How to actually write General Paper essays using P.E.E.L format (how to write the best A+ essays)

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  • Happy June Holidays! I know that J2 A-Level Students are currently prepping for their upcoming Prelims and Finals.. so here's a video to help you write outstanding essays that will impress Cambridge examiners!
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    I have colour coded each paragraph according to the P.E.E.L format
    0:00 How to actually write General Paper essays using P.E.E.L format
    0:38 Introduction
    1:41 Rebuttal Paragraph
    4:02 'For' the topic
    5:03 Conclusion
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  • @shaandja
    @shaandja  Před 2 lety +18

    I forgot to mention a very important part before writing essays - PLANNING!
    1. Plan for about 10 min before actually writing your essay.. planning is very important so that you do not get stuck halfway when writing..
    2. Break down the question. So for example, “Discuss the view that social media promotes democracy”..
    Find various vocabs so that the paragraphs don’t sound boring..
    Discuss - talk about, debate, explain, review, confer, etc.
    View- perspective, point of view, outlook, standpoint, position, stand, stance, frame of reference, approach
    Social media -social platforms, social media services, websites, networks
    Promotes - contributes, assists, aid, help, develop, advocate, foster
    3. Then, draw four boxes, and each box, break it down to 4 rows (for P, E, E, L).. write down the main point you want to bring in a paragraph, what example you want to use, and lastly how are you going to link the example to your explanation. Just simple sentences will do, just for your brainstorming.. do it for the rest of the paragraphs
    For content:
    1. Pick 5 common topics that usually comes for the exam.. and prepare content using journal websites such as Guardian, RT, New York Times, etc.
    Then try using the content in your paragraphs. Try to paraphrase and shorten the content when you write your paragraphs.
    2. do a few timed practices and consult your GP teacher with the essays you have written. Ask them to mark the essays you have written and you can ask them for tips on how to write better. The Teachers will also know some insights (marking scheme, advantage when you choose a certain topic) This applies to writing AQs as well.
    My teacher taught me how to write simple sentences and how to be coherent in your sentences (during 1 to 1). That really helped me close my learning gap
    Hope this helps!

  • @anxiety4103
    @anxiety4103 Před rokem +2

    Wow thank you, I've never heard of this

  • @GlobalAssignmentHelpAustralia

    Very informative. Thank you for sharing.🙌

  • @HumdrumSingaporeanREACTS
    @HumdrumSingaporeanREACTS Před 2 lety +2

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  • @ZafiraAli-os3uu
    @ZafiraAli-os3uu Před 4 měsíci +1

    Can i ask which gp tuition you attended please 🙏🏼?

  • @khushal1-iq6me
    @khushal1-iq6me Před rokem

    I am a failure in GP. Is it possible to get an A* in GP? I am sad.😔