Would You Be So Kind | OC Animatic
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- čas přidán 11. 05. 2021
- BEHOLD my inconsistent art style 🤣
i apologize for the many dialogues and fast music, at first i wanted to make it somewhat like a mini webtoon/animatic, but i got distracted and ended up putting so much dialogue for the story to make sense ☹️
also, i remember saying im making this a webtoon…… then i also remembered i cant draw decent backgrounds 😭😭 once i find a good software to help me draw them, i’ll definitely try making a webtoon 😇
spare a ☕️ for this hungry woman? 🥺
ko-fi.com/carmenlee 👉👈
Music used:
Would you be so kind - Dodie
• Would You Be So Kind
Software/Apps used:
Procreate
Wondershare Filmora 9
Contact me on:
📧: carmenleeeee@gmail.com
instagram: / prollycarmen
thank you for watching! ily ❤️ - Krátké a kreslené filmy
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WEBTOON IS OUT NOW 💖💖💖
www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/sweater-weather/list?title_no=769503
I can't wait! I'm sure it'll be great :D
I can't wait 😁!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title??
woooo luckyy i found out abt it today 🥹!!
@@mynzerz yayy
Omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgogmomgomg YASSS
I honestly thought he was going to ask him to get married when they grow up lol.
Lol I think everyone think that? 😂
@@misaki2051 i did 🥰
No. Artists are generally not that good people. Never hope for a happy ending again trust me.
@@bansarivora7448 I feel your pain😔
Edit: they do that to keep it interesting 🥲
SAME!!! lmao
... THE ENDING HURT SO MUCH😭
IKR 😭♥️
I KNOOOOOW, i wanna cry
truelalu
IKR TwT
Y END THIS WAY YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY 😭😭😭
Oliver's story ✅
Johanna's story ✅
Owen's story ✅
now just waiting for jolyne's story now :)
Ollies begging her "please don't take my man"
@@Midnight_Lime Nooooo whyyyy i knew this comment would appear somewhere 😂😭
ITS OUTTTTT!!!
"Say no more"
IT'S OUTTTT
Everyone thinks that the people they love are interested in someone else
Oliver: I don't have a chance
Johanna: I missed my chance
Jolene: ✨bi panic✨
Owen: 'Jolene Jolene Jolene Jolene I'm begging of you please don't take my man '
Think Jolene's song will be ✨ boy bi ✨
Damn if op takes that song boy bi imma sharing her youtube acc on my every freaking social media
Reading this made me realise that they're literally called OJOJ
Orange juice orange juice, man. Orange juice Orange juice. Tomorrow I'm gonna chug that stuff.
@@Coolster9811 lol
boys _o_
girls _j_
THIS IS EVERYTHING 😂😂😂
@Presley Lu jolene is bi and johanna is lesbian i think ?
i really hate and love at the same time this romantic square
pretty sure it’s a circle but,
@@korinook3558 how is it a circle?
@@avocato_1836 have you seen the other oc animatics?
@@korinook3558 of course I do why am I even here if not? I just wanna know how is it a circle
@@avocato_1836 oh sorry, well if you look at the other two, it’s the same OC’s and they kind of all like each other in a sense- it’s hard to explain
STOP IM SO EMOTIONALLY ATTACHED TO THIS STORY
SAME✌️🙂
I KNOW! PLS END MY PAINNN! Seriously don't make me choose sides ToT
SAME SHHGFHSG IM TOO INVESTED IN IT NOW
SAME I JUST LOVE THE PAIN
SAME
I just noticed the girl "Jolene" fits Dolly Patron's song in "Jolene". "Your beauty is beyond compare, with flaming locks of auburn hair with ivory skin, and eyes of emerald green"
And Johanna fits the description of the song Johanna in Sweeney Todd
“And are you beautiful and pale with yellow hair like her?
I want you beautiful and pale the way I dreamed you were
Johaaaaannaaa
@@BK-is5fj Oh... That make sense rn...
How about Oliver and Owen?
Probably inspired by i would say
Especially with BK's reply in mind
When you were just jamming all along and not expecting it this animatic to hurt, then 3:10 happens. My heart...
We only have 2 choices:
Read the lyrics
Read the story
*both* XD
I'm not a native English speaker so I had to translate the lyrics and the story in my head but at the same time didn't want to ruin the song by pausing too much so this was hella difficult to watch 😭 but it was totally worth it
@@meltupatrona I watched it two times lol
Can do both at the same time-
Anime watcher here xd
LMAO
The ending is about to have me sobbing and little Oliver was sooooo cute😭
ikr he was adorable :))
All I know is PAIN at this point with this love square-
i love how the blush isn't bright pink but it actually blends in with the skin
Summary:
(I’ll be adding some details not shown in the animatic)
Owen and his mom go to their hometown to visit his grandma during the summer. There, he meets Ollie and befriends him. (Owen never figured out that Ollie was a boy) They spend their summer together, but eventually, Owen has to go back home to the city. Ollie’s sister takes one last photo of them together. They say their goodbyes and promise to meet each other again next summer, but sadly, Owen’s parents divorced and his dad took custody of him, resulting him to stay in the city for 6 years. As time passed, they eventually met new friends and forgot about each other.
In 2015, Owen move in with his mom, who now lives with his grandma on his hometown. He decided to continue his studies there and transfer as a high school junior. During his first week in school, he gets scouted by the football team captain, gets assigned to replace the student council treasurer AND takes Oliver’s title of “top-notch student” in their grade. This causes Oliver to have a slight irritation with Owen, which in turn, Owen finds rather amusing. All throughout their days in school, Owen tends to enjoy messing with Oliver as he finds his reactions very cute.
One Saturday night, Owen encounters Oliver inside a cinema and notices that he, again, is having a jealous fit because of Jolene. Owen is aware of his feelings and constant agony, so he decides to help him have a good time and takes him to an arcade. They leave and get caught in the rain, so Oliver suggests that they head over to his house where it’s the nearest.
In the house, Owen notices a picture with him in it and a familiar face from his childhood. He eventually realized that the “girl” he had a crush on was Oliver, which left him in a panic and tried to storm out and away from Oliver. Oliver asks him what’s wrong and as Owen was about to reveal he was that chubby kid with glasses who had a crush on him, Jolene appears. End scene
Next animatic will be about Jolene and her very complicated story! XD
A little theory that I did (please don't hate me :'D)
Jolene saw Johanna with another girl, and as Jolene hid a love for Johanna, she was saddened to "lose" her love
Can't wait!
Ooh yes please!
MAKE A WEBTOON PLEASE
Carmen, you said something about about this story and a Webtoon. Does that mean you'll make a Webtoon out of this story? I sure hope so because me and many others would definitely read it! I am sure it could become as popular as I Love Yoo, Let's Play, and True Beauty.
It's a sad reality. Sometimes your crush, who happens to be your best friend, finds and falls in love with someone else. They will only think of you as only a friend and nothing more, but nothing less. I know this from experience and I ended up hurting my best friend to the point he stopped speaking to me and avoided me all together. The best thing you can do is just be supportive, even if it means getting hurt
Dude I feel sooo related, in my case I didn't even told her at the moment bc I didn't realised my feelings about her were DIFFERENT than with the other girls or guys I knew. Now I have seen her (it has been like a year and a half since the last time we talked) and idk how i feel, i mean during this time i have liked other girls but she was the first one... And even if i liked her now i know she sees me as a sister... so yeah it's sad but i will move on soon.
@@itsjustaboutfire3035 It's better to do that, being sad won't help. Plus, faith isn't so cruel to leave us like that. Most likely we will meet someone and they will need us. Maybe that's why we have to go through something as painful like that to find our happiness
@@itsjustaboutfire3035 are u sure she sees you as a sister? I mean, I also had a one-sided love for my best friend but she kind of told me she would have dated me if I was a boy and I never expected that so... What I’m trying to say is that we actually don’t know what other people feel about us, so I would recommend you to pay attention of what you feel and what you want for yourself. Wanting things and feelings are okay if you don’t hurt that person (most of the time instead of hurting others we end up hurting ourselves). Loving someone is okay, it will never be something bad and talking is your best ally. At least I think maybe (maybe not) you need a proper closure, mine was knowing she is straight, even if I’m still working with it, it’s easier to deal with this feelings if there are not “ifs” in the way. Good luck and have a nice day :)
@@midlight_snow4418 yeaaaah, she's straight also (I think) so...yeah I think now I'm very confused about my feelings and idk if I like her, bc my feelings tend to change quite fast. So I know that at this moment I'm not ready for a relationship. How are u doing??
I'm in the same boat. I like my best friend as more than a friend....but they're in love with someone else. We both want different things in life so, like, I know in my head it's better that were just friends. I"m trying to move on....still though. I die a little inside everytime they bring up with SO.
I find it adorable that little Oliver wore dresses
"Your beauty is beyond compare, with flaming locks of auburn hair, with ivory skin and eyes of emerald green. Your smile is like a breath of spring, your voice is soft like summer rain, and I cannot compete with you, Jolene."
*THIS SONG MATCHES JOLYNE SO WELL*
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA can you make a video that doesn't end with me crying in the back ??
I don't think it'll happen
Yah, it's always frustrating, but it's not that bad. Infuriating me isn't that bad... Rawr.
@@tala7681 rawr too
I saw the screen turn pitch black and I was like NO IT'S OVER than the clip with the guy's girlFRIEND came on :c
if you see the heather video and the little miss perfect video she made it will explain the whole story
@@mjd4287 ✨Misunderstandings✨ and a whole lot of ✨Pining✨
(Sorry if i use too much ✨ lol)
That curly brown hair girl literally broke THREE people’s heart!
THE ENDING NOOOOO MY HEART😭😭
This part doeeeee 2:38 *SO CUTE* >_>
yess i keep rewinding that part!
I thought this would be like a warm hug but it was a stab in my chest instead.
Owen at 1:54: Giddy up lezzgo mah unicorn.
Honestly, I would do the same.
oh my this story is so complicated
i love it so much ugh
Can we take to time to talk about how gorgeous their art is!!!✨
THE WAY THE WHOLE SCENE LIGHTS UP WHEN OLIVER HOLDS HIS HAND OMG I CAN'T-
I'M CRYING OWEN IS BEST BOY WHY MUST YOU HURT US KNDKANDJAND
POV: You’re early to this amazing song and you don’t know what to say
Is that Katniss, Harry and Percy?
@@ophie71 FINALLY! YES IT IS
YESSSS I LOVE THESE DUDES😭😭😭😭😭😭😭Edit: NOOO WAIT WHAT THE FUCK😭NOT THE ENDINGG can’t they just be happy together omg😞😞💔
LMFAO THAT WAS LITERALLY MEEE LSDKJFLS
1:40 i love how he just KNOWS it's Owen. True broma-- wait, why is my gaydar beeping so hard!?
I‘m watching this for the 10th time now and I‘m still crying
Update: still am
WHO IS THE GIRL I NEED THEM TOGETHER ASP NOWWWWW PLEASE I NEED ANOTHER APRT TO THIS-😀😀👏👏👏💗💗💗💗
You can watch her recent two animatics and youll know her
Ahh I really want them to be together now... This is so frustrating but I hope you will continue to make more of their story and what will happen to owen next 😔
Me too
Owen deserves to be loved 😭😭 I hope oliver falls for him. And I hope that johanna and jolene end up together and happy but my heart is preparing for the opposite 😭.
My one too :') But i do not ship Johanna and Jolene since Jolene clearly where uncomfortable after their kiss wich was a form of sa,but for Owen and Oliver part?Oh,sure,but i fell like if it's a cliche love story,Johanna and Owen WILL end up sad,but alone?I think not,and even if ends up with a bad situation for both of them,the animation and the song is SO PERFECT!
this love square is so complicated and i'm so emotionally attached to it... give me more TT
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
YEA! YEA! YEA!! NEW ANIMATION!!!
(Kisses from Brazil 😘🇧🇷)
Ih ala, outra br
@@Sol-eq6xt Aham :D
brazuca
Why are your animatics so good? They are so nicely drawn
This is the first time I genuinely got invested in someone's oc just by watching 1 video.
ahhh that falling in love all over again with the same person whether they knew it was the same person or not trope hurts so much but also so wholesome 😭😭
I don’t know why but now I watch this video 20 times a day :’D
they're so cute and perfect together
OWEN'S FACE AT 3:02 IM GOING TO PUNCH A WALL
I've been listening to carmenlees playlists and I just feel that the songs for oliver are directed to jolene and my heart just-😭😭 Owen I'm rooting for you. Oliver please let jolene goooo 😭😭
OmygOSH I'VE BEEN WAITINgggg!!! THIS IS AMAZING 😭😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😌🙏😌😌😌😌😌
Jolene will prolly be the song for the next animatic better get my tissues ready-
I think it might be Ordinary by Allie Grace
@@BK-is5fj maybe jolyne will be with oliver and we will have happy ending
fam that's angsty for me- but meh I'm fine with any ending xD
THIS GIRL IS CONFUSED AND ITS FUCKING EVERYTHING UP
Btw i love the story, this got me hooked right off the bat lemme tell you. Just venting my frustrations that THIS GIRL IS UNKNOWINGLY DANGLING 3 PEOPLE'S HEARTS BY HER FINGERS.
THIS IS FCKING BREAKING MY HEART
I'm in love not only to every character you've shown so far, but also with every song you've chosen
This one specially hurts me deep, Doddie do such good music 😭✨
Are we gonna talk about how Carmen Lee keeps influencing our taste in music or--
this deserves an oscar fr, your series is better than half Hollywood movies you see out there
Ok. I didn't need to cry, WTH. THIS WAS GOING SO WELL. I-
you dont know how many times ive replayed this since this got released and still never fails to make me cry
This is soooooo cute, I'm absolutely obsessed with this story!
I can’t even tell you how often I come back and rewatch these
I can’t explain how much you deserve like I’m scared how can someone be so talented☹️‼️
So excited to see where all of their stories take them. This is brilliant! Thank you!
Im crying, my heart is broken
Eee this looks so cute but the comments are saying I'ma cry, so lemme just get my tissues just in case qwq💞💕
I am totally LOVING this OC animatics 🥺💜
I would love to read it in full version if you ever decide to publish it as a full comic
Keep going with your hard work! I can't wait to see more of this story :)
NOOOOOOOOOO 😭😭😭😭😭 I love the art but the ending- I'm cryinggg😭😭
1:15 i love him 😭
Owen: I love Oliver
Oliver:I love Jolene
Johanna: No,I love Jolene
Jolene: I- *HUH?!,I reincarnated as a harem protagonist from my favorite animatic video?! And now I have to find a happy ending for this love Square?!*
I'm now obsessed with these animatics of yours, like holy moly this is a literal webtoon inside of three videos. There is so much to un pack in these videos and i love it so much *chefs kiss*. You should definitely make a webtoon about these characters like my goodness you are amazing.
I love this so much, especially since all your song choices are so fitting
i went thru so much of a rollercoaster ride of emotions because of this work of art
*me texting my friends about this* So like Johanna and Jol- wait. a. second. JOHANNA AND JOLENE. OLIVER AND OWEN. DUNNO IF IT MEANS ANYTHING AT ALL BUT *WOAH IM A GENIUS*
0:34 i just noticed something. On heather look at the thumbnail that's the exact face. And both of that face means they have a crush or inlove in something. So that means owen have a crush on AHHHHH that's why she's blushing when he found's out that he's the one on that pic
i love this so much!! 😭 the animation is really cute!
i learned that not all endings are a good one but we just have to accept it
You overdid yourself Damnn your anatomy too and artstyle changed luvvv it
this makes me cry- literally every single part makes me cry my eyes out
OMG!! I just realized Little Miss Perfect and this are tied together! OMG IM IN LOVE WITG THIS!! 😆😆
The ending gave me a heart attack man
Poor two lovers
My reaction in the ending is like:
NOOOOOOOO-- I MEAN YEESSSSSS
WAIT I'M CONFUSED
I love the plot, please do more of this . For me who lacks emotion due of my condition, your animatic made me smile at the same time cry. I'm staning !!! ^-^
omg, please update this series more often, it's amazing.
Eu vi essa animação ontem, o estilo é muito lindo, amei os personagens!
Estou ansiosa para a próxima animação.
I saw this animation yesterday, the style is very beautiful, I loved the characters!
I look forward to the next animation.
turn this into a webtoon RN and give them a happy ending 😠🔪
I undecided what to look at😫!! the lyrics of the song or the combersation😭🤛
You finally got me! I saw ALL OF YOUR OC ANIMATICS BECAUSE ALL OF THEM R INTERESTING AF😭😭😭😭😭. I continue noticing each of them in my recommendation, so from now on I officially wait for the next story as ur sub
I click on this expecting wholesome gay characters living happily ever after, instead I receive pain and suffering.
WHAT THE FUCKKKKKKKKK I SHIP THEM SO MUCH 😭😭😭😭 THIS IS SO AMAZING THANK U SO MUCH 🎉🎉🎉🥰🥰🥰😭😭😭😭
RIGHT THEYRE SOO CUTE😭😭🤬😭😭😳💔😭
@@SpideriMan yASS DUDE I KIND OF HATED THE ORANGE GIRL FOR INTERRUPTING LIKE GOrlLLLLL I KNOE U GAY GO AND SNOG THE BLONDIEe i ship them too so mucH 😭😭😭😭😭
@@sashime2791 FR FR AND THE THING IS SHE LEFT HIM WITHOUT A SECOND THOUGHT WHEN SHE STARTING DATING THE BLONDE GIRL BUT WHENEVER SOMETHING GOES WRONG FOR HER SHE COMES BACK TO HIM CRYING?????? LIKE MISS GIRL JUST LEAVE HIM AND HIS BF ALONE YOURE MAKING IT HARDER THAN IT ALREADY IS😭😭😭
Their short scenes in here was really fun to watch. ^^
Th- THE ENDING. _THE ENDING_ *incomprehensible screaming from a burning house*
Everything was perfect, even the parts that hurt. I can't wait to see what masterpiece you share with us next!
0:19 Is that Jolene-?
When is the next animatic coming out?
I actually thought this was about aerak and heeno from never understand/ out of control for a second. Owen looks JUST like aerak specially around 00:56
NOOOO, estaba super emocionado, como me vas a hacer esto. AMÉ BTW
ik that jolene and oliver might be the endgame here but i find it beautiful that despite owen discovering that ollie was actually a boy he still had feelings for him. Shows that gender doesn’t determine attraction
Honestly I think that Oliver and Ollie are end game and jolene and “little miss perfect” (can’t think of her name cause I’m balling over this) are end game
@@kylajade4105 i’m hoping for that too ;(
I literally subscribed last night and I'm already blessed with a new animatic for this story,, yess
NOOOO I thought this was gonna be a cute simple story. Why is there PAIN
I LOVE your ocs and their story so much, you inspire me ❤️❤️
im literally going to cry i just discovered your OCs now and watched all the animatics twice why does it hurt this bad
Omg this is so beautiful! THE TALENT
I'm obsessed with this little series! Keep up the awesome work!
Omg I am so invested in this story I love it so much. You are amazing!
THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL I LOVE THIS SERIES SO MUCH ♥︎
your art is so amazing and I love the storyline but I'm in tears rn. so you're completely allowed to break my heart as long as long as they hopefully get together in the end. :)) okay I'm gonna go continue crying now :)
your art is just amazing I love it so much, please never stop with it.
Here still in love with this OC storyline and still waiting for part 4! Loyal subscriber right here