Cambridge C1 Advanced (CAE): How to Write an Essay

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  • čas přidán 5. 09. 2024

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  • @oanaoros97
    @oanaoros97 Před 3 lety +131

    I have the exam on Saturday.. hope I pass. Wish me luck :)

  • @antosorre4652
    @antosorre4652 Před měsícem +3

    Thank you phill, just passed with 201 (c2). I definetly would not have gotten it without your videos❤

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před měsícem +1

      201, right on the dot. Congratulations! :)

  • @joel.020
    @joel.020 Před 4 měsíci +12

    I just passed my test bc of you. Thanks a lot. Greetings from the Netherlands brother

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 4 měsíci

      Congratulations! You can be proud of your achievement. :)

  • @FitLivingHacks
    @FitLivingHacks Před 9 měsíci +7

    Hello, teacher Phill!
    I'm here to thank you for your videos. Because of them, I was really confident. I took the test on the 21st of October and the results came out yesterday. I passed!!!!

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 9 měsíci

      Excellent! You can be proud of your achievement. Well done! :)

  • @beppaa
    @beppaa Před 3 lety +68

    Such a useful, clear and complete video, thank you so much Phil!

  • @gabrielamircheva7908
    @gabrielamircheva7908 Před 3 měsíci +4

    I’m taking the exam tomorrow. Hopefully I pass thanks for the help

    • @ingmargussenhoven6054
      @ingmargussenhoven6054 Před 3 měsíci

      Hey same, Good luck!

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 3 měsíci

      You can do it! :)

    • @gabrielamircheva7908
      @gabrielamircheva7908 Před 3 měsíci +2

      @@teacherphill i did it it wasn’t easy. Grammar and vocabulary were a piece of cake but reading parts 5 to 8 were really tough. Essay and in my case informal letter were easy. Essay was about how to imply healthy eating into young children’s lives and the email was about a friend who is sent to work in my capital city and i was needed to tell her how to get around and what to prepare etc. listening was 50/50 parts 1 and 4 were ok but 2 and 3 were a but harder part 2 was the worst it was about a bird species called “red kites” and thats all i remember

    • @Gmod2012lo1
      @Gmod2012lo1 Před 2 měsíci

      ​@@gabrielamircheva7908 thanks for the feedback. May I ask if your reading part had an exercise where you had to arrange different paragraphs from a article? Those seem way to complicated for me

  • @Veronica-vl8nc
    @Veronica-vl8nc Před 3 lety +13

    Good video, very simple and very clear... Got my exam in 1 hour! Wish me luck!

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 3 lety +1

      Best of luck! I hope the video helps. :) Let me know how it went.

    • @andresalmenara8693
      @andresalmenara8693 Před 3 lety +8

      @@teacherphill I guess we will never know…

  • @andyalvarado4336
    @andyalvarado4336 Před 3 lety +10

    Thank you! I just finished my mock exam and the essay and the report were exactly the same that the ones you did in the videos

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 3 lety

      There you go. I'm happy my videos helped. :)

  • @brupster
    @brupster Před 3 lety +6

    Read your article last week, found it on a random basis. The video perfectly complements it BTW! Thanks, wish me luck, my exam is next weekend!

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 3 lety +1

      Best of luck and let me know how it went. :)

  • @svevabloomsbury7620
    @svevabloomsbury7620 Před 3 lety +18

    Thanks a lot! Are you planning to make a video on how to write proposals for C1? It would be very helpful, thank you in advance 😉

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 3 lety +3

      Hi Sveva, Proposals are going to be in the very next video. :)

  • @carmenlalana5828
    @carmenlalana5828 Před rokem +3

    Amazing explanation about how to do a great essay, crystal clear . I have my C1.2 exam next June, I’m sure your videos will help me, I’m suscribed now. Tanks so much teacher Phill

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před rokem

      Hi Carmen! Thank you for your kind comment and welcome to the family. :)

  • @clawmango7824
    @clawmango7824 Před měsícem

    passed with a 203(c2). got a lot of help from your videos. cheers!

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před měsícem

      Congratulations! That's a fantastic result. Well done! :)

  • @creativegrg
    @creativegrg Před 2 lety +6

    Gotta say one thing..YOUR VIDEO HAS HELPED ME A LOT!! I always had a doubt in writing the essay but now its clear. Tnx💗

  • @TeacherAnePolga
    @TeacherAnePolga Před 3 lety +10

    Thank you for your tips, Teacher Phill!

  • @valeriavergara9784
    @valeriavergara9784 Před rokem +2

    Tomorrow is my exam (First Certification). Surely your videos will help me :)

  • @anonymousgirluser7878
    @anonymousgirluser7878 Před 2 lety +3

    I literally have an IGCSE year 8 ESL exam tomorrow. I am watching this for the last revision of my essay...

  • @mohamedamestas6792
    @mohamedamestas6792 Před 2 lety +3

    Thank you so much for your clear instructive and informative ideas and techniques! What keeps me boggled all the time about the writing exam is whether we have to include the details that already exist in the topic presented. For example, "in the discussion that took place at my school...etc. I personally find it quite uncomfortable and unnatural to include, but if it happens to be obligatory, then i most certainly need to consider adding it.

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 2 lety +1

      Hi Mohamed, thank you for your comment. You don't have to include these things word for word, but you can paraphrase and use your own words to say the same thing in the exam.

  • @thenukikodippily5127
    @thenukikodippily5127 Před 6 měsíci +1

    Such a useful video.I have my exams the day after tomorrow. Wish me luck!

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 6 měsíci

      I'm glad you find my video useful and all the best for your exam. :)

  • @Senu_emily
    @Senu_emily Před rokem +2

    Next Tuesday my final English diploma Cambridge exam .. I am so nervous..I am from Sri Lanka 🇱🇰…thank u so much sir❤️
    Your peaceful words

  • @cintyaavila7383
    @cintyaavila7383 Před dnem +1

    I having an English exam today. Wish me luck 🤞

  • @mi9447
    @mi9447 Před 2 lety +3

    Thank you so much! I have my exam tomorrow!!

  • @kasiaw6008
    @kasiaw6008 Před 5 měsíci +1

    you're doing such a good id Phill !thank you for your work

  • @alejandraguillenbueeieza6473

    Thanks for your advices, I’ll take my advanced exam soon. I don’t know if you could include a video of parts 7 and 2 of the reading and use of English.

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 2 lety +1

      Hi Alejandra, I'm not sure if I will be able to create videos about these specific parts of the exam by the time you take it, but I have articles on my website that you can check out.
      Part 2: teacherphill.com/c1advanced-reading-and-use-of-english-part-2/
      Part 7: teacherphill.com/c1advanced-reading-and-use-of-english-part-7/
      I hope that helps. :)

    • @alejandraguillenbueeieza6473
      @alejandraguillenbueeieza6473 Před 2 lety +1

      Thanks Phil, I’ll have a look at your website.@@teacherphill

  • @elizabethguillen3019
    @elizabethguillen3019 Před 7 měsíci +2

    such great advice.

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 7 měsíci

      Thank you! I'm happy you find my video helpful. :)

  • @onyx6929
    @onyx6929 Před rokem +2

    Thanks for the tips! I'm doing an essay in two days, let's see how it goes :)

  • @sebastiangutierrezcartagen7699

    Oh my god! your explanation was brilliant!

  • @martingalia7462
    @martingalia7462 Před 3 lety +4

    Thanks, very useful advice!

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 3 lety

      Thank you, Martin. I'm happy you find the video helpful. :)

  • @jorgealbertorodriguez3491

    Many thanks, Phill.

  • @annaanna7456
    @annaanna7456 Před 2 lety +2

    Thank you for this lesson. It was very helpful.

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 2 lety +1

      Thank you, Anna. I'm always happy to help. :)

  • @desireemazzone9398
    @desireemazzone9398 Před 3 lety +23

    Very useful video! I have this exam on the 30th of June and you have reassured me a lot! Thank you. However, is it still possible to send some essays? I'm preparing in authonomy for this exam and I feel a little bit insecure

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 3 lety +3

      Hi Desiree, if you go to teacherphill.com/product/writing-feedback/, you can book some writing feedback and send me your practice essay. :)

    • @desireemazzone9398
      @desireemazzone9398 Před 3 lety +1

      @@teacherphill I definitely will, thank you!

    • @harismustafic2744
      @harismustafic2744 Před 2 lety +1

      @@desireemazzone9398 Hey, could you please give us an update on your results? Would be glad to hear it!

    • @desireemazzone9398
      @desireemazzone9398 Před 2 lety +11

      @@harismustafic2744 Yes of course! I have to be honest, I studied only five days before the exam, and I have passed it with the best score in the writing part.

  • @eduardotrillo3519
    @eduardotrillo3519 Před rokem +2

    thanks Phil!

  • @giyouwu9726
    @giyouwu9726 Před rokem +1

    THANK YOU that was exactly what I needed

  • @robyrogo1843
    @robyrogo1843 Před rokem

    I have the exam in like 10 hours and this is the first time I'm looking at an essay example, hope it goes well, wish me luck😅😅😄

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před rokem +1

      All the best! :)

    • @robyrogo1843
      @robyrogo1843 Před rokem

      ​​@@teacherphillthanks wow, haven't seen your response till now😂 I've got a straight 200 (limit for C2), LETS GOO, thanks a lot for helping me!!!:)🎉🎉😂😅

  • @ManOfGod194
    @ManOfGod194 Před rokem +2

    Hi there! Could you explain why you could use "I" in the conclusion, but not in the other paragraphs?

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před rokem +2

      You try to stay more neutral and descriptive until the end where you give your personal opinion. If you use some personal language here and there, it won't hurt you, but in my example, I try to give you an extreme example so it becomes clearer. I hope this helps. :)

  • @mohamedelmerabet6980
    @mohamedelmerabet6980 Před 3 lety +1

    please C2 level you are the best teacher i ever ñeet

  • @latifawardi3618
    @latifawardi3618 Před 2 lety +2

    Brightly useful, thanks 🙏

  • @flatwall4569
    @flatwall4569 Před 9 měsíci +1

    Hi, thanks for all the advice you're delivering, it's intersting and useful. I got one question regarding the conclusion in this essay guide: Why would you use "I" in the conclusion paragraph?
    Wouldn't it be better to state something as:
    "Taking into account all the positions from above, both applications have their merits. Only due to the social character, and the importance of it, it's evident that funding should be located to sports centers."

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 9 měsíci +1

      Yes, absolutely. Your conclusion sounds great! 👍

  • @andreigamingro
    @andreigamingro Před 2 lety +2

    Very useful, thank you for making such good videos !

  • @inesfigueiredo9933
    @inesfigueiredo9933 Před 4 měsíci +1

    very nice thank you!

  • @kimkiss1041
    @kimkiss1041 Před 2 lety +2

    It is a good video however I was expecting a list of phrases to start each paragraph and some useful and less boring linking words to stand out and make it easier for the exam.

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 2 lety +1

      Hi Kim, thanks for your feedback. I am currently working on an ebook for C1 Advanced writing where I will include tons of useful language for all the different types of task.

    • @kimkiss1041
      @kimkiss1041 Před 2 lety

      @@teacherphill thanks for your message Phill. I'm sure your ebook will be great. I'm having my CAE exam in December and I feel completely overwhelmed especially with timekeeping. I try to create a routine with ready to use sentences, versatile and sophisticated vocabulary and linking words to save time and to feel less stressed.

  • @AKAASAP
    @AKAASAP Před rokem +3

    Hi, I have a question and I don't know where to write it. Can I use in an essay some information that is not true? Something I have created? E.g. "The local statistics have recently shown that the amount of obese people in our country has increased from 14 to 25% within two years." Or can I use "According to the survey I have conducted, ..." in my essay?
    Thank you in advance for your fast reply, as I am having my exam this Saturday.

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před rokem +2

      Thank you for your very good question.
      I guess you should ask yourself if you need such specific information. Instead of using percentages, you could also say, "... has increased considerably within two years." The adverb would make the examiner even happier. But long story short, you can definitely invent information...no one is going to fact check you, and in some tasks you are even asked to report on a "survey" or experience that never really happened or propose something that will never exist.
      I hope this answers your question and all the best for your exam. :)

    • @AKAASAP
      @AKAASAP Před rokem

      THANKS ❤

  • @francescamanna1739
    @francescamanna1739 Před 2 lety +8

    thank you so much, im italian and im only 15 years old, the exam will be in june but im pretty scared... in my class there are all 18 years old and im the youngest, in fact they have a better vocabulary than I do. But i think i speak way Better than them, im more fluent. I have a big problem tho, im no good at essays, i tend to be informal and i tend to go out of topic, this is my biggest fear, bc the rest is ok. I have good scores in listening, and reading, and my speaking is way better than "good" BUT MY WRITING, I SWEAR IT'S THE WORST THING EVER🤣🤣🤣, any advice for me?

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 2 lety

      Hi Francesca, thank you for the comment. I guess everything I could tell you is in this video. Follow the steps and you'll be fine. :)

    • @kasiaw6008
      @kasiaw6008 Před 5 měsíci

      Hiiii, how was your exam?

    • @rishi-vibes
      @rishi-vibes Před 2 měsíci

      It’s interesting that I’m also 15 and actually I have my exam tomorrow and I’m so stressed, especially of writing part. Trying to manage it but comes not so well , how about your exam ?

  • @dianadavitadze8201
    @dianadavitadze8201 Před 2 měsíci +1

    Hello! I'd be grateful if you could advise me on the following question: I know that the time of the writing paper is limited, should I start writing right away in the answer blank in order not to lose time? But what about all the adjustments being made to my writing? Help me, please, I'm in a quandary about this. Thanks!

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 2 měsíci

      Definitely make a plan before you start writing, but then I would start writing on the answer sheet. You really don't have the time to write a draft and then copy it. You can make changes, that's OK.

    • @dianadavitadze8201
      @dianadavitadze8201 Před měsícem

      @@teacherphill Hey Phil, I successfully passed the exam with Grade B! Thanks a lot for your immensely helpful videos!!!

  • @naharsamsun7439
    @naharsamsun7439 Před 2 lety +2

    Thank You Sir!!!

  • @ciemny8951
    @ciemny8951 Před 2 lety +1

    1 hour till the exam, what can I say, let's go

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 2 lety

      How did it go?

    • @ciemny8951
      @ciemny8951 Před 2 lety

      @@teacherphill I must say, it was a quite of a challenge, however I think I will pass it

    • @ciemny8951
      @ciemny8951 Před 2 lety +1

      @@teacherphill i passed! I am certified C1 user 😎

  • @ehsi1033
    @ehsi1033 Před 3 lety +3

    I swear if I pass it'll be because of this video

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 3 lety +1

      I wish you the best of luck. :)

    • @ehsi1033
      @ehsi1033 Před 3 lety +1

      @@teacherphill I passed!! Thank you so much! 🙃

  • @fycgm1341
    @fycgm1341 Před 3 lety +2

    Really useful . Thanks

  • @andresdallarizza1526
    @andresdallarizza1526 Před 2 lety +4

    Amazing

  • @thebestmuseumsforchildren4086
    @thebestmuseumsforchildren4086 Před 9 měsíci +1

    Thank you!

  • @waytoomuch04
    @waytoomuch04 Před 2 lety

    love how you explain everything!! One more suscriber!!

  • @Thepietro5000pp
    @Thepietro5000pp Před rokem +3

    Well I let my laziness and arrogance get the best of me and here I am, studying 2 hours before the exam haha
    I took a reading and listening tests last week at the very least, so I'm not completely in the dark though.
    Hope I will pass despite all this haha

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před rokem +2

      It's a tall task, but you might be able to pull it off. All the best! :)

    • @Thepietro5000pp
      @Thepietro5000pp Před rokem +2

      @@teacherphill i did!! I did so good I hope I will score 90%+ in each test :) Thanks for your last minute help!

  • @ketsiadinzala6164
    @ketsiadinzala6164 Před 2 lety +3

    Thank you for the video! I'll have my writing exam on the 18th of June and I'm currently working on my writing skills. I'm working with the same task and my question is if it's still possible to send you my essay for a personalized feedback?

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 2 lety +1

      Hi Ketsia, you can book your personalised writing feedback here:
      tinyurl.com/y6ngopu8

  • @elimargomes410
    @elimargomes410 Před 3 lety +1

    Thank you!!! It really help me!!

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 3 lety

      Hi Elimar, you're very welcome. I'm always happy when someone tells me that my videos are helpful to them. :)

  • @zeffewoolderink1480
    @zeffewoolderink1480 Před rokem +3

    Does an essay need to have a title?

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před rokem

      No :)

    • @zeffewoolderink1480
      @zeffewoolderink1480 Před rokem

      @@teacherphill thank you, it is quite odd, because many websites say that an essay always needs a title…

  • @bolt8987
    @bolt8987 Před 3 lety +2

    Thanks a lot, be very useful

  • @ajna.133
    @ajna.133 Před 2 lety

    thanks a lot. would you explain also the other part of exam , like reading speaking and listening please ?🙏🌸

  • @aidsvlekje8566
    @aidsvlekje8566 Před 3 měsíci +1

    Can i use "they"? I have to write an essay about self-employed people. I've been using "they" a lot, for example "Their income does not rely on the time they spend working." Is this allowed?

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 3 měsíci

      Why do you think that you can't use it?

    • @aidsvlekje8566
      @aidsvlekje8566 Před 3 měsíci

      ​@teacherphill not sure, lol. I got my exam tomorrow though, and your vids have helped me a lot!

  • @haledjahic6565
    @haledjahic6565 Před 2 lety +2

    Hey Phill,
    First of all great video and second of all I have a question for you.
    As I read through your Essay I noticed that you used the „I“ form in your conclusion.
    So is it allowed to use the „I“ and „You“ in the introduction/conclusion of a CAE essay?

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 2 lety +1

      Hi Haled, great question and yes, you can use 'I' to give your opinion. After all, that's why you write the essay - to give your opinion on the question in the task.

    • @haledjahic6565
      @haledjahic6565 Před 2 lety

      @@teacherphill thanks for the answer and have a great day!

  • @victoriarossacarranza
    @victoriarossacarranza Před 3 měsíci +1

    I can't download the cheat pdf :(

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 3 měsíci

      Please send me an email and I will sort it out for you: info@teacherphill.com

  • @matiascurtidor15
    @matiascurtidor15 Před rokem +1

    I hate writing in my mother tongue..... Any tips for loving writing in English ?

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před rokem +1

      As this is not about the love of writing but about how to pass an exam, I don't think I can help you. :)

  • @OPPSLAYYY
    @OPPSLAYYY Před 3 měsíci

    I mean im an international student and im currently learning c1 and i have an exam coming but i don't know how to write anyy like review essays reports and stuff similar to that i think im cooked 😭

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 3 měsíci

      Just start practising and get feedback from a teacher. Over time you will improve your writing. You can get feedback from me if you want: teacherphill.com/product/writing-feedback/

  • @karlaninodeguzman4036
    @karlaninodeguzman4036 Před 10 měsíci +1

    I am kind of afraid since I am going to take the C1 exam next month. I am going to take note of these tips. How can I send you my essay in order to you can check it me?

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 10 měsíci +1

      You can go to the link below and purchase my writing feedback if you want. :)
      teacherphill.com/product/writing-feedback/

  • @pradeepfernando3250
    @pradeepfernando3250 Před 10 měsíci

    I will have my c 1 exam in March 2023

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 10 měsíci

      Thank you for the information and all the best. :)

  • @mariamavaquinhas
    @mariamavaquinhas Před rokem +1

    Thank you so much for your advice, Phill!

  • @ukaku-mz5kw
    @ukaku-mz5kw Před 2 lety +1

    very well!

  • @serban8298
    @serban8298 Před 3 lety +2

    Is it a big problem if I write a little bit to many words, let's say 300 if I didn't make use of useless information?Is it a problem up to the point I could get a score under C1?

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 3 lety +1

      In general, it's not a big deal if you go a little bit over the word limit, but the tasks are designed so that a good answer fits within the limit. If you write more, there is always a good chance that some of the information is unrelated. Simply try to stay within the limit, but don't panic if you end up writing slightly more.

    • @serban8298
      @serban8298 Před 3 lety +1

      Update:it wasn't that much of a problem!I took 193 on the Writing paper and an overall score of 196!

  • @elisabethwellsstabler

    How does one get the FREE C1 Advanced Writing Cheat Sheet? The "Big Blue Button"does not seem to be working.

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před rokem

      You can send me an email to info@teacherphill.com and I will see what I can do. :)

  • @mariherrera1
    @mariherrera1 Před 2 lety

    Can I write it in capital letters?

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 2 lety

      You write your answers in capital letters only in Use of English and listening. In the writing test, punctuation, e.g. capitalisation, is checked by examiners and, therefore, if a word requires lower case, you have to write it in lower case.

  • @ps.1904
    @ps.1904 Před 2 lety

    I have a question. Is a title required for an essay?

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 2 lety

      No, you don't need a title for an essay.

    • @ps.1904
      @ps.1904 Před 2 lety

      @@teacherphill thank you !

  • @carmenlalana5828
    @carmenlalana5828 Před 2 lety +1

    👏👏👏👏

  • @manuchodhary4097
    @manuchodhary4097 Před 3 lety

    Plz tell me.. How analysis easy proficiency..

    • @teacherphill
      @teacherphill  Před 3 lety

      I'm not sure if I understand your question.

  • @eugenialevina4852
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    • @eugenialevina4852
      @eugenialevina4852 Před rokem

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