used to be here for just the Twilight Rewrite, but through whatever series of life events I'm now pursuing writing and really appreciate these tips. I love that you include some really unique things.

  • @erkscollectibles
    @erkscollectibles Před rokem

    Lots of great tips! I hadn't thought about many of these, excited to try them out!

  • @chimebell8237
    @chimebell8237 Před 11 měsíci +2

    I actually just recently found that cutting the last thing I wrote while working on a chapter can be effective at times. Whenever I get stuck with writing a long dialogue where it seems to run for like forever, I backspace all the way to the point where the conversation is still solid. And then I realize it can actually work to redo the whole conversation over and make it more concise and brief, but packing a punch.

  • @anthemofink
    @anthemofink Před 2 lety +2

    These are actually pretty practical advice. I had used something similar to tip number 5 in the past

  • @danieldurham3775
    @danieldurham3775 Před 2 měsíci

    These are great tips! Thank You so much for sharing!
    And a great video, to the point with enough explanation to get your thoughts across!

  • @hexnoir
    @hexnoir Před rokem

    That's a neat list, plenty of things I'm gonna try applying to my own writing.
    I tend aim towards a specific end point each chapter so the paragraphs I end up cutting typically end up being sort of filler paragraphs towards the end of each chapter. I also like to use outlines but usually try to keep them loose as the plot usually changes once I write it and flesh out the details, but the general overarching narrative direction can remain the same. But of course I write weekly chapters which I narrate and edit so I've learned to adapt to a more loosey goosey type of writing schedule. Basically placing the train tracks in front of the moving train 😅

  • @doctor_eye4553
    @doctor_eye4553 Před 10 měsíci +2

    Thank you for being so direct, helpful, and still aesthetically pleasing to watch. A lot of tips for writers just go off track and take waaay longer to convey information

  • @trevorchilders211
    @trevorchilders211 Před měsícem

    These are great tips, thank you! When I find myself stuck on bit, from word to paragraph, I change the text color to red and move on. I can figure out to solution to the problem or even what the problem is, later while preserving momentum in the drafting phase.

  • @natashatuskovichcoworking
    @natashatuskovichcoworking Před 9 měsíci

    I recently learned the thing you said here about just asking what the scene needs or what the character is trying to do and just writing it down as notes makes such a difference, and then half the time the notes turn into the scene anyway!

  • @alaskanoodle6457
    @alaskanoodle6457 Před 3 měsíci

    I stumbled upon your video and I just have to say I LOVED the pacing of it. Most videos I find to help with writing seem to draw out too long and talk way more than they need to. You're video was so easy to follow and understand so big thanks to that! 🙏
    Meanwhile, one weird writing tip i find helpful for me to brainstorm and figure out ideas is to rant about what you alresdy have and what you need to figure out with someone you are close to and possibly knows about what you are writing. Sometimes that person will give great suggestions, but at other times I often find my brain working through it as I text them. Ill write psragraphs on end of text messages to my friend, coming with my own ideas and finding things that work, and then I'd thank her for the help and she'd be like, "I didn't do anything, but you're welcome!" 😂

  • @ExplicitPublishing
    @ExplicitPublishing Před 3 měsíci

    Wow! Actual, concrete, useful writing tips! Great job.

  • @amandafaganofficial
    @amandafaganofficial Před rokem

    Loved these tips! Awesome video. I've been trying to become a lot more disciplined with my creative writing as of late and will definitely put these tips to use. Thanks for making great content :)

  • @coyadevia
    @coyadevia Před 2 lety +1

    Just stumbled upon your page. Wow, you’re such a doll and so brilliant. Looking forward to applying some of your tips that I hadn’t thought of. Going to check out NP too. Thanks!

  • @earthwarriorangel
    @earthwarriorangel Před 9 měsíci

    Thank you I was looking for fresh new ways to help me keep writing my book that I’m struggling to finish, this video was the best video at this time for me. You’re awesome

  • @bensturley1172
    @bensturley1172 Před 2 lety

    This really is relevant, thank you Hannah. Some great ideas I'm going to be implementing straight away.

  • @kiriavatar123
    @kiriavatar123 Před 2 měsíci

    Thank you, these are actual, practical ideas, I love it ❤

  • @Alleyoop1-7Fanfiction

    The sentence-long summaries really do help. I’m starting to include table of contents, and instead of just including the title, I include 1-3 sentences summarizing the main action without giving away spoilers.

  • @watermelongangster
    @watermelongangster Před rokem

    This vid is really different from the stuff that you can usually see in these kinda advice compilations, great work!

  • @brunhildevalkyrie9887
    @brunhildevalkyrie9887 Před měsícem

    the name changing tip is GENIUS! thank you so much!

  • @brucesheaves7115
    @brucesheaves7115 Před 9 měsíci

    This was really helpful thank you! These are really smart tips that i am so glad i learned

  • @SkaldIduna
    @SkaldIduna Před rokem

    Thanks for this list. It's giving me ideas. 🤩 Sometimes if I'm stuck I will hop on a bus or go for a walk and come back a few hours later with a new perspective. 🌻

  • @elizabethhouse3473
    @elizabethhouse3473 Před 23 dny

    Wow so good thank you! The summary sentences! The problems list!

  • @ngtskynebula
    @ngtskynebula Před 4 měsíci

    Lots of great advice here. Thank you very much!

  • @LifeinGlow
    @LifeinGlow Před rokem

    What a great video! 🌻 Love your tips, especially #8. And some comments are helpful.

  • @tramasrarasoddplots
    @tramasrarasoddplots Před rokem

    Thank you so much for the tips. I have seen several of these kinds of videos. However, most are either too vague or too specific. So, they never work. These tips are just right to try a couple of times and see if they work.

  • @dameanvil
    @dameanvil Před 7 měsíci +4

    00:27 📚 Create complex characters by temporarily renaming them after real people you like/dislike to gain fresh perspective.
    01:10 🖊️ Consider cutting the last section of your writing to maintain focus and strengthen your point.
    01:39 🧠 Stop writing while you still have ideas to ensure a productive next session.
    02:20 📖 Print your manuscript for proofreading to spot mistakes more easily.
    02:47 📝 Keep sentence-long summaries of scenes to create an outline as you write.
    03:28 💡 Maintain a list of topic ideas to passively generate content for short stories, poems, blogs, etc.
    03:56 🗒️ Make a list of problems in your longer project for later revisions rather than interrupting your flow.
    04:54 📝 Summarize paragraphs to maintain momentum, then fill in details later.
    06:03 ✍️ Swap scenes with a writing partner to gain fresh perspective and ideas.
    06:59 🧘‍♂️ Get in your character's head by writing about something you're personally going through.

  • @michaelkelly6583
    @michaelkelly6583 Před rokem

    Thank you Hannah! These were very useful.

  • @TocYounger
    @TocYounger Před 8 měsíci

    This was original and extremely helpful, thank you!

  • @jose11032
    @jose11032 Před rokem +3

    Hi Hannah, this was without a doubt the most creative tip video i have seen in a long time! Love you just get to it! You are “deleting the last sentences” while you even are talking 😂 Thanks! SUBSCRIBED!

  • @lavieenbren
    @lavieenbren Před rokem

    Tip five is SO helpful (so are all of these, but that one instantly clicked for me!). Thank you for this video!

  • @starlingo-art
    @starlingo-art Před 6 měsíci

    Quick and informative! I dislike long videos, but this was very direct! Thanks!!

  • @BeBeBraveSpirit
    @BeBeBraveSpirit Před rokem

    Very good ideas, you think out of the box and I hope this will be one of my new go to channels for writing inspo.

  • @Dragoniiia
    @Dragoniiia Před 11 měsíci

    Ohh! Those sounds actually helpfull! Thank you! Maybe I will be able to finally write my book

  • @user-ng5gi9tl8c
    @user-ng5gi9tl8c Před rokem +1

    I plot out my chapters in my own Chapter Index--each chapter has a one sentence synopsis and some notes about it so that I can write the plot out several chapters ahead, plus I have a three page notes section as a preface to my first draft so that I can write down future ideas as I go; also yes I unload many of my problems onto my characters to make them more realistic and keep word and page goals

  • @m.j.johnsonbooks7856
    @m.j.johnsonbooks7856 Před 5 měsíci

    Great video. Love your relaxing and conversational style.
    I like to write out the internal conflict of my characters before starting a scene.
    For instance recent:
    Happy to be alive - freaked out by close touch with death
    Upset adult isn’t concerned about brothers injuries - understands the bigger picture
    Thankful brother is alive - upset the injury wasn’t prevented.
    Having her thoughts in mind helps put more tension into the scene.

  • @BoredOfBills
    @BoredOfBills Před 8 měsíci

    Genuinely helpful. Good video. Thanks.

  • @carimbo8604
    @carimbo8604 Před 11 měsíci

    Loved your quick introduction! Appreciate people who uses my time wisely =)

  • @undercoveerse
    @undercoveerse Před 11 měsíci

    thank you for these great advices !!

  • @felienmusic
    @felienmusic Před 9 měsíci

    Oh my gosh, this is the first writing video where I actually feel informed and surprised by the tips! Super nice!

  • @Compass_theCrazyCatLady
    @Compass_theCrazyCatLady Před rokem +1

    1:34 Looking at it in a different format sounds like it would make a lot of sense. I'm an artist getting into writing, and I like comparing tips and stuff, so that's really interesting to think about, because usually while I'm drawing something digitally, I flip the canvas and stuff and I export it when I'm done so I can look at it in my images and I can see all the mistakes better. If you look at something for a long time then you get used to it and it'll start to look normal, so looking at it in a new format that you're not used to will make it easier to spot things you wouldnt've before.

  • @justsomebody1171
    @justsomebody1171 Před rokem +2

    Something that helps me when I'm stuck with a part is switching to pen and paper. On paper my creativity flows way better and I'm less focused on making it perfect. Most of the times I just write a few paragraphs to get me out of the mud, worst case I hand write everything. It's less efficient, but at least it's written

  • @PhilTravisano
    @PhilTravisano Před 11 měsíci

    You are SMART! Good tips. When I wrote my novel many years ago, I literally took 1 year to write about a 24-page outline. When I was done I took a month off work and wrote it start to finish in one continuous flow.

  • @rylansato
    @rylansato Před 2 lety

    Just came across your channel and have watched several today to help me with my current WIP which is a slice of life series. Your videos have been helpful in fixing and polishing them. My main concern is people being interested in slice of life.

  • @user-iz4vg4it7e
    @user-iz4vg4it7e Před 2 měsíci

    i love youre tips and i am trying to write a book right now!

  • @MurkyMaster
    @MurkyMaster Před 3 měsíci

    Fave writing hack: Something I call a Book Volley (kinda hate that name but its what I know it as). Good idea generator and exersize
    1. grab 3 random books off your shelf, and a dictionary
    2. get a random word and its defintion from the dictionary, write this on a doc
    3. get a random sentence from a random paragraph on a random page from each book, write those on a doc
    4. write 10 ideas that associate at least 2 of those 4 above entries. Doesn't matter if its a line from a car manual, a line from a romance scene, a line from the acknowledgments of a non-fiction, and the definition of bumblebee, theres something in there with any combo
    Bonus: get four random images, add more books, only pull from books in your stories genre or the time period its set in. All sorts of fun things.

  • @Ggdivhjkjl
    @Ggdivhjkjl Před rokem +1

    Thanks for the tips!

  • @MariaMilenovasArt
    @MariaMilenovasArt Před rokem

    These tips are awesome. Thanks!

  • @WriteReadRedd
    @WriteReadRedd Před rokem

    #7! That is one that I need to do. I went from nitpicking issues, to where now I am ignoring issues. An issue log is a great idea. Because I have forgotten so many of my edits that I wanted to do.

  • @nadew.02
    @nadew.02 Před rokem

    Thank you for making this video. I've been getting into writing a lot lately, and currently I've been struggling to draft a story.

  • @NegInfinity
    @NegInfinity Před 6 měsíci

    Short, efficient and to the point. Thank you.